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Esha Singh

@eshasrk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

kids feeding Suraj?

now i demand royalty🤣.

not being obnoxious. just supremely amused.
i guess i should update my FF now and then compare notes again😆.

thanks sailuja for sharing the spoiler.

Nimmi I am starting to believe that the CVs are really stalking the stories here especially yours 😆 😆 😆 😆, you were the one who came with this idea rite ????

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: eshasrk

Nimmi I am starting to believe that the CVs are really stalking the stories here especially yours 😆 😆 😆 😆, you were the one who came with this idea rite ????

yeah! guilty as charged😆.
Suraj meeting a little girl. feeling guilty seeing her mohur. She sharing her food with him. them being friends.
and then all the kids befriending him.

i wrote till that part.

next chapters were about since he has won over the kids him winning over the villagers easily.
since kids are buddies with Suraj villagers changing their views about him. coming over to his side.
and this will help him win his next battle plan.

i think i should get on with the story. i am so curious to compare notes now🤣.

really not being arrogant or obnoxious. just finding it funny.

let's open a suggestion for cvs thread and post all our ideas there. and hope they will get inspired.😆

and if we get 'star gazing part' i will crack a rib laughing my guts out.

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Esha Singh

@eshasrk

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

I only wonder if Chakor will be successful in giving food to Suraj, coz in the OLV just when the girl was about to give food, KNs watchdogs came back 😡

Really Shikhu and Ramsingh should be the first ones to be knocked out by Suraj 😡

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sailuja

@sailuja

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: eshasrk
I only wonder if Chakor will be successful in giving food to Suraj, coz in the OLV just when the girl was about to give food, KNs watchdogs came back 😡
Really Shikhu and Ramsingh should be the first ones to be knocked out by Suraj 😡

Ya they are shikku and ramsingh..damn it all😡😡..but we will believe that this time suraj will get food 😭😭

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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

Moderator

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

so let me get this straight, the villagers hate suraj because he did injustice but wasn't imli his partner in crime in all activities, so why aren't they hating her? imli gets forgiven but suraj can't? talk about the double standards of these villagers.

edit: why is suraj still starving, at night no guards were there near well - imli could have easily dropped a bag of food for sukor🥱

Edited by Yuvika_15 - 8 years ago

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gibbu

@gibbu

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

yeah! guilty as charged😆.
Suraj meeting a little girl. feeling guilty seeing her mohur. She sharing her food with him. them being friends.
and then all the kids befriending him.

i wrote till that part.

next chapters were about since he has won over the kids him winning over the villagers easily.
since kids are buddies with Suraj villagers changing their views about him. coming over to his side.
and this will help him win his next battle plan.

i think i should get on with the story. i am so curious to compare notes now🤣.

really not being arrogant or obnoxious. just finding it funny.

let's open a suggestion for cvs thread and post all our ideas there. and hope they will get inspired.😆

and if we get 'star gazing part' i will crack a rib laughing my guts out.

This is sheer copyright infringement. You must sue the writers for stealing your story.

Suggestions for cvs thread is another thing, picking storyline from someones fiction is altogether different. Theivery at its worst.

Seriouslt consider fighting for your intellectual property. Your moment of glory (though you are not short of any) ! Believe me our bureaucracy is not that bad after all.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: gibbu

This is sheer copyright infringement. You must sue the writers for stealing your story.

Suggestions for cvs thread is another thing, picking storyline from someones fiction is altogether different. Theivery at its worst.

Seriouslt consider fighting for your intellectual property. Your moment of glory (though you are not short of any) ! Believe me our bureaucracy is not that bad after all.

gibbu,
🤗

thank you so much for your wonderful words for me.

but i think this is just a coincidence. or maybe not connected at all.
read the spoiler and immediately thought of my story and found the scenario hilarious. hence trolling.

in the freaky case of Cvs actually getting inspired i say feel free cvs. anything for Sukor. i do write with lot of heart but not much of fierce possessive writer's streak in this case. so yeah.. no issues at all.

thanks again dear.
love.

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