PriVeer OS Series,Shot 2: Dil Sambhal Ja Zaraa

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola again amigos.. This is my 1st PriVeer One Shot series based on current situations in Ishqbaaaz.. Hope you enjoy it.

1. PriVeer OS- O Zaalima


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Priyanka was folding her clothes as today was the last day of the trekking camp. Simultaneously,she also thought about Ranveer and that moment they shared two days back.. The mere thought of that intimate moment made her blush..

As the chief of trekking camp announced that the bus which was supposed to take them and leave will be late by 1 hour,she inwardly did a little jig and thanked her stars. She thought of meeting up Ranveer before she leaves.

She collected some fresh flowers for him and went to the nearby cottage where Ranveer was staying. As the surrounding weather was chilly,she wrapped a shawl around her and knocked on the door,waiting for him to open it.

Priyanka was greeted by the servant and asked her for tea.She happily nodded and asked for Ranveer. The servant replied that he was inside his room,getting ready to leave for Mumbai. She sat on the nearby sofa and waited for him to come out.

Ranveer was startled to see Priyanka,early morning. She gave him a sweet smile.. She came near him and forwarded those flowers to him.

"Woh..Yeh aapke liye.. Ss..socha aapko aacc..cha lagega.."

Ranveer took those flowers and the next moment,he threw them on the floor and crushed it with his leg.. Priyanka looked on as tears fell down from her eyes.. She took a step back,petrified at his anger.

Ranveer looked at her anf took a step towards her and grabbed her arms really tightly. Priyanka flinched watching his anger and the pain his hold was giving her started to become unbearable.

"Samajhti kya ho khudko,huh?? Humare beech ek kiss kya hogaya aur tum soch baithi ki main tumse pyaar karne lag jaunga? Tumhe apna maan lunga?" Ranveer replied in anger.

"A..ais..a nahi hai.. Meri baat tto..hh suniye.." Priyanka requested.

"Kyun sunu tumhari baat? Tumne meri behen ki dard bhari cheekh suni thhi jab uska accident hogaya thha tumhari gari se? Nahi suni thhi uski cheekh.. Tum jaisi ladki pyaar ke kaabil nahi ho.. Nafrat ke kaabil ho.. Tumhe kya laga ki tum meri zakhm pe marham lagaogi aur main pighal jaunga? Aisa kabhi nahi hoga... Main tumhe aisi saza dunga ki soch ke bhi kaph utthogi tum aur tum kuch nahi karpaogi.." Ranveer replied,seething in anger..

"Main tumse pyaar nahi karta.. Suna tumne.. Aur jo kal hua,woh ek galti thha.. Mere life ki sabse bari galti... Chali jao yahaan se aur dobara apni manhoos shakal mat dikhana mujhe.. Get lost!!" Ranveer dragged Priyanka and pushed her out of his cottage and slammed the door on her face..

Priyanka cried bitterly while sitting there till the last drop of energy. She slowly got up and went away from there,wiping her tears. She went to her camp manager and told him that she wants to leave immediately as she was feeling unwell.. She called up at Oberoi Mansion for a car to pick her up and soon,she left the place with a pain in her heart that she loved the person who is hell bent on punishing her for a crime she never did..

She never knew what love or how does it feel when a person falls in love until she met Ranveer. Though Ranveer thought that it was Priyanka who is responsible for his sister's death,but she couldnt stop herself from falling for him.. Him saving her from those goons and her taking care of him when he was injured while saving her and that kiss.. That single kiss changed her life.. She thought that she is safe in his protection but less she knew that it was a facade.. Her heart being broken into pieces by the person who she loved,from her soul..

"Hmm..dil... Sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Aisa kyun kar hua janu naa
Main janu naa o..o..
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu.."

*The End*

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Tahiti-1 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is really heartbreaking yaar. Beautiful though!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG, that was amazing 😊 and heartbreaking at the same time.
I love reading about PriVeer, so thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sad yet lovely..
Felt bad for priyanka..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohhh so sad for Prinku. But very well written. Please write more😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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💔 U have done a great job in describing the heartbreak of Prinku's if the ACP lies giving her such a literal slap,because he had kissed her and that kiss meant something different but it's Ok(may be I was reading too much into it). And thanks for making the OS into a TS. I'm very happy reading your update 😃. If possible try writing more of such PriVeer stories. And thank you for the PM 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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dat was sad
if possible continue dis😊

tnx 4 da pm

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