FF meghnal & nairan: LOVE chapter 4 pg 3 updated 22/02/2017

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Hey guys my name is Sonali but everyone calls me Sonu so u can call me whatever u want i live in london.

Let me say I didn't even watch this show when it had started. Sometime last month I was on instagram looking at those popular videos. And then all Of a sudden I see meghna and kunal video the one where kunal comes to meghna house to meet her secretly and that min video just blew my mind making me watch it again and see what other videos had been posted on that account. After watching few meghnal scene the first thing I did was watch episodes of Swabhimaan every day I started watching few episodes and I fell in love with the show and the characters. And I really have a bad Habit once I start watching a show I start writing ff. there is one ff that I have read along with one shots and two shots and let me say u writer's r doing an amazing job.

Now coming to the next part I thought of an ff I couldn't stop myself. In my ff everyone is positive no negative family members except outsider. I hope u like it so here is the character sketch with something changes. Note in my ff meghna and naina father is not dead but missing and they have a dadi


Chauhan family

Nk: nand Kishore Chauhan known as nk. one of the famous and successful businessman. He loves his family to the core and can do anything for them and wouldn't tolerate it if anyone tries to harm them. A very caring Husband, father and son. He and his father have healthy arguments

Nirmila: a beautiful women. She is a housewife who take care of everything so well. She has 3 beautiful children kunal Karan and Khyati. Loves her family a lot

Sandhya: sandhya is the one who helps nk at office and would handle any situations. Be it office related or personal matters. She has becomes so close to nirmala that they both have become like sister and the kids call her as masi maa. Nk is like her brother and she address sujaan singh as bau ji

Sujaan Singh Chauhan: the head of the family. the best dadu to his grandchildren. Best father and father in law. he is proud of nk achievements and lets him decides all the office matter. However all the cheques and deals r only confirmed once he has signed. Right now enjoying time at home and wants his grandchildren to get married.

Kunal: one of the dashing personality. Any girl could die to be with him. But he only loves one girl. Just finished college in delhi and now he going back to Jaipur. Really excited to meet his family after a long time. he never really went back home because he knows how emotional his mum and dadu will get so he always spoke to everyone on video chatting. After 2 years he will see them face to face

Karan: he is studying in college has one year left . A very cool person. Loves his family a lot but is more close to kunal. He loves teasing people and playing pranks whenever given a chance. Loves music a lot. He studies in Mumbai College... studying music in college

Khyati: a bubbly girl. Sometimes very childish but she is everyone fav especially her brothers she has recently started college

Solanki family

Sharda: a independent women who did everything that her kids could do to get good education... luckily she found a job in teaching and along with teaching in school and tuitions she actually became famous in that field and now many rich and normal people send their kids to her place for tuition. Due to her hard work she has enough that she doesn't have to bend in front of others to help her. She is a married women but doesn't know is she still is married or not... Out of the blue her husband left her and her kids with a note that said he is not good enough and is leaving them so they can have a better future. Been a wife she still wears sindhoor and mangalsutra. Loves her two daughters a lot. She lives with her mother in law who owns many hotels and started pickle business along with sharda... sharda sometimes helps her in the hotel business to take decision

Meghna: just finished studying from delhi college... She cant wait to see her family... studies in the same college as kunal... she has saved his number as mr wrong no... her two besti friends sakshi and sneha studied with her in the same college and luckily all are from Jaipur. She has topped in her field. A very sweet girl but wont tolerate if anyone speaks against her mama and her family.

Naina: a sweet bubbly girl. Studying at the same college as karan. She loves her family... he loves traveling a lot and loves reading romantic books.

savitri devi Solanki (even her surname is Solanki so sharda never had to change her surname): she and her husband had worked hard when they started their first hotel business... but after he passed away it was only her and her son and for her son she worked day and night and now there are many hotels owned by her... she treats sharda as her daughter and loves her granddaughters a lot... she was really angry when she found out her son left Sharda and her daughter... when everyone blamed sharda for her husband leaving her it was savitri who stood by her and stopped sharda from leaving home. She had recently started a pickle business and sharda helps her with both of the business.

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charter sketch and chapter 1 on the same page

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4


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At Delhi college
It was a mixed feeling for some students. Today was the last day of their college. Some were busy collecting memories they had made in this college along with their friends. While others were planning their new journey. It was a mixed feeling for everyone.


