Manan Horror FF: Sister Rivalry {Completed} - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Nice update dear..I like it. Cont soon. Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's getting more & more interesting
Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chp 9: The Planning

It was 10 in the night as Manik gathered all his friends in a separate room letting Nandini rest in her room, and as he told them everything, they had shock on their faces. "Do you know what it means? It means Anjali is really back and Nandini wasn't hallucinating, she entered her body," Navya told them worriedly. "We should ask some Tantric," suggested Cabir. "Hmm, I guess this is the only way," Manik replied. "What if Anjali is here and eavesdropping on our conversation?," asked Soha who was scared the most of ghosts. "I am thinking the same," Alia said.

"If she was here, this room's temperature might've dropped by now," Mukti said assuring them. "I told you guys, Mukti is fond of spirits," Dhruv joked and Mukti threw a pillow at him. "I second you bro," Cabir replied giggling a little. "OK enough fun guys, where will we find Tantric?," Manik asked out of curiosity. "In the temples, we know you never believed this paranormal stuff but now we'll have to get ourselves into this for Nandini," Navya said. They agreed and joined hands. Meanwhile in Nandini's room, Nandini was sleeping peacefully but her sleep got disturbed by the constant opening and shutting of the window.

As she opened her eyes, her head ached badly. She saw a girl standing near her, the tube light started blinking and she screamed loudly seeing Anjali which caused everyone to rush to her. But as they reached the entrance, Anjali froze them on their places. She bent to Nandini and whispered, "your body is mine from day." Nandini got shocked and she got possessed by her again. Her eyes became red. "You worry for this Nandini a lot right?," she asked them, they were shocked at the scenario. Nandini/Anjali crawled on all fours and fell from the bed.

"Nandini!," Manik screamed. "Shout, shout as much as you want, but today, I won't leave Nandini," she spoke in her ghostly voice and dug her nails in Nandini's neck scratching it so much that blood oozed out of it. Manik got tears seeing her condition. "Say Nandini's name again and I will chop her head off her body," Anjali warned. "Anjali no," Manik shouted. "Say my name again," Anjali said. "Anjali," he said lovingly trying to keep her from harming his Nandini. "Anjali, come to me," he said reaching out his hand towards her.

She smiled and stood up and held Manik's hand while everyone looked on. He could move and he took her out of that room climbing down the spiral staircase while Anjali was on cloud nine. They reach downstairs and went towards the temple. He pushed her inside the temple and she left her body screaming and Nandini fainted in Manik's arms. With this, everyone could move. He picked her in his arms and took her upstairs to her room and made her sleep. Next day, at night, the Tantric arrived and Nandini was possessed by Anjali and because of this, she was locked in the room.

They went to her room with tantric and unlocked the door. On hearing the sound, she turned to them and they threw a large white bedsheet on her after tying her to the bed. The lights were switched off and all the photoframes and the things made of glass were concealed so that she escapes and can't possess the glass items. "Light fire and burn all the spirit's things in it," he instructed and Anjali got angry and screamed pulling the bed in air along with her. She broke the ropes and the bed came down. She stood on the bed and jumped on Manik with her face hidden and her arms around his neck and her legs around his waist.

He got startled and she lifted her face and looked in his eyes. "I will go taking Nandini with me, understand!," she shouted on him and he shook as if current was passing through his body. "Is there any other way? She's very harmful," said Soha. "We'll have to call someone's spirit to who she'll listen, it can be a living person too," said tantric and Manik got an idea. He held her waist and eyed her lovingly. "Anjali, I want to talk to you," said Manik very lovingly.

"Say, do you love me?," she asked. "Yes Anjali, I love you, I don't feel good seeing you yearning, you want me? Fine I will come with you," he said and she smiled. "Come soon," she said and kissed him and with this, she left Nandini's body and he felt her grip loosen. He held her and hugged her. "Guys. I will have to do death drama so that she leaves us," Manik told them. "It can be dangerous," Navya said. "I am ready to face every danger for the sake of my wife," he said and laid her on the bed kissing her forehead covering her and made her wear holy necklace

(Author's note: who wants a new ff on Manan? A better one, do tell me...but it's not horror).

Edited by salley145 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Nice update
So all know about Anjali now
N manik is going to do death drama to get rid of her
Can't wait to see how he does it
As for new story yes sound good to me
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Nice idea dear... Finally there is a way to make anjali out of MaNan's life..Love the update dear. Cont soon.
And would love to read ur new story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Dear great update
Now I am eagerly waiting for the next part
I want new manan story & pm too
Thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chp 10: How Anjali Died?

