Kismat roka fanfic Plz Comment

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Hey guys this is my first fan fic so guys plz bear wid me and do comment it really means a lot 2 me this fan fic hv a romance,suspence and offcource drama.😆

Story is starting frm whn robbie came 4 apoligies on raka wedding day

PART 1

Devika is making a call 2 some1

De:hello beta

Person:oh aunty sab theek to hain na koi problem to nahi hai na

Devika:don't worry everything is fine mena tumhe conratulate karne ke liye hone kia hai akhir humne robbie kasturi ko alag kar hi diya

Person:no aunty abhi sirf vo alag he hua hain abhi bhi vo ek doosrey se pyar karte hain humare maksat sirf un dono ko alag karna nahi unke dilo mei ek dosrey ke liye nafrat jagani hain

Devika:don't worry beta vo bhi ho jayega till then letz enjoy the marrige*evil smile*

Person:letz enjoy *evil smile* bye aunty

Devika:bye beta and take care

they hang up

in kasturi room she is rembering moments which she spend wid robbie she turn to go her bangle stuck wid curtain the same bangle which robbie gave it to her and she remember the moments which robbie humilates her yeh vada raha sad version is playing in background and she angrily take off the bangle and banged it on the floor she see the bangle in floor she goes to pick the bangle up the lights gone off she she every where to find the bangle she sees the bangle she goes to pick the bangle up suddenly she see robbie she sees a lots of blood in his face she try 2 touch him but kasturi turn back

Ka:aap....ab kya cahiye apko ab bhi aap ko chan nahi mila meri aur mera parivar ki bazati karne ke bad

Ro:nahi kasturi mujhe sab kuch pata chal gaya hain tumne mera liye itna kuch kiya tumne mera parivar ki izat nilam hone se bachayi hain......mein samjhta tha ki tum mujhe dhooka de rahi ho lekin dhoka to mujhe huya hai mena socha ki tumne mera pyar ko bech diya

Ka:akhir aap cahte kya hain sir pehle he aap mera bahut mazak bana chuka hain sir jisme mujhe hasna to door rona bhi nahi aata

Ro:mein yahan koi mazak banane nahi aya hoon balki mein to yahan haquqat janne ke baad aya hoon jo mujhe kisi ne batayi he nahi aur agar bataye bhi to galat tareqa se taqi hum dono alag ho jaye kisi ne mea dimag mei zehar ghool diya ki tum aur raunak....mei jis dunya se aya hoon us dunya mei mena kabhi pyar nahi dekha phir jab tum meri dunya mei ayi tumne mujhe pyar karna sikhaya pyar mei jina sikaya aur mei us pyar mei jiya mei tumhare pyar mei jiya kasturi mei sab kuch bhool gaya khud ko bhool gaya apni dunya bhool gaya tab sirf tum aur tumhara pyar magar phir kisine mera dil mei zehar ghool diya ki tum mujhe dhoka de rahi hoo to mein uss waqt mar gaya mujhe laga tum mujhe dhoka de rahi ho lekin dhoka to mujhe huya hain

Downstairs

Pandit jii:dulhan ko bulaye mahurat ka waqt bita jaraha hai

Baujii:kaushalya.......

Kaush:ji bauj mei lena jati hoon

Ra:aunty aap kyun taqleef karti hin mei lena jata hoon na

Kaush:nahi beta tum dulhan ka chehra mandap me ane se pehla nahi dekh sakte

Ra:ghabraye mat aunty yahan ndhera bahut hain mei uss ka vhehra nahi dekh paunga

JP nods

In kasturi room

Ka:aap samjhte kya hain sir aapne kaha tha ki aap ko apne pyar par poora bharosa hain to kya vo bharosa itna kamzor hain ki kisi aur ke kehna se toot gaya agar koi mujhse kehta na sir to mei us par kabhi vishvas nahi karti kyunki mujhe aapne aap par aur apne pyar par poora bharosa tha sir

Ro:kasturi tumhe jo kehna hain kaho jo saza deni hai do magar plz yeh shadi matt karo mein tumhare bina nahi ji payunga kasturi plz mujhe chod kar matt jao

Ka:aaj mera liye yeh shadi is liye mayine nahi rakhti sir ki meri mang mei sindoor bhara jaye balki iss liye mayne rakhti hain kyuinki iss shadi se mera ma bauji ke mathe pe jitne ilzam lage hain vo mit jaye iss liye mei yeh shadi karungi sir

Ro:nahi kasturi tum raunak se shadi nahi kar sakti kyunkitum us se pyar nahi karti jise tum pyar karti ho vo aaj tumhare samne hath jod kar khda hai

Ka:mujhe kuch nahi suna mera liye aaj pyar koi mayine nahi rakhte sir mera liye aaj sirf vo mayine rakhte hain jin ki vaja se mei is dunya mei ayi aur is liye mein yeh shadi karungi

Raunak enters

Ro to Ra:bahut khuch hona ajj ki tum hum dono ko alag karne jarahe ho....

