Ye panaahe sajde mein tere jhuke- Teaser on pg 135 on 5/4

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Hi friends today I m here with new story as today again is someone's birthday and as per ritual started by Raksha I m wishing her by gifting a new story to her .

Oh sorry friends ,forget to tell her name ,she is " Mamta " aka " mamtasinghla",a very sincere reader of not only mine but of all .

So friends come ,let's wish her together to make her day happy and memorable .

MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS ON THE DAY ,MAY ALL YOUR WISHES AND DREAMS COME TRUE .


BIRTHDAY WISHES FOR YOU .


CAKE FOR U


HUGS FOR U

PARTY TIME


So friends have a look to first part of story and wish Mamta a very very happy birthday
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Hello friends here's the part 1 ,before writing it I want to tell you all one thing .This is not my story but its a story based on " rimjhim.rims" idea .yeah friends I m writing this story on theme 15 which she has written in her thread Writing challenge OS,TS based on idea .yeah its her idea in my way. I will do some changes as per story .





YE PANAAHE SAJDE MEIN TERE JHUKE



Part 1


Ishita iyer one of the best physiotherapist of Delhi ,running a big physiotherapy center, was sitting in her cabin ,when two men entered her cabin .She scanned both of them and asked " who is the patient ".

M1- no doctor non of us are patient, I m Romi bhalla and he is mihir arora ,out bhai Raman Kumar bhalla is patient .

I- oh I see ,but where is he .

M- we didn't brought him as he is on bed ,his lower body has paralyzed and adding to it his sugar level is always high that's why he has become very weak .its too difficult for us to take him anywhere .

I- ohh ,but you must be knowing I don't visit but patient themselves come to us .

Ro- you are right doctor but please try to understand our problem ,please come with us for once only .

Ishita thought for a while ,then she looked at her watch and spoke " ok I m coming but I have only one hour as I have to leave for dehradoon after that ."

M- its OK doctor, we don't live at much distance .

I- that's great .

Saying so all of them headed towards bhalla house .After twenty minutes, they stopped in front of a small house ,they entered the house and invited ishita also .She entered the house and saw that the house was messy ,it was already small and shattered things and cloths were making it more messy .She made a dirty face seeing it and went to Ramans room ,she saw a man of about 3O years is laying in bed ,she went to him and checked him ,then she asked for his medical reports .She checked the medical reports and spoke " I m sorry ,I can't help you in this matter as it is out of my reach ,I m a physiotherapist.I can help a person if his/her organs are not working but his problem is not that .His problem is his high sugar level and weakness ."

Ro- we already told you this ,but you told that you will help .

I- yeah I told that ,I thought may be he is weak but I can do something but his state is too bad .I m feeling very bad in saying this but the problem is I cannot help you out in this .I m so sorry .

Saying so she left the room and was going out when she heard crying of a child .Don't know what happened but seems her cries pulls ishita ,she went to the direction and saw two kids ,a boy and a girl were there .The girl was crying while the small boy was trying to pacify her " rooh why are you crying , chup ho jaao ."

At the same time ishita saw a lady walked to them ,she forwarded a bottle of milk to the girl and scolded " le pee le ,hamesha bookh lagi rahti hai ,thoda bhi aaram nahi karne deti hai ."

The boy - aunty why are you scolding like this to my Lil sister ,chachu aayenge to main bata doonga .

The lady who didn't know that romi and mihir had come ,slapped the boy and scolded him" chup bahut zabaan chalti hai ,kuch bola na to abhi ek thappad Mara hai baad mein aur maaroongi ".

The boy started crying while the Lil girl got busy in drinking her milk.Ishita was witnessing all this ,she ran to them and held the lady's hand who was about to slap the boy again and scolded " ye kya tareeka hai ,how dare you hit the kid ".

Lady look at her with disbelief and told
" ay madam who are you ,aur tu andar ghusi kaise ,aur tujhe kya .mere bachche hain chahe jo karoon".

