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BYE BYE 2016



AND WELCOME TO 2017



VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR 2017



Note-> hi my lovely readers sorry for late dearies and Thanks for your love and support... You all know my health is not in good condition so plz forgive me... Now I give you Second part of chapter-34 and I will give Next Chapter so soon... I hope you all will love it...... 😳




( Chapter - 34 part-2)




{ rani menavati was dumbstruck hearing her husband's decision... Some time before her favorite and faithful maid informed her that raja bharmal had returned from outdoor meeting and he is going to announce something important in royal court ... if it will be decided future of amer. So without wasting any minute she rushed toward court... But before she could enter in court, something unpleasant hit her ears which enough to take away her peace of her mind and heart...}

{ all presented people along with raja bharmal were looking toward fuming rajvanshi mother... Whose eyes were red because of anger and pain... Seeing expected outcome from this particular person, raja bharmal closed his eyes with pain and guilt... he was expecting this type of reactions at least from his wife ... He could understand her emotion ... her pain ... because he was also feeling same pain and shame in this condition ... But he could not to do much in this condition ... this decision was like a poison to him with whole amer and they have to drink it ... They have to drink it for existence of amer .}

Mainavati ( in anger and pain) -> " my daughter will not marry with that blood thirsty monster ... ( looking toward raja bharmal with angry eyes) my jodha is not a thing which you can use for you profit and loss. And by the way I can't understand where has gone your rajvanshi pride ... Where has gone your rajvanshi bravery, so you have agreed on this proposal... Jodha is not only my daughter, but also a pride of whole amer... How can you agree to destroy pride of amer... You are king of amer but it is not mean that you can destroy our faith and pride for your profit (took deep breath in serious tone) I will jump in river with my daughter or burn myself with my laado in fire but I will not let you destroy my daughter's life for your use ... "

{Announced her decision she was about to leave but voice of raja bharmal stopped her feet...}

" for saving your daughter... so are you ready to kill all daughters of amer...? Asked raja bharmal in serious tone.

{ this question enough to changed her facial expressions... She turned toward raja bharmal with shocking experience... She looked toward her husband blankly... Raja bharmal took some steps toward her... }

Raja bharmal ( taking deep breath , in serious tone) -> " you are right maharani, jodha is not only for our daughter, she is daughter of whole amer... And being daughter of whole amer she has some duties toward them... Yaaa you are right I am king of amer and as king I have to think about welfare and security of my kingdom before my personal relationships... Because whole amer is my family and for giving them security and peaceful good future I have to do everything which conditions will be needed... For saving my daughter I can't let die to my many daughters... And You mainavati... You are not only a mother of your ladali but also you are mother of whole amer... How can you see dead bodies of your children...}

{ still mainavati was looking toward his husband blankly... Her mind stopped working at that point...

She couldn't decide what is right and what is wrong... Yaaa her husband was telling right but what about her beloved daughter and her future... All presented people were looking them shockingly... No one could dare to utter single word...}

Raja bharmal ( looking all around him in loud voice) -> " I know everyone who presented at here are thinking like maharani and feel like cheated by their king... But does anyone know it... that our almost treasure have finished or take away by mugal... Does anyone know it our almost soldiers either have dead or captured by mugals... Now neither we have treasure to survive long in war and nor soldiers to protect our people or families from mugals... I know it is very difficult to accepting but I have one question for all of you that

" are we ready for second war again... are we ready for its horrible result..."

You all know very well we are not in condition for fighting anyone specifically mugals... And if it will war happen again then our defeat is compulsory and that time we will not able to stop mugals for entering in amer or even our houses... That time many jodhas either will be enter in fire or kidnapped by mugals... That time, will we able to save our jodha also... ( taking deep breath) this offer put front of me by himself shahensha - a- hind... After this marriage amer will have save for lifetime not only from mugal but also from our others enemies... And he promised me that jodha will treat in Agra same as like amer... I know accepting this proposal is like drinking poison ... but we have not another way maharani... Now only jodha can save our amer and her people... ( looking toward bhagavaan das, in firmly) send marriage invitations to all our respective relatives and friend kings as today..."

" but she will never ready for this marriage... " said mainavati in painful and angry voice.

" she have to maharani ... She have to... ( looking deeply in is wife' s teary eyes) and it is your responsibility that she will ready for this marriage without any drama ( in loud dominant voice) start preparations for marriage of princess jodha with shahensha-a-hind ... "

{ saying it he went away from court leaving behind shock and confused people and a mother who had no word for describing her condition that time...}

{ evening time}

{ jodha's room }

{ jodha was laying on her bed like lifeless body. Her eyes were filled up with hot tears... She was feeling like someone snatched away everything from her... Her happiness... Her joyful naughty smile... Her beautiful dreams ... future of her unborn children and her everything... Sudden as running moti and Reva came into room with shocking expressions...

