Updt: August21st Pg50 Ch4 PMsLtr |One Last Time| Mature ArShi FF

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"I want to touch you all over your body and not in a f**k you way, but in a you're f**king mine way."
"I hate myself for falling in love with you, and I hate you for falling in love with her."
Arnav Singh Raizada has been secretly pining after his childhood best friend, Lavanya Kashyap, since he discovered the meaning of love. He doesn't give a damn about anyone else. He could care less if you were alive or dead, as long as you were out of his way. For him, other girls are dolls who are plucked from the shelf and discarded when used. When his parents insist that he marry Lavanya, he is ecstatic but at the price of his long-term mistress. He claims to love someone else but can't seem to let go of her.
Khushi Kumari Gupta has always been the good girl with outstanding grades in her final year of college, and a stable income awaiting her once she graduates. Her innocence is compelling along with her outfits that are often considered short. She doesn't have a mean bone in her body and sees the good in everyone and everything. Her only mistake is falling in love with Satan himself. She becomes just another doll to him, one that breaks beyond repair.
They grasp onto thin threads of lust, dare someone say love,
for one last time.

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Buddy this Account for PMs regarding this work.
This work will be updated once a week. A teaser will be posted before each chapter to notify readers that the next part is being worked on.
I had started this work a year ago but was not satisfied with it. This is my second attempt and hopefully it will be a successful one.
Please leave constructive feedback. Comments that criticize my style of writing/plot are welcomed to help me grow as a writer.
Proper response is expected for encouragement.
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INDEX
Synopsis - Page (1)
Chapter 1: Her One Last Time - Page (24)

Chapter 2: Leaving Him For The First Time - Page (32)

Chapter 3: The Time He Missed Her - Page (42)

Chapter 4: The Time She Hated Him - Page (50)
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Interesting start. ...Please continue soon. ..
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Welcome. ... 👏 👏 👏
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This sounds very interesting please do continue
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Edited.

The synopsis is intriguing.
However, I was more swayed with the previous style of writing.
But that was the prologue & this is synopsis so this should be fine.
It is well written though.
I look forward to what you changes you want to make that will satisfy your taste.

-Sanaya

Edited by -Elysian- - 8 years ago
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Wow.. Can't wait.. Pm please
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Prologue is very well written and story seems interesting. Do continue.
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Nice start plz update soon.

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