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Hello guys my name is yasmin and I have thought of another raj naina fic I have wrote one called love actually and I posted it in the fan fic forum but because my lap top had broke down I lost all the parts to it and couldn't update😭 and now that my mom has bought me another one I still can't update because I forgot the story line😭 so I decided to scrap that idea and start another one, this is a raj naina fic as they are my favourite😳 but the others have an equal amount of parts.😊
I am going to post the first part and if you like it please do comment because it will encourage me to write 😊
p.s Sweta2005 I know that you have been eagerly waiting for me to update love actually but I am really very sorry that I can't but I hope you like this one 😊
All five of them were sitting on a round table in one of the finest restauraunt in nainital, they came to celebrate new years together and because naveen, raj and Alekh had to leave the next day while naina and neelu had to join the day afte
''it's a beautiful night Alekh'' neelu told him"
''toh, apun kya kare'' he asked
''uff, idiout atleast you can ask me for a dance'' she said irritated
''apun aur dance, tu saatya gayi hain, apun ko dance vance nahin ata''
''oh c'mon Alekh, be a sport''
''apun ne kaha na''
''alekh jao na, go and dance with neelu'' naina asked
''bar naina, I don't know how to''
''neelu will teach you, right'' she asked looking at neelu
''sure'' she replied smiling
''teekh hai agar tu kehti hain to''
''yeah that's right, main poocho to, no I can't dance aur behen puche toh agar tu kehti hain to''
''shut up neelu, otherwise I'll change my mind'' Alekh warned
''sorry baba'' she said holding her ears
They both went on the dance floor and rocked the floor by dancing on sholo si sholo si from the movie shabd, they came back to their table
''wow Alekh, where did you learn salsa from'' naina asked amazed by his performance
''I took lessons ''
''WHAT!'' every one shrieked
''kya, chila kyun rahe ho'' he asked cooly
''alekh you took salsa lessons'' Rajveer asked not able to believe his ears
''haan toh''
''aapne mujhe kyun nahin bataya'' naina asked
''kyunki mujhe laga ki tu haasi gi''
''and why would I laugh, infact I am proud of you, that you learned some thing new and actually done amazingly well in it'' naina said proudly
''haan naina's right''' neelu agreed
''but if you knew how to dance why did you say you can't'' naveen asked confused
''I wasn't lying, I don't know how to dance, it's just salsa that I know''
''so you know how to do salsa and not any other dance, how come when salsa is the hardest dance ever'' naina tried to get things clear
''why are you frying my brain for and just chill, you told me to dance,I did now forget about it''
''I've already forgot about it'' Rajveer said with his mouth opened , while he was stairing at the entrance
''iss namune ko kya hogaya'' Alekh asked
''bata nahin, oy raj kaha hain yaar tu'' naveen asked
''saatve asmaan pe''
''saatve asmaan pe, raj tum teek to ho kya hogaya tumhe'' naina asked worried
''I think I know'' neelu said and pointed towards the entrance grinning
Everyone looked to where she was pointing and saw a tall hot girl standing there in a white short tube dress
''wow she is h'hot!'' naveen exclaimed
''ladki dekhi nahin ki fissle'' naina retorted
''yaar, kya item hai'' Alekh drooled
''alekh tum bhi, tumse to ye umeed nahin ti'' neelu said in a very dramatic way
''choro naa neelu ye ladke aisi hi hote hai, ladki dekhi nahin ki mooh se seethiya baaj ne laagti hain''
''absalutley right , dekho naa , humai toh dekh bhi nahin rehe''
''I think we should teach them a lesson'' naina said
''kaise''
Naina got up from the chair and went towards few good looking boys who were sitting on a table at the far end and neelu followed
''hi'' she said
''hi'' the boys said in chorus clearly confused to see two beautiful girls there talking to them when they don't even know each other
''we need a favour from you please don't refuse'' naina said pleadingly
Looking at their upset faces pleading them the boys agreed to help them
''achaa teek hain but what do we have to do'' one of them asked
''well..............."