Moti (swiftly with controlling her uneven breath) -> " jodha... jodha... jodha ... Do you know anything, that what is going on in rajmahal...????

{ moti' s voice took back jodha from her painful world ... She swiftly wiped out her tears and turned toward her confused friends with more confused expression...}

Jodha ( confusingly)-> " what do you want to say...?"

Reva ( swiftly)-> " ohhh... Jodha ... Whole rajmahal is decorating like new Bride... All maids or servants are busy in decorating to rajmahal... Like someone is going to merry very soon in rajmahal..."

{Hearing it ... Jodha stood up from bed with high shock...}

Jodha(shockingly)-> " what are you saying marriage... But who...??"

{ but instead give any answer , her both friends only gave her " we don't know " expressions... then a maid came to there with mainavati's message that she wanted see jodha in her room now ... She swiftly moved toward mirror to make herself in little presentable condition front of her mother... After preparing herself to meet her mother , jodha swiftly walked out from her room as followed by her ever trusted maid cum friends ... As crossing corridor of rajmahal , jodha saw that what her childhood friends was saying... It was true... Whole rajmahal was decorated by all maid and servant like new Bride... After Seeing It , now jodha deadly sure that something was going on in palace without coming in her knowledge... But what... By the way , she is going to meet her mother and soon she will get know what is going on in palace ... }

{ maharani mainavati's room}

{ maharani mainavati was sitting in middle of room ... Many expansive jewelries were placed front of her on table here and there... jodha's tayisaa was also sitting near to her on her right side ... Some maids were standing left side as ready for any order of their queen. Royal Goldsmith was sitting front of her and busy to showing his best creations to his queen with proudly smile... Maharani mainavati wanted to choose best jewelries for her ladali ... She knew that in which situations this marriage was happening, So she wanted to give every happiness and love to her ladali as she could... She wanted to make memorable of this marriage to her daughter who was going to sacrifice her whole life to her motherland... But most challenging task still left for her to do completing... "Convincing her stubborn daughter for this marriage " ... Suddenly a maid came to her...}

Maid ( bow downing her head front of her queen) -> " maharani ... Princess jodha want to see you"

{ hearing jodha's name maharani mainavati took a deep breath as preparing to herself for upcoming moments ... She nodded her head in positive ... After Receiving her queen's order maid silently went from there to give her honourable queen's answer to her most favorite princess ...

Jodha silently entered in room ... she saw, her mother was busying in selection of jewelries and also her tayisaa was there ... so it was enough to Understanding that something big was going on in palace ...

Jodha ( folding her both hands in respect of her mother and queen) -> " pranaam maasaa ... Pranaam tayisaa... ( surprising but in pleasant voice) tayisaa You here?..."

{ hearing her voice , all present people stopped their work and looked toward her... Her taayisaa seeing her beloved daughter front of her quickly stood up and walked toward her ... She placed a loving motherly kiss on her face with teary eyes...she knew what her ladali was going to face in her younger age ... But other side, mainavati did not show any emotions because she did not want to become weak at this moment when amer was badly needed his queen instead of a weak mother... }

Mainavati ( with firm face) -> " come here jodha and select some jewelries to you for evening and upcoming functions... "

{ hearing it , jodha looked toward her mother with confused face...}

Jodha( politely) sorry for it maasaa , can you please tell me what is going on in palace ...all our maids and servants are busying to decorate whole palace ... Our royal cooks are busying to make royal dishes ... Now you want to me select jewelries for some functions... What is going on here maasaa ..."

" your marriage jodha ... " uttered mainavati emotionlessly without looking her as engrossing in selection of jewelries

{ but her few words enough to give jodha biggest shock of her life... She felt like her whole body got numb... Her mind stopped to work... Her eyes became wide because of shock and pain and her throat became dry... Other side, condition of Reva and moti was not more different to her ... They were also in deep shock after hearing this small piece of information ... Not hearing any response from her dearest daughter's side, maharani mainavati slowly stood up from her seat and took small steps toward jodha... while Jodha was still standing like statue in shock ... Her mind and heart both couldn't digest this piece of information which was enough to steel remaining peace of her life... Seeing her ladali's situation ... Mainavati's motherly heart cried out ... But next moment , a strong maharani ( queen) sent weak mother on back seat and took her place... She closed her eyes for composing her motherly heart...}

