OS on today's episode

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm writing a one shot on the scene that happened today. I hope it's worth reading.

Arjun had gifted the dress to Maya making Suman very furious. Saanjh was hurt as well as shocked that Arjun could get so close to any other girl. Ayaan was neutral. He wasn't in anyone's support but even he thought that the dress was for Saanjh. Arjun's sudden change in behaviour shocked him along with the other family members. After Saanjh told her mother that Arjun had gifted the dress to Maya, she immediately went to Arjun's house. Anger could be clearly seen in her eyes.

Suman- Arjun! Arjun, kaha hain tu?

Vandana came out from the kitchen.

Vandana- Suman, kya hua? Tum aise chilla kyu rahi ho? Sab theek hain na? Itne gusse mein kyu ho tum?

Suman- Gussa na karu toh kya aarti utaaru tumhare bete ki? Meri bacchi ka dil todkar choor choor kar diya hain tumhaare uss nalaayak bete ne aur tum mujhse pooch rahi ho ki main gusse mein kyu hoon? Kaha hain woh bewakoof? Chodungi nahi aaj main use.

Vandana was shocked.

Vandana- Tum kya keh rahi ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Arjun toh gift lekar aaya tha na Saanjh ke liye. Tumhe toh khush hona chahiye par itna gussa kyu?

Suman- Kaahe ka gift! Woh koi gift nahi lekar aaya meri bacchi ke liye. Woh dress Arjun Maya ke liye lekar aaya tha. Roz ki tarah aaj phir se uss bewakoof ne meri beti ko rulaaya aur iss baar main use chodungi nahi.

Vandana- Kya? Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho, Suman?

Suman- Main sach keh rahi hoon. Yaqeen nahi aata toh pooch lo apne bete se!

Vandana- Arjun! Arjun, kaha ho tum? Jaldi aao!

Arjun felt irriated when Vandana called him. He replied from his room.

Arjun- Main nahi aa sakta! Aapko kuch kaam hain toh aap khud aa jao.

Vandana and Suman went to Arjun's room to confront him.

Vandana- Yeh sab main kya sun rahi hoon, Arjun? Jo dress tum Saanjh ke liye lekar aaye the woh tumne Maya ko de di?

Arjun was shocked. He could see Vandana and Suman's angry faces. He preferred to ignore her words and act as if he didn't know anything about the dress.

Arjun- Kaun si dress? Maine koi dress nahi khareedi kisike liye.

Vandana- Jhooth mat bolo! Hum sab yeh baat jaante hain ki tum Saanjh ke liye dress lekar aaye the. Toh phir aisi kaun si museebat aa padi ki woh dress tumne Maya ko de di?

Arjun- You know what? Mujhe na aap logo se baat hi nahi karni hain.

Arjun walked to the hall and was about to go out of the house when Vandana held his hand from behind.

Vandana- Tum aise meri baaton ko ignore nahi kar sakte, Arjun. Bolo! Jawaab do, kyu di tumne woh dress Maya ko jo tum Saanjh ke liye lekar aaye the?

Arjun stood there silently. Vandana got even more angry now. She yelled at him.

Vandana- Jawaab do, Arjun! Saanjh ke liye jo dress tum lekar aaye the woh tumne Maya ko kyu di?

Now, even Arjun was frustrated with the questions. He couldn't control anymore and shouted back.

Arjun- Arrey yaar, Saanjh ke liye nahi lekar aaya tha main woh dress! Woh dress Maya ke liye thi aur maine woh dress usi ko di. Bas? Mil gayi shaanti? Mil gaya jawaab? Pata nahi kaun si galti ki saza de rahe ho sab mujhe! Haat dhoke peeche pad gaye ho aap sab mere. Kyu? Arrey bhai, kyu? Insaan hoon main. Kutta banaake rakh diya hain yaar mereko sab ne! Yeh mat karo, woh mat karo, Maya se mat milo, usse dur raho, Maya yeh, Maya woh! Yaar, tangg aa gaya hoon main inn sab se! Roz Maya ke baare mein kuch na kuch bolte hi rehte ho aap log. Koi doosra kaam nahi hain aap logo ko? Meri life mein ungli kiye bina neend nahi aati aap logo ko? Meri bhi koi personal life hain. Aap log mujhe irritate karte ho roz aise! Mujhe meri life meri tarah se jeene do, please! Marr jaaunga main aise ek din. Thodi saans toh lene do mujhe. Robot nahi hoon main, insaan hoon bhai. Shaanti do thodi si mujhe, please! Hadh hain yaar!