''what! No way, what if they beat us up''
''don't worry that won't happen, and if they do you could hit them'' naina said
''yeah you've got our permission'' neelu added
''ok'' the boys agreed
''ab dekhna baccho yeh ladkiya kya jaalwe dikhati hain'' naina said smirking while looking at the boy directions, she turned to see neelu and neelu did the same and the two girls gave each other high fives
Ishq Mohobbat Pyaar ki baatein
Bekaar ki baatein
Jhoothe hai saare vaadein
One of the boys said while following naina pretending to check her out
Rasmein na jaane
Kasmein na maane
Kar woh jo thaane
Hum to begde sehjaade
The other guy sang while doing the same with neelu
Both the boys got together and sang and danced
[Hey Babyy je le de is pal ko
Hey babyy Kal ki sochenge kal ko]2
Aaja yahan mere sang aake zara jhoom le jaane jaa
the first guy took neelu's hand and twirled her around
Yun na jala Hoothon se hoothon ko zara chumm le jaanejaa
The second guy took naina's face in his palms and pretended to be kissing her
ho armaano ki in raaton mein
Aag lagi hai mere jazbaaton mein
Mujhko na eshe tadpaa
He lifted her up in the air and put her back down slowly and gently
Mean while the guys just turned there head after they saw the hot girl leave
''hey where are the girls'' naveen asked
''vaha dekh'' Alekh said shocked while stairing at the stage
''yeh kya hora hain'' raj asked bewildered
Ishq Mohobbat
Pyaar ki baatein
Bekaar ki baatein
Jhoothe hai saare vaadein
Rasmein na jaane
Kasmein na maane
Kar woh jo thaane
Hum to begde sehjaade
The two guys danced with the girls in the centre
Hey Babyy je le de is pal ko
Hey babyy Kal ki sochenge kal ko]2
Kisko pata jana dhal jaayeg kab jawaaniyon ka nasha" s
While pretending to be touching up neelu
Chal dilruba lele dono milke zindaganiyon ka mazaa
The first guy sang lifting naina in his arms
ho madhoshi mein kho jane de hota hai jo bhi yara ho jane de
Dooriyan rehena darmiyaa
The guys guys pushed them apart then pulled them back in their arms and again started singing
Ishq Mohobbat
Pyaar ki baatein
Bekaar ki baatein
Jhoothe hai saare vaadein
Rasmein na jaane
Kasmein na maane
Kar woh jo thaane
Hum to begde sehjaade
[[Hey Babyy je le de is pal ko
Hey babyy Kal ki sochenge kal ko]2
At the end of the song the two guys lifted naina and neelu in the air and gently put them back down
When they put them back down naina whispered in one of the guys ears
''you done a very good job'' and she started giggling and give him a hug while he just winked at her
Neelu and naina came of the stage and looked at the boys who were boiling with rage
''neelu could you smell something burning'' naina asked sniffing
''haan, I can , o wait it's just the boys'' neelu said laughing and give high five to naina
''what the hell were you two doing up there'' Alekh snapped
''kyun are you blind, dance kare tai'' naina snapped back
''iss taara chipak chipak ke'' Rajveer asked furiously
''kyun koi problem hai'' naina asked in the same tone
''haan hai, aaj to tum dono nai kar liya ainda se agar kiya toh'' naveen threatened
''toh kya'' neelu asked
''you girl's are absolutely shameless'' Alekh snapped
''WHAT!''
