Shivika Short fiction : The Touch 'O' clock! Part 6 final updated..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Guys, am Ratika and have been reading as a silent reader, I am a lover of passionate fictions, am writing one, hope you all will like it.

"The Touch 'O' clock"


"When love strikes and you don't accept it, it will hit you hard and through all possible ways, it will control your body, mind soul, it's just ego that runs away from it.."

"Anika stop!" Shivaay stops her from running away, he grabs her wrist, pushes her body with his and tug her against the wall.
He is angry about her being running away from him lately, not knowing the reason, not understanding her behavior, his brings his face intentionally so close to her's " Batao, mujhe what happened?" he asked in his husky deep voice.

"Na..nothing" Anika fumbles,escaping her eyes to meet him as she know she can't go week, she knows this man is coming close to her heart but get a chance, he will again push her to the pool.
He gets more close, turns his like hers so that her skin gets the effect from his beard.
"I won't leave you until you speak" he speaks.
"Shivaay, I need to go, I have work" informing him sternly.
Shivaay smirks knowing how he has started to put an effect on her, thinking how tough it is for her to relax her spine. He loosens the grips, she notices and pushes him, just then Tia enters and witness how Shivaay holds her wrist when Anika is just about to cross him
"Shivaay baby" she speaks with little frustration.
As he stops Anika, holding her wrist, he doesn't leave her hand knowing Tia is coming close to him and stands right infront of him and between him and Anika.
"Shivaay baby, am here why are you holding her, just leave her"
he reciprocates Tia's words just to make Anika jealous, he built an image of high class people love high class people, right then by grasping Tia in an embrace with his other hand and holding Anika by other.
Tia feels happy and there Anika felt a grunge in her heart. Shivaay knows how badly the effect has gone, due to this, Anika chides her hands harsh and walks off.
When she is about to reach the door open and walk, Shivaay speaks "Tia we will go on to a lunch date in an hour"
Nothing much has been said afterwards or discussed for an hour till the time She see both of them leaving Oberoi Mansion.

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minamma thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh now u getting to the point
But i want a green eye monster thats shivaay
Let him pay for what he did just now to my baby doll
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg omg omg...this is fabulous. ..I like the way u started the story...I hope u uptate next part soon...all the best for the new story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
Why I'm thinking Shivay's plan will backfire 😆..

Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous
Update soon ok? Cant wait to see if shivaays plan s backfiring😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update soon Nd PM me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

" let's sit back and watch,
how love unfolds destiny,
because when love strikes,
even destiny gives forefront to love"

"I am not giving into this thing...called..love stupid love" Anika thinks as she see them both leaving the mansion. To show Shivaay that she hardly cares, intentionally comes forward, folds her hands in front and watches as if she is seeing a game live.
Whereas Shivaay thinks of making her jealous, but as he did all actions to make her jealous, she smiled to backfire his antiques.
He turns back to leave with Tia thinking "what...she is not jealous" he gets thinking and feeling deprived of Anika and too much of Tia, makes him stern, he pulls Tia hard towards him and walks straight.

Later that night when he comes back, he just want to see her, he finds her near pool, sitting and lost somewhere
" huh! Wow Anika, must be happy na to see me with Tia" he disturbs her with his words, but he himself is very much frustrated.
She doesn't reply instead want to ignore him, she gets up didn't look at him and is about to pass when he pulls her once again, pushes her against the same wall comes in same situation like was in the morning. In addition, this time she is replying his words with eyes, she is looking straight.
" Really Anika, first ignore, then tolerating me with Tia and now this, what are you thinking..haan" he grabs her hand tighter
"Mere na farak padne se aapko itna farak Kyun pad raha hai" she asks staright.
"Anika" he voice her in anger.
"Don't forget, you have a lot to give me" he loses his temper and speaks rubbish.
"What do I have to give?"
" Money Anika money" he replies to her question thick.
"In that case, you too have to return me something" he hears her sound equal. He gives her pain holding her even tighter.
"My time, respect and everything that you took Shivaay" she cries yet confident.
" that day you took everything that I can call mine Shivaay, someday I can give back your money to you but can you ever give me back those..." She continues but get cuts
"Anika" he cuts her as he feels guilty.
"Anika, there is something that I want you to know and try for even once just for the sake of it, understand what I can't say" Shivaay request her still holding her..
She see him with alone tear in his eye that breaks her and she hates this, to break this situation, she pushes him and turns away.
Edited by ratika89 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Itna chotu update
Like why
Kyu
But neverthless its good
Taste ur own medicine shivaay
Next time we want a lamba wala update though
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: minamma

Itna chotu update

Like why
Kyu
But neverthless its good
Taste ur own medicine shivaay
Next time we want a lamba wala update though

😆 sorry but am still updating..

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