Broken Mirror-Love That Make You INSANE-Pt 8/CS-Pg 44/49, 1/6/2017 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan now only cares about his Misti , his concern and care shows his love but he is the one that destroyed her but why did he destroy her to such an extend
it also seems like Annie is now well but Daadima is she angry at the situation or at Maan or at Geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Dadi is angry on geet or maan sad for maan and geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
part 2 to 4 superb
maan take revenge on geet
he destroy her fully
now she is mentle unstable
and also they r married
maan is repending now seeing geet
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Posted: 8 years ago


Part 5



Maan left for conference room after telling Geet or say make her understand that don't go outside of this room putting some toys beside her . Kissed her forehead murmuring "love you"he left conference room...


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Maan's cabin



Geet looking here and there, feeling bore with all this toy's ,then came out from Maan's cabin and looking for Maan
Walking with her doll suddenly bumped with Sasha make Sasha's files fall on the ground that she was carrying so as Geet doll.


Sasha : What the hell you did bic****



Seeing her ignoring she picked up her doll and patted that doll like washing dirt from this . She look at Geet with her furious eyes and grabbed her doll from her hands throw it from the window 13floor from this office


Sasha : Go hell with your doll ...you bit****



Geet looking at her doll who is now crushed under of one lorry with her eyes moist .Sasha still not satisfied she hold her arms almost digging her nails in her soft arms make her turn to her forcefully...



Sasha : aeehh Bit***** I'm talking with you...you don't deserve MK in anywhere you bi****
before she could say something she got slapped by Geet hard then grabbed her hair in her tight fist


Geet : You are bi****...I will kill you bloody bi****


Slap




Maan Slapped her with his all force...then grabbed her arms in his tight fist making her flinch...he is coming from conference room but heard some noise, his legs taking in this way so as his clients. Everyone(His clients)saw that one girl abusing another girl...Maan could not tolerate that and turn her to face him then slapped her hard on her face


Maan : Bas ...enough bohat ho gaya...aab aur nahi...bohat bardasht kar liya yeh tumhari bachapana , I will send you mental hospital tomorrow from where I brought you
he burst on her with his anger not knowing his words breaking her apart ,unknown to all could her heart will tolerate this ...orrr...did he asked who is as fault in this ? no , he don't know he will regret later for that.


Geet saw him...but her eyes doesn't showing any emotion no tears no pain nothing ...her eyes turned blank from when Maan slapped her...her lips got cut for his hard slap...Looking everywhere she turn and leave slowly doesn't know where to go ...


Just then Maan come to conscious,realisation is too big what he did in his ANGER AGAIN, pushing his hair back with frustration then turn to his staffs.

Maan : Adiii...i want to hear everything what's happened here in my back




Adi : Ji woh..Maan sir...actually Geet mam...no no...Sasha snatch Geet mam...doll and throw that...from Window
somehow he completed his words



Maan eyes turn red with fury, for this brainless girl he actually slapped his Jaan...he just want to chocked her to death , he closed his eyes tried to make his nerves calm but Geet blank face come front of him make his soul shiver thinking what he did...


Dashed out from this office he goes after his Jaan fearing again losing her...tried enter to lift but it's not coming so stepped down from the stairs from 13floor almost running feeling extremely miserable thinking her blank face,,,again n again her blank face coming front of his eyes




Take a relief breath when he saw her safe but his breath struck when he saw her heading towards busy road tried to taking that doll...he ran for his life before his dark fate again snatch it from him...

Crushed her in his arms where she is wriggling continuously


Maan : Ssshhh ...ssshhh Jaan ...calm down please calm down...nothing happened



He patted her head trying to make her calm down but she is getting out of control in every second...fisted his board chest with her tiny fist trying hard to free


Geet : Meri ...meri ...mera baby...woh marr jayega...chodo...chodo...mera babayyy...marrr ...jayegaaa
sobbing pointing that doll still wriggling in his arms but he isn't leaving her. Maan is crying to see her sobbing like that , his heart bleeding to see his Jaan again in that condition that to for him...




Suddenly feel her sliding down in his arms, parted her only to see her unconscious

Maan : Jaan ...Jaan hey Jaan open your eyes Jaan
seeing her pale face he feel someone stubbed in his heart with knife...scoping her in his arms...he enter in his car with her then ordered driver goes for Hospital.


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Pacing outside of doctor cabin...doctor checking her what happened

After sometime doctor called him in his cabin

Doctor : Aiye Mr.Khurana...betiye



He took sit opposite of her where he saw Geet is still unconscious laying on the bed

Maan : Doctor any problem ?
His face showing how much he is in panic




Doctor : Yes Mr.Khurana


Precap : Past moments...





MG
Edited by MGMahika - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sasha is bloody bi****
And maan stupid moron without think he act
Is geet pregnant in past
That why she shout her baby
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Posted: 8 years ago
very sad feeling that sasha snatched her doll n hurted hern maan seen that n for geet this maan he is such a jerk never change slaped geet with out knowing the actual reason geet unconious hope geet became alright n never forgave maan he really deserve that n want a big slap to that sasha nice contine soon
Edited by cutical - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
great update, well written! this Sasha is so disgusting! Maan slapped Geet withiout knowing anything! he instantly regrets bt Geet left! Adi tells Maan what happened! Maan angry with Sasha bt goes 2 find Geet! Maan saves Geet! she faints! Geet wants her baby! Did Geet lose her baby? Maan takes Geet to the doc! its serious! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sad update.Omg!! Maan slapped geet 😡 😡 😭 without checking whose fault was it 😡 and that witch sasha 😡 😡 I just want to strangle her right now 😡 😡 poor geet is already lost 😭 and after seeing her doll fall and maan's slap and rude words, she has turned totally blank and has even fainted 😲 😭 what will happen next 😕 hope she recovers soon from this trauma of losing her baby 😭 and gets back to normal life 😊 when will maan learn from his mistakes, after losing geet forever 😭 😭 waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sad update
shasha is chudail she throw geet doll
maan slap geet ohh no
poor geet feeling sad for geet
maan realized what he did in his anger

waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
has geet lost her baby in past?

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