ZARA HATKE CONTEST FUN - GHSP CELEBRATION/image 7/pg19/8feb

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this is celebration thread with maaneet fans

not any competition
so khul ke part lo

don't hide your emotions

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Invitation for GHSP 7th Anniversary - don't forget to see original thread ok


and fill this for maaneet


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Posted: 8 years ago
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writers jaag jaayo

now you have to write any sequence on this image but wo original episode se alag hona chaiye..bs itni si condition hai...

you can use some official GHSP dialogue... we have no problem... sequence length should be one paragraph , or 9-10 lines, or 100 words... bs itni si hi conditions hai... 😉

we include your all dialogue on anniversary thread too... where u see on one pic, many funny dialogues or say scenes...
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so creative mind ke horse ko running pe laga do

friends this is so small sequence contest ...at least u can try minimum 100 words on above pics...
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INDEX

image 1 to 3 see page 1 to 3 (shifted all data here, but its not closed u can write on this images too)

image 4 on page 5


image 5 on page 11

image 6 on page 15

image 7 on page 19
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1st image

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entries posting below : you can post ur entry direct here - no need to pm...
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written by me

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From half an hour she tries to make understand, but her maan not listening anyone...

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Maan please maan jaayo na

Aap ase naraaz rahonge

Toh mein kaise jaa paayungi

He pull closer , his hand encircle around her, giving her glares...

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Geet : ase badi aankhen krke mt dekho na

Mujhe dar lagta hai

Maan : tumhe dar lagta hai

She nodded cutely...

Maan : acha hai daro mujhse

Aur mt jaayo

.

She tiptoed and kissed on his cheek ...please jaanu

Bs kuch din ki hi baat hai

Maan : kuch din

Tumhe kam lagte hai

He turn the face , but she held his hand please

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Dekho na waha sb honge

Hum sb bhai-behn kitne dino ke baad khi gumne jaa rhe hai

Ek toh khud jaa nhi rhe humare sath

Upar se mujhe bhi nhi jaane de rhe

Maan : meri important meeting hai

Geet : toh aapne kaam se shaadi knri thi na

Mein bhi kaha fs gyi

Maan : galati ho gyi

Both left to different direction.

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By Sonia.KN

Maan : Geet ! I fired u , hence u came to KM, stole my all formals..How dare you ?

Geet :Sir, thand paayo .I stole 4 good cause, 4 KC Hospital Trust Auction ? Actually to raise more funds . MSK's attires definitely ll raise more money

Maan : What a great idea ? How dare u ? Taking revenge on me.How I'll go to office tomorrow.

Geet : Sir , everything 4 ur benefit.

Maan :R u crazy ?

Geet : Not me, U Sir

Maan : What ? Kya, kya bolla tumne ?

Geet : Aaa cc tually u say na k "yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi ".I don want to b reason of this. Without formals you ll stay at home for couple of days. Ur mind needs a break. I can't c u turning insane.

Maan: I think not me you are mad.

Geet : Sir plz don stress ur brain.. Even KC Hospital Trust se physiatrists aa rahe hai.. Aapko thanks kehne.. Ur cloths raised great funds. You should meet them..

Maan : What do u mean ? Why to meet them ha?

Geet : Simple they need you, n u need them..

Maan : Geet I ll not spare u ...

she slipped from place...screaming

Geet :Sir I have spared you. Coz not you fired me but I left u..Take care Sir..

She left him confused.What she meant after all...Now tell how it was

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By laughingpearls


GUTTER ONE

"Dammit how can you think something about me like that, Geet. You very well know that I cannot do THAT without you." Maan said pulling her closer.

"Lie. A big lie. I saw it with my own eyes Mr Maan Singh Khurana. I have never expected this from you." Geet tried to free herself from him.

"Geet its not what you are thinking, I swear on you I didnt DO IT WITH HER. I agree that i was tempted for few minutes as she tried to divert my attention but Geet I stopped myself within a feet away." Maan tried controlling himself as he saw That woman doing IT AGAIN.

Geet saw him looking behind her so she turned to see and fumed in anger.

"Mrs robinson I request you to close the door before YOU COOK ANYTHING TODAY. Because my husband is TEMPTED towards your delicious food."

Mrs Robinson blushed and closed the door while Maan opened his eyes controlling himself.

"Okay I lose the bet. I agree woman are really great and you are right I cant stay even for few hours without food." Maan turned his back from her and said in a weak voice.

"Oh Maan dont be sorry, from now on wards dont come late to home on karwachaut Okay." She said and hugged him.

"Now do something I NEED THAT DAMMIT. Geet Im loosing my control." Maan said closing his eyes while Mrs robinson gaped thinking what maan must be asking in the open living area.

...

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FUNNY ONE

"Geet please dont stress your brain as you dont have one." Maan said trying to be soft.

"Haaw maan you are so mean. You couldnt fulfil such a small wish. Maan baby has asked you for the first time." Geet said pointing towards her swollen stomach.

