Ariya SS: Love or Nightmare [Part19- PG 65] *UPDATED*

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Hi everyone, here I'm presenting my new story on Ariya. It is small story and has new concept.
It occured in my mind suddenly, so I m writing here. I would love to know your suggestions, view , bashings or likes and dislikes on it. So please write comment and hit like and let me know how you all liked it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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waiting for ur story
plz post prologue soon
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Waiting for your story
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yippee another story on ariya 🤗
plz continue
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Prologue

February, 2017
New York city, USA

A man standing near a floor to ceiling glass wall he is looking outside at the garden of his apartment where only white color can be seen as white snow has covered trees, garden's floor even flowers of garden are also totally covered with white snow as there was snow falling just 15 minutes ago.

Man sigh deeply and thought to himself looking blankly at whiteness "Like a blank white paper my life is blank, my heart want someone who write a beautiful story on it. Or maybe just like this garden my life my heart is blank white lack of few sunrays which melts this snow and decrease it's whiteness and bring back the beautiful colors of my life. Ptaa nhi kyu mujhe aisa lgta hai ki Meri sunrays mujhe bula rhi hai yaa Mai hi Kuch zyaada hi soch rha Hun. Kab mujhe meri Zindagi ke pal hamesha ke liye yaad rahenge. Kyu mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise mera koi zaroori hissa mujhse dur hai wo mujhe pukaar rha hai mere liye tadap rha hai. Jaise uske bina mera wajood hi nhi kaun hai wo? kya hai wo ? Kya Sach mei mera Kuch dur hai mujhse ya fir...?" A voice broke his chain of thought "Sirr!! Your dinner is ready."
Man nod still looking blankly in the white garden.



Mumbai outskirt, India


A girl look at the farmhouse standing at its door with teary eyes and thought " Kash Kash main tumhre Saath Hoti tou aj ye sb... Kahan ho tum ? Kya Meri tumhre Dil Mei koi jagah nhi thi.? Kyu tumne apne waade thod diye ? Only one week..Only for one week you went leaving me here saying we will go together when you come back, you promised me but you..." Her chain of thought broke by a voice of "Mumma"
Girl immediately wipe her face and turn putting smile on her lips. "Let's go my sweetheart. Humein late ho rha haina. Chachu must be waiting. Come let's go." Picking up the 5 years old boy girl went out from there and sit in the car giving a teary smile to the farmhouse. She nod saying "let's go!"




Rawte mansion, Thane, Mumbai-

"Mummy !! Look ye ladhki Bhai ke liye acchi hogi.. dikhne me bhi khubsoorat hai aur Kapoor khandhan ki eklauti beti hai. Haina?" A girl of 16 years old asked.
"Hmmm. Ab ye akhiri baar hai wo bhi Arjun hamari hi pasand se shaadi karenga." A Lady in her 50s replied with evil smile.
"Tou Mai unhe phone krke bataa doon." Girl asked showing cordless phone to her mother.
"Theek hai Simi beta. Tum Arjun se bataa do Mai pandit ji se baat krti hun." Lady said after pulling her mobile out.




Simran speak on phone "Hello. It's simran Rawte here. May I speak to ASR please. Yeah..(after 5sec paused she said excitedly) Arjun bhaiya. How are you ? You know I have a good.. nhi nhi Great news for you."
Arjun "..."
Simi with wide smile replied "yeah..guess what!?? Humne apke liye ek beautiful si Dulhan dhoondi hai."
To be continue..


Hey guys!! Here is the prologue
Please hit like and comment and let me know how is the prologue..
Edited by etfr - 7 years ago
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INDEX

Prologue : scroll up

Charactersketch:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=4

PART 1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=6

PART 2:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=10



PART 3:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=13

PART 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=19

PART 5:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=21

PART 6:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=23

PART 7:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=27

PART 8:

(A)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=29

(B)

https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4813505&TPN=33

PART 9:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=36

PART 10:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=39

PART 11:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=45

PART 12:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated?pn=49

PART 13:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated

PART 14:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated

PART 15:

Page 61

PART 16:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated


PART 17: (MAHAUPDATE)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156376455


PART 18:

/forum/arjun/4813505/ariya-ss-love-or-nightmare-part19-pg-65-updated


PART 19:



Edited by etfr - 4 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing prologue
well written n explain
arjun.is in usa,n riya in india
they have kid also y he leave her,
i think uski memory loss hui hai
his mother seems evil
update soon
thnaks for pm
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Originally posted by: sur1911

amazing prologue

well written n explain
arjun.is in usa,n riya in india
they have kid also y he leave her,
i think uski memory loss hui hai
his mother seems evil
update soon
thnaks for pm


Thanks for lovely comment
Glad you like it
Will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome concept
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting prologue
look like arjun mom is horrible person 😡
she & her daughter planning arjun's marriage with their choice girl 😡
I have feeling those r ariya & they were somehow got separated
continue soon

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