MG SS Ye Rishtha Kya Kehalatha hai? UPT Epilogue Sep 15 pg 52 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome story

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Part - 14

Get comes out of her unconscious state and is still reeling in that nightmare...

She just remembers herself struggling in the pool and that Maan didn't even have any mercy on her...he dived in and swam towards her fiercly...

Geet decided not to get caught in his hands and she deliberately holded her breath, closed her eyes and got ready to embrace death...

After that she fainted and assumed it to be her end...but babaji doesn't wish that way..he wants her to keep fighting...so Geet is ready to face that MSK, with vigour this time...

But she is confused as to what actually happened to her then...

She still feels tired and running a high temperature ...but that's not a problem...she tries to get off the bed and the moment she comes out of the duvet she gets back ashamed of being half-naked, wearing a men's kurta...she then hears the door open and she finds out that MSK is coming in...

She is gripped with fear and she starts imagining things as how she could have come to this place and what could have happened then...she is determined to save herself this time...

She closes her eyes and pretends to be asleep...as Maan enters and comes towards the bed Geet gets ready to attack him with the fork that she got from the side-table...

Maan comes and finds a part of her legs uncovered and he bends to adjust the duvet and cover her properly...Geet thinks that he is going to take off the duvet and and she couldn't even magine what else could he do ...

She sprangs off with the fork and starts to attack him...

Maan is caught unaware but he manages to catch hold of her hand holding the fork...she tries to hit him with the other hand before Maan could steady himself...he loses his balance and falls over her...Geet is terrified and she starts shouting for help...

Maan tries to shut her mouth with his hand freeing her hand and she strikes him with the fork...

Maan gets mad as the fork pierces his right hand...Maan snatches the fork with the left hand and throws it off...

Geet: bachao, koi toh bachao

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Geet raises her voice hearing that...

Maan: just shut your mouth you fool or I'll

Maan gets really angry and stares Geet...he is still in a convenient position only...

Geet is scared and she stops screaming instantly as Maan tries to get off her struggling with his hand hurting him...

Geet starts screaming again once she sees the blood coming off his wound...

Maan: chup

Maan roars and Geet stops...

Maan: pagal ho tum

Geet: pagal hoon , kamzor nahi

She tries to reach the fork again...

Maan: what do you think of yourself? Some beauty queen and all men are after you?

Geet feels insulted...: I'm a queen, you know Jansi ki Rani, I'm her descendent

Maan: I know you are a queen, queen of fools

Geet: you can't egt away with this, I won't let you do it

Maan: I'm not a fool to repeat my mistakes, Maan catches hold of her and grags her off the bed

Geet: repeat your mistake?

Geet's heart stops hearing that, suddenly she becomes too weak...

Maan: now get out of my house, and never ever come back

Geet then looks around and finds out that it's the OH...

Geet: I'm not going any where, you are only going, wait

She runs and takes her mobile...no battery...

Maan: Geeet, this is my house and who are you to order me? Just get out of my sight

Geet resists and shouts...dadi maaa, you'll have to pay for your deeds

Maan: I have already paid a lot

Geet looks at his hand and is not satisfied...: this is not good, you deserve to be in jail, I'll call the police

Maan is really shocked now...: what? there is no limit to your madness, I knew it's not wise to help you

Geet: help? What kind of help?

Maan: you don't know that you wouldn't be alive if it was not for me, now I regret it, I should have left you die

Geet: I'm not dying, not before I see you dead

Maan: I don't care you are alive or not, you want to go with that Khanna, then go rot with him, just get off my sight, I don't know what happens to me when I see you, Geet, just go and don't ever come back

Geet now remembers where it all started...

Geet: what's your problem with Khanna?

Maan: my problem? It's all your problem, now just get lost

Geet then finds a shelf full of law books...

Geet: so you are a loser, that's why you are like this, always fuming and frustrated

Maan rushes to her in fury...: what did you say?

Geet: you are one of the lawyers who lost cases to Mr.khanna, haina?

Maan: I never lost a case, I hate losing

Geet: then you were not expecting me to go to him, but why?

Maan: why I don't know myself, I have gone mad after meeting you

Maan looks into her eyes and Geet tries to unlock the mystery beneath his fierce look,it's sheer anger and frustration that he had no control over his own feelings when it comes to her...

Geet: it's just something official

Geet utters those words as she understood him a little now and knew that it's not just about him alone...

