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MY FIRST BLENDING PIC how is it...😊

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my first blending pic so plz bear it😆


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PART 10


Maaneet room

Everyone pampered geet so much.geet overwhelmed everyone love .after long back she got their love.

Manu: Mummaa why u crying.

Geet: Happy tears manu

Manu: Happpy means smile not cry with confused face.

Geet smiled : Sometimes happy also make cry baby.

Vicky enter maaneet room with some files.

Vicky: Geet , pinky sent this file for u

Geet: Ok that file.

Vicky: This one, it is bhai project file.where is he.

Geet: I don't know with straight face.

Vicky rolled his eyes: Ok I kept there and he come back to room , give to him.

Geet: Iam not give him.

Vicky: Ok I will inform bhai and went out.


Manu: jeet mera file with cute face.

Geet: Oh my baby want file.

Geet smirked face and give maan file to manu baby.

Manu: Jeet it is papu file with confused face

Geet ( mind voice) : What I will do with my intelligent baby. He dido like his papa ..sharp mind.

Geet: Ur papa so much busy so u will help ur papa na.

Manu: I will help papu with bright face

Geet went to restroom and baby work his papu file.

After some minutes

Maan enter his room and seeing manu doing something seriously sitting in his bed but geet not in room.

Maan: Sunshine what r doing

Manu raise his face to looking maan: Iam working papu said and concentrate his work once again

Maan chuckled: Working ..

Maan went near to manu and sitting next to him.

Maan phone ringed and maan pick up the call.

Maan: Ha vicky

Vicky: I placed ur project file to near ur bed side.u see it bhai.

Maan: There is no file Vicky.

Manu tapped maan hand and but maan concentrate Vicky phone

Vicky: Checked it clearly.few minutes before only i placed file in ur room.

Maan seeing manu hand in one red file

Maan: Vicky file color is not red right with little bit trust voice.

Vicky:ha bhai ur file colour is red.

Maan horror face: I got my file .i call u later and cut the call.

Manu show file to maan: Papu iam good boy right.i helped ur file with smiling face

Maan: Sunshine what u did it.oh my project file.now tomorrow what I will do.

Manu sad face: U not like my work.ur badoo papu..with pout face

Geet come out of washroom and smiled seeing maan face.


Geet:super drawing baby showing her full tooth.

Maan glare to geet but geet not worried about his glare.

Manu smiled broadly: Jeet , ur good mummaa

Geet: Ur mummaa always good baby

Manu: U said help papu file but he not like my help with pout face.

Maan angry glare to geet and geet not looking maan but looking there and here

Manu kissed geet cheek : Mummaa I helped ur file.and manu show geet file .her file fully mannu baby ka art work.


Geet open her mouth and pointed her finger to file with shocked face.: My file.


Now maan smiled seeing geet expression.

Geet glare to maan and poor manu looking his parents weirdly.

******

Geet: Darling dont angry with me with hesitate face.

Dadi: When u have hesitate with me geet.

Geet: Oh I will stay Delhi only three months after me and manu shifted to Australia .

Everyone shocked: What..

Geet: Plz dadi this is my decision.

Priya: Geet beta this is ur house.how u go away from us..

Geet: This is not my house maa with sad face.

Dadi: I accepted ur decision but u give me one promise.

Geet nods her head and dadi carrying her hairs.

Dadi: U permit me allow see u and my grand child in future with moist eyes.

Geet hugs dadi: Dadi why u ask me permission, manu is ur blood.he belong to u.whenever u want talk and see with him .u don't need anyone permission.

Priya: Maaji..u also

Ram: Iam also accept geet decision but in these three months u stay only our mansion otherwise I am not accept ur decision.

Geet: But papa...


Ram: I want spend time with u and my grand child.I think u give atleast this right to us .i don't know I will get this chance once again or not with pleasing face.

Geet have no choice: Ok papa..

