FANFICTION:NAAMKARAN(updated)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys! I am new here and i want to write a new fanfiction on the chemistry between AVNI and NEIL.
I hope you guys will like it.😛

AVNI: She was known to be dead for the whole world.

ANANYA/AYESHA/VIDYA/NAINA: Who is she? NObody knows that what is her real identity. Some people😉 only saw her face. She is a mystery to the world. She works for RAW.

NEIL: He is a young, honest, independent police officer in Mumbai anti terrorism squad who leads his life in his own terms though his father is a business tycoon in Mumbai.

Sid/Sidhartha Malhotra: He is bestfreind of our mystery girl😃 and a computer genius.He is the only person who knows who ananya is.😉

Ali: He is a cute down to earth guy with curly hair and owns a very popular cafe in Mumbai.

Riya: She is a spoilt brat and grand daughter of evil dayaben. she always shows off being rich.

DAYABANTI MEHTA: She is the true villain of our story. She is an evil, money minded lady who murdered ayesha and avni just like the show.

NEELA: She somehow managed to escape and now works in an orphanage. she is still waiting for her daughter Avni😭
FATHER ANDREW D'SOUZA: HE will be a very important role of our story.😊

other charachters will be added later!

PROLOGUE

NEWYORK, 2.00 PM
A 21years old beautiful girl is seen to be enjoying at a bar until she saw a man in a mask looking for something or someone. he saw the girl and immediatly recognised her and came closer to her and asked her for a drink. but the girl refused asked the man:" come to the point and give me the disk or else!"
the man realised something and looked at her fearfully and hastily gave her the disk.
the girl gives him a cold smile and says:"you have never seen my face, got it?"
the man:"yes mam"
the girl nodded at him satisfactionally and vanished in the dark.
the man stared in wonder and muttered something and wiped his sweat.



CHAPTER-1
NEWYORK,8.30 AM

A 24 years old young man carrying bagpack is literally running to reach his office or else his boss will murder him with her bare hands and then ask his soul why he came late at office!
well he wake up late and on the way his car broke down!!! he knocks the door of his boss's cabin and breathing heavily enters the cabin.
SID'S POV
i am sidhartha malhotra...24 years old handome[i m not praising myself😆]a computer freak[thats what everbody call me🥱]works for RAW and ANANYA VARMA [23 years old] my young, beautiful and intelligent boss...although we are best friends and we know every secrets of each but at work she is my hotheaded angry BOSS...what most people fear about her is the wrath of her anger and the criminal...well her face is enough to suck the soul of them😆...but i also respect her immensly becoz of her dedication and will power...uhmm uhmm...lately i am talkimg to myself very much...weird! is not it?😕

And suddenly...

"BAM"...and i am seeing moons and stars circling aroung my head🤢
the reason is... my boss was calling me from 10 mins and i was blankly looking at the wall and talking to myself...so she decided to throw a heavy weighted file at my head! brilliant!
OUCH! that hurts...

ANI[ANANYA]: good for you...btw you are late and why are you standing there and mutting to yourself stupidly?

Sid: oh nothing! umm...i booked the tickits and the time of the flight is tomorrow 7.00 am and i look at her pouting [Sid's pov:coz we are going to india for some important cases and also some persoal matter...will tell you later😉 and i dont want to go]

ANI: what?

Sid: is it really so important for you to go to india?

ANI: yes...i told you not to come with me.

Sid: [looking at her angrily] i cant leave you alone[ i can also look scary sometimes]

ANI: well...that is your problem...discussion is over...be ready at 6.00 clock sharp...will pick you up and now go to your cabin and start the preparartion for our journey

Sid: okay MAM[ well i have to create our new identity proofs so that no can recognise us😉]

fastforwarding...>>

INDIA,7.00 AM

A young handsome man is doing exercise vigorously...suddenly he hears his mom calling...TILLU😆...gosh not again!😕
the man stops and goes to his room to get ready for breakfast...

THERE...the flight landed in mumbai airport and ANANYA AND SID ARE ARE READY TO FACE THE UPCOMING HURDLES THAT ARE READY TO COME ON THEIR PATH...

