The artistic scatterbrain!

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JNDSD~ My take~ Friday 10.3.17 ~ The artistic scatterbrain !

To be scatty and forgetful is quite common if one has lots to deal with. It's not unknown with many with all the humdrum that goes around ,one leading a fast paced lifestyle. Being forgetful does point to the fact, that a person is unable to think seriously or systematically, and remembering things can end up being a chore. So with regards to this episode , I look to it in terms of how much or not as the case may be certain characters remember, particular events significant to the storyline.

We have Suman all volatile! she recalls well, when Guddi questions her motives regards letting Atharv drive to Madhav to parents.. did she have killing both in mind. Guddi is getting giddy with current success , to even reckon, Suman would have done it easily .Poor Guddi even on asking, seems to forget she will never find out what the evil Suman is really angling for? Suman appears easily excitable ! when all she wants is to be seen as in control! but clearly appears to be losing it when she finds out from Guddi that Atharv wanted Madhav's parents address! Suman blames Guddi for being capricious and taking Atharv in the first place! The fact that Atharv may have caught a glimpse of Vividha .. really is shaky ground .. both this evil pair bank on Atharv's drugged down memory to be at bay. Their worry is if his faint connections of forgetfulness unlocks his memory recall of Vividha!

So the young hero returns home after fighting off bravely the kidnapping war! Madhav even faces the guilty mamma Ankit! Who treats Madhav as some little forgetful infant. That he is not! as he asks Ankit about the tell tale scratches on his hands? None is safe when Madhav is about! his memory is fertile and charged! Although in the main,the likes of Ankit see Madhav as harmless. But the reality is, Madhav is all there! He is a keenly curious child who discloses quite a bit on matters of interest ,like that Mr fuddy- duddy!!, Ravish elucidates , Mr, Raghav. now Madhav prattles away, such a grouch he was, drove him around the bend by throwing his weight around! It's when Madhav mentions ,that the man was unbelievably forgetful and a complete scatterbrain!.. Vividha with a lost pensive smile couldn't block the flood of memories of some one...her getting late for college! Atharv offering a lift on his bike, but how incorrigibly flighty he was, always rushed off his feet. Forgetful with keys, wallet!!she smiles as she hears her Madhav happily chattering away..ah yes.. even now she remembers those days with Atharv.

When it comes to rearing their animated son, both parents Ravish and Vividha are on the ball about teaching Madhav good moral values. Ravish reiterates and warns Raghav for trespassing, into an unknown house he was lucky those people were good , what if they turned out to be baddies? But Madhav memory serves him well, as he discloses, he did know one person .. badi dadi grandma was there! Ravish wants to ensure that Madhav is not being frivolous with his unlikely claim but Madhav reiterates grandma was there!! Its awkward for Ravish hearing about his mother being , where Madhav was at this mr. Raghav's house.. the best way would be to put a stop to this discussion, nip it in the bud! discourage all from badgering Madhav with further questions. But Vividha is preoccupied with the thought, why would make up such a tale? Also if Suman was there, why what was she doing there? She even more alarmed when hugs his mum and reveals to her that dadi was doing horrid things! It is understandly Ravish's mother is involved, it's unclear whether he protects her image of piety image or is it to make Vividha realize that Madhav is a child at a very impressionable must have seen someone like dadi. Besides, too much thought ,can also be misleading. But Vividha knows her son well ,she knows he is unlikely to make things up. He is as pure as a lamb and innocent like the dove..

This lost soul too is pure as the lamb but not as cunning and wily than the serpent. Today the girl of his dreams conjures up in his imagination , in the flicker of the candle light. Today his dream girl face is not unclear.. those waiting eyes of bride are two forlorn pools of a long wait. Madhav said his dad was Ravish .. his mother Vividha .. Atharv eyes close and there he sees her .. the name Vividha escapes from his lips.. two dark stealth figures watch , beaten at their game. They tried so hard to flush that name from his mind and here he is.. associating the name ,who knows.. to what he saw short while ago! Terror flashes on Suman's face, she has dealt so to speak with blocking off his long term memory , but never considered his short term memory of this life that she given him.

Is there any head or tail of what this lost soul searches for? Atharv pours over a piece of sketch paper with his pencil. Suddenly the notes of a familiar old tune drifts in the air around him.. with the trembling ,blowing, fluttering of the lord Krishna's flute.. slowly his heart pours out Vividha's new sketch , etches her winged eyes-brows and waiting eyes.. Vividha.. Guddi is speechless without actually seeing her face to face, what strange coincidence is this that he can reproduce Vividha's face?? It seems his short term memory is kick starting his long term memory. Well, it so happens that the artist in Atharv never got blocked off! Try though evil may .. sufferings actually gets the best in him to push itself out of him. His imagination swelters to such a degree that slowly the frozen blocks of oblivion melt away , bringing forth the image of Vividha .. from whom his heart wants not to depart from.. Vividha! his memory calls out.. as presently he shelves the unfinished picture in the drawer of his mind..