The two girls looked at each other and then the boys and stormed out of there
''kya samaj tai hain aapne aap ko, Idiouts, fool'' naina cursed
''aab dekh tai hain ghar kaise jaate hain'' neelu said while twirling the car keys in her finger
Naina looked shocked and asked ''how the hell did you manage to get that''
''when we were arguing inside, I slipped my hand inside Alekh's pocket and grabbed the keys
''good job'' naina said grinning, and the two girls got in the car and drove away laughing,
mean while inside the resaturaunt the boys just paid for the bills and were heading outside
''yeh ladkiyo ko ho kya gaya'' naveen asked confused
''bata nahin, god but that was disgusting, itne chipak ke naach rehe tai , jaisi ki na jaane kitne sadhyo se jaante hain''
''un dono se toh yeh umeed nahin thi'' Alekh said
The boys got out of the restauraunt, to find the girls not there and the car had also disappeared
''ladkiya aur car dono gayaab, iska matlab'''
''the girls have took the car'' they all said
''alekh tu neelu ko phone kar'' raj told Alekh and Alekh done as he was told but their was no point neelu wasn't picking up her phone
''naina ko try kar, shayad voh apna phone utaa de'' naveen advised
Alekh rang naina's phone aswell, and as naveen guessed she picked her phone up, Alekh put the phone on speaker and so did naina
''naina where are you'' Alekh asked
''on our way home kyun''
''have you took the car''
''well, duh other wise how would we reach home''
''aab hum ghar kaise poche''
''we don't know that, make your way home your self''
''naina, just wait till we get home, we won't leave you'' naveen fumed
''choro gai toh tab jab pakhro ge'' neelu teased
''you girls just wait and watch'' Rajveer said and ended the call
''wow, what a great way to start the new year'' raj said sarcastically
''ab ghar kaise pohuche'' naveen asked
''taxi aur kaise''
''taxi aur kaise,(raj mimicked Alekh) taxi ki strike hain''
''I forgot, I guess we have to walk''</font></font></font>[/P]
The boys sighed and started walking meanwhile the girls reached home and headed straight to bed
''good night neelu'' naina said yawning
''good night'' neelu replied and the two girls went to their rooms and went to sleep
Meanwhile on the road the boys were tired of walking
''yaar aur kitna chalna parega'' Alekh asked
''we are nearly there, we just have to walk for another half an hour'' naveen said breathlessly
''thank god, vaarna meri toh pair he toot jaate, phir duty kaun resume karta'' raj said tired
''yaar, apun ko duty ki yaad maat dila, phirse uss mucchad se milna padega''
Half an hour later the boys reached home and crashed into their bed, they decided that they'll see the girls tomorrow, but the next morning'.......
when all the boys had woke up and went downstairs, they saw that the girls were already there eating their breakfast quitley, at that moment they were going to blast at the girls but seeing an angry expression on their face they didn't say anything and sat down, none of them talking, after breakfast they went back in their room and started packing their bag, while downstairs the girls were cleaning up
''it worked naina'' neelu squealed quietly so the boys can't hear
''I told you, they can't bear the silent treatment'' naina said smiling
They went back to cleaning up when they saw that the boys were coming downstairs with their bags
''emmm, we are going'' naveen started saying
But there was no reply
''tum dono kaal ajaana'' Alekh said
But still they didn't say any thing
''look cadets, we are your teachers, you have to listen to us'' Rajveer said sternly
But still there was no reply
''shut up raj, if you behave like that, they will change their decision of joining KMA'' naveen said
''toh kya karu, I can't bear their silent treatment, jaab ki galti un dono ki thi''
That was it naina looked at raj furiously and just ran upstairs, while the rest just glared at him
'ab kya kiya maine''
''go and talk to her''' while we talk to Neelu and try to find out'''' that's if she talks to us'' Alekh said
Raj just nodded his head and went upstairs in naina's room and found her packing her bag, raj hated it when naina got angry, because she never blasted at any one but she always used the silent treatment which hurt like hell