HERE...
TILLU's mom is waiting for her beloved son at the breakfast table...
MOM: haye! mera raja beta aagaya...aaja beta...do din tak ghar nehi aaya tune...chor k piche bhagte bhagte ish maa ko to bhul hi jaata hai tu...isiliye to ish umar me bhi tere piche mujhe hi bhagna parta hai! waise aj tera date hai...yaad hai na?

oh yes...the man is none other than NEIL...he is very busy to solve a critical case thats why ha couldn't come home for two days...

NEIL: relax mom... please dont start again...i can't come today...i have a urgent case...talk to you later...bye
and he walks off to his office..

CHAPTER-2

Neil is on his way to office when suddenly he hears thunder and stops his bike to enjoy the rain.

Constable DD holds umbrella over his head and says if you don't take umbrella; your mom will get annoyed!

NEIL says no; i have a solution for that...our ALI's cafe tea.

He sees that Ali is very busy flirting with a girl!!! LOL!!😆

He slowly comes to him and gives a soft punch in his head

ALI: what the hell! [He turns to see Neil and gives a baffled look]

What was that?😕

NEIL: that was your remedy to cure your flirting disease.😛

ALI: flirting is good for health! Come, sit and have some tea to refresh your mood.😉

He says this rain is just like AVNI, she also used to do anything!

NEIL: so when will you make me meet her?

ALI: let me meet first, i m waiting for her since 15 years

NEIL: what? Let me get this straight...you are waiting for such girl whom you did not meet since 15 years! Brilliant, are you crazy?

ALI laughs and does shayari.

NEIL: if you get AVNI what's guarantee you will identify her?

ALI says heart GPS will not get wrong!

NEIL gives money to ALI but ALI refuses and wishes him best of luck

NEIL bids good bye to ALI and goes to search the drug dealer who is illegally selling drugs under some fake business.

The whole police team is after this gang but it seems that they always came to know everything about police and before the police teams reach there, the gang goes undercover and clear the places.😲

NEIL strongly feels that the deceivers are among them but he can't point out them until he gets enough proofs.😡

PART-2

Here ANANYA and SID came to their apartment and settled there.

SID: [yawning] I'm so tired yaar...I really need some sweet sleep and if you dare to disturb me i will break your face!!!!!!

ANI: okay as you wish... I'm going to fresh myself and then explore the city...coz after 15 years I'm here; its long time a long time; many things changed here! So you enjoy your sleep...bye!!!

SID: what?😲 Wait I'll also come with you...I want to see its magic too!

ANI: okay then get ready...I'm going to have a shower and please order some food...I'm starving!

[After 20 mins they are ready to explore the city]

SID: let's go...I've booked a car!

ANI: good!😛

CHAPTER-3

They already covered some places like Gateway of INDIA, WELLINGTON FOUNTAIN, ELEPHANTA ISLANDS & CAVE, and CHHATRAPATI SHIVAJI TERMINUS. Now they are having lunch!

SID: it's true then! There is really some magic in Mumbai's air! Shit I already fell in love with this city [looking at some girls]

ANI: it's nothing new! You fell in love wherever you go! [Smirked slightly]

SID: very funny! So what's our plan?

Ananya: Sid you have to collect all information about Neela Parikh and Diksha Mehta coz our first scapegoat will be diksha and smirked evilly.

Suddenly her phone buzzes...the screen shows..."FATHER"

Ananya excuses herself and goes to take the call.

And here Sid is looking for a chance to flirt with those girls. He gets up there but suddenly collides with someone and the two falls down the floor.

Sid feels something wet on his shirt and notices that he fell upon a girl. He hastily gets up to offer a helping hand to the girl and says,' oh! I m very sorry'

But then he realises that his sorry is going to waste coz the girl bursts on him angrily,'' how dare you? You cheap middleclass people! Didn't you learn manners? You spoilt my outfit". Sid becomes so angry that he almost yells but then controls himself.

Sid: look I'm saying sorry! It's an accident. Why are you overreacting?

Riya: accident? I know your intentions. Do you even know who I am? Even my fiance is a police officer. Let him come and he'll take care of you.

Sid almost laughs at this and asks,' strange, you don't know your goddamn name!" at this they glare at each other.

And there comes NEEL...he enters the cafe and sees riya and a young man argues over something. He hurriedly goes there to control the situation.

Neel: riya, what's happening here? Are you okay?

Riya: Neel arrests him. He intentionally fell over me and spoiled my dress. And now cracking jokes on me. Even I got hurt. Look here.

