AKDHA OS ON CHRISTMAS : THEIR CHRISTMAS EVE

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HEY GUYS Merry Christmas TO U ALL


HERE IS UR CHRISTMAS GIFT FROM MY SIDE,


YESTERDAY WHILE STUDYING THIS IDEA JUST COME IN MY MIND AND START IRRITATING ME, SO I THOUGHT TO PEN IT DOWN, ITS AN OS ON OUR AKDHA ON CHRISTMAS. SORRY FOR TYPOS SPELLING MISTAKES OR GRAMMAR MISTAKE AS I HAVEN'T CHECK WHAT I HAVE WRITTEN. I HOPE U LIKE IT.

In Shimla

A lady descend from the stairs holding her belly murmuring something in anger, her expressions can clearly show that she is very angry on her husband who has bring her here in Shimla to their house to celebrate Christmas eve but is absent from 2hr in the name of shopping and that too when she needs his warmth the most.

Jodha (angrily): let him come I will not talk to him.

That is when a handsome young lad enter the house holding a lot of shopping bags shivering due to cold, passing a wide smile to his angry wife and place the bags in hand on the side sofa and open the coat and hang it near the door (their house is well heated so they don't feel cold inside the house)

Jodha (folding her hands near her breasts): someone was saying that he will be back in an hour? (Said sarcastically)

Jalal (coming near her and try to hug her): sorry sweetie it took me some time for shopping, I was not able to decide what to buy as a gift (and make a puppy face)

Jodha (angrily): I will not melt with your sweet talks or your puppy face, u know how much we missed u in last 2 hrs. (said while turning to the other side.

Listening melt he remember something.)

Jalal: ahh I remember, I was also searching for this Na, (showing her a box) so I get a little more late.


Seeing her favorite ice-cream tub in jalal hand Jodha quickly take it.

Jodha: thank you hubby, u know how much we wanted to have this ice-cream (and take a spoon full of ice-cream and taste it) um it's tastier in this cold weather.

Jalal take place on sofa and make Jodha sit beside him

Jalal : how can I forgot that my baby and her mother carve for this ice-cream every day, their day can't be fulfill without this ice-cream (said while having ice-cream from Jodha's hand and stretch his body in relaxation)

Jodha (massaging his head with one hand): tired

Jalal (looking toward her with tired eyes): very.

Jodha (after kissing him on his cheeks): now how r u feeling? (Ask with smile)

Jalal (with teasing smirk): 5% charged up and will feel more better if u kiss me here (pointed toward lips)

Jodha (fake anger): jalal, u r tired still u r thinking of romance u r such...

But before she can continue she feel jalal lips on her pink lips, Jodha got lost in his lips but jalal broke kiss early as he feel something cold on his back.

Jalal (irritated): Jodha your ice-cream tub

Jodha (after looking at tub which she has placed on his back): opps sorry but it's not my mistake, it was u who kissed me all of the sudden (and take other spoon of ice-cream)

Jodha: by the way, you get the doll which u were searching for jenny

Jalal (happily): yes, finally I find it (and show her the packed gift); we should thank her as she is the only one who brings us here,

Jodha : waise I should say you pamper your drivers daughter (jenny) this much then how much u gona pamper our daughter (and place her hand on her bally), just for jenny's one demand to celebrate Christmas in Shimla u decide to party here instead of Mumbai

Jalal: hmm I will pamper my daughter a lot, she will be my princess and no one will be able to stop me not even her mother.

Jodha (giving last spoon in his mouth): come we should get ready before they come.

Jalal: yes sweetie u just go, I come after checking the preparation.

Jalal after checking preparation reaches their room and see all jodha's cloth scattered on the floor.

Jalal: sweetie what happened, y have u scattered these dress like this.

Jodha (with sad face): jalal see Na no dress is getting fit on me, (showing a dress) see this dress I purchased for the party but now it is also not getting fit on me.

Jalal: wait a min (and he goes from there and brings a gift box)

Jodha (confused): what is in this gift box?

Jalal : I was knowing that my girl is growing fast so no dress will be going to fit on her mama, so I bring this dress for her mother (said showing the dress) I know this may be not beautiful but what to do I only get this.


Jodha: taking the dress, who said it is not beautiful (and give him a box with a tie of same color as of her dress)

Jalal (astonish): u will never change; u always have the tie for me which can match with your dress.

Jodha: yup what to do I like my husband wear same color tie as of my dress (and run toward bathroom to change her dress)

Jalal also goes to on other room to change his dress and come to his room after getting completely ready and get mesmerized seeing his wife ready in the dress he brought for her.

Jodha: how I am looking?

Jalal: beautiful (and come and stand behind her) you are looking like an angel; I wish I can cancel the party and make love with u now.

Jodha blush hard listening to his shameless comment.

