Suhaani-Sayyam SS: Maa Updated Part 2

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Hey guys hope you people are doing well. This a SS on Suhani and Sayyam's bond. This is just the first part so if you guys like it, i can continue it. Do let me know in the comment section if i should continue😳. TIA


MAA



'Bohut bari galti hogeyi mujhse tere paida hotei hi maar dena chahiye tha tujhe''
Suhani's words pierced Sayyam's heart. He was numb seeing so much hatred in his mother's eyes for him. Yuvaan and Baby were smiling standing in the corner. Finally there plan of trapping Sayyam got successful, now everyone in the house including Suhani thought Sayyam was the one who wanted to harm dadi.
'Janti hoon Sambhav ka bete ho tum phir bhi kahi na kahi mujhe lagta tha ek acha insaan ho tum likin galat thi main''
'Mujh par bishwas kijiye aap please'' Sayyam did not care about anyone else but this person. He couldn't bear her hatred.
He stepped forward and held her hand. Suhani trembled and took her hand away
'maat chuyo mujhe Sayyam tumhara sparsh mujhe Sambhav ki harkato ki yaad dilate hai''
These words shocked everyone in the house. Sayyam stood still, everything inside him shattered into pieces. Today he actually became orphan. He lowered his head and went to his room.
'Suhani'' bhavna advanced towards her.
But Suhani stopped her 'Mujhe abhi kuch nahi Sunna baas dadi ko dhundna hai hum mein''
Someone had kidnapped dadi and the whole birla family thought it was Sayyam but even after so much confrontation he did not accept it.
Krishna slowly entered the room and found Sayyam sitting steal on the bad. She so wanted to hug him and console him but a part of her resisted her.
'Tumhe bhi lagta hain maine dadi ko kidnap kiya hai?'' asked Sayyam without even looking at her
Krishna's eyes got filled with tears but she did not say anything and went away from there. He sat there all alone.

Suhani's phone rang in the middle of night.
The voice made her shiver. However, in order to save her dadi she stepped out of the house in the middle of night. She was confident that no one noticed her as everyone including yuvraaj was fast asleep but little did she know that the son she loathed followed her all the way to the spot.

It was an under construction building surrounded with piles of rocks and cement. As per the kidnapper's instruction Suhani went to the top. Sayyam followed her silently.