''naina'' raj called out softly but he got no reply, so he sat down on her bed and was just stairing at her while she was packing her bag
''naina, batao toh sahi humne kiya kya, jo itna gussa ho humse, agar batao gi nahin toh hume bata kaise chale ga'' raj pleaded but they was still no reply, he decided he had enough and he angrily grabbed her hand and pushed her on the wall while slamming his fist on to the wall
''ab tumhare naakre choro aur bataou hua kya, humne aisa kya kar diya'' he shouted
She tried to move away but raj trapped her in between his arms
I am going to post the first part and if you like it please do comment because it will encourage me to write 😊
p.s Sweta2005 I know that you have been eagerly waiting for me to update love actually but I am really very sorry that I can't but I hope you like this one 😊
All five of them were sitting on a round table in one of the finest restauraunt in nainital, they came to celebrate new years together and because naveen, raj and Alekh had to leave the next day while naina and neelu had to join the day afte
''it's a beautiful night Alekh'' neelu told him"
''toh, apun kya kare'' he asked
''uff, idiout atleast you can ask me for a dance'' she said irritated
''apun aur dance, tu saatya gayi hain, apun ko dance vance nahin ata''
''oh c'mon Alekh, be a sport''
''apun ne kaha na''
''alekh jao na, go and dance with neelu'' naina asked
''bar naina, I don't know how to''
''neelu will teach you, right'' she asked looking at neelu
''sure'' she replied smiling
''teekh hai agar tu kehti hain to''
''yeah that's right, main poocho to, no I can't dance aur behen puche toh agar tu kehti hain to''
''shut up neelu, otherwise I'll change my mind'' Alekh warned
''sorry baba'' she said holding her ears
They both went on the dance floor and rocked the floor by dancing on sholo si sholo si from the movie shabd, they came back to their table
''wow Alekh, where did you learn salsa from'' naina asked amazed by his performance
''I took lessons ''
''WHAT!'' every one shrieked
''kya, chila kyun rahe ho'' he asked cooly
''alekh you took salsa lessons'' Rajveer asked not able to believe his ears
''haan toh''
''aapne mujhe kyun nahin bataya'' naina asked
''kyunki mujhe laga ki tu haasi gi''
''and why would I laugh, infact I am proud of you, that you learned some thing new and actually done amazingly well in it'' naina said proudly
''haan naina's right''' neelu agreed
''but if you knew how to dance why did you say you can't'' naveen asked confused
''I wasn't lying, I don't know how to dance, it's just salsa that I know''
''so you know how to do salsa and not any other dance, how come when salsa is the hardest dance ever'' naina tried to get things clear
''why are you frying my brain for and just chill, you told me to dance,I did now forget about it''
''I've already forgot about it'' Rajveer said with his mouth opened , while he was stairing at the entrance
''iss namune ko kya hogaya'' Alekh asked
''bata nahin, oy raj kaha hain yaar tu'' naveen asked
''saatve asmaan pe''
''saatve asmaan pe, raj tum teek to ho kya hogaya tumhe'' naina asked worried
''I think I know'' neelu said and pointed towards the entrance grinning
Everyone looked to where she was pointing and saw a tall hot girl standing there in a white short tube dress
''wow she is h'hot!'' naveen exclaimed
''ladki dekhi nahin ki fissle'' naina retorted
''yaar, kya item hai'' Alekh drooled
''alekh tum bhi, tumse to ye umeed nahin ti'' neelu said in a very dramatic way
''choro naa neelu ye ladke aisi hi hote hai, ladki dekhi nahin ki mooh se seethiya baaj ne laagti hain''
''absalutley right , dekho naa , humai toh dekh bhi nahin rehe''
''I think we should teach them a lesson'' naina said
''kaise''
Naina got up from the chair and went towards few good looking boys who were sitting on a table at the far end and neelu followed
''hi'' she said
''hi'' the boys said in chorus clearly confused to see two beautiful girls there talking to them when they don't even know each other
''we need a favour from you please don't refuse'' naina said pleadingly
Looking at their upset faces pleading them the boys agreed to help them
''achaa teek hain but what do we have to do'' one of them asked
''well..............."