****

Ram and priya room


Priya: Why u accept geet decision.u want geet away from us.,if she will go away from us .we will become happy.ok dont consider us.plz think about maan.he already live in guilty in these years with harsh tone

Ram: U think about only ur son not about geet.she only hurt so much because of maan.she have full right take any decision.

Priya: What about baby, I cannot allow my maaneet child going anywhere.

Ram: Why u not understand priya.

Maan enter his parents rooms.

Maan: Dad saying right mom.she have full right to take any decision.

Priya: Oh u also accept .ok u also happy for geet will go away from her house.

maan: no mom

Ram: Maan, I need my grandchild and my daughter in law stay with us.i don't know what will u do.u have three months time.in these months u will win her heart .otherwise I never stop her decision. Once again I trust u dont break my trust, maan

Maan. No dad this time I never break ur trust . I will win her heart she never go away from me.


Ram: Priya , now u understood why I asked geet stay in mansion.

Priya nods her head with moist eyes.

*******

Maaneet room

Geet: Mr khurana why u doing everything.why u acting infront of everyone like u carrying for me.if noone around us so stop ur acting.i cannot tolerate anymore with angry face.

Maan: This is not acting geet I truly care and worried about u with painful voice.

Geet meekly laughed: What u said ,u worried about me..u never take care of me in ur life time with taunting tone.plz go away I need to sleep.

Maan went to study room and sitting in sofa with closed eyes.

Maan: Why geet u not see my love in my eyes.I know u angry with me.u anger not accept truth.i love u geet ...i love u so much.

Flashback..

Maaneet marriage finished because of only dadi health condition.

Dadi recovered and come back to mansion and elders decided today maaneet sr.

Maan room

Dadi helped geet sitting in centre of bed and kiss her forehead.

Dadi: Sry beta in my sake only ur married with maan.

Geet: Iam happy dadi.

Dadi: u love maan so much but he.. ..u only change workacholic person to normal person.

Geet nod her head and dadi cupped her cheeks.

Dadi: Give me great grand child soon with teasing face

Geet faced red : Darling with blushing face.

Everyone went out .geet alone in maan room and maan enter his room with irritating face.

Maan seeing geet sitting in his bed and geet sensed maan enter room and her heart beat raised thinking about her happy life.

Maan grabbed geet hand harshly and geet looking maan and her body shivered seeing his angry face.

Maan hold her arm tightly: U think I accept ur my wife.we r married because of dadi health condition.in front of family members only we are husband and wife .inside we r stranger with each other.u never cross ur limit and never interfaces my life.do u understand with harsh tone.he throw her to bed and went to study room.


Geet eyes tears rolling in her cheeks: Why mom and papa u leave me alone that day if I come with u . iam happily died with u.I thought maanji accept me and he give me love but my wish become only dream.my dream vanished so soon

.***

Next day


Geet wake up thinking about last night and unknownly tears flowing in her eyes.

Geet Mindthought: Geet what u thinking.u will win his love.u can do it.he is ur life.he is everything to u.u never give up in ur step and geet wiped her precious tears.

Geet bathed quickly and went out outside .today her first day of her law house.

Geet enter kitchen and priya and dadi already in kitchen.geet bent blessing to priya maa and dadi.

Geet: Darling, I don't know cooking what I will do with pout face.

Sunitha: Ur England ka princess so u don't know cooking with taunting tone.

Dadi: Sunitha with harsh voice.

Sunitha: Maa what iam trying to say

Dadi: U shut ur mouth that enough .

Sunitha went to her room.


Priya: Geet beta .add this sugar to kheer bowl that enough ur rasaam will be complete with smiling face

Geet : But I will make sweet ,u both help me with pleasing face.

Dadi told how make kheer and geet listening carefully and did it what both r said.

*****

Dinning table

Everyone praising geet kheer and except sunitha and maan

Vicky: Geet definitely nothing happened to me na after I ate ur kheer with teasing tone and till now iam not love with anyone.i don't want to die so soon with dramatic face.

Geet glare to Vicky: Eat my kheer otherwise..

Vicky: Why angry I will eat ..

