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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona
Lovely it is!❤️
Very well penned down!👏👏

Thanks a ton!😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Shot 2 - Episode 231/232

Of Arrogance & Hate

I saw him there, metres away from me. Still dressed in his typical Dev Dixit monochromatic suit, he was very much the same. Too early an opinion? He made a arrogant apperance. I hadn't even expect his arrival. To be honest, I didn't like the way the reporters turned away from me and crowded around him. And even worse, that sly smile of his marking his victory over me, sent me some chills. Disregarding the issue, I walked up to my seat and he sat in the very same row as me. Drinking some exorbitant wine and giving me all sorts of looks, I swore to give him back in his own way. Finally, my name was announced and I ascended the stage. A sense of pride overwhelmed me as I quickly reviewed the seven year long stony journey that I'd traversed. It wasn't easy but something had kept me going and now when I was standing at the podium, I felt as if all of those weary nights had paid off.
All said and done, it was time to show Mr. Dixit his spot. He wanted attracted popularity, isn't it? So I decided to give him all the attention he desired. In a flair, I actually thanked him (in a way) by crediting to him, the origin of my will to succeed and the beginning of a fruitful career. He'd made me the work oriented ruthless Dr. Bose that stood strong today. Emotions couldn't possibly touch me now and I wouldn't succumb to any weakness or as a matter of fact, love. The hostess took his name to award me the trophy. I flinched a bit, this went too far. In his gait oozing with attitude, he climbed up. I couldn't help myself with all the memories flooding back. That impulsive divorce, those arguments and dirty fights. He extended his hand, holding the trophy, towards me. I slowly approached to take it, when in a jerk, he pulled it back. I raised my brows in surprise, this had come as unexpected. He kept it close to him and shockingly declared that I didn't deserve it. Without waiting for a counter by me, he further announced that since he was the source of all my inspiration and vision, he himself was its rightful owner. In a jiffy, he walked off, with everyone staring. I was left dumbfounded and felt silly in standing there. He had yet again managed to put me down. I left hot headed and considerably irritated. Ah, I was forgetting. Dev Dixit he was and he found pleasure in snatching away my possessions. Good for him - I thought openly and decided to leave the venue without answering the questions shooter at me. As it is, my rewards was the goodwill and independence that I'd earned. And no one could take that away from me, not even his arrogance.
But wait, the reporters there took my silence for my weakness which wasn't acceptable to me. So I reverted back at them in full force. I clarified that I wasn't speechless but didn't intend to answer them. And at that same moment, he came and started mocking at my position. He tried his best to taunt me or whatever that gave him joy. For the second time in an hour, he'd made me feel a loser and worthless. But no, I wouldn't. Seven years was the price I'd paid to reach till this landmark. Annoyingly, I left. Not broken, not disappointed but a bit dejected. I felt pity on him, for he derived his happiness from someone's sorrow. I sat in the car and l left for hotel. Contradictorily, I was thanking my stars that I got rid of this horrible man very early in my life. Suha hadn't seen him, that itself was a bright hope. Although I'd given her the freedom to interact with her father but as a mother and even largely as a human being, I wouldn't want her to even catch a glimpse of this horrid beast in the skin of a man. As much as I don't wish to tolerate him, I can't stop thinking about him. And this hate looks appeals to me as another shade of love, testing itself in the upsurge of time.
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Edited by .Gryffindor. - 8 years ago

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@Morning.Flower

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Thank you Ramya for this gorgeous banner!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Now that was an Awesome Chapter

Sonakshi thinking that she'll get back at Dev and perhaps let him feel guilty but she had no idea about this changed persona the daring person he became

what I like about her is the fact she can stand firm and strong determined to accomplish her goals

your writing style is fantastic

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@Morning.Flower

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Jade0001
Now that was an Awesome Chapter

Sonakshi thinking that she'll get back at Dev and perhaps let him feel guilty but she had no idea about this changed persona the daring person he became
what I like about her is the fact she can stand firm and strong determined to accomplish her goals

your writing style is fantastic

Thanks a lot!