Vandana and Suman were shocked.

Vandana- Arjun, main toh bas...

Arjun- Dekhiye Mrs. Vandana Sharma, aap hongi mere papa ki doosri biwi, aap hongi mere bhai ki maa, par aap meri maa nahi hain aur na hi kabhi bann sakti hain. Samajh gayi aap?

Vandana's eyes got wet. She was very hurt to hear Arjun's words.

Vandana- Arjun, main sirf tumhara bhala chahti hoon. Maya ke saath tumhari nazdeeki tumhe baaki sab rishton se dur kar degi. Trust me!

Arjun- Abb aap sikhayengi mujhe rishton ke baare mein? Jis aurat ne meri maa ki dost bankar unhi ke pati ko phansa liya, abb woh mujhe rishton ka gyaan dengi? Aap na apna rishton ka gyaan apne paas hi rakho, mujhe mat jhaado apna gyaan kyuki mujhe rishton ki samajh aap se lene ki zaroorat nahi hain.

Vandana started crying and Suman was consoling her.

Suman- Tu uss Maya ke jaal mein buri tarah phans chuka hain, Arjun. Tu apni saari tameez bhool gaya hain. Bado se baat karne ki tameez bhool gaya hain tu!

Arjun- Aunty, aap...

Arjun was about to say something when Saanjh spoke from behind.

Saanjh- Hold on! Ek aur shabd nahi. Tu apni maa ki izzat nahi karta, woh teri problem hain. Par main tujhe meri maa ki insult nahi karne doongi.

Arjun- Hello? Tu kaha se tapki? Jab kuch pata nahi ho, toh beech mein mat bola kar! Teri maa yaha khud aayi hain mujhe baatein sunane, main nahi gaya tere ghar unki insult karne. Abb woh khud mere ghar aakar meri izzat lootegi, toh mujhe bhi khud ko defend karna hoga na.

Saanjh- Tu sach mein pagla gaya hain, Arjun! Maya ke alawaa kuch dikhta hi nahi hain tujhe. Woh dress kyu di tune Maya ko? Kya lagti hain woh teri? Woh ladki khila rahi hain tujhe? Uske paise ka khaa raha hain tu?

Arjun- Sirf mujhe nahi, meri poori family ko khila rahi hain woh pichle 2 maheeno se! Yeh aurat (Pointing at Vandana) jo mujhe abhi abhi lecture jhaad rahi thi, yeh bhi Maya ke paison se hi khaa rahi hain itne dino se. Salary mujhe wahi deti hain, tu nahi deti. Toh haa, logically wahi ladki khilaati hain mujhe. Usi ke paison ka khaa raha hoon main. Aur jis ladki ki tu baat kar rahi hain na, woh paagalon ki tarah pyaar karti hain mujhse. Kuch bhi kar sakti hain mere liye.

Suman- Haa toh Saanjh bhi karti hain na tujhse pyaar! Woh bhi marti hain tujh par.

Arjun- Jaanta hoon! Pata hain mujhe.

All of them were shocked.

Saanjh- Tu jaanta hain?

Arjun- Kaun nahi jaanta? Sab jaante hain yeh baat. Itna bhi bewakoof nahi hoon main par tu zaroor bewakoof hain. Itne saalon se main try kar raha tha tujhe yeh indirectly bataane ki ke main tujhse pyaar nahi karta aur nahi kar sakta. Darr lagta tha mujhe yeh soch kar ki kabhi agar tune mujhe propose kiya toh main phans jaaunga. Bhagwaan se bas yahi maangta tha ki tu mujhe propose na kare. Haa main bol nahi paaunga aur na tu sun nahi paayegi. Inn sab mein humari dosti toot jaayegi aur yeh main bilkul nahi chahta par aaj bohot ho gaya. Tum sab mil kar baari baari mujhe bajaate ho aur main bajtaa jaata hoon. Mandir ka ghanta hoon kya main? Har koi baja kar jaata hain!

Saanjh was hurt. She started crying.

Saanjh- Arjun, main tujhse pyaar karti hoon.

Arjun- Haa toh? Main kya karu? Itne saalon tak mujhe tujhse pyaar nahi hua toh tune socha kaise ki aage jaakar ho jaayega? Paagal, mujhe tujhse pyaar hona hota toh abb tak ho chuka hota. Sach toh yeh hain ki main tujhse pyaar kar hi nahi sakta. Itne saalon tak tujhe yeh baat samajh kaise nahi aayi?

