SHIVIKA-From MU to Love

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Hi! I'm Pri... .A new member of Forum...Trying To write a new #FF... .Hope U all would like it.. & in this matter Mansi di was my Inspiration to write it...I lost my biggest inspiration come close friend Arpita few years back when she died due to cancer...after that day I couldn't write anything till now...bt then Di's writing inspired me to be back with my skill...so I'm trying to do it again after almost 4years...Hope U like it...Enough of Bakbak...here I'm starting...

This would be based on the Current track of IB...It's my Favourite show now a days but the "Gadha" SSO bored me a lottt...Every Character would be same as IB...

As Anni came from the Blue Bliss Resort & Shivaay Left the hall all angry knowing Anni tried to spy on Tia Annika followed him with full 'Josh' & reached their room...As soon as he sensed her he came back to his so called "BAGADBILLA"/"TAADIBAAZ" avtar & started shouting on her...

S: How DARE YOU ANNIKA TO DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT?????HOW CAN U STOP SOOO LOW THAT U STARTED FOLLOWING HER THAT TO WITHOUT NO REASON???

A: NOOO REASON???? I had a valid reason to follow/spy her Shivaay...She's already married & cheating on YOU with another guy...

S: OHHH REALLYYY????NOW U WILL TELL ME THAT SHE IS CHEATING ME WHO BEATRAYED ME HERSELF WITH SOMEONE ELSE???

A: WHATTT???WHEN i CHEATED U & WITH WHOM???

S: JUST CHUCK IT...TELL ME...do U have any proof regarding that...that Tia is cheating on me with Another Guy?(turning his head to some other side)

A: Yes I hv...(in my #FF they clicked some pics of her with Robin but couldn't see his face & when she found to be spied by AniOmRu she md Him run away hiding behind a waiter & when OmRU tried to chase him he pushed a pussing guy in their way so no Robin's death & no Tia revenge drama here)

thn tried to show him her phone but found it to be lost...& in this searching process he lost his temper & broke out 4 the 2nd time...

S: Couldn't find it write????

A:I guess I lost it Shivaay...

S: I think U didn't lost it...

A: did U find my cell somewhere????

S: me& Ur phone???No...actually I guess no one can have...cause I fill U didn't have any proof so now to trap me Ur making this cooking this fake story of stealing...I guess U r forgetting my name...I'm SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI...U can't trap me like this innocent face of urs always...

A: What the hell U mean by cooking fake stories Shivaay????& What do U mean by Trapping U?????that too again...I guess U have lost it Shiv...I can't make head or tail out of Ur lines Shiv...

S: Ohhh!!!!!so now U would say that u r right & I'm wrong...U know what I could have fallen For ur words If I won't know the real you...I could have fallen for Ur Innocense...BUT IT'S NOT POSSIBLE NOW MISS ANNIKA...[ANNI was shocked 2 hear Ms. Annika that to From her own Husband & then he started again]don't be Shocked to hear Ms. Annika Annika cause I DON'T ACCEPT U AS MY WIFE & WON'T DO THAT EVER IN MY WORST NIGHTMARE...CAUSE A CHARECHTERLESS GIRL WHO CAN SLEEP WITH ANY RANDOM GUY JUST 4 15 LACKS[ hearing this Anni raised her hand to slap Shivaay bt he hold it so tight that Anni winced in pain]DON'T U DARE ANNIKA...D.O.N.T Y.O.U DAAAREEE...& U KOW WHAT DON'T HAVE RIGHT TO BE MY WIFE & TO POINT HER FINGER ON A PURE HEARTED INNOCENT GIRL LIKE TIA SAYING HER CHARECTERLESS...LOOK AT UR OWN FIRST THEN SAY ABOUT OTHERS...

A: WHATTT THE HELL R U SAYING SHIVAAY???DO U EVEN KNOW THAT U CALLED ME A P***TIT**E??

S: YEAH I KNOW & i MEAN IT...& IF u CAN dO THIS THEN WHAT MISTKE HAVE I DONE TO SHOW U THE MIRROR...DIDN"T U SLEPT WITH DAKSH THAT DAY AT HIS ROOM???

A: Daksh????Who told U Shivaay????

S: DAksh himself...

A: & U trusted him???

S: YES I DID???SHOULDN'T I???afterall U R a middle class girl with no class,status & money problem...& 15 Lacks is really A big deal for U...

[Anni was HURT< felling guilt that she fell for a guy who can think that cheap of HER...even can call her a P****ti***e so casually & can justify his words too...She was ashemed of her whole being that SHe took PHERAS with a guy who doesn't have minimum respect to her...she broke down completely from inside but hiding her fillings as always & holding HER HEAD HIGH she spoke]

A: Really Shivaay???? I used to think that U r a GREAT BUSINESS MAN & A INTELLIGENT PERSONT WHO USES HIS BRAIN ALWAYS IN A PROPER WAY & CAN FIGURE OUT THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN REAL & FAKE AT HIS OWN...BUT U PROVED ME WRONG TODAY...{in this time Shivaay tried to say something but Anni stpped her wshwing her palm with full attitude]

I'M NOT DONE YET SHIVAAY...IT'S MY TURN...U HAVE SAIED WAY TOO MUCH ALREADY & I HAD ENOUGH OF UR BRAINLESS NONSCENCE TILL NOW...NOW I"LL SAY & U WILL HEAR...SO MR. SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI JUST ANSWER A SIMPLE QUESTION...HOW MUCH AMOUNT ONE CAN FILL IN A BLANK CHEQUE...I GUESS TOO MANY THAT CAN BE MUCH MORE EXPENSIVE THAN 15 LACKS RIGHT?????

S: [being totally clueless of her attitude & what she was saying...hesitating a bit] YEESSS...SOOO?????

A: & I FILL U DON'T HAVE A SHORT TIME MEMORY LOSS PROBLEM OR SOMETHING R8?????[FROWNING A LIL]

S: DEFINETLY NOOOTTT...[IN FULL ANGER&ATTITUDE]

A: THEN REMEMBER THAT U GAVE ME A BLANK CHEQUE ONCE TO BUY ME AFTER MAKING ME HOMELESS...WHEN I DIDN'T ACCEPT UR MONEY THAT TIME THEN WHY NOW????JUST THINK...

[by this words of Anni something stuck on Shivaay's useless brain & he looked at Anni in a helpless way like some has taken back a chocolate from a child's hand...but couldn't utter a word]

A: JUST TELL ME SHIVVAY COULDN'T I?????BUT I DIDN'T...& WHEN i COULD EARN THAT MUCH THAT DAY THEN WHY I DIDN'T????DIDN'T U THINK IT FOR ONCE ATLIST????& NOW OUT OF NOWHERE WHY SHOULD I SLEEP WITH HIM????

S: THEN THOSE PAPERS????HE SHOWED ME A CONTRACT PAPER OF 15 LACKS...[being as stupid as him...actually I don't have any word to describe his stupidity]

A: WHICH DAY SHIVAAY???

S: THE DAY I PREPONED MY MARRIAGE...

A: THAT WAS A LOAN PAPER WHICH I TOOK FROM BANK BY SHAKTI UNCLE'S REFFERENCE...U COULD HAVE KNOWN IT BY CHECKING PAPERS BUT U DIDN'T...