'Lo ageyi main, akili...kaha ho samne ao'' screamed Suhani
From the darkness arrived a tall figure. Laughing like a monster Sambhav came infront of her. Sayyam's blood boiled. He couldn't even stand the sight of him and here he was torturing his mother again. He wanted to go to him and kill him but the thought of dadi stopped him.
"Arre re Suhani kitni lachar lag rahi ho tum...dadi ko dekh na hai?'' mocked Sambhav. 'Likin uske liye tumhe kuch karna pare ga''
Suhani looked at him.
'Chinta maat karo bohut asaan hai vohi jo saalo pehle humne kiya tha'' He grabbed her by the hair. Suhani felt disgusted by his words. 'Chalo jaldi karo Suhani pata hai na tumhe mujhe intezzar pasand nahi hai'' and he threw her on the ground. But before Sambhav could do something Sayyam jumped on him like a wild dog. He started to beat Sambhav madly not once did he think of anything else. He just kept on beating him until he started to bleed. Sayyam looked at Suhani 'Ap jai ye Dadi ko dhundiye''
Suhani was frozen on her spot
'Dadi ko dhundiye'' Sayyam screamed again. This time she got back to her senses and went to look for her.He kept on beating him throwing Sambhav from one place to another. Meanwhile Suhani called Yuvraaj.
'Beta kya kaar raha tu ruk ja'' Sambhav yelled and pinned him against the wall.
'Aaj mar dalunga main tujhe''
'nahi beta baap hu main tera''
Sayyam kicked him on the chest and he fell on the ground 'Baap nahi hain tu haivaan hai'' and he started punching him more. Suhani found dadi and untied her. Suhani saw how sayyam was beating him vigorously. She yelled at him but Sayyam did not listen. Sambhav pushed him hard making sayyam hurt his head.
'Yeh kya kiya tumne Suhani? Mere bete ko mere khilaaf bharka diya?Nafraat karta hain vo mujhse aaj''
Sayyam was lying on the ground holding his head
'Tum isi nafrat ke kabil ho sambhav''
Sambhav got more furious hearing this and what agitated him more was when Yuvraj came there.
'Tumhe mana kiya tha maine kisi ko lane kiliye Suhani tum tou puri baraati le ayi'' He was breathing heavily and continuously shaking his head. 'Ab iski saaza milegi...milegi iski saazzaa'' Saying this he took out a gun and pointed towards yuvraj.
'Nahi sambhav nahi'' screamed Suhani but before she could do anything the gun was fired. She closed her eyes in fear. She slowly opened her eyes and saw drops of blood on Sambhav face.He dropped the gun and screamed 'Sayyyaaam''
Suhani abruptly looked and saw her boy was covered in blood. Sayyam came in front of Yuvraj.
'Apko apki saaza milgeyi'' smiled Sayyam and fell on the ground. Yuvraj held him. The police came to take Sambhav away.
Suhaani kneeled down beside him. It was getting hard for him to breathe. 'Suhaani chaalo hum mein isse hopita lekei jaana parega'' Suhaani kept looking at him. Sayyam moved his hand towards Suhani and was about to touch her but he remembered something
'maat chuyo mujhe Sayyam tumhara sparsh mujhe Sambhav ki harkato ki yaad dilate hai''
He stopped and his hand dropped on the floor like a broken chandelier. His eyes closed.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this was like...more than wow...thnku 4 this...poor saiyyam...pls...can u update the next part 2day or 2morrow?pls...cant wait 2 c suhanis guiltiness...pls...dont make us wait more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW. This is so good, Tia!
Thank you for such a master piece. 👏
It was so emotional. I could feel Saiyyam's pain. You described it so well.
Please continue! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramisaaAli

Hey guys hope you people are doing well. This a SS on Suhani and Sayyam's bond. This is just the first part so if you guys like it, i can continue it. Do let me know in the comment section if i should continue😳. TIA


MAA



'Bohut bari galti hogeyi mujhse tere paida hotei hi maar dena chahiye tha tujhe''
Suhani's words pierced Sayyam's heart. He was numb seeing so much hatred in his mother's eyes for him. Yuvaan and Baby were smiling standing in the corner. Finally there plan of trapping Sayyam got successful, now everyone in the house including Suhani thought Sayyam was the one who wanted to harm dadi.
'Janti hoon Sambhav ka bete ho tum phir bhi kahi na kahi mujhe lagta tha ek acha insaan ho tum likin galat thi main''
'Mujh par bishwas kijiye aap please'' Sayyam did not care about anyone else but this person. He couldn't bear her hatred.
He stepped forward and held her hand. Suhani trembled and took her hand away
'maat chuyo mujhe Sayyam tumhara sparsh mujhe Sambhav ki harkato ki yaad dilate hai''
These words shocked everyone in the house. Sayyam stood still, everything inside him shattered into pieces. Today he actually became orphan. He lowered his head and went to his room.
'Suhani'' bhavna advanced towards her.
But Suhani stopped her 'Mujhe abhi kuch nahi Sunna baas dadi ko dhundna hai hum mein''
Someone had kidnapped dadi and the whole birla family thought it was Sayyam but even after so much confrontation he did not accept it.
Krishna slowly entered the room and found Sayyam sitting steal on the bad. She so wanted to hug him and console him but a part of her resisted her.
'Tumhe bhi lagta hain maine dadi ko kidnap kiya hai?'' asked Sayyam without even looking at her
Krishna's eyes got filled with tears but she did not say anything and went away from there. He sat there all alone.

