TeRa DiYa NaAm (Rajveer Naina) lrl OS complete

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Hiii friends
Yeh OS maine apne ek bohat khas friend ke liye lekhi thi unke birthday pe well its quite mature OS 18+ hain h yeh ...

Hope aap sab bhi yeh enjoy kare ...bina batti gul kiye ...
PJ baby love u ...





TeRa DiYa NaAm


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TEra DiYa NaAm


Ek bohat bada aur khubsurat sa mansion tha jo roshni se jagmaga raha tha ...


Shayad aaj kuch khas moka tha uss mansion me usse dulhan ki taraha jaza jo rakha tha ...


Jab hum uss mansion ke pas gaye toh dekha waha gate ke pas name plate thi jisme lekha hua tha ..."""Shekhawat Mansion""""



Aur aaj iss mansion ko dulhan jasa sajane ki peche ek khas wajah thi aur woh thi iss mansion ke ek laute rajkumar ...ki Shadi thi...



Ji haa aaj iss mansion ke ek laute waaris ki Shadi thi uski bachpan ki dost ke saath ...



Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ...shekhawat khandan ka ek lauta waarish ...aur uski shadi ho rahi thi auski bachpan ki dost PJ se ...



PJ aur raj ... dono saye ke tarha ek saath rahte hain ...
Raj ki PJ me ya yeh kaho ki PJ ki jaan Raj me basti hain dono he surto me kuch bhi kahna galat nahi hoga ...



Inki dosti 5 standard se chali aa rahi hain ...jab PJ ke dad ka transfer delhi se mumbai hua tha tab PJ ko apne naye school me apna best friend mila tha Raj ...


PJ ko PJ ka tittle bhi raj ne he diya tha woh kya hain ...PJ thodi dhundu se thi chubbi se mote mote gaal ...gol gol aakhe ...chasma lage hue ...do choti ...but over all bohat he cute dekhne wali ladki ...but uska naam raj ko bohat boring lagta tha """Jyanti Patel""" jab raj ki dosti hue jyanti se toh usne uska naam ulta kar diya """Patel Jyanti """ par raj ko toh bhi kuch khas nahi jama uska naam toh usne uske naam ka short form bana diya """PJ """..


Ab toh shayad he koi PJ ka real name janata ho sab usse PJ he bulate ...
Aur PJ usse toh yeh naam bohat pasand hain .. kyu ki yeh naam usse uske sabse ache dost ne diya hai...uske pyaar ne ...ji haa PJ ko pata he nahi chala ki kab uska bachpan ki dosti pyaar me badal gayi ...



Ab toh PJ ke har ek sapne me sirf Raj hai ...uske din ki suruwat bhi Raj se hoti hai aur raat bhi sirf Raj pe jaa kar hoti hain...



Aaj PJ ki khushi ka thikana nahi tha uski shadi ho rahi thi uske pyaar se ...uske raj se ...



Par kuch tha jo usse khatak raha tha aaj uski shadihai par najane kyu raj ke chahre pe woh khushi woh chamak dekhai he nahi de rahi hai jo hone chaheyi ...



Jab PJ mandap me puche shadi karne toh usne raj ki aakho me ek sunna pan dekha ...
Ek bebasi dekhi ...par phir bhi Raj ke hontho pe muskaan thi dard bhari ...jisi woh PJ se chupana chah raha tha par chupa nhi paa raha tha ...


PJ ko kuch samjh nahi aaya ki aakhir yeh dard yeh tadap kis baat ki hai...

PJ ne socha ki Asa toh nahi ki Raj iss shadi se khush na ho ...
Par nahi nahi asa kase ho sakta tha Raj ne khud iss shadi ke liye haa kahi thi apne maan se phir asa kya ho gaya in do mahino me jo aaj raj khush nazar nahi aa raha hai



Aaj se do mahine phele raj ko PJ ne apne dil ke baat btayi thi ...


Flashback




In office


PJ aur Raj ne apna graduation complete karke ek saath Raj ke dad ki company join ki thi ...dono ek saath ek he office me kaam karte the ...



In Raj cabin



PJ : (kuch sochte hue) Raj tune kabhi pyaar kiya hai ...


Raj : (surprised) pyaar ??? Yeh kasa sawal hai PJ ... Tu janti hai main aaj tak iss pyaar vyaar ke chakar me nahi pada ...