I- your kids ,lag to nahi raha hai ,nobody hits their kid like this .

She pushed the lady and take the boy in her embrace, he also hided himself in her getting her care ,till them romi anx mihir also entered the place ,listening to the choes ,they saw Ishita and asked " arey doc ,you are still here "/

Ishita narrated the scene she had witnessed and asked about the kids.

Ro- they are Adi and ruhi ,kids of Raman bhai .

I- is she their mother.

Ro- no she is their nanny .we don't know she treated our kids like this .( scolding the lady ) just leave from here .

I- nanny then where is their mother.

Ro - its a long story ,actually this l is happening because of her only .

I- I didn't get you .

Ro- My bhai was a well known business man of Delhi ,everything was going good ,my bhai was happily married with suman bhabhi having two beautiful kids ,Adi and ruhi .Adi was four year old and ruhi was one and half year old when bhai arranged rinky our younger sister marraige with mihir as they like each other. My bhai was our everything as after our parents dismissal he took care of papas business and us .He was like father figure for us ,but it was a bad day ,we all were happy after mihir and rinky's marraige and were going to temple .And on the way we met with a severe accident in which rinky died and bhai was severely injured .We all were in very bad state as bhai and mihir were not there to look after business and I was not that much experienced ,our business started bearing losses and the rest money was spending in bhais treatment and adding to our trouble my bhabhi betrayed my bhai and left him .She is now living with bhai's enemy in live in leaving her kids .Bhai was recovering slowly but bhabhi's betrayal made him loose all his will to leave ,slowly his health began to worsen and atlast he got paralyzed due to high sugar level which was raised because of so much tension.Six months passed after she left us , now my baby ruhi is two and half year and adi is five year old ( I have changed kids age a bit )but nothing is helping seems bhai has lost ,all his hopes and not trying to recover .I have joined business ,I have to leave them on nanny's but they all are same ,these kids are suffering somuch because of their parents ,I try my level best but now situations are going beyond my hands .

Romi started crying telling his story ,Ishita glanced towards the kids lovingly and saw Adi was listening very seriously to his chachu while little Ruhi has slept after having her milk .Ishita caressed ruhis messy hairs lovingly and picked her ,she tucked her in bed gently and dropped a feathery kiss lovingly .Don't know what was that but there was something in these people which make Ishita forget that she has to go somewhere else ,instead of going she was listening to their story and after listening it ,she can't stop herself to treat Raman .

She told romi that she is ready to treat him but before that she wants to talk to him .

That's all friends ,hope you like my attempt, enjoy reading and do comment .Further update will be on response .

PS - don't forget to wish Mamta a very happy birthday.



Edited by Divanru - 8 years ago
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Hi friends, updated part one .have a look and wish mamta
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CONGRATS FOR NEW STORY POOJA DI
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AWESOME CHAPPY DI
UPDATE SOON DI
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

AWESOME CHAPPY DI

UPDATE SOON DI


THANKS FOR PM DI
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A very very happy birthday to mamta...hope your all wishes come true...happy birthday... 😃 ..its a beautiful update di...ishu is a physiotherapist...romi and mihir come to her and asks her to treat raman...they took her their home...ishu checked raman and says she cant help him...she was leaving when she heard a cry of baby and she goes to that room and saw kids...nanny ws.. 😡 ...romi told her everthing...ishu feel conected with kids...she ready to treat raman...suprb...plz plz update soon and thanks for pm di...
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Very heart touching prologue hope ishu ll treat raman n make him cure n also adi n ruhi ll get mother love from ishita n pls update soon
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Happy birthday to dear mamta ..
It is a beautiful update ..
Ishita is a doctor an mihir and romi approached her for raman's treatment..
But initially she refused but after meeting adi and roohi and seeing them badly treated by nanny she feld some strong pull towards then ..
Continue soon... Waiting for the next

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