*Milengae Milengae* IB FF Part Four updated PG 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well written n emotional update
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Heart touching update
Poor Anika...Shivaay keliye usse khar chodna pada...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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lovely story Manasa
Waiting for next
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amazing yaar just brilliant so touching and cute eager to know what will happen next 😊
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Very well written !! M loving it 😳
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PART 4

Shivay Om and Isha return to Delhi

Shivaay asks Om and Isha to go home and he will come after a while

Om and Isha along with their new born baby sit in the car and drive off.
their conversation

Om is silent all the while and concentrates on driving.

Isha picks up a conversation

Isha : Om kya baat hai tum intna khamosh kyun ho???

Om stops the car by the side of road and looks at Isha and then at his little prince.

Droplets of tears gush down as Om says sorry.

Isha is confused and tensed and ask om "om kya hua, is everything ok???"

Om : Isha mujhe maaf kardo

Om holds her soft hands and making a puppy face say sorry once again

Isha : Par kyun kya hua??

Om : Just say that u forgive me

Isha : Ok batao om mujhe dar lag raha hai.

Om : jab tumhae meri sab se jyada jarurat thi tab mein tumhare paas nahi tha. I am feeling

so bad. Pata nahi tumne kaise manage kiya hoga and agar tujhe ho gaya hota, mein bhi

kitna paagal tha tumari haal puchne ke liyae ek phone toh kar sakta tha, mein life mein

kabhi apne aap ko iss galti ke liyae maaf nahi kar sakta.

Isha gently wipes his tears and ask him to hold the baby for a while. Om is touched as he take his prince into his embrace.

Isha : Om tumhari koi galti hai hi nahi aur pata hai yeh feel "jab koi apne bachon ko pehli

baar apne god mein lete hai, yeh priceless hai, anmol hai,"Aur pata hai yeh tumhara

hi beta hai bahut pareshaan kiya mujhe bahar aane ke liyae (laughs). Par jaise aaj tak

sirf tum mere zindagi mein important the waise aaj yeh bhi uss list mein add ho gaya.

Om smiles seeing his little prince in his hand and plants a gentle kiss on his forehead.

Om : Kya kaha tumne mein tumhare liyae imp tha, kya matlab,, ab imp nahi hu kya

Isha : Om please nah mera woh matlab nahi tha, i mean nahi hai, what ever

Om laughs and takes her into embrace and Isha just places her head on his shoulder. It seems like the family is complete.

Isha : Om pata hai i have to thank Anika uss waqt jo ussne kiya shayad uski wajah se mein

yaha hu tumse baat kar rahi hu. Itefaak toh dekho mein tum logon ke paas Anika ke

baare mein batane aa rahi thi, aur bhagwaan ne mujhe usse hi mila diya.

Uss ek moment mein jab Anika took me on her lap i wanted to tell her that we all

missed her so much, Anika mujhse kehti rahi ki it will be ok, mein ne bahut koshish ki

ussae batane ki ki aaj bhi Shivaay Bhai uski loutne ki intezaar kar raha hai, pata nahi

kaise phir my eyes were blurred shayad i fell unconscious

I could hear her shout the hospital members

for help till the voices completely transormed into utter silence. Aur phir jab mein

uthi toh mein waha ki nurse se pucha ki woh kaha hai?

she said that she has left.

Om kaash mein ek baar Anika se baat kar paati. Tumhae kuch pata chala ki woh kaha rehti hai Mumbai mein, kya kar rahi hai kuch bhi,

Om : Nahi ussne apna koi detail nahi diya, hum ne hospital records bhi check kiya. Ab

atleast yeh toh pata chala ki woh kaha hai, I am sure Shivaay usse dhund ke wapis le

aayega. Iss ki credit toh mere bete ko hi jaata hai na.

Both of them smile seeing their baby. Om drives off to the Oberoi Mansion.

There Shivaay stops infront of a house in a busy locality where all middle class people live. He just go and knock the door.

It is Jaanvi who opens the door for him.

