SUKOR OS - FLASH MEMORIES*

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Plot takes place in an advanced setting where SUKOR have already confessed and KN and his minions are rotting in jail😉
*3rd PERSON P.O.V*
Chakor woke up to find herself entangled within a hundred running wires while son connected to her saline dips, some ran up to the oxygen tank while the majority stayed fixed to 3 brepimg machines. She looked around confused a sense of numbness enveloped her.Nothing felt normal. Heck, she couldn't even remember what normal felt like it was almost as if she woke up in a new planet with nothing to expect.
*CHAKOR P.O.V*
"Jaan" a man of his 30's pulled me into a hug pouring wet kisses everywhere possible as a shiver ran down my spine.
Who was he and most importantly why do I feel nervous around him? My hands involuntarily reached my once numb skin now flushing in warmth where his lips lingered. I looked at him a handsome guy, except he looked like a mess, overgrown beard, messy hair adhis eyes bloodshot yet those eyes seem to twinkle in joy as they looked at me. What was I to him?
"Chakor tell something woman! You normally keep talking until my ears blead, poke me awake at night to hear you rant what's with the silent treatment today?" He nudged me.
"I'm sorry" I looked at him apologetically.
"You're what" He looked amused.
"I'm sorry" I repeated.
"Did Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi just say sorry. To me? Now that's quite a change" he teased.
"By the way why are you sorry?" He asked after a pause.
"Because I don't know who you are" I answered.
"Oii... My beard is just a little overgrown stop acting as if I've transformed into a different looking man" he faked hurt.
"No I swear, I don't remember" I reasoned.
A sharp pain in my head made me shreik in pain.
"Chakor,Chakor" he tried to keep me up but all I felt was slipping into darkness.
*SURAJ P.O.V*
"Doctor, what happened to my wife?" I questioned in concern.
"I'm afraid you're wife has been affected by amnesia. She's lost her memory" Just like that my world crashed down. My life, my support system and all I loved and cared for didn't remember me. My eyes misted with unshead tears as I saw the doctor leave. I laid my head over hers, my eyes giving up its battle of forcing them open. Slowly I fell asleep.
*3rd PERSON P.O.V*
Chakor woke up to find Suraj sleeping over her. She watched his nostrils flare as he relaxed, and his adorably messy hair. A tiny chuckle escaped her lips watching her 6 feet tall possession. Her hands found themselves carcass his hair in an attempt to soothe him. Suraj's eyes shot open as he felt her touch.
"Chakor, how are you feeling now?" He asked concern trying to distance himself from me.
"I'm OK I guess. You must be?" She questioned.
"Suraj. Your husband" He warmly smiled at her making her feel fluffy inside as if she just got complemented by her crush. She tried hard to cover up the weird attraction she felt to a man she just met and found out was her husband. Her eyes can!e in contact with Suraj's eyes that looked down defeated, eyes that welled up in tears.
"Why are you crying" Chakor innocently patted him.
"Nothing" he lied.
"I'm sorry" she abruptly apologized.
"For what?"
"For making you cry. I know I'm the reason for your tears. If I didn't lose my memory you would have been happy wouldn't you?"
"Shhh.. Its nothing like that baby. Nothing is your fault, its mine I shouldn't have let you feel bad"
Chakor as a reflex pulled him down into a huge warm bear hug.
"I promise I will try and remember everything"
"You don't have to force yourself love, cause I'd love you either way. Let's first start off again as friends take your time and when you feel its right you can accept me as your husband" Suraj confessed kissing her knuckles.
"I'm sorry in advance for my random kissing. Its just grown on me. But I swear I'll never force you I will try and stop with my abrupt kissing" he giggled scratching the back of his head.
Chakor watched him in awe. She felt a strong sense of happiness looking at what a supportive and loving husband she's earned.
Chakor promised herself to set it all right no matter what it takes.

Thoughts? Thoughts?😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one...😊
It will be nice to see something of this kinda in future where one out of Sukor loses their memory and the other patiently cares and try to get it back by reliving some old memories...🤓
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is just freaking mindblowing...
Do you know that this idea have been playing in my mind quite for some time now ???? That ...WHAT IF ????...Chakor loses her memory due to something KN does ????
How will Suraj react and how will Suraj lovingly bring her back to normal and win her back ?????
I wouldn't mind seeing something like this happening in the show...I so want to see Suraj taking care of Chakor in his own way...
I would love to see a super loving, protective and possesive Suraj for his Chakor
Right now Chakor is the one standing by him and keeps giving him courage...I wouldn't mind the other way around too...
At first I thought my ideas were tooo silly for words, but I am happy that someone else also shared the same idea I had / have

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KUTUR

Nice one...😊

It will be nice to see something of this kinda in future where one out of Sukor loses their memory and the other patiently cares and try to get it back by reliving some old memories...🤓

Glad you liked it😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: eshasrk

This is just freaking mindblowing...

Do you know that this idea have been playing in my mind quite for some time now ???? That ...WHAT IF ????...Chakor loses her memory due to something KN does ????
How will Suraj react and how will Suraj lovingly bring her back to normal and win her back ?????
I wouldn't mind seeing something like this happening in the show...I so want to see Suraj taking care of Chakor in his own way...
I would love to see a super loving, protective and possesive Suraj for his Chakor
Right now Chakor is the one standing by him and keeps giving him courage...I wouldn't mind the other way around too...
At first I thought my ideas were tooo silly for words, but I am happy that someone else also shared the same idea I had / have

Guess I found my soul sister🤗 *hugs*
I also thought that this was going to turn dumb. Actually I wrote this two months ago and left it to rot Today I found this lying on my study table and finally decided ti update it😊
Thank you for commenting 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow.. this is nice... 😃 no KN and only SuKor...
you wrote beautifully... please do continue with this and update soon...👍🏼

even though its a little sad to read chakor loosing her memory and not remembering any thing... but i would love to read further how she will fall for Suraj again...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww suraj...He is so caring and understanding husband...
Every woman wants man like him...
Chakor lost her memory that was tragedy but no fear coz her suraj is here...
Nice fresh story...waiting for your update...Please continue soon...

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