Suhani's phone rang in the middle of night.
The voice made her shiver. However, in order to save her dadi she stepped out of the house in the middle of night. She was confident that no one noticed her as everyone including yuvraaj was fast asleep but little did she know that the son she loathed followed her all the way to the spot.

It was an under construction building surrounded with piles of rocks and cement. As per the kidnapper's instruction Suhani went to the top. Sayyam followed her silently.

'Lo ageyi main, akili...kaha ho samne ao'' screamed Suhani
From the darkness arrived a tall figure. Laughing like a monster Sambhav came infront of her. Sayyam's blood boiled. He couldn't even stand the sight of him and here he was torturing his mother again. He wanted to go to him and kill him but the thought of dadi stopped him.
"Arre re Suhani kitni lachar lag rahi ho tum...dadi ko dekh na hai?'' mocked Sambhav. 'Likin uske liye tumhe kuch karna pare ga''
Suhani looked at him.
'Chinta maat karo bohut asaan hai vohi jo saalo pehle humne kiya tha'' He grabbed her by the hair. Suhani felt disgusted by his words. 'Chalo jaldi karo Suhani pata hai na tumhe mujhe intezzar pasand nahi hai'' and he threw her on the ground. But before Sambhav could do something Sayyam jumped on him like a wild dog. He started to beat Sambhav madly not once did he think of anything else. He just kept on beating him until he started to bleed. Sayyam looked at Suhani 'Ap jai ye Dadi ko dhundiye''
Suhani was frozen on her spot
'Dadi ko dhundiye'' Sayyam screamed again. This time she got back to her senses and went to look for her.He kept on beating him throwing Sambhav from one place to another. Meanwhile Suhani called Yuvraaj.
'Beta kya kaar raha tu ruk ja'' Sambhav yelled and pinned him against the wall.
'Aaj mar dalunga main tujhe''
'nahi beta baap hu main tera''
Sayyam kicked him on the chest and he fell on the ground 'Baap nahi hain tu haivaan hai'' and he started punching him more. Suhani found dadi and untied her. Suhani saw how sayyam was beating him vigorously. She yelled at him but Sayyam did not listen. Sambhav pushed him hard making sayyam hurt his head.
'Yeh kya kiya tumne Suhani? Mere bete ko mere khilaaf bharka diya?Nafraat karta hain vo mujhse aaj''
Sayyam was lying on the ground holding his head
'Tum isi nafrat ke kabil ho sambhav''
Sambhav got more furious hearing this and what agitated him more was when Yuvraj came there.
'Tumhe mana kiya tha maine kisi ko lane kiliye Suhani tum tou puri baraati le ayi'' He was breathing heavily and continuously shaking his head. 'Ab iski saaza milegi...milegi iski saazzaa'' Saying this he took out a gun and pointed towards yuvraj.
'Nahi sambhav nahi'' screamed Suhani but before she could do anything the gun was fired. She closed her eyes in fear. She slowly opened her eyes and saw drops of blood on Sambhav face.He dropped the gun and screamed 'Sayyyaaam''
Suhani abruptly looked and saw her boy was covered in blood. Sayyam came in front of Yuvraj.
'Apko apki saaza milgeyi'' smiled Sayyam and fell on the ground. Yuvraj held him. The police came to take Sambhav away.
Suhaani kneeled down beside him. It was getting hard for him to breathe. 'Suhaani chaalo hum mein isse hopita lekei jaana parega'' Suhaani kept looking at him. Sayyam moved his hand towards Suhani and was about to touch her but he remembered something
'maat chuyo mujhe Sayyam tumhara sparsh mujhe Sambhav ki harkato ki yaad dilate hai''
He stopped and his hand dropped on the floor like a broken chandelier. His eyes closed.