Evil Suman waits in the dark shadows.. once more she commits the folly of disallowing Atharv's creative capture ,his love from becoming a reality! she goes into the drawer takes the sketch and sets it alight... thoughtless wicked woman fails to realize that.. Vividha's image now resides in Atharv's short term memory! All forces are working towards them meeting yet again! There is always the risk, Suman faces, that in his next creative session.. Atharv may etch Vividha's complete face! where will Suman stand then? Is this an anklet that I hear? Suman has memory of some past incident, a curse imbedded in the foundation of this house Is this an anklet that she hears?.or is this her ploy to terrorize Guddi ,manipulate Guddi into doing something heinous for her? perhaps to kill Vividha?.

Whereas the rest of the world sleeps.. Vividha a mother is awake,she stands by her window and looks into the peaceful silence of the night. She ponders on her son's disclosure.. Atharv too stands awake, stares into the night from his window ,as he savors the memory of Vividha walking away from him with Madhav.. his whole being ,though sullen, still feels refreshed ,as his soul cries out to the mother taking Madhav away ..depart not from my heart..

Another fine episode, Madhav ,bless him! was the star of the episode ,with his head firmly screwed on his little shoulders. Atharv to me in the episode celebrates the creative ,an artist in the true sense of the word. He has an inflicted or induced memory loss of his previous four years ..but it still fails to obstruct the creativity that is inherent within him.. ie.. artistic skills. Some gracefully portrayed scenes between Atharv , Vividha and Madhav.. have a restful weekend .. love hammie 11.3.17

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Today his dream girl face is not unclear.. those waiting eyes of bride are two forlorn pools of a long wait.
I am in love with these words.the way u portray ur thoughts is something else. they are sewn into such finest crafts, really a masterpiece, u r a true artist.Hammie u r beautiful.

I loved how u have shown the parallel conditions.two people awake, two hearts not willing to go away from each others thoughts, two very forgetful people, one forgot cz his memories were removed by poisons and the other one has got a memory which works as a poison to the love she once had, but can love die?

Two forgetful people.Like atharva they r artists.artist of lie,deception. Yes as we all know to deceive someone is an art, cz not everyone can do it.one forgot how to lead a life without being a pawn, n the other one forgot how to live without worshiping the evil.

Two very innocent ppl. Madhav the innocent sleeping near his mother, secured, Ravish the innocent is sleeping, doesnt know what his mother has been doing all the years.

I really really loved the drawing session of atharva.that is just amazingly shown by creatives n i admit VSC is a great actor.

Keep writing hammie, i m lucky to have met u.
tc.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Hammie a wonderful take once again with a brilliant title..artistic Scatterbrains fr Atharva's state of mind right now.. loved the lyrical take
as u rightly said the epi was fine with some heroic showdown by little Madhav. .ths little bomb is inspirational I must say..the courage n spontaneity by our little champ was commendable! ! The way he investigate his mama with his Radar like eyes... OMG we elders need to learn alot frm our little kids..

Ravish brushed off Madhav's statement right away n I was a bit disappointed bt then I realise that's how a mother cud be fr every child... his logical talks with vividha was really one sided how a child assume her mother to be an angel n perfect.. n that's y I wonder how he wud suffer in the end the most... he has to lose everything in future..😭

Okk last bt not the least Vitharv's connection is getting stronger n we can see how S suman gonna lose ths battle pretty soon-ish.. bt holi is too soon ham.. they'll drag the drama a month or so... we ve to wait a lil longer till their union n their triumph over the witch.. bt their window connection at soul level is endearing to watch... his sketch in a bit n pieces gvng me hope n to linger on..

Thnk u so much hammie fr writing daily fr us in ths not-so-dead-forum..luv u fr ur perseverance! !❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NusiSg


hiya Nusi,😃 and so we meet again
Dear Hammie a wonderful take once again with a brilliant title..artistic Scatterbrains fr Atharva's state of mind right now.. loved the lyrical take