[Shivaay nodded negative like a kid with teary eyes which was expressing his shock,disbelief altogether hearing about loan]

A: & IF NOT POSSIBLE THEN ASK UNCLE URSELF ONLY...HE WON'T LIE TO U FOR ME OFCOURSE...

S: [then being totally stupid again] I SAW U SETTING HIS BEDSHEET WHILE HE WAS WEARING SHIRT THAT MORNING...

A: U SAW ME THERE AS I SLEPT IN HIS ROOM THAT NIGHT[Shiv rolled his eyes trying to prove him r8 but actually how much dumb he was]BUT NOT WITH DAKSH????

S: REALLY????THEN WITH WHOM????DON'T TELL ME WITH PRINKU AS SHE SAW SOME COCKROACH IN HER ROOM...

A: WITH SOUMYA AS SHE SAW SOME INTRUDER IN HER ROOM THAT NIGHT & GETTING SCARED SHE CALLED DAKSH & THEN HE SHIFFTED TO HER ROOM & GAVE HIM HIS & CALLED ME TO HELP HER...INCASE U CAN'T TRUST THIS MIDDLECLASS GIRL THEN GO & ASK SOUMYA...

S: IF SO THEN WHY DIDN'T U TELL ME...

A; I DON'T LIKE TO TAKE HELP A PERSON WHO PAYS SOME1 FOR HELPING HIM BY HER PURE INNOCENT WOULD WIFE...

S: WHAT????WHEN I DID SO????

A: UR SANGEET DAY ONLY...WHEN I CAME TO U ASK FOR THE MONEY U PAID TO ME BY TIA...

S: I GAVE IT TO U AS TIA SAID THAT SHE INVITED FEW MORE TO THE EVENT & uU DIDN'T HAVE ANY IDEA SO U WOULD NEED SOME EXTRA CASH...& IF SO COULDN'T U ASKED ME REASON????

A: I DID SHIVAAY BUT U ONLY DENIED TO TELL ME...

S: CAUSE I NEVER EXPECTED THIS KIND OF MU...BUT TRUST ME I HADN'T SUCH INTENTION...

A: OK...FINE...THAT DAY MAY BE IT WASN'T UR FAULT BUT 2D U HURT ME...U SMASHED MY HEART WHICH DEVELOPED A FELLINGS 4 U...BUT I FORGOT THAT I'M GIVING IT TO A WRONG PERSON...[Shivaay was shocked to d core hearing this but couldn't utter a word...in guilt...he felt some1 has stabbed his heart thousand times with a knife & it was bleeding]...

S: R U SERIOUS ANNIKA?????

A: IT'S NONE OF UR BUSINESS NOW MR.SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI...I FELL 4 U ONCE...BUT NOW I'M REALISING WHAT A GREAT BLUNDER WAS MADE ME...I FELL IN LOVE WITH A GUY WHO DOSEN'T EVEN HESITATE TO CALL ME A P****TIT**E...ACTUALLY WHY I'M SAYING ABOUT HESITATION??????YOU SAID IT QUITE BRIEFLY IN A PROUD WAY AS IF U HAVE CAUGHT A B***** THIEF RED HANDED...[now Shivaay eyes got teared up fully & after crossing the limit of holding it back it bursted breaking the sheild of the great SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI's eyes & he started shedding tears silently...]

A: [now sobbing & due to the pain, anger, agony & helplessness she was suprressing inside her, her voice got choked a lil] & WHAT U SAID????? I DON'T DESERVE TO BE UR WIFE????U KNOW WHAT THE REALITY IS...A J**K LIKE U DOSEN'T DESERVE TO BE MY HUSBAND...I KNOW I'M NOT A WEALTHY PERSON LIKE YOU BUT WHATEVER I HAVE I CAN DEFINETLY HIGHER A LAWYER 2 FILE A DIVORCE...& IN CASE U AIN'T FILLING WELL WITH IT U CAN SEND THE PAPERS IN MY HOUSE BY UR LAWYER I'LL SIGN IT INSTANTLY...

[hearing this Shivaay felt like the world of him stopped infront of his eyes at once...He went totally NUMB...BUT THEREFORE WITH GREAT DIFICULTY COULD UTTER JUST ONE THING WHITH A HUGE SHOCK]

S: DIIIVORCEEE???

A: [turning to the open door she said briefly mastering as much strenth as she could in her she replied] HAAN [& stromed out of the room giving no chance to speak to Shivaay]

Shivvay wanted to stop her. wanted to plead her to stay back at his mansion but couldn't move a bit than where he was...He was felling guity regreting for his deeds towards her...felt the pain thousand times more than he has given her in past by insulting her, not trusting upon her, marring her forecfully & more than everything for disrespecting her character, calling her a P****TIT**E INDIRECTLY...

That's it 4 2d..😆😳I know it was a bit long but I have cleared almost all the MU they were having...& don't worry peeps I won't let them break apart...afterall they are my FAVOURITE COUPLE #SHIVIKA errr... & plese post a feedback guys it'll encouraging me to write...anything is welcome...4m slipper to shoes..😒4m egg to tomato...🤔but chocolates & Fuchka😃[bengali version of golgappa] are my favourite😆😳...sighing off today...tata...

PRI...😉😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its a very nice first attempt as u resolved all d mu's they had ever had..nd here annika preferred to say her thing too.
One suggestion..avoid all caps feeding of d story..its difficult to read words in all caps.

Now waiting 4 d next as to what shivaay does to win her back..in ff we can take liberties na..haha!!