Saanjh broke down and started crying. Suman yelled at Arjun.

Suman- Arjun! Aaj hadh kar di tune. Uss Maya ke liye tune meri Saanjh ko thukdaaya? Aaj toh main uss daayan ka khoon kar doongi.

Arjun- Maya ko inn sab mein mat kheecho aap, Aunty. Maya nahi bhi hoti tab bhi mujhe aapki beti se pyaar nahi hota. Kyuki woh sirf meri acchi dost hain. Usse zyaada Saanjh mere liye kabhi kuch thi hi nahi. Aur rahi baat uss dress ki toh haa, woh dress main Maya ke liye lekar aaya tha aur maine uski dress usi ko di. Toh abb kya karu main? Usse woh dress waapas maangu aur Saanjh ko laakar doon? Yahi chahte ho aap log?

Suman- Kyu di woh dress use? Kya lagti hain woh teri? Pyaar karta hain tu uss daayan use?

Arjun lost his cool now. He yelled at Suman.

Arjun- Bas karo yaar! Tab se chappad chappad kar rahe ho sab. Dimaag kharaab kar diya mera. Aur haa, Maya ko daayan kehne se mujhe aapki beti se pyaar nahi ho jaayega. Maya is a beautiful person from the inside as well as from the outside. Woh jitni khoobsoorat baahar se hain, utni hi khoobsoorat andar se bhi hain. Aur rahi baat pyaar ki, toh haa main karta hoon usse pyaar. Bohot zyaada pyaar! Beyhadh pyaar! Abb kar lo jo karna hain. Ukhaad lo jo ukhaadna hain par main Maya se pyaar karta hi rahoonga aur abhi isi waqt, main uska proposal accept karne jaa raha hoon. Abb main aap logo ka ghanta nahi banoonga. Jab marzi aap log mujhe baja kar nahi jaa sakte. Jo karna hain, kar lo aap sab!

Saying this, Arjun angrily went out of the house to confess his love to Maya.

~THE END~
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Sharmin-JW-20 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lol I really want this kind of scene to happen tomorrow . .but sadly that won't happen.. .
But really want this type of scenes in Future.. .😃
Great os . .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArYa-JenWin20

Lol I really want this kind of scene to happen tomorrow . .but sadly that won't happen.. .

But really want this type of scenes in Future.. .😃
Great os . .


Innovative ideas keep running inside my head 24x7 and some of them, I share with you all this way. 😉 And may be we'll get to see something like this in the future.
Edited by chandra1998 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandra1998


Innovative ideas keep running inside my head 24x7 and some of them, I share with you all this way. 😉 And may be we'll get to see something like this in the future.

That's y we have called you guru . ..😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArYa-JenWin20


That's y we have called you guru . ..😉


Issshhh don't call me that. I don't deserve to be known as a "Guru". 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CooL OS !!!
I would really like this to happen not whole but to some extent that at least arjun know how saanjh feels for him nd of course arjun to love maya (that would be the best thing for which i think everyone is watching this show)
but this is not going to happen soon i know 🥱
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg mujhe seriously aise laga mai episode dekh rhi hu
Very well written


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Posted: 8 years ago
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I missed the OS part in the title and thought this was a written update when I began to read it. Suffice to say it broke my heart when I realized this will never happen in the show and is only what we dream of.
Thank you for writing this wonderful piece in which Arjun has a spine, Saanjh gets a rude awakening (which wouldn't have been necessary had she just focused on herself besides Arjun for once), and the two pathetic women get what they deserve.

Besides Maya, everyone on the show pisses me off and in this OS, I was happily cheering on Arjun. Well done, lol! Thanks once again! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome os loved every part of it
I wish future me aisa koi scene ho to me cvs ko ek tight wali pappi and jhappi du
Thanks for the pm
If possible next part b likh lo jisme arjun maya ka proposal accept karke confess kare
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sup3rman

<font color="#990033" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3">CooL OS !!!
I would really like this to happen not whole but to some extent that at least arjun know how saanjh feels for him nd of course arjun to love maya (that would be the best thing for which i think everyone is watching this show)
but this is not going to happen soon i know🥱</font>


This is never going to happen in the show. 😔 Yes, I agree Arjun and Maya may come together towards the end but that won't happen soon.

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