Yep, Sona's move backfired as his swag in unmatched now. Waiting now where this goes ;)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

That was awesome dear
When r u gng to update the next one

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Hari73

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

wow..nice... waiting for next part.

In serial.. it is definitely eshwari emotions will be shown more than sonakshi. For makers eshwari is heroine here. At least like you writers bring sonakshi's feeling, which is interesting.

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@Morning.Flower

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
That was awesome dear
When r u gng to update the next one

Thank you!

Well, I will update soonish :)

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@Morning.Flower

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pramila.harish
wow..nice... waiting for next part.
In serial.. it is definitely eshwari emotions will be shown more than sonakshi. For makers eshwari is heroine here. At least like you writers bring sonakshi's feeling, which is interesting.

I know! It's so irritating to see Ishwari's POV everywhere! That's why I thought of writing this

Thank you so much!

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@Morning.Flower

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Thank you so much everyone for the comments! Let's move on now!

Shot 3 : Episode 234/235
The Changing Times
I stepped out of the taxi and straight away went to the Reception. I felt that I'd left him behind but once again, I was proved wrong. There he came, with his walk bubbling with attitude and unwanted swag, to ask for his keys. The manager knew him well, I was a bit puzzled. It looked as if this Hotel had been his 'Home' since a very long time. I raised my brows in surprise but then I shifted my focus quickly, away from him. Why do I always end up giving my priceless attention to that disgusting man out there? I thoroughly reprimanded my thoughts and moved on with the keys. Awful coincidence yet again, he had his room right opposite to mine. "Cursed luck", I muttered to myself as WE entered the lift. Till now, the entire world must've gotten to know about our dwindling relationship and our outright fights, courtesy to this unabashed gentleman here. I turned my head away from him, I suddenly could no longer bear the very sight of him.
WE exited the lift and unconcerned, I knocked onto the door of my room, not even once glancing at him. He simply didn't deserve any bit of my attention. He must've knocked too and his knock was answered first as the door clicked open. Again, I was shocked to hear a cringing female voice. I couldn't resist myself and slightly turned my head behind to catch a minute glimpse of the girl. I don't know why but my head was boiling in anger. He took her in his arms maybe, I could feel it. I knocked harder on the door. Finally, my calls were answered as I scrambled in my room, firmly shutting the door behind my back. Whoever let that girl be, his lover, his girlfriend or even his second wife for all I cared.
I saw Suha, and for a second, I froze. What if she'd seen our fight? But then I was relieved to hear that she was in bed and hadn't seen the programme."Mumma, where's the trophy?", She asked me, her eyes full of anticipation and excitement.
I tried to divert her attention into other talks, called her my prize but to no avail. I marvelled at that man's shrewdness. In a single evening, I felt defeated multiple times. Just when I was about to reveal to her all happenings, I got a parcel. In it, was the trophy. Along with a note by him which read that he has no interest in the trophy but he just wanted to steal that winning moment from me.
"Fair enough", I thought and tore it.
I saw Suha clinging onto it and feeling so proud and happy. But she had to face the reality. Miss Sonakshi Bise wasn't used to taking things as an obligation. She knew how to snatch away her possession from others. I tucked her away to bed and asked the waiter to return the trophy to Mr. Dev Dixit.
For once and for all, I ended the long dragging matter.
As I slept, I thanked the stars. What if Suha had seen such a obstinate appearance of her dad? What if we wouldn't have separated and she would've become like him?
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The next day, I heard several knocks on the door. I opened it, only to find him standing. No, wavering in drunkardness. Yes, he was drunk and blabbering nonsense. I'd no idea how he was feeling, but what I couldn't tolerate was his dramatic outburst. I coldly dialled the security and asked them to arrest this reckless drunkard at my doorstep, for trespassing my privacy. I realised I had started to behave like him - stone hearted and stubborn. Arrogant and rough.
"Mere Rangon Mein, Kuch Rang Hai,Tere Jaise Bhi..."
Love did change people, afterall and I'd learnt this the hard way.

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Cheers.

Edited by .Gryffindor. - 8 years ago