PriVeer OS: O Zaalima *complete*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ranveer found it difficult to sleep as the wound was hurting him a lot. There was no one to help him at the moment to change the dressing. As he raised his other hand to take the first aid box,he felt a sharp pain on his wounded arm and silently yelped in pain,closing his eyes tightly.

As he tried once more to get the first aid box,his attempt went in vain and was about to fall down,when a pair of hands held by his shoulders' and helped him to get up..

As he lifted his brown,chocolate orbs,he found that it was Priyanka,who held the first aid box in her hand. He immediately broke the eyelock and turned his face to the other side.

"Aap chale jaiye yahaan se.. Main khud karlunga apna zakhm ki patti.." Ranveer asked.

"P.P..Please.. Mm..mujhe kk..arne dijiye.. Bohut khoon behraha hai aapka." Priyanka replied.

"Kyun? Kyun karti hai aap meri parwah?" Ranveer asked little loudly.

Priyanka just sat by his side and slowly,without causing pain to him,started to change his dressing. All the while,Priyanka concentrated on carefully attending his wounds while Ranveer looked at every movement of Priyanka. His gaze never left her.

As she cleaned and freshly dressed the wound,she made Ranveer lie down and covered him with the warm comforter as it was chilly outside.

As Priyanka turned to leave,Ranveer caught her by her hand and said in a painful voice, "Pata nahi kyun! Main jitna tumse nafrat karne ki koshish karta hu,main kar nahi pata hu tumse nafrat!! Yeh jo ghanv tumne abhi bhardiye hai dawaiyo se,yeh uss ghanv ke saamne kuch bhi nahi hai jo tumne mujhe zindagi bhar keliye diya hai.."

Priyanka sobbed silently and turned to him and made him lie down..

"Aap so jaiye.. Mujhe chalna chahiye.. Main kal aake aapka dressing change kardungi.." She replied..

As she turned again to leave,she was again pulled by Ranveer and this
time,she hit his chiseled chest and gripped his arms for support.. Due to sudden pull,Priyanka tightly closed her eyes'. Few curls covered her face.

Ranveer moved those curls away with his fingers',gently and carefully observed her face changing expressions. As she opened her eyes' slowly,she saw how Ranveer looked at her which made her cheeks go red slightly.. As their eyes' locked,this time,all the emotions were visible and comprehendable.

Ranveer slowly rose up and gently pecked her forehead. As his lips touched her skin,it felt as if her skin was on fire. She held his muscular arms tightly. He rose her face by her chin gently and sucked up those tears which brimmed in her eyes'. She felt at peace. As he looked at those rosy lips of hers,she blinked her eyes' slightly,permitting him to mark her as his Priyanka.

He slowly took her rosy lips into his and poured out all his heart and soul in that one kiss. Ranveer was happy yet he felt guilty for initiating it but it was necessary for both of them. As they broke the kiss,Priyanka placed a warm peck over his wound and hugged him tightly and both closed their eyes' for a beautiful sleep.

"Jo teri khatir tadpe pehle se hi
Kya usey tadpana o zaalima, o zaalima
Jo tere ishq mein behka pehle se hi
Kya usey behkana o zaalima, o zaalima (x2)

Aankhen marhaba, baatein marhaba
Main sau martaba deewana huaa
Mera na raha jab se dil mera
Tere husn ka nishana hua
Jiski har dhadkan tu ho
Aise dil ko kya dhadkana
O zaalima, o zalima..

Jo teri khatir tadpe pehle se hi
Kya usey tadpana o zaalima, o zaalima

Saanson mein teri nazdeeqiyon ka
Itrr tu ghol de, ghol de...
Main hi kyun ishq zaahir karun
Tu bhi kabhi bol de, bol de... (x2)

Leke jaan hi jaayega meri
Qaatil har tera bahaana hua

Tujhse hi shuru
Tujhpe hi khatam
Mere pyaar ka fasaana hua

Tu shamma hai toh yaad rakhna
Main bhi hoon parwaana
O zaalima, o zaalima..

Jo teri khatir tadpe pehle se hi
Kya usey tadpana o zaalima, o zaalima

Deedaar tera milne ke baad hi
Chhoote meri angdaayi
Tu hi bata de kyun zaalima main kehlayi
Kyun iss tarah se duniya jahan mein
Karta hai meri ruswayi

Tera qusoor aur zaalima main kehlayi
Deedaar tera milne ke baad hi
Chhoote meri angdaayi
Tu hi bata de kyun zaalima main kehlayi
Tu hi bata de kyun zaalima main kehlayi.."

*The End.*

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Tahiti-1 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
AWWW
This is SOOO CUTE. All the feeels 😳
I am still grinning.šŸ˜†
😊
Anni, you're AWESOME!
Thanks for the PM!!!
Write more!!!🄱
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh, wow šŸ˜›. You're awesome, I loved it, I'm still smiling. Please write more 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was beautiful! Annie, you have a talent in capturing the magic of this pair through brief pithy scenes like this one.
The hatred, the attraction and the guilt...it's all there in the perfect balance.
Loved it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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After reading this OS one song I'm humming right now is:-
Dil garden garden ho gaya,bhavra bagiyan mein kho gaya
Coming to your OS now, it's really beautiful. The way you portrayed their current trust,guilt... everything felt like been placed at the right place. Can u write more ? šŸ˜‰ I enjoyed the link u made with the song šŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res!
-Unres-

Beautiful OS, Annie! It made me smile ā¤ļø I always like the way you write PriVeer when they are in love -- sweet and adorable. Keep writing more of them!
Edited by emerald39 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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a PriVeer OS on my current fav songā¤ļø
luved it. hope we gt 2 c dis onscreen as well😃

tnx 4 da pm😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aaww wow!..
It was Adorable..
Loved it..

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