Waiting 4 next...
Nd it feels so good to know tht I inspired u to write..keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys!!!!!!this is Pri here...I'm back with the next part...I got late due to a busy schedule...so a HUGEEE SORYYY for that...& thanx to all who commented & liked...and to my silent readers too...LOVE U All...ok so let's moov to the story...
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ANNIKA...
As soon as she stepped out of his room she felt as a dam of tears boke and the rivers flowed from her eyes...all HIS harsh,cruel was pricking her brain,stabbing her heard...she couldn't beleave what she heard from HIM...how can HE think sooo low of her??????how can even HE think that she can do something like...she can't even think of doing such cheap act & he was conveinced that she could...was HE the same person who shouted on ACP for pointing finger on her charachter???????was HE the same person who called her his FAMILY...was HE the same who rushed to her house just to protect her from her FAKE stalker???????NOOO...not possible...HOW????same person can react in so many ways with her only...the person used to protect her from all kind of insult started defaming her HIMSELF???????WHY?????WHY this things happens to her only??????WHY God snatches her LOVED ones from her all the time?????YEAH...OFCOURSE she LOVED HIM...she loved him when he used get affected by her words...WHEN he protected her from the harsh word of Media & ACD...she loved him when She called her FAMILY...when he took part in Ganapati Visarjan only cz of her...when he protected her from Tia's fake theft accusion...when Tia tried to say that she saved him from murder case only for money...when HE danced with her going totally crazy on that pool party...when HE slept on her shoulder& then on her lap in pain killer affect...WERE those persons SHIVAAY?????then who's THIS?????
NOOO...she CAN'T...CAN'T think anymore...she broke down completely...there she found herself...SOMWHERE in some dark desserted road...but the darkness of the road couldn't affect her...how can she get affected with this darkness????when all her INNER LIGHT WENT OFF??????yeah...this darkness was just nothing compared to the DARKNESS of her inner soul...she wasn't afraid of it NOW...she couldn't feel anything...she was felling sooo alone...LONELY...yes she was sooo A...LONEEE...she had NONE in this vast world to think about HER...CARE for HER...to LOVE her...make her SMILE...with this thought a FACE infront of her eyes...it was of SHAHIL...yes Shahil her lil brother...yes she HAD someone beside her...with whom she could share her pain...her GRIEF...her PROBLEMS...her HAPPINESS...EVERYTHING...everything that a person can feel...& being a little by age who always ACTS as HER BIG BROTHER & try to protect her always...Yes she found her straonth back.. .. she has to go back to OM to bring her SHAHIL to herself. . & tried to stand up again...& then she felt a pain in her feet...she found stone stuck on her feet...when she pulled the stone it started bleeding...then too she managed to stamd up on her feet again...but just taking a few step she fell down hitting the footpath by her head & fell unconsous...but what she didn't know was she was on the streat just beside the Oberoi Art Gallery...
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OM...
Here in his gallery He just finisjed his new sclupture of a beautifull girl & when for the final time he checked it his eyes popped out of his socket...not trusting his eyes he pinched his hand & then he was SHOCKES...he couldn't belive that the face of the new made sculpture was of HER...MISHA...the girl he met 2d morning & THEN...as soon as the event flashed before his eyes a slight but bright enough smile crept on his lips...the same lips which touched hers when they fell on floor...he shied on that thought...& his cheeks went red on thought of HER...MISHA...cute name??????nah?????just as her...& this trance broke when one of his intern called out...
Intern: ain't U coming??????
O: he looked at d watch & read d time...it was 10:30 alrdy...
Yeah!!!!!U go...I'm cmmg...& will lock d gallery myself...
then he looked back at the sculpture again smiled & taking keys(of his car&gallery) walked out of the room...locking the door behind he placed the car on his pocket & took out the car keys & opened d door of his black SUV & drove out his gallery...he was driving happily when a female figure caught his sight lying on footpath...he felt a sudden pain & Annika face flashed front of his eyes suddenly...he couldn't get d reason but stopped the car & walked 2wards d figure...& the view front of his blured in a sec due to tears as he saw a blood drenched Annika...he picked her up on his arms & put her in d passenger seat beside driver's one & drove away 4 hospital ...on the way he called Shivaay...
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SHIVAAY...
it was almoast 30 mnts after Annika left his room...but she didn't came back...WHY???????WHERE is SHE?????is she fine...but to know about her state he need to meet her...to see her... he need to APPOLOZISE her...yeah HE would do it...when he can make such a blunder he can appolzise too...& HE WILL...with this thought he rushed out of his room ...asked every person of OM & all the stuffes too...when on of gaurds said she walked away from OM...he took his car keys & drove for Annika's house...but for his disbelief he found a big lock hanging on the entrance...which meant Annika didn't come here...THEN???????where she can be???????that too so late at night...he came back to his car again...keeping his head on the stearing wheel he cried out again...
S: Where r u Annika??????plz come back?????where I'll find U now??????plz come back...WHERE ARE YOU??????
he cried out loud pouring his soul into it...when his phone rang flashing Om's name...first he thought to reject it but picked it unwillingly...
S: Hel...
cutting him Om spoke woth a croaked voice...
O: Co..come too C..CIITYY Hoospitalll SHIIIVAAYY...
by this statement he got startled...
S: Whaat happened Om???????WHATTT?????
O: WO...wo ANNI...ANNI...ANNIKA...
S: What happened to MY ANNIKA OM????????????
O: She is in ICU. ...come here...FAST...I'll explain later...but come first mere bhai...come first...
he disconnected crying...
S: He went numb...couldn't feel his body...he got chocked...a strong pain, a fear of losing someone so close engulfed her whole being...he couldn't bear it any more. ..but somehow gathering all the strenght he could muster he drove to hsp. ...
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All for 2d. ..sorry for long one. ...& pardon me if I boared U...but plz encourage me by commenting...
& yeah Misha would be Om's girl in my #FF...( 4 my CFF Misha as she is a big fan of Kunal & has hugeee crush on him so 4 her her name is Misha...& the peck is a belated B'Day gift for her)...I'm considering Puja Bhamra here...share ur view on it too...
& 1 more thing do u want Tia's pregnency track here...drop ur suggesion...
Sighning of today...
Happy New year 2016...keep smiling...
Bye...
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Hey!!! I'm back with another part but lil sad at this time as not getting comments properly...but thanks to my twitter friends lk Chandu, Mansi di, Nicky, Sadia & others who inspires me to write...but to all readers I have a request plz do comment guys if not pssbl hit d lk button atlst...it would help me a lot...ok now enough of this mu blabbering get back to the story...