Shivaay first takes her blessings and ask her "badi maa kaise ho aap? Aur Daadi? Sab theek hai na"

Jaanvi : Shivaay tumhari rehte humae kuch ho sakta hai kya. Bahut dinon baad tumhae dekh

rahi hu, tum theek ho na, saalon baad mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki tumhare

aakhon ki chamak waapis aa gayi hai koi khus khabar.

Daadi : Jaanvi koun aaya hai ??

Jaanvi : Maa Shivaay hai.

Daadi : Billu aaya hai... Billu putar andar aavo na.

Both Janvi and Shivaay go in and close the door behind them.

Shivaay go and takes daadi's blessings too

Shivaay : Daadi, Badi maa ek bahut badi khush khabar hai, hamare ghar mein ek nayi mehmaan

aaya hai. Our Ishana has conceived a baby boy. Both of them are hale and healthy.

Both Jaanvi and Daadi are elated to hear this news. They hug each other

Shivaay asks them to come back to Oberoi mansion atleast for their younger family member. And both of them refuse to come home.

Daadi : Billu tujhe toh pata hai na ki hum tabhi ghar waapis aayengae jab Anika putar ghar

loutegi. Hamari ghar ki bahu ki bezzati toh hamari bezzati hai.

Shivaay : Anika ka pata chala hai woh Mumbai mein hai.

Daadi : Tu sach keh raha hai Billu meri Anika putar Mumbai mein hai, tu mila usse kaise hai

woh, waapis ghar aa gayi

Shivaay : Daadi relax sirf yeh pata chala woh Mumbai mein hai baaki mujhe usse dundhna hai.

Daadi: Jaanvi tune suna hai, Rab da lakh lakh shukar hai aaj kitni achi khabar sunne ko mil

rahe. Billu jaldi se Anika ko dhund ke le aana.

Shivaay : Daadi mein koshish karunga par mujhe nahi lagta woh mere saath aana chahegi, mein

ne uska vishwaas toda hai, sab mere galti hai. Shivaay breaks down into tears.

Daadi and Jaanvi try to comfort him they sit down before him and hug him telling him everything will be ok.

Daadi wipes his tears and asks Shivaay what happened. Shivaay explains what happened at Mumbai and about the letter and everything.

Shivaay calms down and come back to senses

Now after two years making some time he enquires that what made them take such a big decision to leave their own house.

Daadi keeps mum and Jaanvi speaks up

Jaanvi : Shivaay tujhe pata tha na ki uss din ke kuch din pehle hi tumhare bade papa guzar

gaye the, aur Anika ne hi Swethlana ko pakadne mein police ki madad ki, Anika ne

hamare liaye bahut kuch kiya ussi din tumhari daadi aur mein ne soch liya ke ab

se Anika ko iss parivar ke bahu hone ka pura adhikaar dengae jo kabhi usse mila hi

nahi.

Hum donon ne Pinky ko samjhaya tha aur lag raha tha ki uss waqt woh puri tarah

convince nahi hui. The very next day tum office ki kaam se London gaye.

Uss din jo hua nahi hona chahiyae tha. Anika dheer raat tak office mein hi kaam kar rahi thi

9 baje uss ne maa ko phone kiya aur bola ki woh raat ko apni ghar jaa rahi, kyun ki tere bina man nahi lagega, beech mein humae pata hi nahi ki kab Pinky office ke liyae nikali. Pniky theek ussi time pe waha pahuncha ki jab Anika Gaurav se has has ke baate kar rahi thi and thodi dher baad uske car mein bait kar nikal gayi. Ussne Pinky ko nahi dekha shaayad. Pinky bahut gusse mein thi jab woh ghar aayi, ussne hum se kuch nahi kaha. She has misunderstood the whole scenario.

Phir subah subah mein aur maa mandir gaye the jab wapis aaye tab Anika ghar pe nahi thi. Pinky ne bol diya ki uss manhoos ko baahar nikal diya mere bete ki zindagi se. Even we didnt get it ki Anika chali gayi kisi ko bina bataye.

Pinky se pucha mein ne Pinky kabhi maa ne tumhae aur mujhe accept kiya na iss ghar mein, aur tum Anika jaise ladki pe shak kar ke ghar se baahar kar diya how could u do this.

