GoodBye 2016 A poetry for EDKV

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

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Posted: 8 years ago

Good Bye 2016!!!!!!

Another year is passing again

After delivering smiles and pain

Smiles for giving us a show

That we're thankful to be bestow

Upon each passing day and night.

With their friendship and their fight

They made us believe in love alright

Then they left us out of sight...

Pain for taking back our show

And leaving us with emotional flow

We wanted to see their playful session

And all we got is just confession

My heart and mind has question plain

Will we see our ShraMan again??

Will the New Year get good news?

Will they consider fan's views?

Let's wait and watch if the channel grew

And are they giving us our Season 2?????

A Very Happy New Year to Everyone.

Lubna.

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Swarnima

@Swarn283

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow amazing poetry!

"We wanted to see their playful session

And all we got is just confession"

So much tune! ❤️

"They made us believe in love alright

Then they left us out of sight..."

True that!

"Let's wait and watch if the channel grew

And are they giving us our Season 2?"

Hopefully😳

Love,

Swarnima

Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl
Wow amazing poetry!
"We wanted to see their playful session
And all we got is just confession"
So much tune! ❤️
"They made us believe in love alright
Then they left us out of sight..."
True that!
"Let's wait and watch if the channel grew
And are they giving us our Season 2?"
Hopefully😳

Love,
Swarnima

Thanks Swarnima. Never loose hope. I agree. 😛

Lubna.

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

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OMG!!!!...This is sooo wonderful Lubna.. 👏
I loved it!!! 😊

They made us believe in love alright
Then they left us out of sight..
Oh!!!!!...so true!! 😭

My heart and mind has question plain
Will we see our ShraMan again?
😭 ...These line touched me so much...!!

Lets wait and watch if the channel grew
And are they giving us our Season 2???
I am hopefull...n i wish it happens soon..!!

All in all this is really beautiful dear... 👏
A very Happy New Year to u too 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey lubna...loved each and ever line of it dear...it perfectly portrayed our emotions...thanks a lot for this...a very very happy new year to u😊😊

Love,

Dolly 😆

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely Lubna... It was amazing! Every line, every word so apt! This is the very first thing I read after getting discharge! so it just made me happy more! Love you baby... Do write more.

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deepoceaan

@deepoceaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome

Very beautifully written

Happy new year dear lubna

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evaviego

@evaviego

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful Poem Lubna 😊

We wanted to see their playful session

And all we got is just confession

this line is sach mein mere dil ki baat 🤔

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anonymousanju

@anonymousanju

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Posted: 8 years ago

lubna thanks for the pm dear.. :) the poem was so beautiful.. u just described our happiness when we got this show n sorrow. , when it was snatched away from us suddenly :( .. beautiful it was..loved it.. Happy new year dear :) ..

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Itssanjh
Lovely Lubna... It was amazing! Every line, every word so apt! This is the very first thing I read after getting discharge! so it just made me happy more! Love you baby... Do write more.

Hey Sanjh, so glad to hear that you are back home. Thanks for taking time to comment, take care and come back with a bang. 🤗

Lubna.