PJ : (making face) nahi pade toh ab pad jaa ...(slowly) mere pyaar me ...


Raj : kya ...kya kaha tune ...



PJ : (hadbada kar) kuch nahi ...main toh bas itna kah rahi hu ki pyaar me ab tak nahi pade ho toh ab pad ja Raj ...tu 26 ka ho gaye hai hume college chode jamana ho gaya ...ab toh ghar wale mere liye ladka aur tumhare liye ladki dhundhne lage hai ...


Raj : (irrigated) please PJ yr tu janti hai na main yeh pyaar vyaar me believe nahi karta hu... Jab ghar wale kahe gay main shadi kar luga unki margi se ...


PJ : (blushing) agar humare ghar walo ne hume pasand kar liya ek dosre ke liye toh ...


Raj : (naughtily) toh kya ...kar luga tere se shadi ...par hai log kahe gay ki raj ne ek aunty se shadi karli ...


PJ : (shocked) kya???


Raj : (smiling) aur nahi toh kya apni shakal dekh ...meri aunty lagti hai tu ...



PJ : (angrily) aunty aur main...hello mr. shayad aap bhul rahe ho ...main aap se do saal choti hu samjhe ...



Raj : (teasingly) par lagti nahi hai ...mere saath chalti ho toh sab kahte hai dekho dekho raj apni aunty ke saath jaa raha hai ...



PJ hurt ho jati hai raj ki baato se

PJ : (with tears) Raj main sach me aunty lagti hu kya ...


Raj PJ ki aakho me aasu dekh kar khud ko kosne lagta hain woh duniya me kuch bhi bardash kar sakta hai par apni PJ ki aakho me aasu nahi ...


Raj jaldi se jaa kar PJ ke pas baitha hai ...


Raj : (cupped PJ face) hey...baby don't u dare to cry ...tu janti hai na main kuch bhi bardash kar sakta hu par teri aakho me aasu nahi ...
Aur tu kab se meri baato ko itna seriously lene lagi ...main mazak kar raha tha yr ...u r d most beautiful girl I've ever seen ...


PJ : innocently) sachi me


Raj : (kissing on her forehead) muchi me ...

Aur phir PJ usse hug kar leti hain ...


PJ : (in mind) i knw raj u also love me tabhi toh mere aasu tujhse dekhe nahi jate ...aaj mom dad shadi ki baat karne gaye hain tere ghar aur mujhe pata hain tum haa he kahega aakhir itna pyaa jo karte hai mujhse ...




Ase he sham ho gaye har roj ki tarah phele raj ne PJ ko uske ghar drop kiya aur phir apni ghar gaya ...


Usse ghar jaa kar pata chal ki PJ ki parents ne Rishta bheja hai PJ ka uske liye ...
Raj ke parents bhi bohat khush the unhe bhi PJ bohat pasand thi Raj ke liye ...

Raj yeh sunn kar shocked ho gaya par phir usse office me hue aaj ki baat yaad aayi aur woh samjh gaya ki PJ ne aaj woh baat kyu ki thi ...

Jab Raj ki maa ne usse btaya ki PJ usse bachpan se pyaar karti hai toh raj aur bhi jada shocked ho gaya usne toh usne humesha PJ ko apne sabse achi dost ki tarha dekha tha uske alawa kuch nahi



Par phir Raj ne humesha ki taraha apne nahi apni sabse achi dost ke bare me socha PJ ke bare me ...agar PJ usse pyaar karti hai toh woh yeh shadi jarur karega apni nahi PJ ke khush ke liye kyuki uski khushi PJ ki khushi me he hai ...wase bhi woh pyaar me yakeen nahi karta hai ...usse arrange marriage karni thi ...ab arrange marriage se acha toh yahi hoga ki woh PJ se shadi karle




Usne aapne ghar walo ko shadi ke liye haa kardi ...


Uske gharwalo ne bhi PJ ke ghar phone karke unlogo ko khushkhabri dedi ...PJ ki khushi ka toh koi thikana he nahi tha ...


Agle he din sab log ne pandit ji ko bulwa liya ...

Ab toh PJ Raj ke samne jane se bhi sharma rahi thi ...
Raj ke liye bhi thoda ajeeb tha yeh sab aachank se aayi apni iss dosti me badlaw dekhan...



Kundali dekh kar pandit ji ne sagai ka muhrat 10 din baad ka nikala tha aur shadi ka uske 2 mahine baad ...