Part15

Edited by ghsp2fan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Awesome update dear, loved it. . . . . . .
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great update! well written! Maaneet argue! update soon
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Awesome update. Maan is a lawyer. I hope he will help Geet and get justice for channi.
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Part - 15

Maan keeps staring her while she looks at him in his eyes seriously...

Maan's mobile rings...it's Dadi...

Dadi: Good morning Maan

Maan: morning Dadi

Dadi: hwz Geet?

Maan looks at her angrily...: she is as crazy as ever

Dadi: is she still asleep? Poor girl, must have been terrified

Maan: no Dadi, not at all, you need not woryy about her

Geet jumps off and snatches the mobile from his hands...

In the process she slips and Maan comes to her rescue as usual...

Geet manages to sit and talks with dadi...

Geet: dadi dadi

Geet looks tensed all of a sudden...she wants to tell her everything...

Dadi: Geet, are you alright?

Geet: no dadi, please help me

Dadi: what's the matter Geet? you need not panic, you are safe now, you are in KM dear

Geet: you don't know what happened last evening, you don't know anything about your potha, he's a dust danav

Dadi laughs...

Geet: I'm not joking Dadi, I'm serious, he tried to kill me yesterday

Dadi: what? Geet, you've mistaken

Maan snatches the mobile from her...

Maan: OK Dadi, now you know this girl is has gone mad, haina?

Dadi: Maan, she's little upset, that's all

Maan: OK dadi, you take care of her then< I'm leaving now

Dadi: teek hai bete

Maan: bye Dadi

Maan cuts the call...

Geet: why are you hiding the truth from Dadi? Let her know about you

Maan: she's my dadi and she knows me better

Geet: why did you save me?

Maan: I don't know, why is that you always mess up infront of me?

Geet: what?

Maan: why did you jump into the water ?

Maan looks into her eyes for an answer and he is upset that she doesn't trust him...

Geet: I was trying to save myself

So saying Geet looks at her-self and grabs the quilt for cover...

Maan: save yourself? I think I saved you

Geet: what did you do?

Maan: what do you mean what did I do?

Geet looks at her weird kurta and the pyjamas are missing...that is also men's kurta!

Maan: you fainted and Ur clothes were drenched

Geet imagines herself all wet and suddenly closes her eyes...

Geet: why didn't you try to wake me? You should have splashed water on my face

Maan: you fainted in the water Geet

Geet: what were you trying to do?

Geet looks at Maan puzzled...

Maan: what?

Geet: I mean, you don't seem to be that bad like I thought

Maan: what were you thinking about me?

It's more like why didn't you trust me Geet, as if he never exected her to doubt him...

Maan gets angry all of a sudden...

Geet: why did you misbehave?

Maan: what? I misbehaved?

Geet: you tried to kidnap me

Maan: kidnap you? you have lost it Geet

Geet: then why did you take me there?

Maan: b'coz that's what you wished

Geet: what?

Maan: you wanted to meet that Khanna at his place, haina?

Geet: so what?

Maan: I took you to his place

Geet: that was Mr.Khanna's house?

Geet is shocked...

Maan: no it's his guest house, where he holds these weekly entertaining parties, you get that?

Maan looks at her innocent eyes suddenly growing red...

Geet couldn't believe it...she wanted to get help from him??

Maan: what happened? You were so eager to go there?

Geet: all men are alike, they use women to show their manhood either by killing their body or their soul

Geet goes back to Hoshiarpur days...Maan is surprised to see the rage in her eyes...

He has never seen that in any woman, he has only seen women conning men...

Maan tries to get back to present...Geeet

Geet comes out of her thoughts...Maan keeps looking at her as all his attempts to understand Geet have failed miserably...

Maan: what were you doing with that Khanna first of all?

Geet: woh I just wanted to meet him for a case

Maan: what case? You should have gone to Adi

Geet: but it's not about KC

Maan: what?

Geet doesn't want to tell him anything as she doesn't know much about him...

Geet: nothing , I'll go meet dadi

But Maan knows that there is something troubling her...he doesn't bother much, why should he? Haina? now coming to the matter that bothers him...

Maan: don't walk out in my kurta, get your own dress

Geet: but how'll I go out like this?

Geet stands on her feet showing her bare legs to him...

Maan turns his look away...: OK I'll get it for you

Get thinks...Am I that bad? She looks into the mirror and thinks she s just fine...it's only that Maan doesn't have the eye to appreciate her, haina?

But why does she want him to appreciate her?