as u rightly said the epi was fine with some heroic showdown by little Madhav. .ths little bomb is inspirational I must say..the courage n spontaneity by our little champ was commendable! ! The way he investigate his mama with his Radar like eyes... OMG we elders need to learn alot frm our little kids..
and yes.. we were questioning if his story about seeing suman would be accepted..
Ravish brushed off Madhav's statement right away n I was a bit disappointed bt then I realise that's how a mother cud be fr every child... his logical talks with vividha was really one sided how a child assume her mother to be an angel n perfect.. n that's y I wonder how he wud suffer in the end the most... he has to lose everything in future..😭
ravish is looking at more from the pov ,that its madhav who is saying it and he's only a child,not to be taken seriuosly
Okk last bt not the least Vitharv's connection is getting stronger n we can see how S suman gonna lose ths battle pretty soon-ish.. bt holi is too soon ham.. they'll drag the drama a month or so... we ve to wait a lil longer till their union n their triumph over the witch.. bt their window connection at soul level is endearing to watch... his sketch in a bit n pieces gvng me hope n to linger on..
yes you may be right .. cvs will stretch the witchcraft till the amavas night.. unless this new payal jingling is the next of the cards.. well me happy to watch ,whatever till we get to the union os vitharv.
Thnk u so much hammie fr writing daily fr us in ths not-so-dead-forum..luv u fr ur perseverance! !❤️ thanks so much dear nusi , for still having the patience to read my thoughts about the daily episode.. hammie thinks you need a big 👏 for this ,be blessed and keep smiling at me and the show... much love hammie

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Hammie I can vouch that your artistic writing is topnotch and that anyone that reads your daily takes knows that and can say that there is nothing scatty about it ..just pure enchantment...

I am happy to see the CV's are making S-Suman edgy with her over confidence and wondering after four years WHY now she has trouble controlling Atharva's memories with her drugs...
S-Suman and her scatterbrain is trying to figure out how to get her upper hand back in keeping
Atharva under her control and keep him and his love apart...

Little hero Madhav was just too cute for words with his mother and her loving arms around him again... Madhav even looks at Punkit with suspicious eyes seeing those scratches on his hand.

I wonder why Ravish dismisses the news about Big Bad Granny being where Madhav was but I am glad Vividha does take him seriously and is trying to figure out exactly what had transpired... Madhav and his straight forward truthful rendition of what he saw and did in that house is told to both his parents with childlike honesty...

Atharva in his anguish is trying to understand why this face keeps appearing in his mind and he does what has helped him before and that is to put this image on paper ... sigh !! he is still under the influence of his drugs and cannot seem to remember it all clearly...

Both Atharva and Vividha are definitely moved by their close encounter that have them both
wondering why that meeting to pick up their son stirred sleeping memories...

S-Suman and her plans seem to be on a shaky ground and that is starting to worry her and in this state I hope she make a big mistake that will expose her and her diabolical plan...

Hammie, thank for keeping me warm with your awesome post as we are back into the freeze
here with -21 degrees and waiting for Spring to warm us all soon...

Take care, keep writing with your artistic talent that you so generously share with us all...
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Originally posted by: swansong


hiya swansong.. your id reminds me of a famous Russian Ballet Tchaikovsky's Swan Lake.. amazing musical score..
Today his dream girl face is not unclear.. those waiting eyes of bride are two forlorn pools of a long wait.
I am in love with these words.the way u portray ur thoughts is something else. they are sewn into such finest crafts, really a masterpiece, u r a true artist.Hammie u r beautiful.
eerhh.. i can come out with some finer witing ,oncea while.. I think I was carried away by Atharv the artist..
I loved how u have shown the parallel conditions.two people awake, two hearts not willing to go away from each others thoughts, two very forgetful people, one forgot cz his memories were removed by poisons and the other one has got a memory which works as a poison to the love she once had, but can love die?
well pointed.. me to was thinking that vividha.. does she even think about him?

Two forgetful people.Like atharva they r artists.artist of lie,deception. Yes as we all know to deceive someone is an art, cz not everyone can do it.one forgot how to lead a life without being a pawn, n the other one forgot how to live without worshiping the evil.
i usually refer to Shivas' trident it has vice and virtue side by side.. good and evil reside around us.. we have to face them..here's hopng that virtue wins despite evil
Two very innocent ppl. Madhav the innocent sleeping near his mother, secured, Ravish the innocent is sleeping, doesnt know what his mother has been doing all the years.
👏 so true.. what cause can he have to suspect his mother.?? pious woman
I really really loved the drawing session of atharva.that is just amazingly shown by creatives n i admit VSC is a great actor.
I thought so too VCS impressed me..
Keep writing hammie, i m lucky to have met u. that's very gracious of you to say so, yes please do watch the programme , and read the takes, and most of all share your interesting comments ,, thanks again for your comment , love hammie
tc.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hammie,

I always read and click like on your post, but can never bring myself to comment as you write so beautifully and it scares me that I might not be able to pen my thoughts as well as I should and as such I do not want to ruin your post.😆

You are by far one of the best writers on this forum! Your takes always bring about a new perspective of the episodes for me! I love how you have beautifully described the young hero of the show. A child's world might be very limited when it comes to sizes and experiences, however those very facts ensure that they take extra considerations to certain matters thus making them very dangerous to those who wants to keep their secrets hidden, as seen in the show with Suman, Ankit and Madhav.