''what! No way, what if they beat us up''
''don't worry that won't happen, and if they do you could hit them'' naina said
''yeah you've got our permission'' neelu added
''ok'' the boys agreed
''ab dekhna baccho yeh ladkiya kya jaalwe dikhati hain'' naina said smirking while looking at the boy directions, she turned to see neelu and neelu did the same and the two girls gave each other high fives
Ishq Mohobbat Pyaar ki baatein
Bekaar ki baatein
Jhoothe hai saare vaadein
One of the boys said while following naina pretending to check her out
Rasmein na jaane
Kasmein na maane
Kar woh jo thaane
Hum to begde sehjaade
The other guy sang while doing the same with neelu
Both the boys got together and sang and danced
[Hey Babyy je le de is pal ko
Hey babyy Kal ki sochenge kal ko]2
Aaja yahan mere sang aake zara jhoom le jaane jaa
the first guy took neelu's hand and twirled her around
Yun na jala Hoothon se hoothon ko zara chumm le jaanejaa
The second guy took naina's face in his palms and pretended to be kissing her
ho armaano ki in raaton mein
Aag lagi hai mere jazbaaton mein
Mujhko na eshe tadpaa
He lifted her up in the air and put her back down slowly and gently
Mean while the guys just turned there head after they saw the hot girl leave
''hey where are the girls'' naveen asked
''vaha dekh'' Alekh said shocked while stairing at the stage
''yeh kya hora hain'' raj asked bewildered
Ishq Mohobbat
Pyaar ki baatein
Bekaar ki baatein
Jhoothe hai saare vaadein
Rasmein na jaane
Kasmein na maane
Kar woh jo thaane
Hum to begde sehjaade
The two guys danced with the girls in the centre
Hey Babyy je le de is pal ko
Hey babyy Kal ki sochenge kal ko]2
Kisko pata jana dhal jaayeg kab jawaaniyon ka nasha" s
While pretending to be touching up neelu
Chal dilruba lele dono milke zindaganiyon ka mazaa
The first guy sang lifting naina in his arms
ho madhoshi mein kho jane de hota hai jo bhi yara ho jane de
Dooriyan rehena darmiyaa
The guys guys pushed them apart then pulled them back in their arms and again started singing
Ishq Mohobbat
Pyaar ki baatein
Bekaar ki baatein
Jhoothe hai saare vaadein
Rasmein na jaane
Kasmein na maane
Kar woh jo thaane
Hum to begde sehjaade
[[Hey Babyy je le de is pal ko
Hey babyy Kal ki sochenge kal ko]2
At the end of the song the two guys lifted naina and neelu in the air and gently put them back down
When they put them back down naina whispered in one of the guys ears
''you done a very good job'' and she started giggling and give him a hug while he just winked at her
Neelu and naina came of the stage and looked at the boys who were boiling with rage
''neelu could you smell something burning'' naina asked sniffing
''haan, I can , o wait it's just the boys'' neelu said laughing and give high five to naina
''what the hell were you two doing up there'' Alekh snapped
''kyun are you blind, dance kare tai'' naina snapped back
''iss taara chipak chipak ke'' Rajveer asked furiously
''kyun koi problem hai'' naina asked in the same tone
''haan hai, aaj to tum dono nai kar liya ainda se agar kiya toh'' naveen threatened
''toh kya'' neelu asked
''you girl's are absolutely shameless'' Alekh snapped
''WHAT!''