PJ bechari ka toh chahra he utar gaya yeh soch kar ki ab shadi 2 mahine baad hogi aur Raj humesha ki taraha ek achi dost ban kar tabhi usse samhla raha tha toh kabhi tease kar raha tha ...


Par kahte hai na jo kismat me lekha ho wahi hota hai ...raj aur PJ ke aaath bhi kuch asa he hua ...


Achanak se delhi ke business project me kuch problem ho gayi jiski wajaha se raj ko pure 2 mahine ke liye waha jana pada ...


Par iss baat se yeh dono aanjan the ki yeh do mahine inki zindagi badalne wale the


In dono ki sagai bhi iss wajah se cancel ho gayi thi ab direct shadi thi do mahine baad


Par jab Raj delhi gaya toh waha uski zindagi he badal gayi jis Raj ko pyaar pe yakeen nahi tha usse in do mahino me pyaar ho gaya ...


Jisse raj ko pyaar hua tha woh thi Naina raj ke delhi wale project ke partner ki beti ...


Raj ki taraha woh bhi yeh project samhal rahi thi ...


Naina ne apni MBA Australia se complete kiya tha aur woh abhi kuch din phele he india aayi hai ...



In Naina office...



Raj jab delhi wali office me gaya toh woh sedhe Mr.ahluwaliya ji ke cabin me gaya tha unse milne ...

Par jab woh anadar gaya toh haran rah gaya ...Mr.ahluwaliya ki kurse(chair) pe koi ladki baithi thi ...

Woh ladki bade dhayan se pani file padh rahi thi ...


Raj : excuse me ...


Jase he Raj ki aawaz sunn kar uss ladki ne apni nazre utha kar usse dekha Raj ki toh jase saase he ruk gayi ho ...



Girl : (smiling) yes Mr.shekhawat please come in ...



Raj ko toh jase kuch sunai he nahi de raha tha woh bas uss ladki ki aakho me khoya hua tha ...


Naina : hello ...r u ok ...kaha kho gaye aap


Raj : (hosh me aate hue) apki aakho me ...


Naina : (surprised) ji ????


Raj : (embarrassed) sorry ...par aap kon ...main yaha Mr.ahluwaliya se milne aaya tha ...


Naina : (smiling) ji aap andar toh aayiye phir main btatai hu ...


Raj anadar aa kar chair pe baith gaya par




Naina : main dad ...i mean Mr.ahluwaliya ki beti hu Naina ...ab se main yeh project handle karugi apke saath ...wase toh dad humara introduction karane wali thi par achanak se ek urgent meeting aa gayi aur unhe jana pada ...i hope apko mere saath kam karne me koi problem nahi hogi ...




Raj abhi bhi woh puri tarike se concentrate nahi par paa raha tha ...uska dhayan toh naina ki baat pe tha he nahi bas uski shakal dekhe jaa raha tha uski aakhe ...uske hilte hontho ...uski expression ...


Raj : (khud se) kaam ???? Aakho se mazar haate tab toh kaam ke bare me sochu ...

Raj ne khud se yeh bola tha par itna loud bola tha ki naina ko sunai de gaya tha ..



Naina : (blushing) ji ????kuch kaha apne ...


Raj : nahi bilkul nahi ...hope apke saath kaam kar ke maza aayega ...Nainaaa...


Naina ko apna naam Raj ke muh se sunn kar ek ajeeb saa ehsaas hua jo aaj tak nahi hua tha ...


Raj : i hope main aapko Naina bula sakta hu ...

Naina : (smiling) of course aap bula sakte hain Mr.shekhawat ...mujhe koi problem nahi hain



Raj : (making face) that's great main apko young feel kara raha hu aur aap mujhe Mr.shekhawat bolua kar senior citizens wali category me dal rahi hain .
..




Naina : (laughing) sorry sorry ab main apko apke naam se he bulaugi ...thik hain na Rajveer ...



Raj aaj phele bar kisi ne itne pyaar se uska naam liya tha shayad ...
Sab usse raj bolte the Rajveer toh sirf kagazo pe he rah gaya tha uska naam ...



Waqt kaha aur kase beet gaya Raina mera matlab Raj naina ko pata he nahi chala ...


Work pressure itna tha ki Raj ke pas ghar baat karne ka time he nahi tha ...uska saa time meeting aur sites dekhne me nikal jata ...par Raj ko aaj se jada itna maza kaam karme me shayad he kabhiaaya ho ...


