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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I'm So sorry for not Commenting on Last Parts,I am Busy in Exams.😭
It was Awesome and Interesting.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW!! Awesome update...

loved it dear...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 5
One of Arnav's friends gets blacklisted because of low attendance in the college. Arnav gets alarmed when he goes to the college. But to his surprise, he did not his name in the blacklisted ones. Suddenly someone pats his back. Arnav turns round to see who the person is. It is none other than Khushi.

Arnav: You?
Khushi: I know what you ae looking for. Guess that you are surprised that your name is not on that list. Right?
Arnav: How you know?
Khushi: I understand everything. I can make that out from your face. Well, it is because I have been doing the proxy for you.
Arnav: You don't love me anymore, then why all this?
Khushi: For your bright future so you will give up your goondagiri.
Arnav: That means you love me but you are denying it.
Khushi: I did that as a friend. I don't love you anymore.
Arnav: Say the same thing looking at my eyes.
Khushi: No, I don't.
Arnav: Are you sure?
Khushi: Yes.
Arnav: Fine, I will see that you will come to me.
Everyone goes to their class.
During the break, he sees Meera while he expects Khushi. He acts like a blind man & falls on Meera who screams, "Can't you see?"
Arnav: I am not able to see as the dirt has entered my eyes. I'm sorry.
Meera: No problem. I will take you to the washroom.
Meera holds Arnav & takes him to there. Khushi sees him with Meera & gets jealous. She starts following Arnav.
Meera: Here is the washroom. Just splash water on your eyes. You will be fine.
Arnav: Thanks a lot. You are very kind.
Meera: My pleasure.
Arnav: may I know your name?
Meera: I am Meera. What is yours?
Arnav: I am Arnav. You can call me Max as well.
Meera: Max is a nice name. I will call you by that name.
Arnav: By all means.
Khushi sees that and walks off. She tramples to the stairs and is about to fall. To her surprise, the two strong arms hold her. Khushi turns back & sees that it was Arnav.
Khushi: I thought of meeting you but you are back to your tactics. You are flirting with that girl, right?
Arnav: So it makes difference to you right? When you don't love me, how does it matter to you?Just say you love me if you are feeling the pinch.
Khushi: I don't love you but I thought of giving you a chance.
Arnav: It means that you love me but you are flirting with that old man. But I'm flirting with the girl of our age group.
Khushi: I don't love you.
Arnav: Then why were you following me? why did you proxy for me? why have you been sending me the copy of your notes? If it is not loving, what it is?
Khushi feels defeated.
Arnav takes her hair off her eyes. He said, your eyes say that you love me a lot." He then holds her waist and kisses her lips to which Khushi does not react. He then hugs her. Khushi hugs him tightly. Arnav then kisses her forehead caresses her back. He said, "I get the same feel from you like I used to get before. Khushi, I love you. I love you a lot."
Khushi kisses his lips and said, "I love you too Arnav. I was dating with Savio because my uncle has been pushing me onto him. I have lost my parents as you know. I am the only girl."
Arnav: From now on, you are my responsibility. Will you marry me? I will take good care of you. I will keep you very happy.

Khushi: Uncle does not like you. He says you do a lot of goondagiri. If anything happens to you, where will I go?
Arnav: But he is fine sending you with that old man. What happiness can he give you? Can he give you the physical protection as I'm giving you? I agree that I'm not as rich as him but I have a lot of land & property. If I sell them now, I will be richer than him. We can only live on the interest that we get every month. That old man cannot get that much even if he toils the entire month. How long will he live? You don't love him. Can't your uncle understand your feelings?
Khushi: That is what I tell him but he says what is your contribution in that. You got it only because you are a legal heir. If you do anything of your own, I can speak to uncle.
Arnav: Fine, I will start my own business. I will talk to your uncle.

After the college hours, everyone goes home. Maan partners with Savio and opens a bakery in Vasco. The name is TREAT HOUSE. Arnav & Geet also open the bakery shop with an elderly person who is in charge of preparing all types of bakeries as well as any kind of non- vegetarian food. Both the businesses are doing well. One day, the foreign delegate comes and offers the contract to both the bakeries. While Arnav is away, Prakash cheats them by showing aggression and takes the contract. Arnav introduces Khushi to Geet who said, "Wow, perfect couple."
Arnav: Thankyou little sister.
Geet: Khushi, take care of my brother.
Arnav drops Khushi to her place. He is under the impression that he got the contract. He goes to Mathew and asks about the contract.
Mathew: The delegate liked our proposal but Prakash has kidnapped that person's sister and snatched it from us.
Arnav: Don't worry. I know how to get it.
Geet goes to Maan and orders a piece of cake. She said, "I want a plain simple cake. I don't want the rainbow stuff."
Maan: It will be done.
While his men are getting ready, Geet purchases the rainbow cake and goes. Arnav and his men are planning to spoil Prakash and Savio's business.
The next day, Geet goes to Maan's shop and said, "You man gave me the rainbow cake but I did not want that."
Maan: Your piece is ready, you can take it.
Geet takes it and goes. She joins Arnav and his men. Maan, Savio & Prakash close the shop by evening & leaves. Arnav & his men put the rats in the box having the cake that Geet had ordered. some of them carry the box having the rats while some of them change the nameplate to RAT HOUSE. Arnav, Geet & his friends break the bottles in the name of the game that is placed outside the shop. Later, they checked any window that is open so they can insert a rat inside. They find one of the glass windows and break them, thereby inserting the rats successfully.

Everyone waits till the rats do its work. The rats then bite the cardboard and create a havoc in the entire shop. Arnav & his men rejoice that the plan has succeeded.



Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Nice update dear
Thabka for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
nice update...👍🏼..but I din't like the last part at all...😒...what is Maan's fault in all these......Arnav should have taken revenge from Prakash...😡...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the update👏
Thank you for the pm😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Awesome update dear
Like it
Arnav put the rat so they spoil every thing
Like how arnav convinced Khushi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW!! wonderful update...

loved it dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
nice to see khushi saving arnav from getting blacklisted.still she cant admit her luv 4 him.arnav using meera n making khushi jealous was interesting.Arnav moving hair from her face..kissing her...khushi kissing him back n finally both admitting luv was so romantic.shocking that its her uncle who forced her to date savio bcz of his wealth.poor khushi.hope arnav proves himself n get approval from her uncle 2 marry khushi.like maan good that arnav too started bakery.though short i enjoyed maaneet scene.but plz show more of maaneet scenes.prakash cheated n got arnav's contract.but sad that 4 that they r taking revenge on maan.shocking that geet too supported arnav.i hope maan's business doesnt get destroyed due to rats

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