A gift inscribed on the heart..

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JNDSD~ 30th January, 2017 ~ A gift inscribed on the heart..

Over the centuries humans have found innovative methods of expressing affection and displaying it in some form or another, to convey that special meaning to someone in their life. These expressions have been portrayed in varied art forms and mediums, music ,poetry or song. Antiquity shows that gifts of nature were often sought by our forefathers to express their dedication to those they held in high esteem and love. In-scripted gifts, using flowers, stones, dried grain and foliage became a medium for "writing" , to convey messages of commitment, ardor or allegiance. In this episode, the rice grains, used by the CV's symbolize the inherent human quest for learning and acquiring knowledge too. In the past, humans, used rice grains, sand, clay, mud as a base to form marks, squiggles ,shapes, thus laying the basis of rudimentary forms of human need to convey meaning through word! Goes without saying that early expressions of writing and reading also took place upon natural resources through carving and inscriptions by using a small rock on variable surfaces some smooth, some coarse depending on the rocks. However making tracings and patterns with the help of fingers or toes on dry grains like lentils, rice , wheat were easier and I suspect an ancient means of conveying meaning in another form other than the spoken word. In the episode, the CVs present us with the still used popular method used by lovers to celebrate their beloved .That of inscribing their name ,on commonly, contemporary used trinkets like rings, bracelets or other charms that tickles both the giver and the receivers fancies.. the identity inscription of one's name sums up one's complete existence.. ultimate offering of one's self in the gift of love!

Vividha gets ready for the auspicious occasion , preens for the sake of love. The scene contrasts with that when she gets ready for the 2nd time to annul her marriage with Ravish. At present, she dresses up to seal her bond with Atharva. Yet , where in the previous scenario, she was apprehensive, now this bond is lined with the possible fear of Atahrva being attacked again by the unknown assailant. As if the anxiety of her heart reaches her beloved... flying he comes to her rescue to give a penny for her thoughts? The groom knows her too well.. she may contradict herself in thought and manner, but it hardly passes by Atharva !hence gallantly with smooth flair he displays his literacy skills by reciting a classical verse! to prompt her to know the reason for her pensive mood..? takes it upon himself and attempts to smooth her ruffled feathers! Tenderly Atharva, brushes aside her fears that nothing can separate him from her! the beauty , lies in their relationship of covering each other's back.. For it's her who covers his back, thus neither he nor she should be fearful.. it's their love that provides the armor for each's existence. His demand one kiss to seal their forth-coming , ongoing commitment.. instead he gets a push! and a shove! spelling not now! later.. when the time is right! His beloved who carries with herself the invincible might of Durga, also is clothed in the virtues of chastity .. perfect balanced woman! adapts to the need of the hour! Thus Atharva much to his dismay has to bridle his passion..

Atharva's, rustic , raw , burly charm.. is enough to impress the opposite gender of mixed age ranges.. then glides down the stairs, the woman.. he knew was meant for him the minute he set eyes upon her! even the wheels of time could not stop their souls from uniting .. now only prayers for eternal love.. beats in their hearts... and this moment now is a step to realizing their love till eternity...their eyes sing from the same song sheet... depart not from my heart.. and with this ring I stand spoken for you..but!!

Let the fun and games begin! and the getting to know each other, ice breaking between two families celebrations open! traditional handed down informal rituals..vividha to prove her literacy skills.. writes his name on the raw rice platter.. rice a bounteous grain for man to replenish, a gift of nature .The name Atharva refreshes her whole being.. it's as if nature created him for her.. and his gift.. to her is reversing a situation that went awry!! Atharva returns his mothers bangles back to Vividha's wrists as an act of duly restoration of what is rightfully hers.. as off! the formality is enough... and Atharva is brash enough to plant kiss on Vividha's cheek as an exclusive personalized gift from his side to the stunning woman of his dream.

Reading between the lines.. under the garb of lighthearted custom and practice Time to check vividha's literacy skills. In this case the light goes out and Atharva's desire to enlighten himself with the knowledge that it's his name scripted on her heart... suffers a slight black out ,but then all is clear as a lit bulb ,instead of his name its Ravish name on the platter... no guessing who is behind this?

A demented father, yet again tries to meddle around with what the gods decree ..atharva as Vividha's soul mate... KK virtually attempts to rewrite his daughters fate by wiping out Atharva's name by brushing off it and scripting the word Ravish in its place ...it's what he the father enforced before upon his daughter and does so again to go against the tide of destiny!

But the engagement goes ahead... no misunderstanding! no evidence! heresy! gossip! tattle! will suffice and survive! as the inscription on the heart is what matters! her heart boasts of his name and he can read it clearly ... thus Atharva shuts up societal wagging tongues of raking Vividha's past!which was bound to come up sooner or later. He also unwittingly, thwarts KK's further attempt at distancing them ..and thus the rings on each's finger symbolizes their love...

Heart to heart ..one to one... true-say, the situation is yet again retrieved by Atharva , Vividha is bailed out of a sticky situation..yet his obduracy is to further his bond with her..and solemnize the engagement. He knows it's not the end of the matter with Vividha. She will clarify her position... and such irony she speaks the truth, but under currant of the waves are expected for both of them to fathom both the helm and rudder of their ship of destiny. Their calling and commitment,to themselves.However his calm unnerves her and she insists on being understood!! she insists on raising his awareness there is something fishy going on.. but Atharva as always assures her that it's her word yes to marrying him without being led into it. Her willingness is what matters to him , not shady events.. Hence he'd rather she use herself constructively like suggest designs for the renovation of the old factory... future developments rather than the grim sordid past.. his plea is for renovating their bond!