Naina ke saath rahte rahte toh Raj apne shadi ke bare me jase bhul he gaya tha ...
Naina ke saath ki hue dosti pyaar me badal gayi usse pata he nahi chala ...


Sirf Raj ko he nahi naina ko bhi Raj se pyaar ho gaya tha ...uaki baate ..woh million dollar wali smile... Sab kuch jase naina ko Raj ki taraf khech raha tha ...



Ek din baato baato me Raj ke muh se apne dil ki baat nikal he gayi ...aur Naina ne bhi apne pyaar ka ishaar kar diya tha...



10 day befor marriage




Raj Naina kisi kaam se bahar gaye the...wapasi me aate hue Naina ki bohat zidd karne pe Raj usse lovers park le gaya tha...



In lovers park



Raj : lo dekh liya apna lovers park chalo ab yaha se bohat kaam pada hain karne ke liye ...


Naina : (irritated) kaam kaam aur bas kaam ...kitne unromantic ho tum Rajveer ...main yaha humare unromantic life me thoda romance bharne ki koshish kar rahi hu aur tum ho ki kaam ke peche pade ho ... Yeh nahi ki thodi apni iss khubsurat se girlfriend ki tarif karde ...aaj kitni mehnat se taiyar hue hu tumhare liye par tum toh kaam me busy ho ek bar bhi nazar utha kar nahi dekha meri taraf ...



Yeh kah kar Naina muh phula kar ek banch pe ja kar baith gayi ...



Raj smile karta hua Naina ke bagal me jaa kar baith gaya ...aur Naina ne gusse me dosri taraf muh kar liya



Raj : (teasingly) very bad ...very bad Raj yaha tumhari itni cute se beautiful se hot se se...



Naina turant Raj ke muh pe haath rakh ke uska muh band kar deti hain...


Naina : (blushing) chup karo Rajveer kuch bhi bole jaa rahe ho ...aas pas dekho kitne log hain ...



Raj : arre yaha pe sab lovers hain woh samjhte hain mere feelings ko ...wase aaj koi mere liye itna saaz sawar ke aaya hain toh thodi tarif toh banti hain na ...


Raj : (cupped her face) tumhe pata hain ...mujhe tumne sabse achi baat kya lagti hain ...woh kya chez hain jisne mujhe tumse pyaar karne pe mazbur kar diya ...
Naina ne sharmate hue naa he ser hila diya ...


Raj : (kissing on her eyes) tumhari aakhe ...in aakho ne mujhe pheli nazar me he apna bana liya tha naina ...
(Kissing on her both cheeks) tumhare gaal... pata hain jab tum mujhe dekh kar sharmati ho toh yeh bina makeup ke he tamatar ki tarah lal ho jate hain ...(looking towards her lips) tumhare yeh hontho jab mera naam lete hain na toh ek ajeeb se khushi hoti hain mujhe ...asa lagta hain jase ...
Yeh kah kar

**** Raj bring his lips towards her ...naina closed her eyes, feeling his
breath against her face. She was breathing
heavily and his heart was beating fast...it will be their first kiss...
Both want to enjoy this moment but both are nervous at the same time ...
Soon Raj place his lips on her... & start kissing her deeply, Naina moan in pleasure ... his tongue
exploring every corner of her mouth... She pulled his hair and pressed her fingers on his back...
Both break their kiss... both were breathing heavily when after good minutes they broke the
kiss.

Raj keeping his forehead on her ...


Suddenly Raj phone start ringing...
Raj was lost in the moment ...


Naina : (blushing) Rajveer tumhara phone ...

Raj : (irritated) yaar ab romantic ho raha hu toh ab tum disturb kar rahi ho...



Naina : please Rajveer phone receive karo na



Raj muskurate hue apna phone apne pocket se bahar nikalta hain ...par ek pal me Raj ki muskurahat gayab ho gayi thi ...kyuki phone PJ ka tha ...jo sach Raj bhul gaya tha woh achanak se uske samne aa gaya
Raj shocked ho kar bas apne mobile screen ko dekhe jaa raha tha



Naina : kya hua Rajveer phone recive karo na ...ase dekh kya rahe ho ...


Raj kabhi screen ko toh kabhi naina ko dekhe jaa raha tha ...usse samjh nahi aa raha tha ki usne yeh kya kar diya ...
Ek taraf PJ thi aur dosri taraf Naina . Raj ne jane anjane dono ki feelings ke saath khelwad kiya tha ...



