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Maan sang a song for feet
All brothers now chose maan for geet
Maan n yash r happy as geets family staying in oh now
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Everyone enjoyed the sangeet...

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Geet n family performed...

Maaneet sang a beautiful duet song ... Well that is one of my favorite song ... I love it...
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Elders decided that geet's family would stay back after the wedding for some more days...

Geet promised sameera to make everything alright...

Rishabh selected maan for geet n everyone else other than neel agreed...

Rajsinghanias moved to the outhouse of KM...
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CHAPTER 16(a)



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, RELIGIOUS STORIES AND TERMS; MEDICAL TERMS, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, LEGAL TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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Whole Rajsinghania family moved into Khurana Outhouse and were blending with Khuranas and Choudharys. Sid and Vicky were very similar temperamentally so they blended like "house on fire". Early morning everyday Rishabh, Neel, Yash, Arnav and Veer went to Maan's personal Gym escorted by Maan.










Whereas Sid and Vicky slept in till late. Rajsinghania brothers were in awe with Maan's working out style which was even more strenous than Veer.Whereas Veer was in another world as he was getting special training by his idol. Geet along with Neel were the ones to make both Rajsinghanias as well as Khurana family come to the Khurana temple after freshening up after their workout before breakfast. Geet was the first one to wake up early in the morning and then did her yoga followed by her Bharatnatyam dance practice. It was one day when Maan was restless and unable to sleep and got up early that he heard the sweet chiming of ghunghroos (dancing bells tied on a dancer's feet).



Following the melodious and rhythmic chimes his feet carried him where he witnessed a mesmerising sight. He found Geet dancing wearing a cotton saree with bells on her feet.





Her profuse sweating had made her clothes stick to her body like a second skin, arousing Maan to no end. Maan doesn't remember how long he stood there but he finally moved once Geet had finished dancing and had left.

After that day Maan was never able to wake up that early to witness the mesmerising sight of Geet dancing. However Maan somehow manage to snatch some precious moments with her on the dining table as now Rajsinghania family made sure to make Maan and Geet sit close to one another. Maan sometimes tried playing footsie



with her under the dining table and sometimes he tried holding her hand under the table.



Despite of it infuriating Geet she could not do anything in front of the elders. As Geet was never around during the day and only met everyone at dinner time giving an excuse of spending time with Meera as in a week's time Meera would be leaving for US. Hearing Meera's name, Vicky so wanted to also spend time with Meera, "magar Meera toh Vicky ho ghass tak nahi daal rahi thee."

FOUR DAYS AFTER RAJSINGHANIAS MOVED IN KHURANA OUTHOUSE

Location: GEET'S ROOM IN KHURANA OUTHOUSE



Geet had invited Sameera, Gauri (Mumbai), Pari, Meera and Pinky for a "Girl's Night" in Khurana Outhouse as Savitri Devi, Ranjit, Krishankant, Radharani along with Thakur Sahaab and Thakurain had gone to see all their favourite places in old Delhi. Rishabh, Maan, Neel and Adi had an emergency meeting regarding the Government project hence were busy in KC. Yash, Arnav, Sid and Vicky went to a discotheque. Although Yash and Vicky were not keen to go as Pari and Meera would be there but Arnav and Sid took the duo forcibly with them. After the girls had their share of fun i.e. eating, dancing, watching movies etc., tired Ayush slept on Geet's bed. Once all girls were seated with steaming cups of tea or coffee, Geet said seriously, "Mujhe aap sab ki madatt chahiye." (I need help from you all.)

"Kaisi madatt?" (What kind of help?)

Geet narrated whole problem and her solution.
"Gudiya, jo tum karna chaha rahi ho usse Rajsinghania parivaar ki usmei bahut beizzati hogi." (Gudiya, what you want to do, will cause lot of humiliation to Rajsinghania family and will tatter their respect to shreds.) Gauri warned.



"Toh abb kya kam beizzati ho rahi hai, Didi?" (So do you feel there is less humiliation now?)

"Geet tum Mom ki baat ko zyaada seriously matt lo." (Geet, don't take my Mom's words seriously.) Pinky reasoned.



"Nahi Pinky, Auntyji ne jo kaha woh bilkul sach hai. Bhabhi aap ne pehle aa kar kyun nahi apna haq maanga?" (No Pinky, Aunty was right. Bhabhi why did you not fight for your right earlier?) Geet said looking at Sameera.

"Agar mai aa kar zabardasti apna haq maang bhi leti toh kya woh zabardasti ka rishta tik paata?" (Even if I would have forcifully demanded my rights would that relationship have lasted?) Sameera reasoned.

"Khair woh aapka nazariya hai. Magar mai ek masoom bacche ki zindagi barbaad nahi hone doongi." (Anyway that's your personal opinion. But I will not let an innocent child suffer.)