The two girls looked at each other and then the boys and stormed out of there
''kya samaj tai hain aapne aap ko, Idiouts, fool'' naina cursed
''aab dekh tai hain ghar kaise jaate hain'' neelu said while twirling the car keys in her finger
Naina looked shocked and asked ''how the hell did you manage to get that''
''when we were arguing inside, I slipped my hand inside Alekh's pocket and grabbed the keys
''good job'' naina said grinning, and the two girls got in the car and drove away laughing,
mean while inside the resaturaunt the boys just paid for the bills and were heading outside
''yeh ladkiyo ko ho kya gaya'' naveen asked confused
''bata nahin, god but that was disgusting, itne chipak ke naach rehe tai , jaisi ki na jaane kitne sadhyo se jaante hain''
''un dono se toh yeh umeed nahin thi'' Alekh said
The boys got out of the restauraunt, to find the girls not there and the car had also disappeared
''ladkiya aur car dono gayaab, iska matlab'''
''the girls have took the car'' they all said
''alekh tu neelu ko phone kar'' raj told Alekh and Alekh done as he was told but their was no point neelu wasn't picking up her phone
''naina ko try kar, shayad voh apna phone utaa de'' naveen advised
Alekh rang naina's phone aswell, and as naveen guessed she picked her phone up, Alekh put the phone on speaker and so did naina
''naina where are you'' Alekh asked
''on our way home kyun''
''have you took the car''
''well, duh other wise how would we reach home''
''aab hum ghar kaise poche''
''we don't know that, make your way home your self''
''naina, just wait till we get home, we won't leave you'' naveen fumed
''choro gai toh tab jab pakhro ge'' neelu teased
''you girls just wait and watch'' Rajveer said and ended the call
''wow, what a great way to start the new year'' raj said sarcastically
''ab ghar kaise pohuche'' naveen asked
''taxi aur kaise''
''taxi aur kaise,(raj mimicked Alekh) taxi ki strike hain''
''I forgot, I guess we have to walk''</font></font></font>[/P]
The boys sighed and started walking meanwhile the girls reached home and headed straight to bed
''good night neelu'' naina said yawning
''good night'' neelu replied and the two girls went to their rooms and went to sleep
Meanwhile on the road the boys were tired of walking
''yaar aur kitna chalna parega'' Alekh asked
''we are nearly there, we just have to walk for another half an hour'' naveen said breathlessly
''thank god, vaarna meri toh pair he toot jaate, phir duty kaun resume karta'' raj said tired
''yaar, apun ko duty ki yaad maat dila, phirse uss mucchad se milna padega''
Half an hour later the boys reached home and crashed into their bed, they decided that they'll see the girls tomorrow, but the next morning'.......
when all the boys had woke up and went downstairs, they saw that the girls were already there eating their breakfast quitley, at that moment they were going to blast at the girls but seeing an angry expression on their face they didn't say anything and sat down, none of them talking, after breakfast they went back in their room and started packing their bag, while downstairs the girls were cleaning up
''it worked naina'' neelu squealed quietly so the boys can't hear
''I told you, they can't bear the silent treatment'' naina said smiling
They went back to cleaning up when they saw that the boys were coming downstairs with their bags
''emmm, we are going'' naveen started saying
But there was no reply
''tum dono kaal ajaana'' Alekh said
But still they didn't say any thing
''look cadets, we are your teachers, you have to listen to us'' Rajveer said sternly
But still there was no reply
''shut up raj, if you behave like that, they will change their decision of joining KMA'' naveen said
''toh kya karu, I can't bear their silent treatment, jaab ki galti un dono ki thi''
That was it naina looked at raj furiously and just ran upstairs, while the rest just glared at him
'ab kya kiya maine''
''go and talk to her''' while we talk to Neelu and try to find out'''' that's if she talks to us'' Alekh said
Raj just nodded his head and went upstairs in naina's room and found her packing her bag, raj hated it when naina got angry, because she never blasted at any one but she always used the silent treatment which hurt like hell
''naina'' raj called out softly but he got no reply, so he sat down on her bed and was just stairing at her while she was packing her bag
''naina, batao toh sahi humne kiya kya, jo itna gussa ho humse, agar batao gi nahin toh hume bata kaise chale ga'' raj pleaded but they was still no reply, he decided he had enough and he angrily grabbed her hand and pushed her on the wall while slamming his fist on to the wall
''ab tumhare naakre choro aur bataou hua kya, humne aisa kya kar diya'' he shouted
She tried to move away but raj trapped her in between his arms
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