Daadi : Phir mein ne kaha yaa toh Anika ko ghar wapis lao maafi maang ke yaa phir hum donon

iss ghar chod ke chale jayengae

Jaanvi : Pinky ne kaha aap donon kyun jaayengae ghar chod ke mein hi chale jaati hu ussi waqt

ussne Shakti bhai ko le kar ghar choda.

Daadi : Mein yeh kabhi nahi chaaahti thi puttar hamarae ghar ki batwara ho ya hamare

parivaar toot jaaye, par hone ko koi rok nahi sakta.

Ussi din hum donon ne soch liyae ki jab tak Anika uss ghar mein waapis

nahi aayegi tab tak hum bhi uss ghar mein kadam nahi rakehngae.

Shivaay : Maa ne yeh sab kuch kiya aur aap donon kyun saza bhugat rahe hai aap ki koi galti

nahi hai na, maa ki taraf se mein aap se maafhi maangta hu pls ghar chaliyae mere

saath.

The trio share an emotional moment.

Delhi Airport

Two persons start fighting in the lobby. Boy throws his soft drink on the girl and girl throws icecream on the boy.

Both of them are arguing on the same issue.

Boy says " woh mujhe lene aayegi tumhae nahi." Girl says "oh pls woh mujhe lene aayegi aur dekhna tu."

This fight goes on till the airport staff intervene and sort out the matter. Now both of them sit down facing away.

Boy says " Rudra Singh Oberoi ko lene uski pyaari bhaabhi Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi Zarur

Aayegi.

Girl replys " Rudra Singh Oberoi Ki Bhabhi banne se pehele woh Soumya Tiwari ki behen hai aur

Meri behen mujhe lene aati hi hongi, u just wait and watch.

They actually wait for more than one hour and no one turn up to pick them. Both of the look at each other.

Soumya : Rudra aisa pehele kabhi nahi hua. I think koi badi baat hai, mein do saalon mein sirf

do baar di se baat ki aur tab woh tumhare ghar pe nahi thi.

Rudra : Mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai kuch gadbad hai Shivaay bhaiyya jab bhi mujhse baat

karte the na tab woh Anikaa bhabhi ki baat aate hi chale jaate the.

Soumya : Ho na ho kuch bahut hi badi baat hai, agar jiju aur di ki ladai hui toh hum un ki patch

up karwadengae kya bolte ho

Rudra : Daffar do saal ki lambi ladaai koun ladte hai, mein bhi kis se baat kar raha hu.

Soumya : Shut up Rudra kabhi toh serious ho jao. Aur har waqt mujhse ladna jaruri hai kya.

Rudra : Hamesha tu ladai start karti hai mein nahi.

Soumya : Hey bhagwaan koi aise boyfriend kisi ko deta hai kya jo har waqt ladai ke liyae tayar

rehta ho.

Rudra : Tujhe jaise ladki ko mujh jaise intelligent ladkae hi jhel sakte hai.

Soumya : Mujhe jaldi ghar pahuchna hai tum bhi jao.

Rudra : How rude mein baat kar raha hu na.

Soumya : Tum aa rahe ho ya nahi.

Both of them come out to hire a taxi, before leaving Soumya comes back and hugs Rudra

Rudra : kya hua r u ok

Soumya : Hum hamare baare mein ghar walon ko kab bata rahe

Rudra : waise hamari shaadi nahi hui jo batane ke liyae itna dar rahe ho, mein toh jaa kar bol

dunga that i love Soumya. Tu bhi bol dena. Ab jao.

Rudra and Soumya head towards their respective houses.

Precap:

Rudra asks Ishaa that where is Anika Bhabhi

Rudra meets Soumya and both are heart broken to learn the truth.

Shivaay meets Taayi and babies once again at Mumbai

Firstly

Sorry guys

It has been ages since i have not updated this ff😆

I promise to update it atleast once or twice a week😉

I know this part might be little boring😆😆😆

Will come up with a obero moment and shivika's hide and seek part soon😉

Pls do put ur valuable comments

manas😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update loved it thank you for pm and do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
thank u fr d pm and update...it ws a grt one...bt dear pls update soon..😊
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#39
Loved it..
Update soon😊
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Awesome update 👏
I was eagerly waiting for your update 😭.
Thanks for pm.

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