Shivaay enterd into the hsp.as a stroam...& rushed to the O.T...Where he found Om sitting on the near by bench leaning his head on the wall...he went to him almoast running and sat on his knees infront him & asked him in a shaky tone...
S: Wh...What hap...happend Om?????is she fine?????what happened to her?????where did U find her?????
O: but he was so shocked to the core that he looked at Shivaay with a blank look and was shedding tears only...
S: being restless he shouted on him on a high tone...
WHAT'S WRONG WITH U OM??????I'M ASKING U SOMETHING...JUST SPEAK UP DAMNNN ITTT!!!!!
& broke down...
O: He narrated the whole story how he found Anni while driving how she was totally drenched in blood & she was saying *how can he think this abt me* in a unconcious state...
Shivaay was shaken by this...he knew that he was the soul reason behind all this and started crying hugging Om tight...& Om was talking...in this time he understood that something has b/w these 2 which led to these & his own brother was at fault as always but remaind scilence as he knew whatever has happened his brother was repentint for it & now he needed him by his side so he reciprocated...
by then doc spoke breaking their thought...
Doc: Who's her husband?????
S: Me doc...why?????what happened?????is she fine?????
Doc: Yes she is absolutely fine...it's just that ki she has lost so much blood due to head & leg injury & hadn't take anything till some days I guess so she was so weak that she fell unconsious but everything is fine now...she gained concious...so U can meet her now...but don't make her speak & don't let her take stress...
This made Shivaay releaved a lil & a lil smile crept on his face...
S: can we tk her home?
Doc.: yeah...I'm arrng d papers come & sign it but take proper care of her & make sure that she take proper meal...
S: yeah thnx a lot doc...
doc left d place...
O: Shivaay U know na what U just say to doc???
S: YEAH...OFCOURSE...that I wld tk proper care of Annila..
O: unhu(shaking head in negative) nt tht Shivaay...U said something before that...
S: frowning a lil...What????
O: U said that Annika is ur wife...
S: so???
O: so what Shivaay????
S: what should I say????she is my wife only so should I call her sister or what????
O: nooo no ofcourseee nooottt...(smirking)
S: she is in that cabbin & here U r talking this nonscence...leave all this here & lets go...
sayinh this Shovaay left the place on his toe & entered into Annika...by the time the nurse came & handed over the discharge papers to Shivaay...& then turni.g to Annika she spoke...
N: U r discharged...can leave for home now Mrs. Oberoi...
wasting no time Annika snnaped...
A: I guess U have mistaken ma'am...I'm not an Oberoi nor married...I'm Annika...MISS ANNIKA...THAT'S ALL...
hearing this Shivaay felt like someone stabbed his heart with a dagger & his heart was bleeding...& a lone tear escaped his eyes...which wasn't unnoticed by Annika...but after what he said & the way he said those words his tears meant didn't affected her that much...yeah she felt bad seeing him in tears but it was nothing infront of that pain which she was going just cz of him...the person she loved this much...this thought pain her more that she closed her eyes tight...she didnt want to shed her tears but tears already made their way through her chicks...this hurted her more & tried to go near her but this time Annika sensed him & blurted out...
A: Don't come close to me Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi...what would others say if U come close to a road side trash who can spent night for money with anyone & can give one night pleasure to any rich person...it would spoil ur image...so please don't come...
S: plz don't say this Annika...I know I was wrong...I made a blunder this time...actually I made a sin which doesn't worthy of ur forgiveness...but plz Annika plz talk to me...U always complain na that I don't know how to say sorry...there U go I'll say sorry...infinte times...but plz talk to me...I'm sorry...sorry...so..
Annika roared in anger & irritation this time...
A: WTH u think of ur self Mr. Oberoi?????what do U think????U would say sorry & I'll forgive U...will forget ur words...Ur sorry will heal my wounds????I would forget those words point my character????I would forget that U called me a PR*****UTE confidently...NO MR. OBEROI...I CAN'T...I can't forget those words...EVER...EVER IN MY LIFE...what U said about me & my character I can't forget it ever in my life...U proved me right...I felt from childhood that rich persons specialy doesnot know how to value someones feelings...how to value someones love...they always break a person into million pieces...but when I met Ur family I thought that may be I was wrong...every business man ain't same...some has heart atleast but NO...U PROVED ME RIGHT AGAIN...U showed me that bussimen r same...all are same...they doesn't know to respect someone...doesn't know how to behave...how to LOVE...they only know to break into million pieces that U can't even left with the courage to assemble Ur self once they leave U...U would be of nowhere...I thought U would be different may be...but no...U are just the same as he did in past...actually U were worse than him...I HATE U MR. SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI...I HATE U...I HATE FOR REMINDING ME OF HIM...who left me...U r sooo same to him...
but he couldn't understand anything...what was she saying...who hurted her before...whom she hated this much like HIM...WAIT WHAT??????she HATES me?????but HOW?????she said that she FELL for me...she LOVED me...then HOW?????NO... NOT POSSIBLE...She can't...she CAN'T HATE ME...
S: U said that U loved me Annika...then how can U hate me now?????(coming close to Annika)
A: just stay away from me Mr. Oberoi...& about my feelings??????U have burried it in grave today only...
S: then I promise Mrs. Oberoi I'll dig that grave & bring it back to U...
A: Tia isn't here Mr. Oberoi...that U r addressing Mrs. Oberoi...
S: I know Mrs. Oberoi that she isn't here...if she would I would have called her Ms. Kapoor nt Mrs. Oberoi...cz there's only one Mrs. SSO & tht's U Mrs. Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi...but before that tell me who hurted U before??????who broke ur trust?????tell his name Annika...I'll make sure that he would face the hell...speak up Annika...
A: That's none of ur business Mr. Oberoi...I can do it by my self only...Ms. Annika (opemed her mouth to say something more but stoped in midway & sopke again covering up) Annika can do it herself...& please leave now Mr. Oberoi...I need to sleep...I need to take rest...
saying this she turned to another side & closed her eyes...& when he felt she slept he left the cabin...& met a shocked disgusted irritated frustrated Om who was standing infront of corridor was a silent spectator of all the events happened inside the cabin...he couldn't belive his ears that his brother can do something like that...can say something to her...& seeing him their with that kind of expression on his face Shivaay understood that he heard everything...& he tried to speak something but Om stopped him...
O: shut up Shivaay...U know what till now I felt that U follow Mr. Oberoi on the way of business only...but now I got to know that U started to follow him in real life too...U kknow what I think I should call U as Mr. Oberoi too...but U know what I can't...cz if I do it na then I need to explain it too everyone else...& Dadi & Rudra won't be able to handle it...so I won't...but I can't forgive U Shivaay...can't forgive U ever...can't shivaay...Annika was right every business man are same...doesn't care about anyone's feelings...I don't know whom she was talking about...but after seeing U & my so called Dad it's confirmed that U all are just the same...
sayimg this he strated to leave when Shivaay held his hand to say something but he left it with a jerk and started to left but then turned to Shivaay again which made a hope in his mind but then breaking his reverie Om spoke...
O: Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi all formalities are dpne regarding Annika's discharge so If u want U can come with us by Ambulance or else U have ur car...
S: plz don't talk to me like that om...plz...
O: I'm not having much time to waste here so plz come if U want as none of our family knows about this incidents...& I think they won't be pleased to know all this...so plz hurry up...saying this he left leaving a guilt,shattered shivaay behind who lost his Love& his brother his om at the same time...& the only one responcible for this was him & his stupid ego...& that time only he vowed to himself that he would make everything like earlier...& get them back in his life once again...& pledged that he would find the man who hurted his Annika earlier...with this he left behind Om & went to the Ambulance ..