The lurking figure of her father looks on from the shadows..eyes bulging with cruel smothering authority. The engagement has gone ahead , but he has achieved his target..by using the name Ravish to plant fear in his daughters heart..for it's by the power of their fear KK ruled over and bridled the females of his household.. hamlet53 30.1.17

precap... more doubts aimed to hit the missed target Atharva , pictures of Ravish Vividha instead of the blue prints.. transcripts of a past bond..

overall a pleasant episode.. celebrating an auspicious occasion. I wonder if talk of ill omen crop up tomorrow. Something tells me Atharva may pay heed to Vividha's fears..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello hammie,
The like button isn't working.tried it several times.


This is another fantastic take with a brilliant intro.How to express love?from the beginning of the establishment of society there must b something, na?which men used to share with eachother, sometimes exchanged what they had, and tried to make another happy.they didn't have words, no piece of paper, no mobile to text, no internet, no gift shops...but there was love n expression of love obviously, for which the world is now full of this human race.when two ppl r in love, no matter what language or form one use to let the other know that he/she loves him/her it still touches heart.those symbols written in the caves or stones or grains would b inscribed on the heart straightaway.

A very beautiful description of the romantic scenes between two.rice grain, means fertility, happiness , the end product of nurturing something. Vividha proposing atharva for marriage is the product of atharva's hard work to provide nourishment to their relationship, he stayed, he trusted, he understood, he waited with patience n now its his time to harvest, what he deserves. And vividha, yesterday's episode was one avatar of Durga, the one who protects the righteousness and defeats the evil, in today's episode to me its reminds me more of Annapurna avatar, for Shivji.

Thoroughly enjoyed everything u wrote, ur symbolism, covering each others back, the suspense u creat every now n then mentioning the evil...marvellous hammie.
Keep writing.
Ummm due to professional commitments I may not come online for a couple of days.hope u will bear with me. Jaana na dil se dur. 😊
Take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hI...Hammie...Loved the title ...
Will come back later ... 😊 ...Good day
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: simpleAnna

Hello hammie,
The like button isn't working.tried it several times.

does not matter. i marvel at you , you have never actually watched a single episode of this show and yet you manage to give such an interesting comment... 😕 how do you do it?
This is another fantastic take with a brilliant intro.How to express love?from the beginning of the establishment of society there must b something, na?which men used to share with eachother, sometimes exchanged what they had, and tried to make another happy.they didn't have words, no piece of paper, no mobile to text, no internet, no gift shops...but there was love n expression of love obviously, for which the world is now full of this human race.when two ppl r in love, no matter what language or form one use to let the other know that he/she loves him/her it still touches heart.those symbols written in the caves or stones or grains would b inscribed on the heart straightaway.
its on the basis of love that god created mankind and everthing else for human... but love encompases a wide variety of other sentiments as well..
A very beautiful description of the romantic scenes between two.rice grain, means fertility, happiness , the end product of nurturing something. Vividha proposing atharva for marriage is the product of atharva's hard work to provide nourishment to their relationship, he stayed, he trusted, he understood, he waited with patience n now its his time to harvest, what he deserves. And vividha, yesterday's episode was one avatar of Durga, the one who protects the righteousness and defeats the evil, in today's episode to me its reminds me more of Annapurna avatar, for Shivji.
👏 bravo for explaning the symbolic value of the rice grain...and your fine comments about their relationship..
Thoroughly enjoyed everything u wrote, ur symbolism, covering each others back, the suspense u creat every now n then mentioning the evil...marvellous hammie.
Keep writing.
Ummm due to professional commitments I may not come online for a couple of days.hope u will bear with me. Jaana na dil se dur. 😊 ... thankyou for adding worth to my take... my symbolism was amiss today... am more into action and ruction... me looking for some in the forthcoming track... oops sorry... forgot you dont watch the show... still appreciate you coming to read and comment on my humble views... many regards hammie
Take care.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Atharva is very intelligent person, and he knows very well vividha and his love for atharva, this tricks will not work for atharva and vividha, jab tak vividha khud nahee bolegee, atharva not believe her, even atharva janta hai, some body behind all this, i think kk is fool man, he want to hide himself from him and for every body, certainly by he wil reavel himself by this. and this time atharva will lose vividha at any cost.
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Originally posted by: mishiSam

Beautiful post! Thank you


hi mishisam, thanks for reading my work and posting an encouraging comment.love hammie
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful review <3 I am yet to watch the episode but your analysis makes it sound even more wonderful :)
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Originally posted by: _innocent_

Beautiful review <3 I am yet to watch the episode but your analysis makes it sound even more wonderful :)



hiya innocent, great to see you on my post..yes do see Monday's episode.. and thanks for your positive comment..love hammie
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for your today's take. Nice to see a neutral viewer who is invested in story than other things.
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Originally posted by: leavesandwaves

Waiting for your today's take. Nice to see a neutral viewer who is invested in story than other things.
Hiya mate.. 😛.. uk shows the episode at 5.30pm..its 13.42 pm GMT.. shall I say.. lets celebrate the effort of all the cast , in putting their best foot forward.. and each one bringing out the best for t viewers.,delight..

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