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Part 6-

" Geet dekhna iss dopahar ko hum chaat kha rahe hai ...pat jaroor kharab hoga..." Geet shrug her shoulder in return


" Kuch nehi hoga Pinky trust me " She ws enjoying road side good after month and don't care her friends warning...


" waise honeymoon pain kaha ja raha hai "


Merra asked with a wink...Geet stop eating for a moment thrn give a small fake shy smile even they are her childhood friends but she still couldn't tell them the truth of her marriage...


" Im sure Simla...you alwayd wanted to go there right..." Meera added teasingly


" Wow shimla...you and Maan jiju together in one blanket...doing.."


" Shut up " before they say more she stop them " We are not going anywhere. ..Dadima us not well even Maan is very busy so ..."

she stop she got a call...She surprised seeing ID and thought ' Why is Maan calling me ? ' but she can't ignore so pick up

" Hello "


" Where are you ? " Maan shoot her as soon as she picked up...Geet frowned hearing him


" Woh main...I am ..."


" Give phone to Dadima "


he said directly even before she answer anything but to her badluck her phone's battety dead ...uff iss phone ki battery aabhi jani thi . But why Maan called suddenly...' She bid good bye to her friends and went to KM thinking about his sudden call...


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" So like this you are taking care of Dadima huh " as soon as she enter Maan's angry voice stop her...


" Dadima is not fully well instead taking care of her you went to meet your so called friends . Didn't you the one who claim that you love Dadima and will take care of her ...all was lies right. "


Geet looked at him with confusion...and try to say something but Maan didn't let her and start his famous blaming session...


" I knew it ..you were just acting to be a good girl in real you are like other spoil brat . Dadima consider you her daughter and when she is sick you went out to eat those good for nothing road side food leaving Dadima alone " ...


Maan was going to hotel to attend a lunch meeting when he saw Geet along with her friends at road side..He was so angry seeing her there Dadima is fine now but still not fully well and he never thought Geet would neglect this matter like this.. even he called her to test if she lie or not and she just cut his call thats too irresponsible...


" ho gaya apka abb main kuch bolu ..I didn't leave Dadima alone " ...


" oh you mean to say that you left her in servants care " he answered sarcastically


Geet blood boil hearing him accessing her again and again that too even hearing her side...


" no Mr Khurana Dadima is not here she is in orphanage ...and before you start blaming me again let me tell you Dadima wanted to go outside even doctor said that we should let her go sometime ...and just thats why I took her there...she said she wants to stay till evening and seeing her happy there I couldn't say no...and about my adventure at road side was for your benefit...Dadima told me to take lunch for you I couldn't say no ...but I know this lunch plan is not good so I went to my friend home to spend the time and then we went to eat outside...now I hope you are happy with my explanation ...then let me go I just came to take Dadima's medicine. ..." saying this she left from there...


Maan felt guilty again thinking wrong about her But he won't admit it to himself...he knows he needs to say sorry but his ego won't let hi. to do it...as soon as Geet came he went before her...


" umm saare medicine le liya "


Geet nodded her head totally ignored him and went to drink water just then she noticed today's newspaper where is a picture of Maan and Zeenat from last week success party of his latest project...no matter what she said but its npt easy for her to see him with someone else especially when they are still married ' didnt she say that she will go as soon as possible then why can't he wait a little...can't he respect this marriage a litle much ' unknown to her a drop of tears fall ...' whats wrong with you Geet you always know Maan loves that girl then why are you crying over it ...you will set him free from this unwanted relation then why are start expecting things ftom him...' did she really start expecting from him ...her thoughts broke hearing Maan's voice...


" ah am look Geet umm you know its your fault...I mean umm you should inform me about your plan or else this wouldn't happen..." Maan wants to say sorry but in his ego he blame her for his mistake...


Geet fist her hand in anger wipe her tears and turn around to face him " yes you are right its my fault...I messaged you and you didn't check so yes its my fault...as always you are here in your blaming mood ...first you said me money hungry today spoil brat but you know what I don't care what you think about me...I don't care what you say what you do ...you are no one "


Geet doesn't know what she was saying she was only venting her anger ..." and one more thing you are not all perfect you also do mistake ...but never care to accept in your blind ego ...galtiya maan ne se insane chota nehi ho jata ...jo dusro pa galtiya thop ta hai unhe bhi khud ki galtiya kabhi maan leni cahiye " She left angrily without letting him say anything...


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Maan kept looking at her back thinking why he is feeling bad hearing her saying he is no one to her...isn't what he wanted but hearing it from her mouth pinch something in his heart. ..He is confused why he gets so angry on her and scolded her so much he could have said her to be careful and stay with Dadima but he didn't instead talked to her rudely ...deep down he knows why he did this he wants to talk to her ...theu live in same house same room but she never speak ...if she did that too related to Dadima's matter or else she never acknowledged his presence this is not going well with his ego...how can someone ignore him...its his job to ignore others ...all this just making him frustrated and he took this chance to vent out on her...but why he not feeling peace why this girl effecting him so much ...? Why he bother if she not talking to him ? he even didn't like that she chose her friends over him to lunch with... would he be angry on her if she went to give him lunch or would they lunch together no na ...' what are you thinking Maan you reslly thinking spending time with her yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi ..I gave too much importance to her thats why its happening ..now get back Maan stop thinking of her like she said im no one to her ...she is also no one to me ' ...
Edited by Keepdreaming - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
updated finally
sorry for delay I wanted to finish Sanam re thats why hold it for time being
now will try to update regularly
im not sure how many want to read or want pm .. please could you mention it in your comment it will be easy for me ...
will pm my regular readers. ..please just sent back a blank pm I will understand you don't want to read and trust me I wont mind at all...
@Khawishfan this update is for u...@ Padmaro i love your waiting icon ...that forced me to write
Enjoy
Edited by Keepdreaming - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the update
Liked it ..this geet is not week she knows how to reply back..maan'ego too big .their relationship going no where.thank for the update. I enjoy reading this story
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
As usual maan blamed Geet and quoted her to be a spoil brat
He yet again let out his frustration on her
Geet cleared her stand and told abt her perspective too
Maan was guilty abt his ego stopped him from apologizing to her
Seeing maan and Zeenat's photo together Geet vent out her helplessness and frustration on Maan
She said he is no one to her which pricked him
He could not understand his own feelings towards geet
He too said that she is no one to him !!

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Thanks for the update
Will be waiting for the next update
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I just caught up! Story is going so good.

But I really want to smack Maan! His ego is causing so much pain to Geet and eventually to his grandmother.

And why the heck is he still with Zeenat? If Geet did something like that??? I am sure he would jump to the wrong conclusion.

But he is a Man so apparently that is allowed.

I am so happy that in the last 2 parts, Geet has started speaking out to Maan. I am glad she is no longer being the timid one but that she has the guts to tell him when he is wrong.

Good for her! I wish the grandmother had heard this argument.

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