Raj : (phone recive karte hue) main busy hu PJ baat me baat karta hu ...


Yeh kah kar Raj ne bina PJ ke jawab ka intzar kiye phone cut kar diya ...



Naina : (Raj ke shoulder pe apna ser rakhte hue) kiska phone tha Rajveer ...



Raj : (in mind) main Naina se sach nahi chupa sakta ...I've to tell her ...


Raj : (closing his eyes) meri home wali biwi ka phone tha ...


Naina : (shocked) kya ???
Rajveer please asa mazak mat karo ...tumhe pata hain yeh mera first kiss tha ...maine humesha socha tha mujhe chune ka hak main sirf apni pyaar ko dugi toh bas tumhe de diya ...


Raj : (khud ko naina se dor karte hue) Main sach kah raha hu naina ...abhi do mahine phele he meri shadi fix hue hain ...
(Raj apne bare me naina ko sab kuch sach sach bta deta hain ...PJ se bachpan ki dost ...PJ ka uske liye pyaar ...usne shadi ke liye kyu haa kaha sab kuch )



Raj : (with tears) mujhe pata hain naina Maine bohat galat kiya hain tumhare saath ...kase tumse dil laga liya yeh jante hue ki ab iss dil pe mera koi hak hai he nahi ...kase???? Kyu kiye tumse pyaar ke waade Maine jab phele he kisi aur ka haath thamne ka waada kar liya tha maine ...(cupped her face) i am so sorry naina ..aaj mere pas tumse mafi magne ke alawa aur koi rasta nhi bacha hain ...



Naina : (still shocked) jhoot ...jhoot hain na yeh sab Rajveer ...tum ase kase kisi aur se shadi kar sakte ho ...tum mjhse pyaar karte ho aur main tumse ...(crying) please Rajveer mat karo mere saath asa mazak ...kah do yeh sab jhoot hain ...tum sirf mere ho ...mjhse pyaar karte ho ...


(Naina rote hue Raj ke pairo me gir gayi)
Naina : (crying bitterly) please Rajveer mjhse mera pyaar mat chino ...main mar jaugi ...tumhare bina ab yeh naina kuch bhi nahi hain ..
In kuch dino me maine apne aane wale kal ke hazar sapne saja liye hain unhe mat todo ...main un tute sapno ke saath jee nahi paugi



Raj naina ko uthata hain aur banch pe wapas baithata hain ...

Raj : (silently cry) Naina please aur muskil mat bano mere liye yeh sab bohat muskil hain ab mere liye yeh shadi karna ...jab PJ ko shadi ke liye haa kaha tha tab mujhe laga tha ki apni sabse achi dost me ek patni mil jayegi itna faki hain mere liye par ab jab tumse pyaar karne laga hu toh yeh shadi mujhe sau mauto se jada dardnak lag rahi hain ...

(apne aasu puchte hue) main PJ se kiya waada nahi tod sakta chahe ab main chahu ya na chahu yeh shadi toh mujhe karne padegi ...main PJ ka bharosa nahi tod sakta ...tumhara gunhegar hu main Naina tum jo saza dogi mazur hogi mujhe ...
(With lots of pain in his voice) aj se 10 din baad shadi hain meri ghar pe sari tayari ho chuki hain ...main do din baad wapas jaa raha hu mumbai humesha ke liye ...Chalo Naina der ho rahi hain hain hume chalna chaheyi

Yeh kah kar Raj waha se jane laga



Naina : (with stern face) apni saza nahi suno gay Rajveer

Raj peche mud kar Naina ko dekhta hain

Naina : (raj ki aakho me dekhte hue) tumhari saza yeh ki Mumbai ja kar tum mujhe apni shadi ka card bhejo gay ...main tumhari shadi me shamil hona chahti hu (raj shocked) apni aakho se dekhna chahti hu ki mera pyaar ab mera nahi raha ...



Raj : (shocked) asa mat karo Naina yeh saza tum mujhe nahi khud ko de rahi ho ... Kya dekh paugi mujhe kisi aur ka hote hue apni aakho ke samne ...kisi aur ki maang me sindur bharte hue usse magalsutr pahnate hue ...(naina yeh sunn kar dard se apni aakhe band kar leti hain)

Raj : tum yeh sunn nahi paa rahi ho toh dekh kase paugi Naina... Please mere liye yeh sab aur muskil mat bano...