Phew!!!!!!! so done with 2d's update...& yeah this new mystry man is connected to Annika's past & will be unveiled soon...& sorry for noot adding Om's girl & other character yet...but will introduce them soon...please forgive my mistakes specially grammatical ones cz I haven't donne proof reading & posting this by phone...
bye for today...Sighning off..
Pri...
^_^ ^_^ ^_^ _ _
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hey guys I'm back...it's my 6th attmpt 4 d sm updt...I wrote it 5 tms earlier bt it got earsed & so it's my 6th attmpt...bt cn assure it's gnna b a funny yet emotional one with a romantic touch...so let's begin d ride...
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On hearing Om's word Shivaay was heart to d core but he was determined to win them back too...so he left towards the hsp. Lawn & reached near the ambulance where he saw Om pacing...& seeing him Om blurted out in anger...
O: where hv U been Shivaay????
Shivaay felt a bit rlvd when Om called him as Shivaay...& he smiled, his eyes twinkled with a ray of hope...but in next minute he was hurt again when he tried to enter into the patient zone & tried to sit beside Annika as Om stopped him 4m doing so...
O: It's 4 patient & her family Shivaay not for his Boss...so it wld be better if U take the passenger seat beside the driver's one...so go & be seated...
S: What r u saying Om?????I'm her family...I'm her HUSBAND...
O: NO...U r nt...U married her forcefully against her even against ur will...& U didn't accept her as ur wife either infront of world...so how is she ur wife????& if so even then u guys gonna have a divorce soon...so just stop calling urself as her so called husband...& moov...
By this Shivaay was hard...all.d secene from his marrige day till now flashed infront of his eyes again...
His eyes mopistened by this but controlling his inner turmoil he asked briefly...
S: Really????then how come she been UR FAMILY Om????cz she doesn't has any other relation with our family than being my wife...so U ain't allowed to go with her too...& secondly may be I didn't married her forcefully against her will but the fact is she is my LEGALLY MARRIED WIFE which neither I nor U can deny...
& if U ask abt our divorce that's gonna be happened & U never know I would let that happen ever or not...so SHE IS MY WIFE & hence I have full right to stay by her be with her & take care of her as her legally wedded HUSBAND...So shall we proceed now??????cz I feel we have wasted lot of times fighting on this stupid thing...
He added the last part smirking a lil...
& hearing all this Om was so happy seeing this possesive& caring side of Shivaay for Annika & felt like hugging him at that moment only but maintained his stern look & gave him a blank look nodding his head in positive & went inside with SHIVAAY...Om was happy so much to see this side of Shivaay...Shivaay a emotionless almost robotic person who's whole world revolvs around his business & family & doesn't express his emotions to anyone whatever the situation & never cries in front of his brother even...has CRIED 2d...has said thanx& sorry which were no less than a miracle to him...as accepted his mistakes...apologized for it...it was a drastic change in him...for the first he saw him behaving like a proper human who has his emotion & can fight with his brother with some stupid logic...can call a girl actually his LOVE of Life his WIFE not caring about her so called bloodline & lineage theory...it all made him so HAPPY that he was smiling in heart which were reflected through his expressive eyes which was caught by Shivaay so easily but he didn't show him as he knew his brother well that though he's happy seeing him like this he needed some time to forgive his deeds to Annika...so he kept silent & by the time they reached to OM...reaching there he took Annika to THEIR room & made her lie their who was in a deep slumber by then due to the effects of high dose painkiller injections...so he put the comforter on her in a very caring & cute way not to disturb her sleep...then he prepared his espresso & sat on nearby couch admirring his beautifull wife...who was looking like a angel...but this angelic view was disturbed when she frowned a lil in her sleep due to some hair strands dancing on her face due to the light breeze...so he walked to the bed and moved the hair strands from her face & tucked it behind her ear...& gave a small peck on her forhead...his touch made her shudder even in her dream...& by this trance he moved towards her lip & was about to kiss her on her lips when his phone rang & he moved away...smiling he slaped his head & left the room & went to the pool area...
& here someone watched the whole thing from behind the door & turned red in anger & entered into the room when Shivaay left...
( those who gussed it to be Tia go & get a chocolate for ur self cz u r r8...)
Tia entered into the room & attacked on Annika as a witch & started shiuting on her...Annika who was so weak was just starring her with a blank look which made Tia more angry that she hold her hand in a tight grip & started yelling on her loud...
T: How dear U to come into my Shivaay Baby's room????U know na He's gonna divorce U soon...& then we both gonna get married then how can U come here & on top of that U r sleeping on my bed...
Annika neither answered nor got down from the bed made her loose control & her inner devil came out in a harsh way that she tightned the grip on her hand more & shouted at top of her voice...
T: HOW DARE U ANNIKA????JUST ANSWER ME...U bl***y middleclass girl...u r traping my baby in this for money naa????so just tell me ur amount...how much U need to leave me& my Shivaay Baby????
Hearing this shouting all the youngster gathered infront of their room including Dadi, JaNki(Janvi+Pinki)...
Shivaay who went to attened d call heard a loud sound coming from her room so he just rushed there...the view infront of his eyes just boiled his blood & he stroamed into the room held Tia's hand tight twisted it on her back & a TIGHT SLAP landed on Tia's chick...
( in a great need of it in IB but not getting it...so thought to add it here...do comment on it ok?????comment must for this slap)
& the reaction was following...
A: shocked a lil but didn't reacted...
S: fuming in anger
T: Rubbing her slap red chick (so wish to see it in real IB errr)
OmPriSom,Janvi,Dadi: formed a perfect 'O' shaped lip in shock...
Pinky: 1st shock then fumed in anger...
But the best was of our durling Rudy boy...wanna know????read..
Ru: was dancing like a maniac doing his antics...
Om gave a light slap behind his head & gave a nothing can happen to him look...Rudy who was so happy was a lil irritated by this act of Om said in a low voice...
R: What O...haven't U seen the greatest show of OM now???instead of joining me u r slapping...not done O not done & made a cuppy (cute+puppy) face...
Som: this time I'm with Cry Baby bade baal wale vaiyaa...even I'm eager to dance now...
Pri: me too Om vaiya..( here Pri won't be as IB lk a scared doll...cz tht's too irritating isn't it????)
Om gave a unbeliveable look & smiled a lil when Rudy said in a excited tone feeling so great by SomPri's words...
R: look O they also knows how great I am...& u r jealous of it...& just see Sumo how much like I would get when on this pic...(yeah he clicked a pic of Shivaay slapping Tia)
O: which pic Rudy????
In utter shock...
R: ra that famous pic actually most famous pic clicked by me till date even more that my bisceps...
Showing his antics...
O: just stop it & say straight...which pic????
R: ra u r a big duffer O...what else????it's the same which I clicked when Bhaaiya slaped that Lady Baba...simpleee...& showed logic sign...
This made Om sooo shocked so as SomPri...but where SomPri was smiling Om whispered a bit angry giving a death glare to Rudy...
O: don't even think of doing that..
R: No Om...
O: sure na????
R: yeah...Om...I'm thinking about this...no way...
Om rlvd & took a breath when another shock attacked him again...
R: & why should I think about it when I have posted it already...
O: WHAAATTT!!!!!!!!U R IMPOSSIBLE RUDRA...