Ra:robbie mei asa nahi cahta mei to ab bhi yahi cahta hoon ki tum dono ek ho jayo......robbie tum aur kasturi bhag jao chale jao yeh sher chod kar ghar valo ko mei samjha doonga

JP enters

JP:tum yahan kya kar rahe ho humari itni bazati karne ke bavajood bhi tumhe chan nahi mila

Robbie goes 2 him and sit on his feet wid hand fold

Ro:bauji mujhe maaf kar dijye mena kasturi par shak kar ke bahut badi galti kar di bauji plz yeh shadi rok dijye mei kasturi ke bina nahi ji sakta plz bauji mei kasturi se abhi shadi karne ke liya tayar hoon

Kasturi drop in chair wid shock

Kaush goes to her

Kaush:kasturi tu kya chahti hain

Ka:ma mujhe to kuch samajh mei nahi aa raha ek taraf robbie sir hain jo mujhse bahut pyar karte hain lekin ek galat fami ke vaja se unhone mujh par vishvas naji kiya aur dosri taraf raunak sir hain jinhone meri hamesha help ki hain agar mei robbie sir ke pass jao to bauji naraz ho jayenga.......

JP:nahi beta hum tujh par zor zabardasti nahi karenga tera dil jo cahta hai tu vahi kar kyunki yeh teri zindagi hai

Kaush:beta jo bhi faisla lena soch samajh kar thande dimag se lena

kasturi understand wht she she mean

Ka:raunak sir kahan hain

JP:beta vo aur robbie terrace par gye hai

Ka:mei mil kar ati hoon

Ka goes to terrace and she sees robbie crying in raunak shoulder kasturi close her eyes and remmbering moments which she spend wid robbie after a while she clear her throat

Ka:raunak sir

ro and ra look at her,robbie turn his face

Ra:haan kasturi

Ka:sir agar mein robbie sir ke pas chali jao to aapko dokh to nahi hoga na

Ra:kasturi mane tumse kaha tha na ki mein to ab bhi yahi chahta hoon ki tum robbie se shadi kar lo aur jaha tak dukhi hone ki baat hain vo to mein honga kyunki itni khoobsorat ladki meri nahi ho saki*he put his hand on his heart*

Ka smiles and raunak give him a friendly hug wid one arm

Ra:ab rona dhona band karo aur jao robbie ke pass use bhi yeh khushkhabri de do

kasturi nods and raunak leaves

Ka:sir

Ro:shshsh he puts his fingure on her mouth

Ro:ab mein tumhe kabhi nahi chodu ga thnku kasturi to came in my life again agar tum nahi ati to mei to marr hi jata.........

now kasturi puts her fingure on his mouth now they hug and mitwa is playing in background

tanu enters

Tanu:*ahem ahem*

they apart eachother

tanu:jiju shadi karni hain ki nahi

Ro shocked:karni hain na

kasturi blush

Tanu:to chaliye na mahurat ka waqt nikla ja raha hai *teasing mode *

Ro:han to chalo kis ne kha ki bate karne ko*in teasing mode*

Tanu:hun...she was about to ans but robbie leaves

Kasturi smiles

downstairs the marrige was going on

devika is burning she makes a call 2 same prson

Devika:hello

Person:aunty............i khnow ur very happy but plz stop making calls we can get in trouble

Devika:robbie aur kasturi shadi kar rahe hain

Person:kya............apne kuch kia kyun nahi

Devika:mein kya karti mujhe to pata hi nahi ki robbie kab yahan agaya *she tells every thing*

Person takes a deep breath :dont worry aunty we can't do anything now

Devika:par ab hum kya karenga

Person:i think something aur aap bhi sochiya.....

they hang up

The wedding is over and kasturi takes ever1 blessing and leaves

thats 4 it now hope u guys enjoyed plz plz plz leave ur comments 😊

Edited by *princess*15 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 Wow ,,, Excellenet 👏 👏 👏 *princess*15 For This Beautiful Memory For RoKa Lovley Waiting For More From You ...

Good Work ...
BYE ,,,
AISHA 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Karan Lover

👏 👏 👏 Wow ,,, Excellenet 👏 👏 👏 *princess*15 For This Beautiful Memory For RoKa Lovley Waiting For More From You ...

Good Work ...
BYE ,,,
AISHA 😉

im so hppy😆 glad u liked it 😳will cntnue 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent part. Luvd it hpe u update d nxt par soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Excellent part. Luvd it hpe u update d nxt par soon

thnku😊 2morrow im gonna updatin😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow i like where you started off from, and not from where this horrible story is at right now, do keep it up, sounds very interesting.. look forward to reading the next part way to go 👏 excellent job.
robina
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Omg...thankzzzz!!! fr strting a knew ff!! and waiting fr the next part!!suhaag raat!!!!!

THnxx
Gia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nrasheed

wow i like where you started off from,thank u😊 and not from where this horrible story is at right now,hmhm i know😆 do keep it up, sounds very interesting.. thank u😳 look forward to reading the next part way to go 👏 excellent job. nxt part is romantic do read n comment😆
robina

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rk_955

Omg...thankzzzz!!! fr strting a knew ff!!hehe thanx😆 and waiting fr the next part!!suhaag raat!!!!! correct😆

THnxx
Gia

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey you all, thankyou for the lovely comments. I will continue pretty soon now that people have actually liked it.

well continue reading and enjoying guys.

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