Geet is all confused...

Maan goes and gets her dress that has dried now...

Maan comes in and throws it to her...Geet who was still sitting there in the couch thinking about her feelings gets on her feet and grabs it...

Maan rushes back not wanting to embarrass her but she stops him...

Geet: woh ek baat poochna hai

Maan turns and looks just into her eyes...

Geet: what's the problem with you?

Maan looks puzzled...now what's cooking up?

Geet: am I that bad?

Maan: what?

Geet: it's your kurta, yes, I know, it's only making me look shabby, haina?

Maan is shocked...

Maan steps forward now looking at her intensely...

Geet tries to step back but hits the couch...

Maan: you want to know what my problem is?

Geet nods her head and seeing him inching forward she backs off and shakes her head no...

Maan: you are my problem

Maan keeps staring her intently...

Geet freezes...

Maan unintentionally tries to unbutton her kurta...

Geet clutches it with her hands to stop him...

Maan: don't you dare blame my Kurta again

Geet doesn't know what to expect from him...he is unpredictable and that makes him more sexy, haina

Maan is lost in her beauty while Geet is also sailing in the same boat...

Geet: I have to change

She whispers...

Maan: you know what your problem is?

Maan sternly looks at her...Geet is like what now?

Maan: you are crazy and it turns me crazy too

Geet: what?

Maan: don't ask such silly questions to anyone else

Maan leaves knowing well that it's not safe to stay with this pagal ladki for such a long time...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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geet complains about maan to dadi
n maan chides on geet
he tries to make her understand
n finally geets bulb is glowing
but maan is sad as she didnt trust him
n he que her about the reason to meet mr.khanna
the anger on her eyes told him something
but she didnt say about it
nice part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fab update. well written! Maan upset as she doesn't trust him! update soon

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Part - 16

Geet goes and meets Dadi...

Dadi is happy to see her...

Dadi: good morning Geet

Geet: morning Dadi

Dadi: hope you had a good nights sleep

Geet feels little awkward and gets angry with Maan to have taken her to OH instead of KM...

He could have seeked Dadi's help...dropped her home...

But with the condition she was Maan better didn't...

Geet: oh haan

Dadi: what's the matter beta?

Geet: woh kuch nahi Dadi

Dadi: you won't even share with your Dadi?

Geet: nothing like that Dadi

Dadi: from the first time I met you I knew you are different and something is always bothering you

Geet: but after meetin you and chatting with you I learnt a lot Dadi

Dadi: then why didn't you come to me beta? I may be confined to the walls of this place but believe me even now my voice has a wide reach, don't underestimate the power of this old woman

Geet: I know Dadi, but I didn't want to trouble you

Dadi: I am always looking forward to help you, I consider you my family, don't you?

Geet doesn't know what to say...she just goes and hugs Dadi...

Geet: thanks Dadi, I always felt at home with you

Dadi: now what's the matter?

Geet then narrates the whole incident to Dadi...

Dadi understands her plight and wants to help her...she is proud of Geet for her guts to stand up against injustice...

Dadi consoles Geet as she battles hard to control her emotions...she can never forget Channi...how could her own parents forget her like this?

Dadi promises to help Geet...she says even Maan could help them in this...

But she knows Maan wouldn't want to take up such a case...still they have to give it a shot, maybe he'll do it for Geet...

Dadi feels that it would be better if Geet personally seeks his aid rather than Dadi playing a messenger...

Dadi: why don't you meet Maan? He should help you, you know he has this soft corner for you and that's why last night too he saved you from that accident, you better be careful next time beta

Maan made it look like an accident to dadi and Geet is also happy to stand by his version of the story...she doesn't want to make a fool of herself telling the truth about her misunderstanding Maan...she was always skeptical about the men in Delhi after Nirbaya and other cases and the way Maan roughed up with her that time and she couldn't think otherwise...there always has been this sense of possession about her and he over reacted at that time which mislead poor Geet...

Geet: but dadi

Geet doesn't feel confident to seek his help...

Dadi: he'll be in his office now

Geet: ok dadi, I'll go and see him

Maan's office is in the OH itself and when Geet reaches there he could see only men...

Maybe Maan only appears in criminal cases...maybe he is the right one to handle her case...

Geet meets Adi there instead...

Geet: Adi sir?

Adi: Geet, welcome to our office

Geet: is this your office?

Maybe Maan is training under Adi...

Adi: Haan Geet, what are you doing here? Did Dev sir sent some files?