"Geet tum bina baat Rajsinghania parivaar ki badnaami kar rahi ho. Mai aur Ayush apni zindagi mei khush hain." (Geet you are unnecessarily causing humiliation and slandering Rajsinghania family's respect. Ayush and I are happy the way we are.) Sameera insisted.



"Bhabhi aap bhalhe hi khush ho magar mai Ayush ko uska adhikaar aur aap ko aapka samaan dila kar rahongi chahe ismei meri jaan hi kyun na chali jaaye." (Bhabhi, you maybe happy with the way you are but I will fight for Ayush's right and your self respect till my last breath.)



"GUDIYA!" Gauri gave a tight slap to Geet on her speaking about her death.

"Geet, when do you want to burst this bomb on your family?" Meera enquired.

"As soon as possible. Maybe tomorrow."

"I think we should take your Mom in confidence." Meera suggested.

"No Meers, my Mom is a superstitious lady who only thinks that by following superstitions you become religious and spiritual. Besides her horrifying expression and melodrama will make it believeable."

"What about your brothers?"

"Yes I'm only feeling guilty for hurting them who love me so much. But just because they love me unconditionally, I cannot overlook the major crime they are doing or about to do against three innocent souls Sameera bhabhi, Ayush and Gauri didi."

Geet then went to the centre of the room with stretching out her palm facing upwards like one does while making a promise."NOW, YOU ALL HAVE TO PROMISE ME NOT TO LET ANYONE KNOW ABOUT THIS. PINKY EVEN ADI JEEJAJI SHOULD NOT KNOW ABOUT IT!" Geet said and all girls put their hands on Geet's hand and made a promise.

"Geet, tumhei darr nahi ki iss wajeh se tumhare Pitahji aur tumhari Maa-sa tumhei tumhare ghar se nikaal denge?" (Geet aren't you worried that by your this decision your parents will throw you out of the house?)

"Mujhe pakka vishwas hai ki Maa mujhe ghar se nikaal dengi iss liye mai Meera ke saath US jaa rahi hoon apni Masters ki padhai poori karne ke liye." (I'm extremely certain that my Mom will chuck me out my home hence, I'm going with Meera to US to complete my Masters degree.)

"Magar Gudiya tum akele kaise rahogi?" (But Gudiya how will you live all alone?) Worried Gauri asked.

"Mai akeli kahaan hoon, Meera hai mere saath." (I'm not alone. Meera is with me.)

Before girls could talk anymore they heard sounds of someone returning home. Rishabh, Maan, Neel and Adi had returned home from work. "Bhai-sa, Jeejaji aur Mr. Khurana, kya aap logon ke liye khaana lagaaon?" (Bhai-sa, Adi and Mr. Khurana, should I serve dinner?)

"Nahi Gudiya hum logon ne office mein khaa liya hai." (No thank you Gudiya, we all have already eaten at office.) Rishabh said without moving his eyes from Sameera's face. This was noticed by Geet, Meera and Pari.

"Geet, abb hum bhi chalte hain. Pinky chalo." (Geet now we shall leave. Pinky lets go.) Adi said looking very tired.

"Aap sab bahut thakke lag rahe hain. Meeting toh theek ho gayi." (You all are looking very tired. I hope meeting went well.)

"Haan Gudiya! Kintu aaj bahut klaant diwas thaa!" (Yes Gudiya. But it was a tiring day!) Neel replied glaring at Gauri who glared back with same intensity.

Rishabh and Neel went to their rooms to hit the bed after a long day; whereas Maan, Adi and Pinky left for their respective homes. Maan saw his wife after a long and tiring day and was at peace and left OH with Adi and Pinky. Soon elders returned and Pari went with her parents home. Geet forcibly made Sameera and Ayush lie on Geet's bed and sleep. Today Sid was spending the night with Vicky so Gauri and Meera slept in Sid's room. Geet slept on her bed with Sameera and Ayush.


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CHAPTER 16 (b)

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, RELIGIOUS STORIES AND TERMS; MEDICAL TERMS, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, LEGAL TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!

NEXT DAY

Location: INFORMAL LIVINGROOM IN KHURANA OUTHOUSE



Savitri Devi, Ranjit, Krishankant, Radharani, Rishabh, Maan, Neel, Yash, Arnav, Veer, Vicky, Sid, Sameera, Gauri, Meera and Geet were all sitting with their steaming cups of tea and coffee after breakfast. Pari was going to join in later to spend time with Geet whereas Pinky could not come today due to few pending wedding ceremonies still needed to be completed by her as a new bride. Seeing everyone relaxed, Rishabh got up saying,"Hum bhaiyon ko aaj battate huye khushi hoti hai ki hum sabne Gudiya ke liye ek ladka shaadi ke liye pasand kiya hai." (We all are very happy to announce that we've chosen a bridegroom for our Gudiya.)

