TOO MANY LOOPHOLES

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I hate to bring negativity to the forum but this is too much now. Up until now we have all overlooked inconsistencies in the plot and endless amounts of bloopers in the show because we love it so much and all the characters are so endearing, but enough is enough now. This is just lazy writing, almost as if the CVs are making it up as they go along. There are so many unanswered questions/mistakes in the script that I don't know where to begin. First Romi started of as a girl Rudra was lusting after, but she wasn't interested in him. Then Romi was randomly turned into a Kapoor sister, which invalidated all the earlier scenes where she paid no attention to Rudra and couldn't care less about him- if she really did want revenge then like Svetlana and Tia she would have also tried to trap one of the brothers with her fake love. Then moving forward Romi was turned into Dushyant's sister. Tia who was shown to be Shivay's childhood friend at the start is now all of a sudden the daughter of a small time employee who used to work in the Oberoi chemical factory. Where did the bachpan ki dosti come from then? Tia who has supposedly reformed now and in today's episode realised the error of her ways declared that she won't let anyone harm the Oberoi's anymore- so why isn't she exposing Svetlana? Because Svetlana is now needed for Dil Bole Oberoi? And please don't even get me started on the whole memory loss debacle- I cringed at the silliness of Rudra putting a mattress under Anika when Shivay pushed her from the balcony. I know it's a tv show so one must take everything with a pinch of salt but come onnn. I could be here all day listing the many holes in this story but I think you all get the point now. It's frustrating as a viewer that the writers of this show insult our intelligence like this, as if viewers are so stupid that they will be fed any old rubbish and quietly accept it. I think it the CVs are struggling to do their jobs correctly and have no more ideas left then they should come onto this forum for we have many talented writers here with many creative, ORIGINAL ideas that can be used in the show.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is just lazy writing, almost as if the CVs are making it up as they go along.


I hate to break it to you, but that's exactly what happens 😆

and not just IB or DBO but in general. The show has a backbone to a story, usually it's as simple as the guy and girl need to get together and if the guy is a rude/jerk/bad boy, the girl needs to fix him. but other than that, it is all being written up as the tracks move along.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Tabs_

This is just lazy writing, almost as if the CVs are making it up as they go along.



I hate to break it to you, but that's exactly what happens 😆

and not just IB or DBO but in general. The show has a backbone to a story, usually it's as simple as the guy and girl need to get together and if the guy is a rude/jerk/bad boy, the girl needs to fix him. but other than that, it is all being written up as the tracks move along.



No what I mean is that it's almost as if they're making it up on a day to day basis, that's why things randomly change. The CVs should have some kind of long term character sketch though such as who is related to who, who is who's sister etc. Family relationships can't change overnight that's just ridiculous. The way they are going tomorrow we will find out that Anika is actually Shivay's sister or something ridiculous like that.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to 4 lions Gul khans series all her works are like this it's great in the beginning and then after 100 episodes it's like the don't have any material left to write

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