but smiled secretly...& Soumya to Rudra's surprise praised him...
Som: for the first time U have done something great Rudy...& gave a high5 to each other & shared a cute eye lock...
& here in ShivIka's room Shivaay brusted out on Tia...
S: HOW DARE U TIA to call my WIFE a b****y middleclass girl?????she is MY WIFE...MRS. Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi before saying something to her...& FYKI (for ur kind information) it's nt ur Shivaay Baby's room...it's my room...Annika's Husband, Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi's room...which means it's her room...so she has full right to stay here but U don't have it...& don't forget that I'm a married man now...so before entering my room learn to knock first then enter & for now me& my wife both r so tired so leave now & let us take rest...
Tia who was fuming hear this till now strated shedding her crocodile tears & started blabbering usual...
T: U would sleep with her in same bed now????
S: yeah...what kind of question is this????we are husband-wife Tia...so would sleep togrther only na...
T: She cried more loudly now...How can U do this Shivaay Baby?????U U can't do this to me...Universe won't forgive U...
S: plz leave Tia I'm too tired...
T: Ok I'll but how can U do this to ur baby Shivaay Baby???
S: MY BAA...BABY???
he was sooo shocked & the land beneath his feet sleeped...& for his surprise Annika spoke...
A: Shivaay ki baby & that's too in ur womb????how is it possible????
& by then Pinky entered...
Pi: How dares U to talk b/w my son & my bahu????& Shivaay who's babys will be in Tia's womb other thans U?????my Tia isn't that cheaps likes Annika...
S: mind ur toungh mom...she is my wife...& Tia can't be my child's Mom...
Pi: why???? Why can't she?????she is too preetty,sweet,beautifull,educateds...
S: just stop it moms...(realising what he said)...I mn mom...but how can she become my child's mother...I mn...
Pi: with a shocked expression...
Oh my maata Shivaay...I'm ur moms...how I can tells u the process naaa...U have dones it urselvs...naughty boy...
S: mom u ain't getting me...r u sure Tia that u r pregnant????or thus is mine????
T: What????how can U say this Shivaay Baby???U r hurting me & more than that u r hurting ur child baby...universe won't...
Cutting her off Shivaay spoke loosing his patience...
S: stop this Universe drama Tia...& u r so sure right that it's my baby then just tell me when thus happened???
T: in our farmhouse Shivaay...remember we got drunk & then we lost our controll & these happened...
S: no Tia tht's not possible cz I'm not that sort of person who forget his deeds after getting drunk even I remebered all the things of that Pool party...
Realising what he said he looked at Annika who was looking in that way & there they had a sweet eyelock remincing those memories of that night which made Annika blush & he blushed too but their trance was broke when miss. Kapoor spoke in her irritated voice & realising her behaviour Annika controlled herself again & looked away...
T: which Party SB????
S: That's none of ur business...& u r so sure na????then let's do a DNA test...it wld be cleared...then I'll accept ur baby if I found to be guilty & would follow ur words...
T: but...
Pi: no burs beta...Shivaay is rights...let's do thus & then mu heera beta is all yours...let's gos...they left...but Tia was a bit worried hearing about DNA which went unnoticed bu Shivika & OmRuSom...rest were left till now...but now Sumo got a call so left as well...& Tia left giving a irritated look to OmRu where they give her a whatever look...& entered inside...Shivaay who watched them coming was shicked to see them there & tried to justify himself but for his relief they stood by him...
OmRu: we know that U can do wrong things but that too for our family but can't do something like this which will hurt a girl's self respect...
& then he looked at Annika & went on his knees infront of her...but Annika spoke before he could...
A: have U got it how does one feel when someone accuse himself specialy his character without his fault...when it feels when someone close to ur hurt choose to beleave on the person who is accusing u & refuse to trust on u...can u feel it now????I heard that tables turns but I never knew that this turning takes place this soon...
R: what r u saying bhabi???I'm not getting it...
Om asked him to stop through his action but when he tried to say something again he glared at him & he stopped making a cuppy face...
A: it's nothing Rudra...but don't worry I'm not like others...I know who's trapping & who's trapped...
O: & it'll be cleared once the DNA report comes...
S: Yeah...
A: No...this isn't gonna be that easy guys...that CHEAPDI Tia would make sonething or the other...
O: What U mean An...I mean Bhabi????
She smiled hearing Bhabi from Om & said...
A: Om who can stoop so low that can claim someone's else's child as Shivaay's she can make a fake report too...Isn't it????
Soumya entered with a tired face & said...
So: U r r8 Annika di...
R: no wrong...Rudra snapped...
So: what????& why u felt like that???
R: as mentioned Annika bhabi as di...
So: just stay away from this mr. Cry Baby Oberoi...& I call her di & will do the same...
R: u shut up...& U won't...cz she is Bhaaiya's wife now...which means Bhaabi...& Om called her Bhaabi too...so only U left...so call her Bhaabi & close the chapter...
So: why????
R: cz I'm saying...
So: (mocking him) cz I'm saying...r U d P.M. of India that I need to hear U?????
R: NO...
So: then what????who r u that I would listen to U????
R: I'm ur hus...(realising what he was about to say looked at Sumo feeling embarassed so does Sumo & tried to cover up when Om spoke...
O: R u guts done with ur stupid fight????then can we move to the matter which we were didcussing about...
S: exactly guys...just stop fighting over stupid things...
R: really bhaaiya????look O who's saying????Bhaaiya U don't fight with Bhaabi na????
S: shutup Rudy...& what were U saying Soumya????
So: yeah Bade Bhaaiya...I heard Tia calling some doctor & instructing her something...I tried to hear it but aai called me so I left...
A: raising the neckline of her top I told U...so I have a plan...
* the plan is muted *
A: so how's d plan???
ShivOmRuSom in unisition: hmnmmm...sounds great...
S: but will it work???
A: do U have something better???
S: nooo...
A: then just shut up...so guys it's time to trap Tia...
So mission Tia begins...
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Ufff!!!!!!!! Finally done with thus update...please comment...& sorry if U got boared by this long one...U can let me know if u want a shorter update...& the romantic part is for my chandu...& Misha would enter in next or the 2nd next epi...tried to inclued Rumya part...so let me know how was it...love U all...
Signing Off for 2d...
Pri...
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Shivika MU to Love...
******Kisses of Love******
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Hey I'm back again...here's d next updt of my #FF...hp U guys r njyng it...& if U fl smthng gng wrng or U wnt smthng mr in it thn hit d comment button below & post a rpl...I'm tryng to write sm romantic scence 2d tht 2 stng in my college auditorium as I'm gttng boared hr cz our dshstng seniours aint letting us spk...URRRGHHH!!!!!!!!!So thought to gv a updt...haha...hw crazy I'm na??????ok so let's mv 2 d stry nw...
When all this planning was going on someone entered the room making a pout...
It's trully nt dn guys...all of U forgot me...specialy anni...I'm ur sis-in-law cm Bestie errr...hw can U forget me??????(yeah guys this is our Priyanka Singh Oberoi...but as I said earlier she won't be a chui-mui in my #FF...nstd she is diva of Mumbai spcly of clubs&discs...supremely stylish...bold&beautifull...independent...cn steal heart of million of boys just by a look...& frnd of Mr. Ranveer Singh Randhawa...so no OmPriRan drama..)or U thought that I'll help tht miss U?????mkng a cute pout...
A: No Prinku it's nothing lk that...it's just that U weren't there so we...