Naina : (sadly smiling) maine tumhe tumhari saza suna diya hain ab aage tumhari marzi...


Yeh kah kar Naina waha se car ki taraf chali janti hain aur Raj bechara nirash ho kar uske peche chala jata hain ...


Do din jase do sadiyo ki tarah guzre the Raj Naina ke life me ...in do dino me in dono ne aapas me kaam ke alawa aur koi baat nahi ki thi ...


Jaha Raj guilt ki wajah se Naina se nazre nhi mila paa raha tha wahi naina tut na jaye iss dar se Raj se nazre chura rahi thi


Raj wapas Mumbai aa gaya par apna dil toh woh wahi delhi me Naina ke pas chod aaya tha ...PJ ne mehsoos kiya tha Raj me aaye badlaw ko par Raj har bar kaam ke pressure ka bana kar ke baat tal deta tha ...



In present time ...



PJ Raj ki nazro me jo dard dekha hai woh pyaar ka dard tha par un dono ki toh shadi ho rahi hain phir kasa dard hain yeh ryaj ki nazro me jo PJ ko nazar aa raha tha ...


PJ ne dhayan diya toh usne dekha Raj bar bar mahmano ki bhed me kisko dekh raha tha ...


Ji haa saza ke taur pe Raj ne naa chahte hue bhi Naina ko shadi ka card bheja aur Naina aayi bhi

PJ ne jab uss direction me dekha toh waha ek ladki khadi thi pink lehage me ...uski aakho me aasu the aur woh bas Raj ko he dekhe jaa rahi thi ...

PJ ko uski aakho me bhi wahi dard dekh raha tha jo Raj ki aakho me tha ...

PJ uss ladki ko dekhte he pahchan gayi kyuki usne rayj ke mobile me iski tasveer dekhi thi aur Raj se puchne par Raj ne yeh kah kar tal diya tha ki woh delhi me uski business partner thi ..aur saath me bohat achi dost bhi ban gayi thi ...


PJ ke chahre pe ek dard bhari muskaan aa gayi ab usse samjh aa gaya ki aakhir kyu Raj delhi se aa kar itna badla badla lag raha hain kyu Raj khush nahi hain kyu aakhir kyu ...????
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Superb update...amazing story...raj naina n ow...finish it fast
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Awesome os
Continue soon with next part
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aweaum
update soon
thanks for pm
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Ab main iske bare me kya khu hieee
Loot
To lia tha aapne aaj fir loot lia 😉
Love PJ n raj frndship
Raina first meet convo all were superb
Aww poor Naina
More over poor raj just for d sake of frndship he agreed to marry but PJ sab samajh gyi smart h
Waise Maine to read ki thi
Baki ka part b post kro waiting to read ahm ahm again 😳 😉
Edited by rkchandni - 8 years ago
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Wow...this was great...finally Raina here.. ..
Waiting for next part...
Thanx for the pm
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Wow!Superb ud
Yaar jaldi se ud karo
Wait nahi ho raha hai
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Amazing story

Pl cont that to soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Comment for #Tera_diya_naam story which is my birthday special story written by Aarti Gupta

First of all Thanku so much my dear friends for loving me innnaaa Sara...mujhe kuch bhi bulao yaar pyaar se kutti kamini MC BC mujhe tum kuch bhi bula sakte ho...mujhe pyar se boli hui har chij pyari lagti hai... hum naam usike bigadte hai ya funny names unhi ke rakhte hai jinse hum pyaar karte hai...aur aj mai itni special isliye to feel kar rahi hu...kyunki aap itna pyaar jo karte ho... in sab ke peeche ka kaaran aap sab hi to ho..Jo mujhe aaplog apni palkon pe bitha ke rakhte ho...right now I 'm crying in happiness...mai is qaabil bhi nahi hu jo itna chahte ho aap sab mujhe... I love u all...

Thanks a lot aarti Gupta for this story...for the time which u spent on n for me...I love janu...

Rajveer
Waise pj gol matol ab hui hai but kaash tab hoti is story ki tarah...
Haa yaar pj ka naam to real me aaj tak bahut logo ne nahi sahi bola hai... Jayati Patel...jyada tar logo ne jyanti hi bulaya hai

Pj aur rajveer bachpan ke dost...