I also absolutely loved your take on Atharv's memory screaming Vividha to him and him slowly bringing himself to utter her names through his lips, making him look as vulnerable as ever. And as he says her name, she appears restless on the other side, almost as if she knew he was calling her.

Anyways beautiful take as always! :)
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Originally posted by: Dolly-heart


helooo mate😃... was on the lookout for you..
Hammie I can vouch that your artistic writing is topnotch and that anyone that reads your daily takes knows that and can say that there is nothing scatty about it ..just pure enchantment...

I want to see Athrarv in role of a sculptor! watch him mould clay into Vvidha.. 3-D.. Think the effects on S- suman... HISSS...
I am happy to see the CV's are making S-Suman edgy with her over confidence and wondering after four years WHY now she has trouble controlling Atharva's memories with her drugs...
S-Suman and her scatterbrain is trying to figure out how to get her upper hand back in keeping
Atharva under her control and keep him and his love apart...
mind you her devilish deeds feature in a big way great actor Simita bansal.. me watching Balika vidhu repeats on Risthey she is shishank's mum in that too..
Little hero Madhav was just too cute for words with his mother and her loving arms around him again... Madhav even looks at Punkit with suspicious eyes seeing those scratches on his hand.
yes😆,man punkit looked poper cowered down. by our little atharv!
I wonder why Ravish dismisses the news about Big Bad Granny being where Madhav was but I am glad Vividha does take him seriously and is trying to figure out exactly what had transpired... Madhav and his straight forward truthful rendition of what he saw and did in that house is told to both his parents with childlike honesty...
it was a big disclosure..Ravish is in for sad but true facts
Atharva in his anguish is trying to understand why this face keeps appearing in his mind and he does what has helped him before and that is to put this image on paper ... sigh !! he is still under the influence of his drugs and cannot seem to remember it all clearly...
he needs treatment..but what he's getting is prolonging his condition.. how he comes out of the spiders web.. is the tale.. and me engaged in the show
Both Atharva and Vividha are definitely moved by their close encounter that have them both
wondering why that meeting to pick up their son stirred sleeping memories...
he is more than her..
S-Suman and her plans seem to be on a shaky ground and that is starting to worry her and in this state I hope she make a big mistake that will expose her and her diabolical plan...
suman is hearing things... losing the plot.. an anklet??😕.. whatever next!
Hammie, thank for keeping me warm with your awesome post as we are back into the freeze
here with -21 degrees and waiting for Spring to warm us all soon...
noooeeh! this is incredible ,is 12C.. need to give me gardner abuzz.. the garden looks sad.. daffodils smiling though..😛
Take care, keep writing with your artistic talent that you so generously share with us all...
think of Atharv as Michelangelo 😛? or Leonardo.. we know who will be the lady with the puzzling expression.. vividhaaah... 😛 much love Doll.. haaa haaa.. enjoy the weekend love hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _innocent_

Hammie,
helooo innocent,😃... super to see you here love your DD dp..😊

I always read and click like on your post, but can never bring myself to comment as you write so beautifully and it scares me that I might not be able to pen my thoughts as well as I should and as such I do not want to ruin your post.😆
now you want me too shake my head ,and tongue in cheek roll me eyes..😛.. hey! good you broke the spell and zapped up here!
You are by far one of the best writers on this forum! Your takes always bring about a new perspective of the episodes for me! I love how you have beautifully described the young hero of the show. A child's world might be very limited when it comes to sizes and experiences, however those very facts ensure that they take extra considerations to certain matters thus making them very dangerous to those who wants to keep their secrets hidden, as seen in the show with Suman, Ankit and Madhav.
bravo! what an apt comment.. little people as in children, have to be heard.. can be dangerous what they disclose,as in this case.. spontaneously he takes Suman's name . It is the bold unpleasant truth..to some.. but nevertheless truth.. mind you in cases of abuse.. children may withdraw and refuse to talk altogether..As adults we have to credence to the childs need.. Madhav was simply correcting the facts,that all were not strangers in the grouch's house.. there was dadi whom he did know!!
I also absolutely loved your take on Atharv's memory screaming Vividha to him and him slowly bringing himself to utter her names through his lips, making him look as vulnerable as ever. And as he says her name, she appears restless on the other side, almost as if she knew he was calling her.
have to confess I actually enjoyed writing about this scene.. well directed shot andmusical back up certainly helped..
Anyways beautiful take as always! :) now look here mate... may I humbly request you to come and share your valuable ideas .. simply,because the takes are as much yours as they are mine.. shared ownership ! and you are right this forum is blessed with many great writers 😃.. all credit to our show! much love hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hammie,
I promise to comment on your thread henceforth as you've so kindly requested for me to do so!😳😆

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