Manik and Nandini were sitting together, she was tensed after Manik told her everything. She was resting her head against his shoulder. He was holding her hand in his hand. Constant tears were rolling down her cheeks. "Nandini, why did she say that you killed her?," Manik asked. More tears rolled down. "I will tell you everything Manik," said Nandini. In the past, when Nandini and Anjali were of 17 years old, they were sitting together as their usual routine, they did everything together though they weren't conjoined twins. Their bodies were separated at birth. Nandini received Manik's phone call.

She immediately received it and Anjali had jealousy clearly visible on her face. "Keep the phone on speaker," she said and Nandini just smiled at her and asked her to wait until she finishes talking and that she will let her talk too. Nandini didn't knew about their common attraction. She just thought her sister takes Manik as a good friend just like him. "Come soon, land safely, love you," said Nandini over the phone and this rose Anjali's jealousy even more. "Let me also talk," Anjali said and she gave her the phone immediately smiling at her sister.

Soon the phone call ended and there was an awkward silence between the sisters. Anjali had a sad face, her head hung down low and Nandini kept her head on her shoulder with her arms wrapped around her. She was smiling and for sometime she didn't notice her sister's sadness but when she did, Anjali was more than upset. "What happened? I let you talk, why are you upset now?," Nandini asked making her look at her. "I want to tell something," Anjali replied still looking down. "Why does Manik always come to you and not me? Am I bad?," Anjali asked.

"No, you're great, beautiful, cute," Nandini said trying to cheer her up, she really meant it. "I want Manik to come to me and not to you," Anjali said. "He comes to you just like me, what do you exactly mean? I don't understand," Nandini asked. "I love Manik as well," Anjali confessed finally leaving Nandini shocked. "What?," she asked in shock. "You've heard right," Anjali said. "But he loves me," Nandini said. "I want to become you," said Anjali. "I can't do that Anjali, if not Manik then you'll get someone else, he'll love you more than Manik loves me," Nandini said.

"He loves me Nandini, I want him, and if you love me more than him, you'll sacrifice Manik for me," Anjali said losing her cool. "What are you saying? I love you more than him, I really do but I can't do this," Nandini said. "Why?," Anjali asked angrily. "Because I love Manik and I can't betray him, you can confirm it with him and let him choose between us," Nandini said. "Call him and ask, and put the phone on speaker," Anjali said and she did so but the call didn't reach as he had already boarded his flight.

Nandini put down the phone in disappointment. "Anjali, if he would've loved you, I would've never refused to sacrifice for you," Nandini said holding her face while crying. "Why? Why does he loves you? Why not me?," Anjali now stood up from the bed jerking her hands away shouting. "Don't be sad angel," Nandini said with love trying to calm down her anger, she always called her angel by love and Anjali called her Nandu. "I am not your angel," Anjali said angrily and broke the vase on the floor. "Anjali you'll get hurt," Nandini said.

"Let me get hurt, I will die rather than living such life where I have to see my Manik loving someone else in front of my eyes," Anjali replied and picked up a piece of broken vase. Nandini stood up to stop her and she was barefoot as well. Anjali put the piece on her own neck, Nandini got hurt on her feet in an attempt to stop her but continued trying. She held her hand trying to move it away but that injured her neck even more. "Anjali!," Nandini screamed as she slit her both wrists and the next moment, she collapsed on the floor.

"Anjali!," Nandini screamed in tears and screamed for her mother. She came and got shocked seeing Anjali dead while Nandini continued crying and told the whole matter to her. She took her head in her hand looking at her sister cryingly and couldn't believe she was dead. Their mother buried Anjali in the back garden of their house and her corpse was still there till the present day. When Manik came back, she didn't told him how she died, he didn't ask because he didn't wanted to hurt her. From that day, Nandini lived in a guilt that she couldn't stop her sister.

Her soul kept wandering within the house after Nandini got married to Manik. Back to present, after telling everything to Manik, he could sense the sadness in her. He hugged her tightly and she cried loudly in his arms. Suddenly he felt strong air blow past them and that she was digging her nails in his back. He parted away from her and he got fearful looking at her face as she was possessed again, he got down the bed and her eyes turned completely white, she was looking at him with her head tilted.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh it's soo horror update dear
Now what will happen?
Pls update soon
Can't wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So that's how Anjali died she took her own life because she wanted manik but he loved her sister
She wanted her own sister to give up her love so she could have him
Sounds like she was really spoilt
She's blaming Nandini for her death because Nandini didn't give into her stupid demand
I hope they find a way to send her away soon b4 she causes anymore harm to anyone in her jealous rage
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Anjali is crazy...bechari Nandini...she is living in a false guilt..how sad...but yeh anjali Nandini ko fir se possess kar gayi...aab kya karegi woh Nandu k sath ??
Cont soon dear.
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