Meghna. Was with her friends they went to all the teachers that put in their hard work to teach them.. to say thank u and give a gift as they deserved it.

Meghna: ma'am this is for u she said handing a gift to her that was wrapped and her other two friends also handed their gift

Ma'am : this is sweet of u girls but there was no need to do this

Sneha: come on ma'am all of u put your hard work to teach us and that's y we got such good marks

Ma'am : but even your hard work counts

Meghna: it does but that's all because of u teachers so u deserve this.

Saakshi : ok ma'am we will go and give other teachers some gift. And the girls headed out and went to the other teachers once they did that they were standing outside the main entrance of college as a photographer were taking group pics and they three wanted to take one together. While waiting in the line Meghna got a call and when she checked the caller Id to see who it was.. she shook her head slightly

Sneha: what happened who is it. Meghna showed her phone to sneha and Saakshi

Saakshi: Hayee its rock star I mean mr wrong no call . Answer it

Meghna: saakshi !!!

Sneha: don't glare at her answer it Meghna at least see what he says.

Meghna: no.. Meghna was about to cut the call but sneha tapped her fingers on the phone to answer it . Meghna glared at sneha and then placed the phone on her ear

Meghna: hello?

Mr wrong no: finally u answered my phone.

Meghna: what do u want

Mr wrong no : only one thing that I have been asking u since 2 years. a coffee date.

Meghna: and I said no... Meghna was about to cut her phone

Mr wrong no: Meghna I won't give up easily I will keep on trying until u don't say yes and that's a promise. Also one more thing... Meghna turned around facing the school building

Meghna: what ?

Mr wrong no: I will miss u. Meghna mouth widened because of the way he said that her eyes casually looking up at the top building to see mr wrong no standing there with a smile... Meghna looked at him for few secs and turned around. She cut the call however her friends didn't miss her blushing. Which they knew Meghna was never going to admit

Aryan: hey kunal... kunal was staring at Meghan recalling her expression when he said he will miss her. But he had to come out of that thought when his friend called

Kunal: what happened dude

Aryan: nothing everyone was looking for u.. the fresher's wants to hear at least one song before u leave

Kunal: come lets go. Kunal looked at Meghna once last time who was taking pics with her friends and left

Meanwhile outside Meghna and her friends took pics and now they were going to leave

Saakshi: so here we go she said getting a little emotional. Meghna and sneha smiled

Meghna. Oye y r u acting like we won't meet anymore don't forget we all live in Jaipur.

Sneha: exactly and we will make time to meet or speak on the phone

Saakshi: I know but I don't want to lose your both friendship. Whenever ppl leave school or college everyone always give this type of dialogue and after few month there is no contact at all

Meghna: but this won't happen in our friendship she said forwarding her hand and sneha and Saakshi placed it on top and gave each other a hug

Sneha: now come on let go our train time is in an hour. They all nodded and left. ( ok guys I don't know if there are direct trains from Delhi to Jaipur as I don't live in india so I just made up a direct train just in case if there isn't any)

Meanwhile in the canteen kunal was singing sanam re while playing the guitar and everyone were cheering once he finished he sang this song while thinking about meghna

He thanked everyone and moved to the side as he received a call from home. Seeing the name bought a smile on his face and he answered it

Kunal: hey masi maa
A lady at the chauhan house smiled hearing kunal call her masi maa. Yep none other than sandhya

Sandhya: hello to my handsome boy.

Kunal: nobody knows about our small surprise right

Sandhya: nope nobody knows in fact I called u to remind u about your flight

Kunal : I'm leaving in few mins.

Sandhya: alright then I will leave shortly as it will only take u about an hour to get here see u soon

Kunal: see u bye Massi maa. ... aryan came near kunal with a gloomy way

Kunal : what happened to u

Aryan: yaar my Saakshi left without saying bye...

Kunal: I saw her outside with topper and sneha

Aryan: they r not there. Kunal had a frown and ran outside followed by Aryan to see Meghna was no where

Kunal in his head: even my topper left. I wanted to tell her so many things

Kunal: didn't u go and see her in the morning he said still hoping to see a glimpse of Meghna

Aryan: I did but I didn't get much time to spend with her. And then I completely forgot to give her this gift I bought

Kunal: my Romeo call her and meet up with her and give it to her

Aryan: yeh that's a good idea. For now i will message her.