Pri: forgot U...but I can't na????so I'll ask Ranveer & Disha(Disha is a journalist) to help us by giving some much needed publicity of my so lovely&saint like miss. Universe...& shared a Hi5 with Anniru...& ShivOm accepted her idea with a positive nodd...
R: now miss reiki centre can't escape...3 cheers for AnniPri...hip hip...(had a pause & looked at ShivOmSom & proceed with a disappointed look in his face) guys say with me Hip Hip hurray!!!
O: really Rudra????if we shout like that na ur miss U wld be freed from our trap...so stop this kiddish behaviour...
He bowed down with a cry face & seeing it ShivOm hugged him with "nothing cn hppen to him" wala look & hugged him...then Shivaay spoke in a soft voice (Anni ko manane ne ke liye SSO kuch bhi karega)...
S: guys it's already too late...so plz go to ur room & sleep would meet tommorow...
& bidded bye to them...& when he turned to his wife saw her trying to get down from the bed...seeing her like this he rushed to her & held her hand in a light grin as he didn't want to hurt her...but to his disbelief she jerked her hand away, left the bed & tried to walk away but cause of her feet injury she shouted in pain & about to fall when her dear HUSBAND held her by waist lifted in arm & placed her in bed...& spoke in a husky&s**y voice...
S: just stay here & don't even dare to move 4m here...
She got irratated with this kind of behaviour & spoke in a lil irratation...
A: Really?????& what would U do if I not follow ur order?????
S: U know what I can...
Annika was taken aback cz of this sudden words then getting her consious back she spoke in a high tone...
A: oh so U would kidnap Shahil again & then threat me for his life...
& by this words realisation stuck Shivaay's brain he understood what he said...he felt so disgusted on himself but before he could say something Anni spoke...
A: but let me think what would U do now!!!!!!as U don't repeat the same thing U wld do something else...so I think U would attach the bomb on Shahil's body instead of car...Isn't it?????
By hearing this Shivaay felt so low but he couldn't feel that HIS Annika could think so low of him...so he shouted...
S: WTH Annika?????I'm trying to appologize to U for my deeds & U r thinking like this...How can U even think that I can do such a HENIOUS crime?????that would fix bomb to his body...
A: & Why shouldn't I Shivaay?????do U feel that what U did was something less than it?????
S: But he wasn't in the car Annika...he was in the another one...I did nothing to him...he was safe&sound Annika...
A: plz don't even dare to justify ur deeds...
S: I'm nt justifying my deeds bt just trying to make U understand that I can't stoop that low or kill ur brother when I have two & I know what their life is for me...
A: really!!!!!then what U did????
S: I tried U 2 make U scare...that's it...otherwise U wouldn't have married me...
A: so just to make me scare U would use brother????
S: what else could I haan????I don't think I could do that showing U some cockroach or spider...
A: only immatuared & children get scared of that...
S: who's matured here?????no I felt U were talking about urself na????
Smarking a lil...
A: U mean I'm immatured?????
S: yeah...otherwise U won't say that U r ms. Annika...
A: u said this Shivaay not me...
S: I know & that was a mistake...actually all that I said was mistake...I did it out of jealousy & insecurity...I felt U beatrayed me &...
A: wait a sec...in that time neither I was ur gf nor ur wife...I was just a wedding planner...& don't tell me if ur workers get married or sleep with someone then U call it as a beatrayal...
Frowning a lil w8 a smirk...
S: no tht's not like that...
A: then what it's like???
He couldn't say anything for it so he felt better to escape...& so commanded to her...
S: U need to sleep...so lay down & sleep...
A: It's nt my answer...& I need it...
S: I won't...
A: U have to...
W8 a determind look...
S: just keep mum or else it won't be good...so sleep...
Leaning towards her a lil...
A: I need my answer & won't sleep without getting it...
S: st..stop ur childish act & sleep..
A: I won't...
S: stop otherwise U'll pay for it...
A: I'm ready for anything but answer me...
S: sure...
A: yes...
But in this Shivaay went too close to her...the scene was like Annika was lying & Shivaay was leaning on top of her in a half seating position by his elbow's support...& then he PECKED HER LUCIOUS LIPS...
S: So wanna here the answer now????
With a victory smirk...
A: what U did????
S: what???? Don't U need ur answer of ur previous question...
Faking a confused look with a smirk...
A: no...
S: NO????
A: I mean yes but first tell me what U did...
S: what????Oh that???
A: yeah...
S: I leaned on U that's it...
A: not that Shivaay...af...after that...
S: which one Annika?????OHHH!!!!! achchha THIIISSS?????
Smirking he Pecked her lips once again but this time he gave a small bite on the lower one...her body shuddered & a chill ran down through her spine...
When he get up the vision excited him more...
Her eyes closed tight...her lips hovering...cold sweat formed in her forhead...& then his eyes stuck on her LUCIOUS KISS READY LIPS again...& lossing his controll he kissed her again...but this time he was totally on her...lying on top of her...his hands move from their place & found new position...one on her right cheek & another one behind her head to hold her face in position...& started to bite her lips...he was so lost in them...it was HIS...totally HIS...& here Annika for his surprise instead of resisting let him do that...& then when he stroked her lips by his toungh she couldn't hold it more & clutched his hair in her hand & opened her mouth for him...& he poured his soul in her that moment...all his love,pain since the 1st day they met was getting thair destiny...they were so induldged in this sensation of kissing each other...getting the best out of their partner...they started to discover the corners of their mouth...it was feeling like heaven for them...& then getting out of breath they left each other...but then they realised what they DID JUST NOW...THEIR EYES MET BUT Annika looked aside instantly...Shivaay was so confused but somewhere happy to that he kissed HER...& she RECIPROCATED...BUT then he got up smiling, got down from the bed & left the room in hurry...& Annila was looking at the way from where she left recollecting the events...
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UFFF!!!!!!!!!!!finally done...trust I haven't kissed anyone till date & hadn't any bf even...& it was too tough for me to write this scene...I'm just blushing now sooo hard...& I started it in college but ending it in my room sitting under my cute comforter...but it's too difficult errr...hp U liked it...plz comment...the plnning & Tia's revelation in next update only ...
Sighning off...
Pri...
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Hey guys!!!!!I'm back...all chappal, slap, kick, accepted for being sooo late...though I know I would get so less cz I'm not having much readers for this story...
& yeah as today is my B'Day so it's a B'Day treat to all my reader & friends from my side...
& plz forgive my grammatical & typos mistake cz I'm typing it by my phone...
So begging for forgiveness whole heartedly...
Ok enough of my bakbak...
Let's start
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After that sudden kiss Annika was too shocked & wasn't able to sleep at all...she tossed on the bed all night long...at morning she got up & felt her leg pain lessen a lot...so she got down the bed & went to freshen up...seeing him leaving Shivaay entered the room tip toed who was staring at his beautifull wife...but standing near the french window attached to pool area...just like Annika he couldn't sleep too as when ever he would close his eyeids his heavenly KISS came infront of his eyesight & sleep just went away...far away of his reach...thinking about last night event he was feeling too embarassed to face Annika...what would he say to her...how can he justify his lustfull deeds to her...so he found it difficult to face her...& to escape her he was waiting for the moment she would leave...& finally she left...so he got in...took his cloths & left with out waiting to Om's room...