Dadi, priya , ram and everyone gift to geet for first rasam completed.

Sunitha give gift to geet: This ritual finished but u go to ur mother house today.but u have noone with in ur family.this ritual how will u complete with taunting tone.

Geet eyes moist thinking about her parents not more in this cruel world.

Arjun: Sunitha bua ,u dont worry about my geet.she have brother and his name is Arjun singhana.

Geet smiled seeing Arjun come with Annie.


Arjun side Hug to geet: She is my sister.u never forgot sunitha bua..with little harsh tone.

Annie: Geet Bhabhi u pack ur things.lets go to our home.

Geet nods her head and Arjun, Annie and geet went to Arjun house .

****

After two days

Vicky packed his things for London journey.

Geet: Vicky u packed everything.

Vicky: I packed everything but I don't want go without u.i never stay without u yaar with sad face.

Geet hug Vicky: I miss u too.only 2 yrs after ur finish ur studies u come back to India with crying face

Vicky: But u call me daily with moist eyes

Maan enter Vicky room and irritating seeing both behaviour


Maan: U both not child.stop ur crying and pack ur thing soon with angry face.

Hall

Vicky hugs geet tightly: I miss u so much.take care..

Geet:u too take care .call me daily.

Maan rolled his eyes: both stop ur drama and we need to airport soon otherwise u missed ur flight.

Dadi : Maan beta this is love not any drama.till now they r not separated in their life.now Vicky going study for abroad so they can't tolerate their separation.

Vicky hug maan: Bhai plz take care of my angel.she is everything to me.she is very innocent.I request u bhai.

Maan: Vicky with irritating face

Vicky give one pack to maan: This is ur wedding gift both of u.

Maan opened cover and inside two flight tickets for Paris.

Vicky: This is ur honeymoon trip ticket.i arranged everything in Paris.i know u have meeting in Paris so I arranged geet flight ticket with u.now u go to ur office trip and geet come with u for urs honeymoon .how is my gift with teasing tone.

Maan angry glare to geet and thinking geet already know about Vicky gift but that poor soul dont know anything about Vicky plan.

dadi: Vicky beta awesome gift.lets go u caught ur flight.

*****

Maaneet in Paris, evening time

Maan reached Paris almost two days and maan busy in his business meeting.geet stay in hotel room.in Paris geet saw only that four wall in hotel room.

Geet: Maanji I am also come with u with puppy face.

Maan: Hmm but ready soon.

Geet smiled and wore white saree ( maan favourite colour).

Maan starring her without removing his eyes.

Geet blushed: Maanji with soft voice

Maan come back to lala land.

Party

Everyone looking maaneet pairs and maan hold geet waist possessively enter party hall.maan busy with client and geet don't know anyone so thinking call to Vicky.

Vicky: Madam finally remember me with little angry voice.

Geet : Sry baba ...

Vicky: Why so much noise yaar.

Geet: Oh I come party with maanji.

Vicky: Iam not hear anything.

Geet went out side without informing maan.

Geet: Now u hear my voice

Vicky: Hmm tell me how is going ur honeymoon

Geet sad face: Super vicky ,maanji showed me full Paris.


Vicky: U saying truth with doubt voice

Geet: Ha Vicky iam saying truth only.u tell me u got any gf in London with teasing tone..

Both talk with each other and geet forgot her surrounding.

Somemen looking geet in lusty way.

Geet cut Vicky call and men surrounded geet .

Geet: Ji why u surrounding me with stammering voice.

One man hold geet hand and geet remove his grip but his hold her hand tightly.

Geet shout: Maanji...maanji

Time god some cop come to place otherwise that bad guys what they did with geet.

Men run out seeing cop and geet run to party hall and hugs maan Back tightly with feared face


Maan embrassed infront of his client and maan remove her hug and dragged her outside of party hall forecefully.

Maan: Already told don't mess my Life more.u enter my life ,day itself I lost my everything with angry tone.

Geet already feared about that men and now said he lost everything because of her and her tears not controlled flowing like river.Maan frustrated he talked like stupidity but even her tears bothering him.