"Kaun hai woh?" (Who is the bridegroom?) Surprised Radharani asked.

"Ladka kamaata kitna hai?" (How much does the bridegroom earn?) Krishankant asked seriously.

"Ladka padha-likha, acche ghar kaa aur ek business tycoon hai!" (The boy is well educated, from a good family and a business tycoon!)

"Rishabh beta, apne maata-pitah ko ladke ka parichay toh dijiye." (Rishabh, at least introduce the boy to your parents.) Savitri Devi coaxed Rishabh.

"Ladke ka naam hai, MAAN SINGH KHURANA." (The boy's name is, MAAN SINGH KHURANA.) Arnav announced.

There was a complete pin drop silence for five minutes then cheers and smiles broke on faces of all elders who were congratulating one another. "Vicky, Nakul se kaho mithai laaye." (Vicky, ask Nakul to bring some sweets!) Savitri Devi ordered.

Radharani kissed Maan's forehead affectionately whispering, "Jamaai-sa hummein kshama kijiye aapko itni der intezaar karaane ke liye!" (Maan, I apologise for making you wait so long.) Krishankant hugged Maan affectionately whereas Maan touched Krishankant and Radharani's feet. Rishabh patted Maan's back affectionately, Yash, Arnav and Sid gave Maan a friendly brotherly hug but Veer hesistantly shook Maan's hand. But Maan pulled Veer close and gave him an affectionate brotherly hug whispering in his ear, "Now you are my brother like Vicky and not Agent 008!" In all this happiness and festivity only Neel stood out at a distance.

Sameera, Gauri, Meera and Geet were in a state of a shock unable to react when Rishabh announced about Geet's alliance. But when Geet's shocked trance was broken she said at a higher pitch than necessary, "MUJHE YEH RISHTA MANZOOR NAHI!" (I DON'T AGREE TO THIS MATRIMONIAL PROPOSAL!)



Immediately quitening down the joy and exuberance of two families.
"Kyun Gudiya? Maan mein sab gunn hain toh tum iss rishte is inkaar kyun kar rahi ho?" (Why Gudiya? Maan has all qualities as a husband and life partner, why are you refusing?) Rishabh enquired.

"Kyunki mere liye sacchai se bada kuch nahi?" (Because there is nothing more important for me than truth.)

"Arthaath?" (Meaning?) Neel spoke for the first time.

"Mere inkaar ke do kaaran hai." (There are two reasons for my refusal!)

"Kaunse do kaaran?" (What are the two reasons?) Radharani questioned.

Geet looked straight into Maan's eyes and said, "Pehla----YEH STREEYON KI IZZAT NAHI KARTE! " (First---- He doesn't respect women.)

"Tum yeh kaise keh sakti ho, Gudiya? Uss din Fire and Ice Club mein..." (How can you say that, Gudiya? That day at Fire and Ice Club, he...) Yash objected.

"Haan inhone meri izzat gundon se bacchai thee. Magar uski zarurat hi nahi padhti agar Arnav bhai-sa ne mujhe woh short dress nahi pehan ne ko kahaa hota." (Yes he saved my virtue. But his help would not have been required if Arnav would not have asked me to wear a short dress.) Rishabh and Neel glared at squirming Yash and Arnav. "Magar mai uski baat nahi kar rahi." (But I'm not talking about that incident.)

"Toh kaunsi sacchai?" (Then which truth?) Now Sid was also intrigued.

"Mr. Khurana, aap battayenge ki mai battaon?" (Mr. Khurana will you tell or should I tell?)

Maan narrated the whole truth about their semi marriage ceremony i.e. Maan filling Geet's maang and tieing mangalsutra around her neck. Shocking Rishabh, Neel, Yash, Arnav, Veer, Sid, Sameera, Gauri, Meera and Pari (who had just entered the room). Before Rishabh, Neel, Yash, Arnav, Veer and Sid could angrily pounce on Maan and a mayhem would result Geet continued, "Dusari---- MAI MAA BANNEWALI HOON!" (Second----I'M PREGNANT!) A lightening slap touched Geet's cheek.

"Geetika, tumhari himmat kaise hui aisi ashaleel harkat karne ki?" (Geetika, how dare you behave in such an obsene manner?)

"Bacche ka pitah kaun hai, beta?" (Who is the father of your unborn child?) Savitri Devi asked calmly, "MAAN?"

"NAHI!" (NO!)

"If it is that b*****d Karan I'll kill him with my bare hands." Rishabh said glaring at Arnav.