& here in washroom Annika was lost too...the incidents was flashing infront of her eyes...his 1st peck...then a soft bite...& then that passionate kiss...he on top of her...tasting her lips...her mouth...those bites...moans...touches...pecks...UFFF!!!!!!!!& not just him...even she was reciprocating...she had bitten his lips too...she found his lips swollen...& she was the reason...UFFF!!!!!!!!!!!
HOW CAN SHE FACE HIM NOW????????
her trance broke when hearing Rudy's voice...he was knocking on the bathroom door & calling her...
R: come to Om's room bhabi...all r waiting...
A: A...a..ALL????ALL mean????
R: all mean O,Sumo,Prinku,me & Bhaiya...
& these was enough to have a minor heart attack for Anni..

HE was there...how can she face him after that KISS...NO...NOOO WAYYY...so she replied...
U go Rudy...I can't come...my leg's paining a lot & if I give more stain it would bleed...
& Rudy couldn't force so he left saying a ok bhabi in the sadest tone...
Annika felt relaxed...she escaped the situation...she doesn:t need to face him for now atlist...& felt proud of her intelligence...so patting her own back she came out from the washroom & the 1st thing caught into her eyesight was those ocean blue eyes which were staring at her only...
GAWWWDDD!!!!!! Isn't this is the sight she was trying to ignore since wrong...& now she landed in the perfect place...Wow Annika...great...how "PERFECTLY" she ignored it...
she litreally slapped her self mentally for the situation...& on top of that HE...that Bagad Billa is just staring at her with his kanji eyes...as if she's the last woman on earth & just an epitome of temptress...Gawddd I just wanna kill him now...
She screamed in mind...
& in this case she was right...she was a temptress for him...He always felt an urgh to take her in his arm to have her close to feel her as HIS...always...but after last night it went more tough for him to control his emotins...better say hormones...Urghhh!!!!!!!!what the hell is he thinking?????
He literally shouted on himself for behaving like this...I mean here she was so upset on him already where he kissed him lying on her on his bed...urghhh!!!!!!!God she would keep him...
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They were so lost in each other that they didn't notice the whole clan were stating at them grinning... They came back into senses by a louddd coughing vouce which was mocked by OmRuPriSom together... They felt embarassed & Shivaay tried to say something when Om said...
Om: Oh ok...so finally my bro & my bhabi is back on planet earth where we r now...
S: but we were hear only Om...
R: really but I thought U were in some dreamland...lost in my beautifull bhabi...
He said the with a mischevious teasing smiling...on seeing that Annika tried to cover up...
A: guys I guess we all r hear for some important stuff...so plz leave all this & focus on the main thing as we r running out of time each passing sec if U get it...so Let's b SERIOUS...
She declaired it all in a firm voice...
O: U r r8????so all r ready r8????
All in unision : yup...let's do that...Mission Tia begins...
& just then a worker came & asked Shivaay to come down...
S: I'm not feeling Ok...so..
Cutting him before he could complete what he was saying Rudy Spoke...
R: what happened Bhaiya????U didn't tell us anything...
S: actually...woh...yeah actually I have fever I'm feeling lil feverish & feeling week...so...
R: but bhaiya I touched U a few moments earlier but U weren't having fever...
& by this statement he got some deadly glare from everyone including Prinku...
P: Shut up Rudy bhaiya...Bhaiya said he's having fever so he's having it...clear it...(looking at the maid) Sumi do onething go & ask the doctor come here to collect the sample...ok???
Maid: ok Ma'am...& she left...
P: grow up Bhaiyu...what's wrong with U????can we do what we r planning sitting in the hall amdist all...
R: hmmm...I got it...oh ho..btw guys I forgot 2 tell U the biggest news...I got 1million on my last posted pic...
Annika: wowww!!!!that's great Rudy...I'm proud of U...
O: U really posted that????I can't belive it...
He said I with totall disbelief...
S: which pic r U guys talking about????
A: yeah!!!which pic???show me na...
O: n..no..no need to show it...
R: why no????U know what U r jealous of me...I'll show U bhaiyaa bhabi...
Om tried to stop him but that went in vain...& he showed it to them...& then they got a face palmed reaction from Shivika with eyes wide open lips curved in a perfect 'O'...& then bursted out laughing...& it was quite shocking for the rest where Rudy was so proud...
O: r U serious Shivaay????U r encouraging this idiot????seriously????
S: yeah...afterall he has done it...good job Rudy...btw leave from here guys...otherwise they can doubt us...& yeah best of luck...now U guys have so many things to do...
O: & that's my problem that Rudy has so many things to do...U sure U won't create a blunder r8???? I mean Prinku can go with Sumo...
R: O U now shut up ok???? I can mange...& waise bhi have U forgot basic rule of bio???? A girl can't be a child's father...
O: shut up...
R: not again...
P: U all r talking too much...like this our will b spoilt for sure...let's leave...tc bhaiyaa bhabi...
Saying this she dragged all out of Shivika's room & closed the door behind...
& then the doc came took the sample & left...
Here Rumya left OM faking that they need to submit a assaignment & for that they need to go to a friends house...where Om said about her gallery & Prinku said about her band's jam in...[Prinku is part of a band where Ranveer, Disha(Ranveer's sis) & Misha(Om's girl as I mentioned brfore) is her partners]...
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...NEXT DAY...
All were at the hall when they got the envelope of test report saying the child was Shivaay's...reading this Pinky was happy, Tia was overjoyed thinking her plan succed when Tejanvi, Shakti & Dadi were upset..
& the juniour team was smirking & left with a fake stressed face...& joined at Shivika's room...It went as per our wish...
A: but videoes????
S: 1st one is with me...
O: I'm having the 2nd one...
P: I have informed Ranveer&Disha...
S: great...now I'm just waiting for the evening...
He called everyone in hall where he announced that he's having a press meet to announce about pregnancy of Tia hearing which first Tia&Mrs. K was shocked but then they felt happy thinking that may be Shivaay is doing thinking about that child...after all he gives a lot of importance to blood,lineage crap...so they stopped thinking...
...EVENING...
PRESS MEET...
S: so here I'm Shivaay Singh Oberoi called U all to share some important stuff with U all...before speaking I would like to show U something...so kindly watch it patiently & hold onto ur patience till the end...after that I'll answer U all every doubt of urs as fer possible for me...lights off...
Hearing all this a puzzled Tia spoke...
T: what's there Shivaay Baby???
S: watch na...It's a surprise...specially planned for U by me...I know U'll enjoy...
& she felt quite overjoyed which vanished in a few min...
THE VIDEO(1)...
it showed two women...on of nearly 50 & another in her last 20's...
U r right it's Tia & Mrs. K
They r seeing threatning a doc...the very doc who has done the test...
Tia& Mrs. K: U got the sample of SSO's blood right???
D: yeah..
T&K: so U know what to do right???just make the report saying Tia's child is Shivaay's.
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D: but that's not the truth Ma'am...report is negative...
T: but it has to be positive & U have to do this..
D: but it's illegal Ma'am...I'll loose my liscence if it comes in light...
K: & if U don't then U'll loose ur Son mr...don't U love ur son???see him...
They showed him a 5year old boy tied on a chair & a gun pointed at him...
D: he's my life...plz don't do anything to him..
K: really????then do as I said...
Video one ended...all reporter's gasp was heard Tia & Mrs. Kappor was sweating like hell...they tried to leave where they were held by the farm hold of ShiOmRuPri...
S: calm down everyone there's one more...
V(2)...
Here Tia was seen in a farm house in a compromising position with a guy revealed to be Robin who was called as Dusyant by Tia...
D: so how it's all going in OM...
T: just the way we planned...they all are in huge shock...it's all going just as we planned...
D: hope that Shivaay doesn't do anything...
T: he can't...he has already done what he could...but poor he...he doesn't even know that it's all were preplanned...
D: yeah...he thinks U like him& I'm ur bro but he can't even think that U r already married to me & I'm ur husband who is in a disguise of ir dead bro Robin...
T: yup...& after that report he would consider out baby as his & I'll male him transfer his whole property on our child's name...& then I'll leave him...
D: only then he would know how one feel after loosing his everything...I have seen my dad commiting suicide cause of him...my dad was one if the richest industrialist Harsh Khanna...he had everything...what wrong he did????that girl needed money & he agreed to pay but for that he asked for pleasure only...he didn't killed her...but what he did????he made it public...he had to face auch humilation that commited sucide...even my mom did the same...
T: even he made my brother caught by UK Police for drug racket...& even made him confess that he killed that boy Rohit(Om's friend)...what could bhai do???? Rohit had seen him smugling drug through the sharees from Kapoor textiles...& he was ready to tell it to police...he even tried to bribe him but he was honest...honesty my foot...neither he live nor let my bhai live..
D: relax Tia...we both suffered a lot for tgat Shivaay...now he would face it...but must say he was lucky enough ha????I murdered Gayetri myself planted everything pointing him but that Annika saved him...
T: but this time even Annika won't be able to do it...
D: hope so...Shivaay Singh Oberoi would be finished now...
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The whole hall was at a pin drop scilence...the whole revellation was just too much to digest...every one was so silent as if their mouth is sealed with a mouth tape...
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Hope U all will like this part...& hope I haven't bored U...so plz hit like button if U liked it & leave a comment what U felt of it...wheather it's good or bad...plz guys do it thinking as a brithday gift...
Cya guys...
Love U all...
Signing off...
Pri...
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hey u are backk...i just loved it 2 the COREEE!!!!!!!
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Originally posted by: lolololol

hey u are backk...i just loved it 2 the COREEE!!!!!!!


thank you salini...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awsum start...
You did a grt job girl👏
I m too bored of IB with same boring track...
I have even stopped watching it...!!
Atleast we can read on ffs the intrresting track...
Shivay released the video in front of Media!!
Poor Mrs Kapoor and Tia...😆
Cant wait them to go to jail.
Continue soon
Thnx fr pm
Edited by aarushi04 - 8 years ago

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