Kunal: ok now I need to leave my flight is due soon so buddy see u in Jaipur till then enjoy your trip with other

Aryan: bye see u. Kunal was about to leave when Aryan held his hand

Aryan: if u get a chance then do tell ur topper ur feelings. Kunal smiled at Aryan. Both hugged and Kunal left

Meghna and Kunal were lucky since their friends lived in Jaipur so it was easy for them to meet up.

Ok guys this is chapter 1 do leave ur views really nervous even though I have written many ff but everyone gets nervous right... also this is my first ff on this forum so sorry for any mistakes or spelling grammar
will be waiting to read all ur lovely comments
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OMG!! Yaaay I'm so happy you started your own FF! This is amazing so far! Love how confident and cool Kunal is and he has Aryan as his friend who's persuading him to tell Meghna about his feelings!!! So sweet! Continue soon, absolutely loving it! :)
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Nice start
Continue soon



thank u glad u liked it

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Originally posted by: Tamihna

OMG!! Yaaay I'm so happy you started your own FF! This is amazing so far! Love how confident and cool Kunal is and he has Aryan as his friend who's persuading him to tell Meghna about his feelings!!! So sweet! Continue soon, absolutely loving it! :)



haha baby ur ff encouraged me to start an ff too...thanks im glad u liked it... glad ur liking kunal so fa... yep aryan knows about meghna too... thank u for the lovely comment it really means a lot 😳😊
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thank u im glad u liked it
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Meghna and her friends were sitting in the train.

Sneha: yaar Meghna your idea of going to Jaipur by Train is the best. The feeling is just different

Meghna: I told u she said with a smile. She turned to look at saakshi who was busy typing away on her phone she signalled sneha.

Meghna: saakshi who u texting

Saakshi: aryan meghu. This morning he came to meet me but we didn't get much time to spend and we had to leave due to our train so I couldn't say bye

Sneha: and what did he say

Saakshi: that he plans to meet up in Jaipur after few days when he comes back from his trip

Meghna: love birds going to meet up soon

Saakshi: Meghna she said trying not to blush. Meghna phone rang to see her dadi calling her

Meghna: hey guys hold on a sec dadi is calling.. she answered the phone.

Meghna: hey dadi

Dadi: Meghna beta what is this I thought u will come by flight but u r coming by train

Meghna: Ohh so that's the problem she said with smile

Dadi: no that's not the problem. The problem is that your coming by train means I have to wait a little longer to see my granddaughter

Meghna: aww my beautiful dadi I know how to make your anger go away. I promise I will be there soon. Till then just wait a little

Dadi: ok I will be there to receive u she said sounding upset but smiled slightly. Both said bye and ended the call

Sneha: your dadi loves u a lot

Meghna: not only me she loves Naina and maaa too. She has done a lot for my mama and stood by her in her bad times. She is more like a mother than a mother in law

Kunal had boarded his flight already and it was about to take off he was thinking about how his family will be happy to see him as they didn't know he was coming since they thought he will probably go out with friends when he finishes college while thinking about college he remembered Meghna and texted her

Meghna who was looking outside lost in thoughts came back to reality when she has felt her phone make a sound she saw a message from her mr wrong no which read

"Have a safe journey" she shook her head and smiled slightly and closed the text message

Around 12pm Kunal walked out of the airport and he was happy there was no media for once... he looked around when he spotted a familiar face and smiled

Kunal: masi maaa he said walking over to Sandhya who was smiling... when he reached near her he took her blessing first and then gave her a tight hug

Kunal: oh god finally happy to meet u in person after two years

Sandhya: u always had a chance to come home but u didn't as u knew how bau ji and nirmala won't be able to let u go back again and we all respected your decision

Kunal: I know now come let's go and get gifts for everyone. He said placing his hands around her shoulder and walked to their car while the driver went to collect the bag. Kunal opened the door for Sandhya and once she went inside the car he went to the other side and sat inside while the driver started the car and drove off. They continued shopping for another hour or so and then headed for lunch.

At the train station savitri Devi got out of the car and went inside the station. The way she was walking anyone can tell even though she is old she still has that strength to fight.. she was keep on checking the time but when she heard the announcement that the train would be arriving at the platform any second bought a smile on her face. And finally the train came...Meghna and her friends got off the train.