Jodha (with fake anger): jalal

Jalal slowly move his mouth toward her neck and start nibblling there.

Jodha (with heavy breath): jalal stop it, everyone can come any time (and that is when they hear doorbell)

Jalal (with irritation): no one let me romance with my wife.

jodha just giggle and both headed toward the living area which is decorated with decoration and Christmas tree for the eve and jalal go toward the door and open it. There he see jenny with her parents. They all enter the house and remove their coats.

Jenny (excited): uncle how I am looking in this pink skirt (said while showing her dress)

Jalal: you are looking beautiful and how is the decoration.

And jenny starts looking at decoration and become happy that her uncle has done so many preparations only for her wish.


Jenny (hugging jalal leg): thank you uncle for making my Christmas special.

Jalal: thankyou beta.

After some time many common friends of jalal and Jodha come, there was a knock on the door and jalal send jenny to see who is on the door jenny become surprised to see Santa Claus standing at the door

they sing christmas song and dance around santa

after some time they exchange gifts with one other, jenny become happy to see the Barbie the gift, after some time they also cut the Christmas cake.

After cake cutting it was the time for dance and every couple stand with their partners but our Jodha is rooted to her place trying to control her urge to go on the dance floor. Jalal knowing what is bothering her place his palm in front of her.

Jodha (confused): but how can I dance with my baby, what if something happen to her?

Jalal (assuring): don't worry I am here Na, nothing will happen to u and our baby and I know how much u love to dance.

Jodha happily take his hand and both move toward the dance floor where jalal hold Jodha tightly from her waist and the song is played by music system.



Tere dar pe aake tham gaye

Naina namaazi bann gaye

Ek dooje mein yun dhal ke

Aashiqana aayat ban gaye

Main aur Tum

I stopped when I reached your doorstep

My eyes became spiritual

Merging into each other

We became an aayat of love

As soon as the music is played both Jodha and jalal start to move with the lyrics of music holding each other tightly and looking in each other's eyes.



Kaisi dil lagaai kar gaye

Rooh ki rubaai bann gaye

Khaali khaali dono the jo

Thoda sa dono bhar gaye

Main aur Tum

What sort of liking of heart is this?

You have become a verse of my soul

Both of us were a bit empty

Now both of us are a bit filled


With these lines jalal twirl Jodha taking care that she does not trip and make her stand on her place and make her stand more closer to him not even space for air is left.



Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon

Itni si baat hai

Mujhe tumse pyaar hai

Yun hi nahin main tum pe jaan deta hoon

Itni si baat hai

Mujhe tumse pyaar hai



Today I am saying it clearly

It's a small thing

I love you

I do not give my life for you without any reason

It's a small thing

I love you

Jalal also sing these lines. Jodha blush hard listening his confession. Jalal lifts her chin up and again sings,



Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon

Itni si baat hai

Mujhe tumse pyaar hai



Today I am saying it clearly

It's a small thing

I love you

And the music starts to play where Jodha and jalal dance completely lost in each other. They didn't notice that the music has abruptly stopped and they still dancing lost in each other. Their trace is broken by the loud claps of their friends, and their one of newlywed couple friend comment that it seems as if Akdha is newlywed not them, listening his comment all laugh while Jodha and jalal become completely red.

After dancing singing Christmas song they all sit on the common table for having food. the table is full of cakes pastries, all item needed for Christmas. While having food they chit chat with one another and crack various jokes.

Abdul (said tasting ice-cream): jalal y have u brought dairy milk ice-cream it feels like I am a kid, whoever likes this has a very bad choice

Jodha who was enjoying her ice-cream become angry on his comment and stabbed his foot with her foot.

Abdul (in pain): ouch Jo what was that.

Jodha: for disliking my favorite ice-cream (and take a spoon full of ice-cream again)

Jalal (teasingly): don't say her favorite ice-cream bad; she can even eat a tub in one time all alone.

Listening his remark everyone laugh out loud and jodha again blushed. After some more time they all left the house living the couple alone to celebrate the eve. While sending them off jodha's eyes fall on the falling snow and she became excited.

Jodha (excited): jalal see snow is falling; I want to play in it,

Jalal (holding her hand): no sweetie u r not going in the snow u will get cold or u can even slip, I can't take a chance now.

Jodha (caressing her belly): I can understand that, don't worry we will come next year here and then play with snow.

Jodha then go to her room to change and jalal closes the house properly and when he reaches the room he sees Jodha standing there and looking at him as if wants something.

Jalal: sweetie do u wants something (said while side hugging her)

Jodha (excitedly): my Christmas gift

Jalal (thinking): but I remember I have already given it to u.

