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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story dear.Arnav and Geet twins.but lost their parents so sad.maan bhai and Geet bhai enemy.both maaneet love each other.arnav love Khushi.but she not accept.arnav protected Geet like good brother.so sweet.lovely update dear.thanks for pm and continue soon 😊
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WOW!! superb update...loved it dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3
Prakash: You have changed a lot after coming to Mumbai.
Maan: You are still the same.

Maan meets his mother at home who gives him a warm welcome. He said, "I'm thinking of shifting to Mumbai as there is a bright future. There is no life here. We can continue our studies here. I have also looked for a place where I can do fast food business."

Mom: You are going there?
Maan: It is better that all of us go there.
Mom: I can't come there, If you want to go, you can leave tomorrow
She leaves.
Prakash: You have just come and you are talking about leaving the place. You have said these at the wrong time. I know some people here who will give you the place where you can start your business.
Maan and Prakash approach Peter for space.
Peter: Rent is Rs. 5000 per month.
Prakash's men said, "Are you going to give Taj Mahal?"
Peter: I don't have extra time. If it is agreeable for you fine, otherwise don't waste my time.
Prakash holds the collar and said, "First of all you are illegally occupying the space and don't pay even a rupee and you are charging high rent."

Maan: Prakash, stop it. I will speak to him.
Maan tries to speak to Peter but Prakash starts beating him up. Max's men come for help. Maan stops the fight.
Prakash: Your gentleman approach will not work here. Since you are new to this place, I will tell you this place is divided into Eagles and Scorpions. Eagles cannot enter Scorpion territory and vice versa.
Maan: I need to explore this place.
One the way, he sees Geet and starts daydreaming about her. He starts following her. Geet goes to the church. Maan sits there. After the end of the service,
Maan: I don't know you but feel like speaking to you. I am new to this place. It will be better if you show me the places here.
Geet: What are the places you saw here?
Maan: I have seen the church, beaches, and playground.
Geet: What about Max? He is the better person to show you the places. He can show you the stars during the day and sun during the night.
Maan is stunned.
Khushi and Savio sit for the lunch.
Savio: That loafer is highly irritating.
Khushi: Why talk about him? Let's enjoy.
Arnav and his friends come.
Savio: See that rascal has come.
Arnav and his friends enter the place. He said, "Hi guys. What are you ordering here?"
Savio: Chinese dish.
Arnav: How do you eat that?
Savio: Obviously, I chew it.If you want that you can eat,
Arnav: We are dieting. It is better you have it.
He engages Savio in his talk. one of his friends put the cockroach on his plate.
Arnav: Chinese also eat the cockroach. Enjoy.
The boys hide there.
Savio: These people have also come here.
Khushi/Roxanne: Forget it yaar.
Savio: How can I forget. I want to tell you that you are the most important...
Suddenly, he sees the cockroach. He shouts cockroach and leaves.
Arnav and his men smirk. He comes near Khushi.
Khushi: You are a ruffian. Why are you after me?
Arnav: You love me and are dating with him.
Khushi leaves.
Arnav with Geet and his friends discuss wooing Khushi.
Geet: Does she love you?
Arnav: She loves me but her way of flirting with men are different.
Geet: She will definitely come to you.
Savio is driving the car. He asks Khushi, "How is my new car?"
Khushi: It is good but you focus on your driving.
Arnav comes with Geet in his bike and catches up with the car. His friends too come there.
Savio is shocked.

Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Lol a roach. OMG he should be talking still and without looking put it in his mouth and eat it. Fabulous update enjoyed it a lot.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
prakash is getting violent with peter.good that maan stopped it.cant understand if prakash is negative or just grey.Maan is attracted 2 geet.wow.Geet refused to b his guide indirectly.hope geet becomes his guide n thus maaneet become closer.good that arnav spoiled Khushi n her stupid old bf's lunch date.it was so funny.Arnav says that khushi luvs him,but she is with savio.why does arnav feel that khushi actually luvs him?Were khushi n Arnav lovers before n they had a break up?y is khushi with this old man now?plz show all this in ur future updates.now arnav geet near savio khushi's car.guess d scene is going to be interesting.in arshi restaurant scene khushi is angry n arnav is smirking at her.but in the pic khushi too is smiling like arnav.it wud've been better if u had put khushi's irritable face pic there.
waiting 4 ishq n cheenikum
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Maan sees geet
Follows her
N tries to strike up convo
Whilst arnav is ruining khushis date n following her
Determined to woo her back
Let see between maan n arnav who gets what they want first
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update, loved it.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update...👍🏼...so Maan asked Geet to show him Goa but she tells him to ask Arnav...😉😛...Arnav puts cockroach in Savio's dish...🤣...Arnav and Geet plans in wooing Khushi...😉...thank u 4 pm...😃...

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