"Really geet? First time? Than what about all those times when you woke me up at middle of night for kulfi, what about your crazy dance, what about driving car, what about kiss under a umbrella etc etc. Every time you ask with the same dialogue 'Maan Baby asked you for the first time' Maan said in a frustating tone.

"Sorry maan this the last time pakka. Please only this one." She asked with a puppy dog eyes.

"NEVER. And dont look at me with such face." Maan said and immediately regretted seeing her getting sad.

"Mishty please dont cry. See GOLGAPPA is not a NICE NAME FOR OUR BABY. Please we can name him something else." He asked for the nth time but geet started wailing in his arms making him frustrated.

"OKAY Let our baby named GOLGAPPA. Now smile." Maan said defeatedly.

"Sachhi maan. Thank you so much. You are the best husband and best father." Geet said and hugged him.

"How must I introduce my son in my business 'Meet my son Mr GOLGAPA SINGH KHURANA'. Dammit geet, You have landed me into such a situation." Maan thought to himself.

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By mgmahika

Maan : Geet jaan tum ro kyu rahi ho ?

He just come from office and saw his Mishti crying
and weeping, her whole face turn red because of continuous crying. He wiped her tears and again asked, now she hiccup so he forward one glass of water

Maan : Kya hua Mishti...?

Geet : Maan Armaan mar gaya.

His face turn blank to heard another man's name from her mouth so he pulled her forcefully towards him in anger

Maan : Kya kaha tumne ?

She shivered to see him angry tried to push him but he blocked her with his both hands, she make a baby face


Maan : Now tell me ...Armaan koun hai

Geet : Armaan ...Armaan hai Maan

Maan : Geeettt

Geet : Ok gussa mat ho na, Woh mai na ek ghost story pad rahi thi, usmey Armaan mar gaya said innocently


Maan face blank to heard her she is crying because of some story...o ha how he forget his Mishti is crazy about fictions.

Geet : Maan aap story sunoge



Maan : Mujhe nahi sunna Geet


He just came from office and she started her fictions rantings



Geet : Please Maan sun lo na



Maan : Thik hai bolo



Geet : Yeh ek ghost ki story hai jaha pe ek bhoot hai



Maan : Geettt



He pulled her himself in frustration



Maan : Tum kya pagal ho chuki ho ? Ghost story mein bhoot he hota hai.



Geet : Haan Maan woh toh mujhe pata hai,

par aapko thodi na pata hoga. Story toh maine padi hai na...


He is in frustration giving his back towards her.



Geet : Accha chodo... gussa mat ho na. Aab suno ...

Geet : Waise ek baat puchu ? Aapko kaise stories acchi lagti hai...like Ghost , Comedy, yaa romantic


Make him more frustrated

He again turn and giving her angry glare

Maan : Tumhe nahi bolna, mai ja raha hu

Geet : Nahiii...abhi sunati hu na

She told whole story to him make him more frustrated it's sounds like comedy story not ghost actually



Maan : Ho gaya aab mai jau ?



She nodded innocently with satisfaction that he heard everything
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Posted: 8 years ago
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By sanjana

Maan: geet plz..MERI bath maano...AISA kuch nahi hai...

Geet: muje kuch nahi Sunna...App KAR rahe hi ya nahi...

Maan: geet plz..

Geet: yeh AAP koh pehle sochna chahiye tha maan..Yeh SAB Karne seh pehle sochna tha...Abh jaldi karo muje Sona hai maan..

Maan: geet woh...

Geet: agar AAP koh room seh bahar NAHI nikaalna AUR kal subah..Dev AUR Vicky KHI teasing comments koh face NAHI karna TOH chaloh jaldi KAHRO...

Maan towered over geet dangerously and asked:tum MSK koh apni kamre seh nikalogi...

Geet: maan aap khi yeh aankhey well gussee KHI mujh par GMSK par koi asar NAHI hoga...

Maan turned his face knowing he had no way to escape..

.Either he had to agree geet words nor he should face his siblings taunts...

Maan weighed both the options ...

The former seems easy than the later...He was still contemplating when geet bugged him

Geet: maan jaldi..Chalo shuru KAHRO...

Maan gulped seeing there is no way...He the great msk whom BUSINESS feilds thinks as king...Had to perform pole dance before his wife... Unfortunately he had to meet a client in the famous pub,due to his stats that day happened to b a pole dance...And his misty got the news that he was attending a pole dance ,he exactly knew the traitor who leaked the not so important news as hot spicy juicy thing his brother Vicky..

Masn mentally noted to avenge him...

Geet: maan come-on it's getting late now..I had to sleep... With no other way he did few moves for his wife who finally showed mercy on him...But not before warning..

Geet: maan Maine suna AAP KHI next week meeting bhi kuch infamous club mein hai...Jaha stripers BHI honge...TOH Zara Soch samaj KAR USS club mein Jaana...

Saying she went to bed..Leaving maan in thoughts in how many ways to strangle vicky...

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