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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

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Posted: 9 years ago

I feel there is some serious problems with screenplay and dialogues in the show lately.

The demolition was not an ordinary event. The source of income of that family is lost. It was this demolition that made mehak break all ties with shaurya. But the makers made it old story event now. No seriousness ,

1. Shaurya comes to invite the sharmas for holi. I agree the sharmas dont want to fight back or argue with him and want to remain calm unaffected but why didnt any member of sharma family ask him , why on earth are you calling us for holi party after demolishing the shop himself. Not just their but the entire localities. The people of the entire locality would have been hurling curses on the sharmas daily. The sharmas should have asked why did he offer help to mehak for re imbursement of shop damages. When he damaged it himself why does he want to repair? did he apologise? NO, then why this mercy??

2. Why doesnt mehak question him openly why are you protecting me ..why were you silent when i saw the construction turn into debris in front of my eyes. what is the logic behind hurting me and protecting me at the same time?

I understand the the makers want to create more drama ahead but atleast some necessary dialogues is needed that show the angst of the loss . It would look more relaistic/

they lost their livelihood source of income and switching so happily to food and catering that also so happily?

it would be great if mehak later pays for the damages her uncle did in white chillies

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petrichorr

@petrichorr

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Posted: 9 years ago

The plot was some what lost after the end of the master cook show. The screenplay and diaglogues too following suit

After that to be honest nothing makes sense

What happened to Rajiv? How come suddenly Vicky is assisting Shaurya?

What abt Shaurya's maama? One who was intent on killing shaurya? All of a sudden off the radar?

So many questions so many loopholes.

And in between they throw romance here and there...

I still want mehak to stay far away from Shaurya until he redeems himself.

I ought to be the absolute minority here not able to understand/enjoy the sudden intense romance I read was in the episode today. Am yet to watch it.

Edited by slumberqueen - 9 years ago

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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: slumberqueen
The plot was some what lost after the end of the master cook show. The screenplay and diaglogues too following suit
After that to be honest nothing makes sense

What happened to Rajiv? How come suddenly Vicky is assisting Shaurya?
What abt Shaurya's maama? One who was intent on killing shaurya? All of a sudden off the radar?

So many questions so many loopholes.

And in between they throw romance here and there...
I still want mehak to stay far away from Shaurya until he redeems himself.

I ought to be the absolute minority here not able to understand/enjoy the sudden intense romance I read was in the episode today. Am yet to watch it.

completely agree with you

you are not in minority...iam of the same view too

to be honest at the first instance only i didnt like mehak going to khanna house to teach him lesson.

instead of correcting him, the writers showed her being a madly crazy fan of shaurya now...

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Harmony10

@Harmony10

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Posted: 9 years ago

The story has been on vacation since the wedding episode. There is no plot looks like the makers are going on flow as per TRP. We also try not to look for logic in the storyline cause it's useless. Just like them, watch it without expectation and go with the flow.

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brat2008

@brat2008

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Posted: 9 years ago

What storyline 😲 which storyline 😆 ?
ZKM has lost it all 😆
The story goes the side wind blows 🤢
No fixed storyline 🤢
Till yesterday thought Mehak was gonna beat SK in his business but today she had no such intention
She just wants his protective cover & protect Delhi Men from shaurya 🤣
But honestly their chemistry is smoking HOT 😳
It's a very huge TRP grabber 😆 so why bother abt storyline 🤢

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Harmony10

@Harmony10

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: brat2008
What storyline 😲 which storyline 😆 ?
ZKM has lost it all 😆
The story goes the side wind blows 🤢
No fixed storyline 🤢
Till yesterday thought Mehak was gonna beat SK in his business but today she had no such intention
She just wants his protective cover & protect Delhi Men from shaurya 🤣
But honestly their chemistry is smoking HOT 😳
It's a very huge TRP grabber 😆 so why bother abt storyline 🤢

Bold- Lmao 🤣 This is so true!! And watch her food truck lasting only this week after that Kanta chachi will make sure to shift the location outside the show 🤣

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Samridhi

@BinKuchKahe.

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Posted: 9 years ago

I completely agree with you. Ever since Shaurya fled the mandap, the lack of a proper story, the loopholes, inconsistency with characters etc have become even more apparent. Honestly the show stopped making sense long back. But somehow I have not been able to completely stop watching due to the fast pace, the lack of villains & plotting together with how the show is very leads-centric.

Its because of SJ & KV's amazing chemistry that I am able to digest MehRya in one frame. For me personally as a character, Shaurya has gone to a point of no return & I would love it if the show should focus on Mehek's journey & Shaurya's unrequited love. But I've realised that's never gonna happen. In ITV two leads have to end up together unfortunately. The very episode that they separated, they were back in one frame. So this separation is just a hoax. For someone who'd rather die than go back to Shaurya, Mehek sure landed up in his arms fast. Let's see how long she keeps her tough act going before giving in.

Edited by AyeChavanni - 9 years ago

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candy02

@candy02

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Posted: 9 years ago

@TM, I am with you. The story-line, the logic, the characterizations - everything has been lost ages ago. It's now illogical on our part to even bother about the same 😆. So many open ends, so many loopholes !! Now-a-days no track is given a proper closure. Characters are flip-flopping on every alternate day . Not even going into the dialogues. Waste of time 😔 !!!

What makes this series watchable is the leads' chemistry and I am precisely watching that only at the moment. I send my brain & mind on a vacation for around 20 minutes while watching this show. I suppose that is the only way I, personally, can watch this.

@slumberqueen (I don't know you name), I am also at loss regarding this sudden majnu avatar of the hero, the villain, the whatever !!! The only good riddance is they have toned down the gross emotional violence. And honestly it's beyond my understanding how a girl, after being treated like a trash, can go near to the same guy; touching is a separate matter altogether !!! I too want her light years' away from the jerk. But that is as impossible as the ML's redemption (He is, anyways, beyond the point of no return.) !!!!

I so wanted MS to move on in life for good not looking back ever, I really don't care with or without a partner. But "Khoon Bhari Maang - Part 2" has trashed that idea of mine for good ...

Edited by chandrima02 - 9 years ago