Sid is thoroughly enjoying the drama. Even Neel is very much confused. Sid sensed Neel's dilemma and says," relax dude! It's just an accident. Even I said sorry. But your fiance is not ready to accept it."

Here ananya enters the cafe and sees a chaos around their table. She goes there and hears that riya is insulting Sid. She fumes in anger and her voice loudly boomed into the cafe, "ENOUGH! "All of them turn to an angry looking ananya. Sid gulped in fear. Ananya comes and signs a cheque and throw it into riya's face and says I hope it will be enough to fulfil your demands and you may get a mirror with the extra money, in which you can see your real face and stormed out of the cafe.

Chapter- 4

"Ananya, listen to me" Sid stops her.

Sid: see, that's why I told you not to come here. Calm down. You have to control yourself or else your enemies will understand who you are.

Anaya: you are right Sid. I need to control my anger. Let's go. We have more important works.

Next day

Sid: Ananya, here is the file of Mehta group of company. Now they have nothing. Their stocks are low in the market. They have kept everything mortgaged. Their status is fake and hollow.

Ananya: Sid, I know these. Tell something new.

Sid: yeah. Dayabanti's granddaughter I mean riya Mehta's engagement is business deal. Dayaben is doing deal with khanna industry and if the deal will get success then she can get powers again.

Ananya: hmm, so who is the guy Riya is getting engaged to?

Sid: that boy in the cafe remembers? Neel Khanna, an honest police officer. He really has a good record.

Ananya: impressive. Dayabanti Mehta we will meet again but now I'll play the game and you'll be my puppet.

GAME ON!

Here in chamko cafe, Neel is thinking about the girl he met yesterday at cafe. He never saw any girl like her. He remembers those beautiful eyes which are so deep and soulful as if many secrets are hidden there.

Suddenly Ali comes there and asks him what happened, is everything alright? Where are you lost?

Neel says nothing yaar, I just came to meet you.

Ali asks Neel do you really want to marry Riya Mehta. I mean I know how those people is that's why I'm telling you to reconsider your decision.

Neel: stop it yaar Ali. I don't want to hear about these. There are no proofs against them. So how can you accuse them?

Ali: Neel one day you'll understand what I'm talking about. Anyways have some coffee!


Chapter-5

Sid: but how will we enter Mehta mansion?

Ananya: we will be wedding planner of her granddaughter's marriage.

Sid almost spits the coffee...what? Have you gone mad? Wedding planner? Ananya I don't even know the W' of wedding planning...how'll we manage it?

Ananya: relax yaar. I already planned everything. You just have to create some designs and u can get help from these books that I bought for you.

Sid: (in mind) oh I'm in big trouble. God help me!

Btw where are you going now?

Ananya: Astha charity home. There are really something fishy going on. How come two girls vanished and they didn't know anything about it. It's not that simple at all. May be a more sinister things happening there.

Ananya enters the charity home. She sees many children are playing here and there. Some are colouring sketches, some are dancing. She smiles a little. Suddenly something soft collides with her and falls. She sees a little baby girl may be 4 or 5 years old with two cute little pony and big round eyes filled with tears looking at her. She feels a pang in her heart to see those eyes... As if those eyes are her own mirror image. She carefully picks up the girl to check if she got any hurt. She wipes her tears and asks

Ananya: beta apko kahi chot to nehi lagi na? Ap theek to ho na?

But the girl only stares at her. Ananya feels so restless.

Ananya: apka naam kya hai beta? Aur ap aise kyu bhag rahi thi?

The girl hugs her tightly and sobs. Ananya become concerned, she feels something wrong happened with this little girl. She tries to soothe her. Then she notices that two men are looking at them. She can feel the negative vibes of them thanks to her experience in field work. So they come out from the premises and sit near a tree, then she wipes the tears of the little girl's eyes and again asks her name. This time she gets an answer. The girl cutely tells that her name is khushi.

Ananya: khushi, kitna pyara name hai apka! Par ap yun bhag kyu rahi thi? Agar chot lag jaati to?

Khushi: wo mere kamre me na do darabna uncle aaye the...pehle wo puja didi leke gaye phir puja didi wapas hi nehi aaye abhi tak aur abhi wo mujhe le jane aaye hai. Mujhe nehi jana unlogo ke sathe and makes a crying face.

