Thahaan os.....PUNISHMENT OF BAD DEEDS updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The slap echoed in the corners of pandey niwaas.everyone was rooted on the spot looking at the person who was being slapped and the person who slapped
There shraddha stood rooted to the spot holding her left cheek somewhat in one side position eyes downcasted on the floor
And the person who slapped her was still holding his hand up in air all shaking with anger

After what felt like hours but in reality only few seconds everyone came back to reality and looked at the two persons in front of them with shock, surprise etched on their faces.
Shraddha slowly lifted her eyes from the floor and looked at the person who had just slapped her few moments back.shraddha opened her mouth and said how dare you slap me don't you kno... but couldn'tcomplete her scentence as another slap greeted her right cheek everyone gasped and look on in horror.

Just shup up or i don't know what i will do next bihaan roared with fury and anger blazing in his eyes still looking at shraddha
But what caught the attention of all was bihaan was in his old form. Gone were the pants and full sleeved shirts and glasses and those shoes
He was wearing his kurta and jeans along with his shoes.

Vasu was the first to come out of the shock and came towards bihaan and asked him why did he slapped shraddha
Bihaan glanced at vasu for a brief moment of time and started narrating everything...


Sorry for this cliffhanger😆its because i love cliffhangers😉😆
I may write furthur i i get good response😉😃otherwise there is no use in continuing 😕
Please tell me how was it 😉
And should i continue or not
Because i think it was not good as i am not a good writer😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice please write some more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cyrilraj1980

Very nice please write some more

thanks for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bihan for the first time lifted his hand against evil. You showed has Bihan as real hero. Plz. continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ttvijaya

Bihan for the first time lifted his hand against evil. You showed has Bihan as real hero. Plz. continue.

thanks di yup i showed bihaan as real hero😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Bihaan slapped shraddha😲 I want this bihaan in our TPK😃
it's really super dear 👏pls continue pooji😳😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maadhangi

Wow Bihaan slapped shraddha😲 I want this bihaan in our TPK😃

it's really super dear 👏pls continue pooji😳😳😳

i may update part 2 in evening or tomorrow😊😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooja2109

i may update part 2 in evening or tomorrow😊😉

YIPPPEEE🥳 Thank u dear😃 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maadhangi

YIPPPEEE🥳 Thank u dear😃 🤗

welcome my sweet akka😉😳

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