Mainavati ( putting her right hand on jodha's left shoulder)-> " I know , it is little surprising decision for you... But beta in future, you will have to get married na so why not now ... Your father received a great proposal for you and he said yes to it... (caressing her head lovingly with smile) let's choose some jewelry for you, after all you are would be bride and I want to make my laado more beautiful on her marriage"

{ saying it , she made her to sit near her and started to show different - different types of beautiful jewelries... But was jodha really there... Her mind already stopped to working... Her heartbeats had lost somewhere... she could not utter any word to her mother... Unknowingly Her fate already brought her again on that point from where it was all started. her mind was running as fast more than air ... Pictures of previous events of her life started to appear front of her eyes like a film... Sudden she felt like her head spinning round... her eyes became blurry and she felt like losing her sense and with thud sound she fell down on ground ... With others Queen mainavati shockingly looked toward unconscious jodha , who was laid on the floor lifelessly ...}

" jodhaaa" screamed queen mainavati and quickly run toward jodha.

{ Till now moti and others had come to in action... jodha moved to bed with help of moti , reva and others ... mainavati had sat near to jodha on bed with her tearful worried eyes ... All persons who were presented there also were very much worried for jodha . }

Mainavati ( in worried tone ) -> " someone call to "Rajyvaidhyaaa..." "

{ hearing it , heartbeats of moti and reva started to beat fast ... they were sweating badly ... if " rajyvaidhya" is come to check jodha then she will surely get know about jodha's pregnancy ... then she will surely tell about it to queen mainavati and others then after it...then After it what will happen, it mere thought gave cold shiver in their bones... They looked each other with fear ... Before any maid could complete queen's order ... moti quickly took water jug from nightstand and sprinkle some water on jodha's face from it. After few seconds Jodha started to get conscious... Her eyes started to open... She felt her head little heavy... moti gave water to mainavati to made drink to jodha... Mainavati helped her for sitting and made to drink to her...After drinking water jodha felt little good... Now jodha had fully gained her consciousness...Seeing her conscious , moti and reva took breath of peace...}

Moti ( trying to situation normal) -> " Vo... Vo... Jodha was busy in making painting of " Rajasahab and your" because of it she did not eaten anything since morning... So I think..."

{ hearing it mainavati ordered to maid to some fruits... because of mainavati insist jodha ate it half heartily ... Seeing jodha ok mainavati told firmly to everyone who were presented there for leaving them alone for some time... Hearing her request cum ordered everyone took their leave from there silently... Moti and Reva wanted to talk jodha but that time front of mainavati they couldn't talk with jodha so they decided about talk to jodha latter and went out from her room ...}

Mainavati (caressing her head with motherly love) -> "now how are you feeling beta? ..."

{Jodha didn't speak anything but only nodded her head as in positive answer ...}

Mainavati ( lovingly caressing her hair)-> " why you are so careless about your health beta... You know Seeing you unconscious my heartbeats had almost stooped... Don't do it again to your mother beta...( taking deep breath , in serious tone) i know jodha , this decision is taken in haste and u do not also want to tie knot early ... But it is question of amer and promise of your father beta ... We are rajpoot and real rajpoot never use to break his promise ... For amer's safety , Your father has made promise of your marriage and now he can't walk out from it ... after this marriage , our amer will be secured not only from our others enemies ... bu...t... (gulping her painful tears) but also from mugals beta..."

{Hearing it , jodha closed her eyes with pain}

(Caressing jodha's head softly)So before taking any decision, please once think about your duties toward your father and amer as a daughter and princess ... ( with painful tears) we like this fact or not ... but it is very true beta ... " sacrifice is destine of women and we have to do it" "

{ after lovingly gave her kiss on her forehead mainavati went from there leaving behind broken and sad jodha ... seeing queen maiavati coming out from room , moti and reva quickly entered in room and rushed toward jodha ... other side jodha was sitting on bed with resting her head on headboard of bed ... her eyes were closed and teary . They could understand pain of their princess cum childhood friend. Both wanted to erase her pain and gave some peace to their friend but that time both were feeling totally helpless ... both slowly moved toward jodha ... moti sat down on bed near to jodha while reva stood by bed ... Moti put her hand on left shoulder of jodha ... jodha could recognize this friendly touch ... after taking few minutes she opened her eyes ... She took a deep breath with wiping her tears ... She first looked toward moti then reva and asked to them .}

Jodha -> " can you both do one favor to me ? "

Moti ( looking toward reva then jodha ) -> " what ...?"