Ananya is shocked to hear this and thinks that puja is one of the girl that is missing from the home.

Ananya: arey arey aise rote nehi hai. Brave girl doesn't cry. Apko koyi kahi nehi leke jayega. Aur agar aapko wo dar lahe ya phir wo bad uncles apko phir se aaye na to aap Ganapati Bappa ko yaad kar na...wo humesha sabki help karta hai. Ok.

Khushi nodded her head cutely. Ananya thinks that now they will collect information through khushi but first she has to protect her and there is only one way to do that.

Chapter-6

Next day Anaya and Sid are ready to set their foots into Mehta mansion according to their plan. They enter Mehta mansion and ananya recalls how Dayabanti killed her mother, how she snatched her brother, how she shoot AVNI. But Sid holds her hand and takes her into Mehta house.

Dayaben is doing arti but suddenly she feels anxious as if some storm is entering into her house and turns to see Ananya and Sid. Anaya and Sid take aarti. Dayaben asks them do I know you. Anaya says I know you very well I mean who doesn't k now Dayabanti Mehta. They say we are wedding planners that's why we came here. I'm Ananya Verma and he is Siddhartha my assistance.

Dayaben asks them to sit and orders veema to bring teas.

Sid: mam we make best arrangements in low budgets. If you have any doubts then you can see these designs.

Sid shows the designs that they made whole night. Dayaben is impressed and thinks they are good, now I can organise the engagement party in low price. Dayaben says you two are hired. Now you can start your arrangement and Ananya and Sid smirk at each other for their first success.

Riya and Neel enter the house and shock to see them here.

Riya: you? How dare you two come in my house? Dadi, they insulted me in front of everyone. Dadi throw them out of this house now.

But dayaben is fuming to see Riya shouting at them like this. She thinks this stupid will definitely spoil my plans. She shouts," stop it Riya. It's your fault and now you are blaming them. They are your wedding planner and it's my final decision. No arguments. Got it?" And goes from there. Riya looks at them angrily.

Riya: so finally you two show your class. Wedding planner? Huh! From now you two will follow my orders got it? And you (looking at ananya), you threw cheque on me, now you will see what will I do! Just wait and watch.

Ananya: keep your voice low Riya. First of all we are not here to follow your orders. Although it's your wedding but Dayabanti Mehta hired us not you Ms. Riya Mehta.

Sid: are you always like this? I mean loud and snobby! I pity for ur family members and the two walks off!

Riya: see Neel they have the audacity to insult me in my own house. I'll not leave these people.

Neel: riya calm down. Please stop fighting. I have to go somewhere.

Neel is already stressed about that drug dealing case above that riya's tantrums. He messages his head and walks out and sees Ananya and Sid talking something. He calls them.

Neel: hey! Listen, wait.

Ananya turns to see Neel and says look Mr. Neel if you are here to say in favour of your fianc then I'm not interested at all.

Neel: why are you always so hyper? And I just came to ask your names. That's it.

Sid: oh! Sorry dude, don't listen to her. I'm Sid, Siddhartha and she is Ananya. Btw congratulation!

Neel: thanks! Hi! I'm Neel Khanna.

Ananya: Sid we are getting late. Can we go now?

Neel: wait! I'll drop you. After all you two are now special to us.

Ananya: no thanks. We can manage.

Sid: good idea bro! After all you are the groom. How can we refuse you? Let's go. Come on Ananya. He somehow manages to pull Ananya with himself!

guys this ff is not like the show. there will lots of twists and turns.

stay tuned.

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THANK YOU😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
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What's Sidharth Malhotra doing in this story? And why is he running after ananya instead of alia Bhatt? 🤣
Seems interesting what you have written so far. Can't wait to read more.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks waiting for a fanfuction about them ... update sooon😊
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nice ... update next part sooon
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Well done! Love that riya had a cheque thrown at her snobby face 😆
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Wow!! You have updated many parts and i hadn't read anyone of them. I read all these chapters.
I am shocked to see sid in this! Well it's interesting to see Ananya working for RAW!! Well good job dear. Please continue dis!
Posted: 8 years ago
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Finished reading all chapters & they are amazing. please continue soon. really eager to see how the story unfolds & what blenders SID going to make a Wedding planner😆😆
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Very nice, please update the next chapter and also can u pls PM me.
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Great job
Hope to read more
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When will you continue the story??

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