Maan: U waited her .i will come soon

Geet: ...ji ..maanjj...i am also..come with u...with stammering voice.if men come back that fear caught up her little brain.


Maan: I said right.u sit in this bench.i will inform clients come back with harsh tone and went inside party.

Geet scared more and it is dark ,cold and lonely place .geet siting in bench ,hugged her knees her tightly.she eagerly waiting for maan but time only passed but he not come outside.if she will go inside once again he angry with her.even she slept in sitting posture.

Other side maan forgot geet and went to hotel.he enter the hotel room remembered geet also come with party.

Maan went back to party hall quickly and seeing geet slept in sitting position.maan scopped in his arms not disturbing her sleep.

***

Maan placed geet in bed and her face clearly shown in tears mark in her cheeks.maan carrying her cheeks.

Maan pov

Why geet u enter in my life.after u and Vicky birth ,no one take care me.my dadi roaming behind u.she forgot me totally but iam not care about it because dadaji stay with me all time.m y age of 18 ,that time dadaji passed away.everyone break down.dad not interested in construction. So I will go to office daily.once side I managed my studies & other side managed my company.its really difficult.iam running behind money.i forgot my family everything.now iam truly business.i don't need any unwanted relationship.ur relation ship make me weakly person.i don't want ur love ,care anything.i know u love me insanely.but I have no time spent t with u.this is my life.iam not allowed no one rule my life.

*****

Km

After 5 months

Annie now 8 months pregnant . Arjun shifted his business to uk.arjun have no realtion .so priya went to take care of annie in uk.other maaneet life maan behave geet is stranger for him. Outside they no show their relation to anyone.dadi also doubted sometime asking about geet their relationship but geet manage very well dadi.whenever geet become alone sunitha bua taunting geet .maan not take care geet any need. He live in robotic life.

Flashback end

Maan : u right geet ,I never take care of u in our past life but that i stupidly behaved with u. I thought ur my weakness. U went away from me .i understood ur not weakness.ur my strength with moist eyes.


Maan enter room and his both angel sleeping peacefully in bed.

Maan placed manu in his chest and pulled geet in his arms .after some time maan slept hold both angels.

Geet wake up midnight and looking in her posture.

Geet mindvoice: maanji, I saw ur eyes love for me but I scared if once again u broke my heart.i definetly I die then only I will throw u out my life .iam not ur old geet. I live for my baby only for my baby.i don't know I doing correct or not.

Part end

next part - part 11


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Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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part 11
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MAANEET past LIFE continues

i think i will update MFS 24 th part and Hope next part monday. till now bear part 10😆
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thanks for liking and comments for my lovely buddies.
sry iam not reply most of them in these weeks .i reply ur pm soon and read ur stories and i comment ur lovely stories ,tomorrow.plz give me some time .iam really strucked in busy schedule.😕😕

whose waiting for my update this is for everyone😃😃😃






Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update. .
Manu is so cute ..
he helps his papa for his work. .
even he helps his geet. .
ram. and Priya only agree for geet conditions because she should stay in km. .and Maan wins her trust back. .
flash back was sad..
poor geet. .Maan is so rude. .
Vicky geet antics he thinks it's drama. .
Maan didn't like geet he think after their birth no body love him...
early waiting for next part. .how Maan win back his wife love. .
Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Hayy rabba flashback itni jaldi khatam ho gaya 😲 Maan is so harsh with Geet where she is scared for that cheap man but he always behave with her rudely and left her outside, He is just insecure that his parents Geet love more than him , Manu is so cute ,he actually make trash of Maaneet files 🤣 Good one. File toh gayi . Ab Geet bhi jayegi Maan ki zindegi se , Please next update mein bhi flashback dikhana...pretty please 😒
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Abhi kyu nahi, abhi update karo 😒 I want more maaneet pasttt
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Nice update
poor geet,
Maan rudely behave with her after their marriage
Now she is scared to trust him
Update soon

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