Geet: no sir, I came to see your junior, but now I think you can help me

Adi: Manisha? Where did you meet him?

Manisha enters...hai baby

Geet is confused...: who is he?

Manisha: I'm Manisha, but how did you come here? You are not supposed to come here

Geet: what?

Adi laughs...ha ha ha ha ha ha

Adi: relax Manisha, meet Geet,she is Dev sir's secretary

Manisha: oh you came here by mistake, come I'll take you to Dev sir

Geet: but I came to meet Mr.MSK

Both are terrified on hearing his name and a girl calling him by name...

Manisha stops her...shhh shhh shhh, aaise nahi

Manisha looks back and is relieved seeing that Maan is not at office...

Adi is laughing...ha ha ha ha ha

Adi: Manisha, Maan sir has gone out

Manisha: thank god Geet, you saved yourself

Adi: Geet, I'll come to KC if there is any issues

Geet: but it's nothing to do with KC

Adi: then why do you want to meet Maan sir

Geet: I have a case for him, by the way I don't think he has any other client except KC, poor Dev sir has no other choice

Adi: I think you are still Ms?

Manisha: then too we don't take up wife's cases, we serve only the husbands

Geet: what are you talking about?

Adi: we handle only divorce cases

Geet: what?

Manisha: we only get freedom for men, this is a save men club, you are at the wrong place baby

Adi: for some reasons Maan sir appears for men in divorce cases as he believes that they are the victims of many women protection laws

Geet: but that's strange, if I could I will put all the men behind bars

Geet meant it seriously and that scares the two...

Adi: relax Geet

Adi has a little experience having discussed a lot with Geet...

Manisha: you have mistaken baby, not all men are bad and specialy not all women are good

Adi: he's right Geet, we have seen it

Geet: but the majority of the men are bad

Adi: do you think we all are bad guys

Geet: no no Adi sir, but you are some of the few exceptions, men are either evil or they are cowards

Adi: but Geet why would you want to meet Maan sir

Geet: I think you are right, I have come to the wrong person

Just then Adi gets a call from dadi...

Adi: ji m'am, ji m'am

Geet is about to leave when Adi stops her...

Adi: Geet wait

Adi calls her back for Dadi wants them to take up her case to Maan...

Geet: thanks for your help Adi sir, but I don't think your Maan sir can help me

Adi: but Dadi ji insists we should help you

Geet: I'll go and meet dadi

Geet goes and meets Dadi again

Geet looks hopeless after knowing that Maan is not the one to help her anyways...

Dadi: what happened Geet? did you meet Maan?

Geet: no Dadi, but what's the use in meeting him?

Dadi: I know what you are thinking, but believe me beta only he can help you, Maan always stands witj the truth just like you

Geet: but Dadi, he is a divorce lawyer

Dadi laughs...: aaise kuch nahi beta, it's just that he gets a lot of satisfaction in getting divorce for men

Geet: what's so satisfying in that, may be he indirectly gets the blessing of the suffering women

Dadi: you got a point Geet

Geet is puzzled at this peculiar habit of Maan only appearing for such cases...

Geet: but Dadi I have a doubt

Dadi: what's it Geet?

Geet: maybe Mr.Maan had a failed marriage which ended up in a bad divorce, may be he is one of the victims

Now Geet understands his strange behaviors...

Dadi becomes little emotional...: you are right in a way Geet

Geet is upset that she made dadi sad...

Geet: I'm sorry dadi, I shouldn't have crossed my limits

Dadi: no problem Geet, I think it's time that you know more about the Khuranas

Geet is surprised...

Dadi: it's a long story Geet...

Dadi tells Geet about Vicky and why Maan finds solace in helping men who are struggling in their marriage...

Geet couldn't believe that women can also harm men ...it may not be physical but still that's not good, haina?

Now only Geet is getting to dicover more about life...

Geet now is convinced that she has to find some one else...but Dadi thinks Maan has to take up this case for that would only bring them closer...this is such a great chance that dadi wouldn't want to miss...


Part17

Edited by ghsp2fan - 8 years ago
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geet meets dadi
dadi asks whats troubling geet n maan can help her
geet went to maans office to meet him
n thinks he is jr to adi..haha
adi shows pandey as assistant
geet comes to know maan takes mostlt divorce cases that too for mens
she comes back upset to dadi
n dadi tells about the past
how womens too r behind mens suffering
nice part
will dadis plan work
will maan work on this case

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