Yes u r right I love PJ name..
Pj ko pyaar ho gaya raj se... wah ...aur pyaar to aisa hi hota hai Jo pata bhi ni chalta aur ho jata hai...
Subah se lekar shaam tak sham se lekar raat kar...bas tu hi tu...
ufff Mai to gayi.. pj ki shadi raj se...

Kaisi tadap kaisa dard...kaisa sunnapan.."""
Kahi raj pj se jabardasti to shadi ni kar raha...

Ek saath office...

Raj is gadhi pj ko samjhao ki pyaar kiya ni jata bas ho jata hai...

26 ka hogaya aur pyaar ni hua...kahi tu impotent to Nahi Raj...

Tu believe ni karta pyaar pe... but tere hormones kaha gaye

What aunty...waise sahi bola pj aunty nahi daadi Amma hai...

Sahi kahte hai log pj raj ki aunty...

Kamini pj raj ki baaton se hurt hogayi...

Hayeee mai Mar jawaa pj ki aankhon aansoo ni bardasht kar sakta...

Laga do kaan ke niche raj...itna serious lene ki kya jarurat hai..

Sachi muchi aur ni to kya...hug n kiss omg ..

Are chudail pj bataya kyu ni raj ko ki shaam ko tum dono ki shadi ki baat hone wali hai...

Obvious pj hai hi itni kamaal ki ...ki Raj ke parents to kya duniya ke har ladke ke maa baap ko pasand aa jaye...(kaash)

Raj tujhe Nahi karni to tu saaf mana kar de...

Abe baklol raj shadi nahi karne ka man hai to bol de...kisi ka man rakhne ke liye ...je kon si baat hui bhala...

Shadi 2mahine baad...pj tu shadi kar hi kyu ri hai...Raj ko chhod de kamini

Chalo business ke bahane hi...is chep se jaan to chhuti bechare raj ki...

Badhiya hua sagai cancel ho gayi

Direct shaadi...
Aila raj ko pyaar kaise ho gaya.."

Awesome naina ki entry...mind blowing...

To ye bat hai raj naina se pyaar karta hai...isliye pyaar pe yakeen hua...

Raj ko hua bhi to pehli nazar me pyaar... wow...to iska Matlab tu sach me aunty nikli pj...impotent wo nahi...kamini tere me hi namak ni hai...

Kuch sunai nahi diya...O pahle pyaar ne behra banaya...
Aapki''Ankhon mein lol...sahi jawaab...

Mai tera ashique aur kon..
Aji kaisi problem...hum to mare jaa rahe hai aapkr saath kaam karne ko...

Naughty raj...kaam par dhyaan de...naina pe nahi...

Us ajeeb se ehsaas ko pyaar kahte hai naina...

Tum bhi raj bolo naina... formalities ko goli maaro...

Waah kya dialogue hai ...kyu senior citizen wali line me daal ri ho...

Sahi kaha...rajveer to kam hi log bolte the...

Ab jab pahli nazar ka pyaar tha to waqt ka kaise pata chalega...

Aur kaisi shaadi kon si shaadi...

Waah naina bhi pyaar me pad hi gayi waise us trillion dollar wali smile ka deewana to koi bhi ban jaye to naina kya chij hai...

Izhaar-e-ishq bhi ho gaya

Lovers park...

Ab naina tum hi Sikha do na romance...

Shame on u Raj tune apni gf ki taareef ni ki...

Very bad raj

To kya hua kitne bhi log ho...Raj to puri duniya ke saamne bhi bol dega..

Haa aur ni to saare lovers hi to hai samjhenge hi feelings ko...

Naina blushes...

Yes naina ki aankhein hai hi itni khoobsurat...

What a romantic scene...

What an amazing kiss scene...well described...'' monu..

Bol kyu ni deta baklol ...pj ko saaf saaf jawaab de na...kya pata pj tere liye tujhe hi bhool jaye...(senti dialogue ho gaya na..)

Raj ye to galat bat hai...kam se kam bat to sun leta...

Hahahaha...home wali biwi...lolz sounds awesome...

Ye kya kiya raj tumne... gadhi pj ke liye khud bhi toot rahe ho aur naina ko bhi tod rahe ho...

Kamine sharm ni aa rahi ladki ko pairon me girne diya...

I'm with u naina... don't cry

raj is crying I'm crying for raj...