Jodha (confused): when

Jalal: arre u forgot I have brought u ice-cream + the dress u were wearing (said while opening his tie)

Jodha (irritated): but that were not gift but your amm responsibility and care toward me, moreover u forgot we exchange gift in evening (and she sees teasing smirk in corner of his lips) now don't act smart I know u have brought a gift for me, give me my gift.

Jalal (innocently): but I have really not brought any gift

Jodha (angrily): jalal

Jalal: ok baba here is Ur gift (and gives her a box.)

Seeing the box Jodha get excitedly but seeing the gift inside it her smile vanishes.

Jalal (concern): what happen sweetie? Y Ur smile vanish? U didn't like my gift?

Jodha: it's nothing like that (and gives him the gift which she has brought for him) and here's Ur gift.

Jalal open the box quickly and seeing the gift both Jodha and jalal start laughing and sit on the bed.

Jalal (still laughing): not again, we have given each other the same gift this year too.

Jodha: I thought this year it will be different but see this year again we gifted the same thing (said while placing her head on his chest)U know I was a Shimla's girl who used to love this chilled weather, but after ur coming in my life I started to hate this weather and start loving ur warmth (said while getting deeper in his chest) I still remember our first kiss on our first Christmas eve here in Shimla, how hot we were when kissing each other, every one was looking at us as if we were some alien but we both were lost in our world.

Jalal: u remember the gift we give to each other on our first christmas.

Jodha: yup how can I forget, we both purchased a showpiece to remember our first kiss

Jalal: remember how shocked we were when we see that we have exchanged same gift.

Jodha: yup, our twin showpieces

Jalal: remember our 2nd Christmas gift

Jodha: hmm, how can I forget, how hard I tried to find gift for u, but again our gifts turn out to b same.

Jalal (laughing): u wanted to gift me alarm clock so that I can wake up on time and here I give alarm clock to u so u can wake me up on time.

Jodha: hmm but its tone was nice ("I love u Jodha")

Jalal: remember our first Christmas gift after marriage

Jodha (angrily): how can I forgot ur last year gift, due to ur that gift every one still tease me.

Jalal (innocently): but it was the only pic I think suitable for the frame on the wall...

Jodha: but there were many more pics too, I have also selected a pic Na then y cant u select a decent one, y you selected a pic where u were kissing me.

Jalal : what to do it was the only pic in which I was kissing u (coming near her ears ) and I know u like to show that pic to ur so called friend to show that I love u and I am all urs.

Jodha (blushing): u knows that.

Jalal: yes I do and what is the reason for iPhone this year.

Jodha (hugging his arms): I know how much u love to have iPhone, but y u purchased IPhone for me, see my phone is fine (said showing her phone)

Jalal (sarcastically): u say this phone fine (irritated) how can a phone b fine when a baby elephant sit on it (and bit his tongue on what he has said)

Jodha (angrily): jalal

Jalal start running from there and behind him Jodha holding a pillow.

Jalal (hiding from Jodha): sorry Jodha I didn't mean to say u that, it was just a slip of tongue out of irritation.

Jodha (running behind him): how dare u jalal to say me an elephant u mean to say I am fat, it is just because of ur baby that I am fat (and throw a pillow on him which he easily duck)

Jalal: don't say like that sweetie it's our both baby.

Jodha: let it b (and throw another pillow on his side)

Jalal: sorry please forgive me this time(said holding his ears) for our baby, today is Christmas na please forgive me ( seeing Jodha calming jalal take a sigh of relief, but wait what a pillow landed directly on his face and Jodha go and stand near The window)

Jalal go and stand behind her holding her shoulder which is jerked by Jodha.

Jodha (still angry): don't even try to touch me.

Jalal (teasingly): sweetie please forgive me na, u know how much I love u my baby elephant who look more hot , sexy and cute in this new avatar, I wish to always see u pregnant like this.

Jodha blush hard listening his comment and forgive him, jalal hold Jodha from back and both stared out of the window the view on snow fall, when Jodha feel something

Jodha: jalal

Jalal (enjoying Jodha proximity): hmmm

Jodha: someone else is also there who want to give us Christmas gift

Jalal (confused): who

Jodha placed jalal hand over her belly where he feels his princess first kick.

Jalal (with happy tears sitting on his knees): oh my god Jo our baby just kicked I can't believe it, thank you so much for such a beautiful gift princess, its best gift in my life (and kiss on her belly)

Jodha: its best Christmas gift in our life from our princess jalal.

They both keep in same position enjoying their baby's kicks and Christmas Eve.

SO HERE IT COME TO AN END, I KNOW IT WAS NOT AS PER UR EXPECTATION AND IF IT WAS THAN PLEASE LIKE AND SHARE UR VIEWS.

AND ABOUT "PRINCE OF HER DREAMS" WILL UPDATE IT TOMORROW OR DAY AFTER TOMORROW.

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Jalal Is Such Caring Husand And Jo Love Her Antics
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