Jodha ( taking deep breath) -> " come with me ..."

{ when jodha tried to get up from bed moti resisted her but jodha stopped her with showing her hand to her ... Without wasting any second She quickly walked out from queen mainavati's room and moved towards hers . moti and reva also followed to her without seeing anyway... }

{ Jodha's room}

{ jodha swiftly moved toward writing table ... after taking seat, she started writing a letter ... Other side moti and reva were looking toward her confusingly ... They could not understand , what she wanted to do ... after taking few minutes in writing , jodha took a deep breath and after folding up letter... she forwarded it toward moti and reva .}

Jodha ( with serious face) -> " please give it to my would be husband ... I... I have written everything about me in it ... I don't know who he is but as my would be husband he has every right to know everything about me and I hope after reading it he will surely walk out from this alliance ... "

{ hearing these words of jodha moti and reva were sweating with fear but... it was not for them or for amer but it was for their beloved friend and her future ...because after knowing about her pregnancy surely her would be husband will be break this alliance but after all it he will be never hide this news and then everyone will be gotten know about jodha's pregnancy then everything will be finished ... no one will be accepted her with her children ... Her life will ruin for always ... when all people along with her family will ask about father of her children then what she will give answer to them and if she will say truth then what will happen ... will anybody accept to children of a mugal father ... }

Moti ( in fearful worried tone) -> " are... are you made jodha ... you really know, what are you saying ... You know after it , what will be happened with you and amer ... no one will be available to raise his head with proud in amer and ... and forget about it ... What will be happened with your future jodha ... please fore krishana shake don't take this horrible step ... We can think about another way to escape from this situation..."

"Nooo ... We have not any way other else it ... So please take this letter and give to him ... if he is true " Rajvanshi" then he will be surely understand my problem and will forgive me for it" said jodha coldly taking deep breath

{ she knew very well that after it everything might be totally messed up but she had no way to stop this marriage ... she could not put the honor of amer or her family in dangerous ... If without saying truth she will do this marriage then her husband and his family will surely get know about her pregnancy within time ... Or if she will try to run away this marriage then also she will be also killed prestige of amer and family ... her father will never walk out from this alliance willingly ... because he was true " Rajvanshi" and a true " Rajvanshi" never break his promise ...so she tried her last chance with this letter ... She wrote everything in this letter and also requested to her "would be husband" that if he is willingly ready to accept her with her children then no problem ... but if he is not ready to get marry with a pregnant girl with another man then please silently walk out from this alliance because no one knows about her pregnancy in her family so they are equally innocent like him ... But she does not want to hide anything from him because she does not want to start this pure relation with any lie ... so please forgive her for it...}

{ Moti and reva both very well knew that now they could not do much in this matter , only can pray to god for their friend ... after taking letter both came out from there without noticing that hidden pair eyes and ears were seeing and hearing them carefully ... now it was biggest challenge to reva and moti to send this letter without let know to anyone about it ... and still they did not know anything about jodha's would be husband ... So it was very tough and risky task to both of them ...Still they were thinking about any good idea standing in corridor of palace ... sudden they heard queen mainavati's voice behind them ...}

Mainavati ( firmly ) -> " sudhabai ... Some baskets of fruits and sweets are in my room for "sagun" to our would be son in law ... but before it prepare my pooja thaali for evening pooja then take them to "jamayi raja's" camp ok... "

{ saying it queen mainavati went from there ... hearing it faces of moti and reva light up with hope ... But they had to do it as fast speed as they could ... After few minutes moti and reva sneaked silently in to room of mainavati ... because of they were maids cum childhood friends of amer princess so no one could dare to stop them ... Left reva on the door for watch out , moti searched "Sagun baskets" they were placed on right corner of room ... Without wasting any moment moti hide letter in a fruit basket ... after finished their work successfully moti and reva went out from the room ... but what did they know that one pair of eyes was watching their every action keenly ...}

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yippeee u updated 👏
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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

yippeee u updated 👏


yuhuuu me first 😃
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what an update di, feel bad for jo, just for sake of queen she has to sacrifice her daughter's future, how emotionally u have described it, also like jodhas sharpness to write the letter and I think person looking at them is jalal only. please try to update soon can't wait more
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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

what an update di,feel bad for jo, just for sake of queen she has to sacrifice her daughter's future, how emotionally u have described it,also like jodhas sharpness to write the letter and I think person looking at them is jalal only.please try to update soon can't wait more

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