"Nahi Karan bhi nahi hai." (Not even Karan.)

"TOH WOH KAUN HAI?" (THEN WHO IS IT?) An icy cold voice of MSK spoke.



"Aap sab usse nahi jaante woh yahaan ka nahi hai." (You all don't know him as he is not from here.)

"Gudiya uska naam batta de hum usse teri shaadi karaa denge." (Gudiya, tell us his name, we will get you married.)Yash calmed himself and spoke.

"Bob ko iss rishte mein aur shaadi mein koi interest nahi hai. Bhai-sa, aap sabko meri chinta karne ki zarurat nahi hai. Maine apna itzaam kar liya hai." (Bob is neither interested in this relationship nor is he interested in marriage. Bhai-sa, you all don't worry! I have made arrangements for my self.)

"Accha hai ki tumne apna intezaam kar liya kyunki abb naa toh Rajsinghania parivaar mein aur naa hi Khurana parivaar mein tumhari koi jageh hai." (Good you have made arrangement for yourself as you are no longer welcomed in either Rajsinghania family or Khurana family.) Radharani spoke in anger and humiliation.



Geet gave a cynical smirk to Sameera, Gauri, Meera and Pari making them realise how correct Geet's assumption about her mother was. "Maa... (seeing Radharani's glare) Mrs. Rajsinghania, mujhe aap se yehi umeed thee." (Mrs. Rajsinghania, this is what I expected from you.)

"Gudiya, tum aise akele kaise rahogi? (Gudiya, how will you stay all alone?) Rishabh asked in worry.

"Waise hi jaise bahut ladkiyaan aur streeyaan rehti hain jinhei unke pati aur unke mangetar chhod dete hain." (Same way as many girls like me stay whose husband, fiance or boyfriend has left them.)

"Kya matlab hai tumhara?" (What do you mean?)

"Kyun Rishabh bhai-sa aapne Sameera bhabhi aur Ayush ko chhod nahi diya thaa ek rapist, Raghu ki jhooti baaton par?" (Why Rishabh bhai-sa? Didn't you leave Sameera bhabhi and Ayush by just bad mouthing of a rapist named Raghu?)

"Gudiya, tum..."(Gudiya, you...)

"Gudiya tum bhai-sa se kaise baat kar rahi ho?"(Gudiya, how are you talking so disrespectfully to bhai-sa?)

"Neel bhai-sa aapko koi haq nahi banta mujhe kuch bhi kehane kaa. Aapne bhi toh apne jhoote bhramchaari ke choule (garb) ke kaaran apni bachpan ki mangetar Gauri Shekhawat ko chhod diya. Apka dimaag Gauri didi ko bhale hi naa apnaaye magar aapke dil ne unhei kab ka apna liya. Kyunki agar aap unhei nahi apnate to Gauri didi ke hone yaa naa hone se aapko koi faraq nahi padhta. Kintu aapko faraq padhta hai iss liye jab woh apke paas hoti hain, aap atyadhik krodhit jo jaate hain. Rishabh bhai-sa aur Neel bhai-sa, aap dono ne ek baar bhi nahi socha ki aapke tiraskaar se samaaj mein Sameera bhabhi aur Gauri didi kaise jiyengi?" (Neel bhai-sa, you have no right to question me. You have also under the hollow garb of confirmed bachelorism rejected your childhood fiance, Gauri didi. Your brain may not accept Gauri didi your life partner but your heart does. Because if you did not accept Gauri didi as your life partner, her being there or not being there would not have affected you. But you are effected everytime she comes in front of you and thats why you yell at her. Rishabh bhai-sa and Neel bhai-sa, you never thought how will Sameera bhabhi and Gauri didi will manage to live all alone in this world and society after your rejection?)

Geet went near a chair where her bag was kept and pulled out a file and handed it to Rishabh who was still in trance saying,"Khair aap dono mere se bade hain aur apna bhala-bura jaante hain. Mai sirf aapko yeh DNA report dena chahti hoon jismein aapka aur Ayush ka DNA match karta hai." (Anyway you both are elder to me and understand what is best for you. I only want to give you this DNA report in which yours and Ayush's DNA has matched.)

"Matlab?" (Meaning?) Krishankant spoke for first time since Geet dropped the bombshell

"Bauji, Rishabh bhai-sa aur Ayush ka khoon meil khatta hai. Matlab, RISHABH BHAI-SA AYUSH KE PITAH HAIN!" (Father, Rishabh bhai-sa and Ayush's blood samples have matched. Meaning RISHABH BHAI-SA IS AYUSH's FATHER!)
Picking up her bag and things, Geet left the room with Sameera, Gauri, Meera and Pari. Leaving behind her a stunned and broken Rajsinghania and Khurana family.


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