Savitri Devi spotted her granddaughter. Meghna was looking around when she saw her dadi and ran to her...savitri Devi had her arms wide opened to hug her granddaughter

Meghna: I missed u my beautiful dadi

Savitri: same here Bacha finally your back. She said giving her a kiss on the forehead. Meghna stood next to savitri and introduced her friends

Meghna: dadi meet my two best friends from college this is Saakshi and this is sneha. Both touched savitri feet

Savetri: god bless u both she said with a warm smile and tapped their cheeks.

Sneha: Meghna we will leave now as everyone will be waiting for us at home.

Savetri: beta y don't u both come with us we will drop u

Saakshi: no dadi ji it's ok plus it will be long for u both to drop us

Savetri: no ifs or but u call me dadi right... then u can't say no to me now come on. The girls smiled and noded their head.

On the way savitri Devi was getting to know how sneha and saakshi r and she really liked them while Meghna was sitting sideways on the passenger seat listening to her friends speak to her dadi so freely who was also getting along with them.

First they dropped sneha off and then Saakshi and savitri Devi told both of them to come over whenever they want to. Meghna sat at the back with savitri and rested her head on savitri shoulder

Savitri: what r u thinking Meghna

Meghna : dadi I can't wait to see mama. But I wish she also came to the station with u

savitri: beta your Mama had to go to school today since the kids over there have exams coming up but at home she got your fav food prepared before she left

Meghna: dadi how about we go to mama school to surprise her

savitri: good idea driver take it to the school Sharad is teaching at.

After 40 mins or so the car reached outside Sharda School. Meghna and savitri got out of the car and were heading inside. Meghna was smiling looking at the small kids playing and remembered her and naira days.in this school

savitri: Meghna lets go...Meghna came out of her thoughts and went inside. Both reached outside sharda class. savitri received a call

savitri: beta u go in I will just attend this call and come in...Meghna nodded and went inside. Meghna slowly went and sat on the desk next to a kid when sharda was writing something on the black board.

Sharda: ok children can someone tell me what is 88 divided by 11. Sharda asked waiting for one of the kids to reply back

Meghna: 8... Kalindi was surprised and turned around to see Meghna sitting down she hid her smile

Sharda: go outside and sit on your knees. Meghna smiled and left. savitri who came back saw Meghna sitting on her knees

Savetri: Meghna y r u sitting like this come on get up.

Meghna: nope I will only get up when mama tells me to.

Savetri: but... before she can say anything the bell rang and all the kids came running out... Meghna smiled looking at them running away when she heard sharda call her

Sharda: gudiya u can get up now

Meghna turned to look at sharda and got up to give her a big hug.. both stayed like that for few minutes with their eyes closed...savitri looked at them with a smile. Once they broke the hug

Sharda: how r u

Meghna: all good. How was the surprise

Sharda: best.

savitri: sharda y was Meghna sitting on her knees.

Sharda smiled and told her what happened in the class

savitri: phew thank god I didn't come in the class otherwise your mum would have made me sit on my knees too she said jokingly to Meghna.

Sharda: maaa I would never do that.

savitri: by the way how many more classes do u have. Because if u have finished then we could go home together.

Sharda: I have one more class maa so u and gudiya go home I will see u then. Meghna hugged sharda and left with savitri

After 30 mins Meghna reached outside a big mansion and went inside.

Meghna: it feels good to be back home she said looking at the mansion

savitri: beta u freshen up till then I will go and ask the cook to get your lunch ready

Meghna: ok dadi. Meghna came down in 10 mins and went to the dining table to see her dadi getting the plates ready ...when she sat down savitri started taking out food in Meghna plate and started feeding her with her own hand which Meghna liked.

Meghna: dadi I will eat now u also eat.

Savetri: beta I will eat once u have finished eating.

Meghna: if that's the cast then here she said taking some pasta and started feeding savitri. once they finished eating Meghna went to her room to rest while savitri when into her office room that was in the mansion since she had to get some orders done for some client.

Meghna arranged her clothes in her wardrobe and thought of calling naina who was studying in Mumbai college but naina didn't answer so Meghna thought she will call her later on she was about to put her phone away when she saw that she had few messages... she started replying back to them which were from her friend she decided to check the last message to see it was sent from mr wrong no about 1 hour ago. She opened the message to see it say

I was going to get some gifts for the family and saw something which reminded me of u. I will give it to u when I see u ;) your KC

Meghna: I wonder what makes u think we will meet mr wrong no she said with a smile and put her phone away.

Meanwhile Kunal and Sandhya had finished their lunch and bought the remaining gifts that they had to get. They were about to reach to the mansion in 5 mins.