Kamini pj tujhe heart attack'" aa jaaye kissa hi khatam...teeno ko til til kar Marne se acha ek pura hi Mar jaye...

''''Good one naina achi saza sunai...

Kya se kya ho gaya...

Pj u r so intelligent baby...Raj ki nazron me dekh kar kuch to samajh...

Wah tu to sach me genius nikli...pj...mai awain hi galiyan diye ja rahi thi..

Wah meri jaan pj kamaal kar ditta...kya dialogue bola hai...''

Sahi kaha pj ...in aasoon ke saath achi ni lagti...tu croro me ek hai..naina perfect for rajveer...

Sahi kaha...Raj duffer ullu gadha... nalayak...kurbaani dene chala tha...''

Chup kar gadhe...ab bas pj bolegi...

Yahi to mai bhi kah ri thi...ki 3 zindgiyaan barbaad hongi...sabash meri sherni...'

Pj to humesha hi kamaal karti hai...

Waah rote rote hasaane ki ada to koi pj se seekhe but naina hassi kyu...kyunki wo aunty types lagti hai aur khud ko hot sexy bol rahi isliye...

Lallu raj...

Are haa naina kyu ni dost banegi...

SUHAGRAAT ki detailing

Dumbo to thi hi but kamine tu uske chakkar me khud dumbo ho gaya aur wo dekh kitni smart nikli...gadha ullu ka patha...

Tu baaj ni aayegi...
Kamini pj...kya taang khichi...koi ni raj god me utha ke chalega...

Hahahaha baklol raj wo bol gayi aur tu samajh bhi na paya...sach me dumbo hai tu...

Haa to aur ni to kya pj saari khushiyaan deserve karti hai...( kaash)

Kaash..

Sirf batein karoge bebkoofon...

Niyat ka kharab hona is must...

What ...an amazing surprise full on... full on...dhamaka for me 18+...ye to beyond imagination nikla...pahle tippi ne mere "shudh wachno" se shiksha le kar 18+ likha tha ab ek aur...uff I'm too happy...

Waah meri jaan awesome bravo''''''' (( akhir kisi ne to mujhe takkar di...)) waah..((are mujhe Pata hai darling ek 18+ 10 normal OS likhne ke barabar hai...maine dono types ke likhe hai isliye bol rahi hu... (don't take it personal...) aur waise bhi I'm sure tune Jo bhi likha hoga jaisa bhi likha hoga mujhse 10 time better hoga))

Awesome handwork on her body...
Yes like that raj...full marks..

Yes... aag laga do is sherbaani ko...

Oh Amazing...feeling ethereal kyu naina...

((
"Guru gud chela Chini"
maine kaha tha na 10 time better hoga ...u got full marks monu ))

Amazing...keep on...doing great work raj...

Why are u teasing her kutte...just do it...

Wow awesome feeling sexy...

chalo clear kar diya raj ne ki wo impotent nai hai

(Kamini Kutti... waise ye tune acha ni kiya poochna bhi mat... kyun)

(Oh great feeling chalo koi to hai ho batti gul ni karta...kisi ko to Frank bana paayi... Being a biology student...yaar koi badi bat Nahi hai...this is a biological natural process...aur iski khasiyat ye ki ye kisi bhi insaan ho ya even koi bhi organism ko seekhane ki jarurat nahi...sabko pata hai...aur agar hum ise explore kar bhi rahe hai to kya galat kar rahe hai...""haa wo alag bat hai ki yaha hum Mirch masaale ke saath pesh karte hai...par aap hi batao ki fusion milawat hibriding mixing kaha ni ho rahi aur agar hum bhi thodi si milawat kar lenge to kya galat hoga..)

Waah ending is awesome...mere pati aur meri beti ko bhi shamil kar liya... waah...AP sounds good ( but she doesn't like PATEL... rani ne apna naam ADITI SHEKHAR rakha hai..) sahi me mere Pati ko hi pata hoga ki kitne imtihaan dene pade the...bechare...

I loved the story... aarti... Thanku so much... kya likha hai yara... 18+ is a big surprise for me...loved the way u describe the 20-20 match...chota match tha but jordaar tha...IPL ki tarah khele raj naina...

Chalo mere do chele to tyaar ho gaye ek tippi aur ek aarti...I'm proud of myself...

YE THA MERA US WAQT KA COMMENT...BUT MAINE FIR SE PADHI HAI TO FIR SE COMMENT KARUNGI...

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