This was absolutely mindblowing, i loved it. It was so emotional and deep and beautiful. You described everything so well. Especially Sayyam's pain. Please please please continue and update soon. I absolutely loved it x
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was superb..Plzz update it as soon as possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks a lot guys didn't think you people will like it this much :P but thanks alot <3 i will update it asap :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramisaaAli

Thanks a lot guys didn't think you people will like it this much :P but thanks alot <3 i will update it asap :)

yes...pls...cant wait 4 it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2




'Sayyam'' he remained steel. Suhani touched his face but there was no movement at all.
'Suhani ambulance ageyi hai chalo hum mein usei lejana hoga jaldi se''
The ward boys made him lay down on the stretcher and took him inside the ambulance. Suhani sat beside him in the ambulance. Yuvraj sat beside her. They made him wear the nebulizer. His chest was covered with blood as the bullet had hit his heart. Suhani was seeing all this, how her son was lying lifeless in front of her, the son who always craved for her love but got her hatred instead. Sayyam moved a bit and slowly opened his eyes. Suhani held his hand with both her hands, tightly. Tears rolled down her cheeks. Sayyam stared at her, his eyes spoke thousand words. He again closed it.
He was taken inside the operation theatre and they waited outside. Soon the entire Birla family came along with Krishna. Bhavna enquired about Dadi and yuvraaj ensured her that she was safe and fine.
'Sayyam'' Krishna's voice trembled.
Just then the doctor came out. 'Goli ekdaam dil ke paas laagi hain aur bohut zyada blood loss hogeya hain hum try kar raahe hain but ap log koi umeed maat rakhiye ga''
His words pierced Suhani's heart. Everything around her blurred out. Only his memories surrounded her.
The little baby she abandoned
The one whom she couldn't love as much as she loved yuvaani-yuvaan
The boy who wanted to touch her but she did not let him
Whom she never caressed or pampered only maintained a distance

Suhaani kneeled down crying like a little baby. Yuvraaj ran to her and held her.
'Mera bacha yuvraaj mera beta... bohut buri maa hoon main kuch nahi diya maine uss bache ko... Mere agei pichei ghumta raha pyaar kiliye likin main vo pyaar usse de hi nahi payi''
'Suhaani shant ho jao'' but she just couldn't stop crying.
Suhaani sat still on the chair for hours neither did she move nor did she eat anything.
The doctor came out and she ran to him
'he is still abit critical. He has a weak immune system jis ke vajei se uske ghao nahi bhar raahe hain''
She peeped through the door and found him lying on the bed.
'Kya main andaar ja sakti hoon please'' and he nodded
Suhani sat beside him...her son was all surrounded with wires and bandages. She took his hand placed her check on it. With the other hand she caressed his hair. The whole room was silent the only sound was the beeping of the machines.
'Pata nahi kitne saalo se tu ek maa ke pyaar ki liye taras ta raha aur aj jab teri maa tujhe mil geyi tou woh pyaar main tujhe nahi de pai'' she sighed
'Mujhe aur saaza maat de Sayyam aj meye tere pyaar kiliye taras rahi hoon beta'' she kissed his hand.
Sayyam slowly opened his eyes. His mother sighed in relief. He was too weak to move but with his eyes he signaled her to come close to him. Suhani went closer to his mouth which was covered with the oxygen mask. Gathering all the remaining strength he had left in his body he called out 'MAA''. That one word had so much pain and meaning in it that it was more than enough to tell Suhani what he wanted from her. She completely broke down into tears and placed her forehead on his. Slightly she kissed his forehead.
'haa Maa hoon tumhara aur hamesha rahungi''
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanku thnku thnku so much 4 this...it was superb...n heart touching...aww...how i wish sumthing like this hapened in serial...thnku...4 updating fast...n pls...update next part as soon as possible...im waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww. This is so emotional. My eyes were filled with tears, honestly. Don't make it too sad pls haha! I'm waiting to read how Suhani takes care of Saiyyam and their bond growing stronger.
Is Krishna still his wife in this story??
Please update soon. Thank youu so much for this! ❤️

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