Once they reached there Sandhya and Kunal got out of the car and went inside slowly to see an old man who dressed up very well seated on the couch taking a sip of his tea and then signing some documents. Kunal hid so nobody sees him

Sandhya : bau ji... Sujaan Singh Chauhan looked up. He gave the file back to the worker who left

Sujaan Singh: Sandhya beta how was your work he said getting up with a smile.

Sandhya: it was good bau ji but do u want to know what work it was. Sujaan Singh looked thoughtful and then nodded with a smile

Sandhya: for that u have to close your eyes

Sujan : Y?

Sandhya: please bau ji trust me when u open your eyes u will love to see what is in front of u. Sujan Singh nodded and sandhya signalled kunal to come who was watching them.

Kunal came and stood in front of his dadu.

Sandhya: bau ji u can open your eyes now. Sujaan Singh opened his eyes and for a sec he was shocked to see Kunal. He couldn't believe that his grandson is here

Kunal: dadu he said shaking him slightly... sujaan Singh came back to reality and held Kunal hand. And then hugged him

Sujaan: kunal beta when did u come. We all thought u would be going out with your friends

Kunal: dadu... my handsome dadu. This was a surprise for u all ...In fact it was masi mama idea..

Sujaan: sandhya beta this is cheating u didn't even include your bau ji in your plan

Sandhya: sorry bau ji if I told u then we wouldn't have got this reaction from u if u knew about Kunal coming back.

Kunal: exactly and u looked so cute with your shocked expression he said pulling his dadu cheek. While sujaan Singh laughed and hugged Kunal again.

Kunal: dadu where is mom

Dadu: in the kitchen.

Kunal: Ok I will go and see her. He said walking forward while sandhya and sujaan Singh walked behind him. When Kunal entered the kitchen. He saw nirmala back facing towards him since she was cutting the vegetables. The cook who was coming back with salt saw Kunal but Kunal signalled him to be quite. he slowly started walking towards nirmala and stood behind her who was putting the chopped vegetable in the bowl.

Nirmala: don't make it to spicy as bau ji won't be able to eat it she said.. she was about to take a capsicum when she slightly jumped since Kunal make a sound in her ear.
She turned around with her hand near her heart to see Kunal standing there laughing.

Nirmala: Kunal she said pretending that she will hit him

Kunal took her hand and placed it on her cheeks he missed his mums touch. Nirmala had tears in her eyes.. her son was finally back made her happy. She placed her other hand on His cheeks and gave a kiss on the forehead while Kunal took both of her hand in his and bought it near her lips.

Nirmala: I hate when u give surprises she said smiling at him. Kunal wiped the tears and hugged her

Kunal: I know u hate when I give u these scary type of surprise he said talking about the one where he scared her. But I know u would love me as a surprise. Dadu and sandhya were watching this from the kitchen

Nirmala. Let me call your dad

Kunal: no no even dad deserves a surprise he said with a smile... but where is Khyati... and I thought Karen would be back

Nirmala: beta Khyati started college just a week ago she will be back tonight and karan he was meant to come back but his college decided that exams will happen early so he will be coming back next week only.

Kunal: I will give him a call later on to see how he is doing

Nirmala: did u eat.

Kunal: me and masi maa ate outside. Nirmala was surprised

Nirmala: sandhya knew about this and she didn't tell us Before Kunal could speak dadu walked in followed by sandhya

Dadu: exactly sandhya knew about this and see even nirmala asked u this question

Sandhya: but if I told everyone then there would have been no surprise. And Kunal wouldn't have been able to see your reaction... nirmala and dadu looked at each other

Nirmala: point to be noted what do u say bau ji . She said pretending to be serious

Dadu: case closed sandhya and Kunal not guilty. All looked at each other and laughed.

Ok guys chapter 2 is up I would like to thanks who liked and commented... it really means a lot. I hope u like the upcoming parts to and I continue to get ur love for this ff through ur comments.

Cant wait to read your comments.

Ps: sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake.
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Loved chaperone 2! I really like how both Meghna and Kunal are so family orientated. Dadi is so sweet! Hope you continue soon :) :)
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Originally posted by: Tamihna

Loved chaperone 2! I really like how both Meghna and Kunal are so family orientated. Dadi is so sweet! Hope you continue soon :) :)


thanks baby glad u liked this chap as well... yep both r actually family orientated. glad u liked dadi

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