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Swaatii

@Swaatii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#471

I love this story
. please don't care about people who were mocking... you go girl!! we are with you.
I am a huge fan of this story. it's awesome!!!! waiting for the next update

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 8 years ago

#472

Nice chapter😊

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amita

@star_fan1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#473

Interesting and different story

Just read it in one go

Must say very beautifully and brilliantly written

Really Loved it too much

Want to know wat was the scerate Arnav wanted to know from Payal

Waiting for next update eagerly

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#474

Amazing story

Looking forward to read more but would wanna say onething...arnav slapping khushi wasn't wrong as per the story...coz acc to me it was the demand of the scene

You nailed it girl...👍🏼

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-BarunTheASR-

@-BarunTheASR-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#475

"It wasn't decided that Payal has to die... it wasn't..." what does this mean? Some things were pre decided?

"Then whose kid was it? Akash?" It could be a possibility. Come on Arnav.Grab the clue, find and investigate Akash soon.

Maybe Payal is not dead. Wow atlast a little hope. Why that Malik has so much vengeance against Payal? Who has ordered him to kill Payal?

Akash dead? Really? How???

New charcters Mary and Vidyut. Do they have any connection to the murder? What problems Payal had with the father son duo in hospital?

This update sheds more light on the story. People in SHIELD are not the only one to be suspected here definitely.

Hope you give us the next update soon. Thanks a lot for the pm.

I read those negative comments and its really very very sick. Writing is not at all an easy job. And to ridicule it by posting such cheap comments is the worst thing to do. If there was an option to dislike those posts, I would have done that outright.

You are a fabulous writer and this is one of the best crime thriller im reading now. You have many genuine readers who really really love your story. So please leave the negativity aside and go on with your story. I personally feel the number of likes do not decide an author's brilliant writing. And you are an exceptional writer. We are always there to support you.

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#476

Awesome move.. from arnav he did some recording...

or khushi she is waiting to end her life...

not wise

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#477

there is something deep arnav involvement...

is he hiding something...

so he knows payal...that is only think explain

about his behavior

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suji5

@suji5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#478

Interesting update
Payal was missing before that goon malik going to kill her..
Where is she?
She really died?

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sisgeo

@sisgeo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#479

I understand you don't like violence and wish to discontinue the storyline. I'd suggest you to do the same without announcing it in uppercase.

Originally posted by: --Scarlett--
I'm sorry too, I understand I was rude but when Arnav slapped Khushi twice I lost my cool... poor girl was traumatized and he slapped her?! maybe he could have stopped her by pinning her to wall like it happens... okay he was hammered but still? I shouldn't have said all that things... something in my personal life is really going wrong and I guess I took it on you when you differed from what I said! I understand ur view indeed is different from mine and whatever you do with it is none of my business!

All I can say I'm a weak hearted and I quit this story of such things and scenes like drunk women, slapping girls continue and... I'M SORRY! I QUIT THIS STORY!!