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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Angeline124

Nice update

Maan is treating her badly
Poor geet suffering for no fault of her
Continue soon




Yup she is


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

Interesting ...

Liked it..

Thanks for update..

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Continue soon...

Maan is humiliating geet..
But at one side he is feeling bad about it...

What is this alisha up to...



Yup he is
Alisha's motives will be revealed soon


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Nice Update

One side Maan humiliating Geet for revenge but other side loves her and caring her, Maan is hurting Geet but in all this he is hurting himself also , feeling sad for both, now this Alisha what,s her motive , eagerly waiting for next




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Part 4

Bleeding Heart





As soon as Alisha left Maan felt a great sense of relief , don't know why but he never got good vibes from her that is the reason he resented her . He knew she was one of those creatures. He continued his work , along with plotting what to do next to that wife of his . Geet on the other hand, was fearing now what the evening would bring for her . She was now fearing his next move , still unable to understand what his true motives are . "You will pay for this Maan", Alisha said once out of the building. "Are the photographs done", She called her comrade. "Yes Ma'am just like you wanted them", He said. "Good, very good . Now let's see Mr Khurana how your lovely wife will take this", She laughed evilly.






(I am using her Dipali from Madhubala show for Alisha as it as a very bad role so my dearest buddy Richa suggested her providing her pic)



Alisha Singhania, a huge name in the fashion world but she was a greedy woman. She was offered to get close to Maan by a person who had threatened her , if she wouldn't do the job she might lose her career. She met Maan in a party , and had her eyes set on him, he was more handsome in person than the pictures she had seen. She had heard about him and the fact that he kept distance from women, but still she wanted to try her luck being overconfident in herself and he did remind her of a certain someone, whom she could not get her claws on. But to her luck, Maan had blocked all her attempts, at first politely but when she did not stop, she used other methods. She was meant to stop his marriage with Geet, a name she has been told about , something about the one who was not supposed to get in his life or whatever , but now when she was unsuccessful , she was given the task of breaking his marriage or ...She smirked thinking about that. She called someone, "Yes I have got the pictures"."Good, you know what to do with them, right", The other person said . "Yes", Alisha smirked.







Maan got a call and he smiled looking at the number, "Where are you". "I'm fine Maan, how have you been. I heard you got married to her, congratulations", The other person smiled, genuinely happy for her friend but his next set of words got her disappointed, "Yes, I did but for revenge, I won't let her live happily , Sara". "Maan, I think you are wrong. Please don't let your revenge overshadow your love for her, I will find out more. So please don't do anything stupid", Sara said clearly worried about her friend who was pushed on the path of destruction. "Maan do you trust me", She asked. "What are you saying Sara, you know I do, but I won't stop this, until I get the satisfaction of ruining them like they did to me ", He said. "Maan , but she is innocent so please stop hurting her and yourself", She tried again. "In war there are no innocents, Sara", He said.Sara sighed knowing what he went through and what he was today was because...she resigned that thought and said, "Okay Maan , I will call you later". "But where are you", He asked again. Sara smiled bitterly, "Its better for you to not know". With that the call was disconnected, She never shares her thoughts with me'. He thought about his friend's words but still the revenge has overshadowed his love so he turned a deaf ear to it not knowing how he is being misled and she was trying to help him.






Sara called one of her men, "I want all the details on the Handas by the earliest how much time do you need". "10 days Ma'am", Her minion said. "Good, if not by 10 days then I will have your head , got that", she said coldly which sent shivers down the spine of the man standing in front of her who nodded and left his boss.







She thought back of that time, his screams on that day were still fresh in her mind, the way he sobbed when she consoled him, it took him time to get out of that trauma he faced but she knew it is still there in him, the fear, which he tries to mask behind this facade of arrogance, inside he is still that boy who is scared , the boy who has been fed with lies which his innocent mind believed making him what he is today, that boy was lost and so was she but not anymore, "I won't let you suffer anymore Maan , you will get your deserved happiness", She promised herself.





Evening, Maan returned this time he had sprinkled some drops of alcohol over him to give the idea that he was drunk when he was not , just to scare and torture her more. He asked his bodyguards to leave and rang the doorbell . Geet was cleaning up , when she was startled hearing the doorbell . Mustering up the courage she opened the door only to see her husband , smelling of alcohol and leaning on the door. She opened the door and gave him the way to get in . She was about to go when he grabbed her and pushed her against the door roughly , she was now dead scared of what he will do . Maan saw the fear in her eyes and knew his plan worked . "What is for diner", he slurred purposely."The maid has cooked something ...I...I will ..j..just check ", saying this she tried to leave but he held her more tightly . "Are you scared Geet ...come on now say it", He said pulling her close. "No , w..why wo..would I b scared of you", she managed to say . "Okay then , now entertain me ", she looked at him confusedly . He left her abruptly only to go and sit on the couch , "Now dance till I ask you to stop ", he said . "What are you looking at , I have seen you dancing around with your friends on your birthday and also you did dance with me too,so let me enjoy the show again, start ", he commanded . She was still looking at him ,"Why are you still standing, oh I forgot ,music right ...so make this more interesting ...dance on these ", saying this he threw some pebbles in front of her. Geet looked at him with hurt but he still did not show any mercy on her, Sara's words came to his mind but still he looked away for a second to forget that, her words reminded him of that pain and it made his resolve strong again, "I said start".Not having any choice she started , the pebbles pierced her delicate feet , and she winced in pain and stopped . "I said start dancing, hmm ...since you are not doing anything to entertain me I will have a different entertainment from you , after all you are my wife and remember I said I loved you ."



He started to advance towards her dangerously , she limped and moved backward , she was about to shout when he closed her mouth with his hand and threatened , "Shhh...not a word out of that mouth of yours or you will regret it . No one will be able to save you . I am your husband remember ".












She started crying but he got closer to her ,"Please leave me why are you doing this to me , what have I ever done to you ", he kissed her cheek as her tears hurt him but his torture was hurting her more and she cried again. "You haven't done anything dear", He said still kissing her cheeks pulling her closer. "Then why...please", She pleaded. He left her and said , "You want to know then go and ask your father, Mr Raj Handa, what has happened to my family my life because of him .You people are the monsters who have destroyed my life and I will destroy yours to give them pain , the pain which I have suffered for years ". He pushed her and went to his room . "My dad ...but he is dead now, what should I do now ...there must be some misunderstanding there have to be ...I have to find out ", she thought and decided to find out the truth .






So here is the next part , please give your honest reviews😃







Precap- Geet consoling Maan and trying to find the entire truth; no more tortures for Geet😆 😈



Edited by pixelflower620 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice story
Poor Geet love Maan
But Maan is ,confused with his emotions
Plzz do PM me update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago


thanks for waiting I m really sorry but my net isn't working properly so that is why could not update yesterday
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thanks for waiting, sorry my net is tooo slow that's why could not update yesterday
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice story

Poor Geet love Maan
But Maan is ,confused with his emotions
Plzz do PM me update soon



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Posted: 8 years ago
Well its cruel but i guess maan is mislead hope it will get clear before geets preservance gave up

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