MN/SG/ AR FF GUNAAH

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Hi guys I'm back with another ff. Waise mai hamesha aati hi rehti hu 😆. I know I already have two ff pending. But this ff was requested by my friend ruhana so I'm here fulfilling her wish 😉. There will be lots of twist in this ff. Many charters will play negative role in the beginning but as the story will proceed they will turn positive. Some of you might beat me up after reading few chapters but trust me friends this ff is going to be full on masaledaar. Hope you guys like it. 😊
Charter sketch
Riddhima gupta ( played by jennifer winget ) - eldest daughter of the famous business tycoon of India Mr subhash gupta. She loves her family a lot. She is very wild n party animal. But with her family she totally satisavitri.
Gunjan gupta (played by sanaya irani) - youngest daughter of gupta family. Loves her family a lot. Lost her mother a year ago. She runs her own ngo and girls school for poor girls. Short tempered. Nupur's best friend. Nupur is like sister to her. Very deep down to earth.
Nupur bhushan (played by rati pandey)- very simple shy and soft spoken girl. She is daughter of Mr gupta ' s driver. She is very sensitive get hurts very easily. She teach in gunjan girls school. Wants to become professor in delhi university. Lost her mother after her birth. Her father never leave a chance to harass her. In spite of so much of ups and down in her life she never complaints. Best friend of gunjan. Both share everything with each. Loves gujan like her own sister. With gunjan she i totally a diffrent person.Engaged to Adhiraj sharma.
Suhani Sehgal (played by anupriya kapoor) she too teach in gunjan ' s girls school. Very deep down to earth. She believes in helping others. Share good bond with nupur

Armaan sharma (played by ksg)- eldest son of sharma family. Important member of the party. His life has been destroyed. A drunkard. Loves his brothers and mother a lot and hates his father to the core.
Mayank sharma ( played by arjun bijlani)-younger brother of armaan. He's what people call an idol beta. Covers all mistake of his brothers. Loves his family a lot. Very close to his mother. Not at all interested in politics and want to start his own business. In last year of mba and doing internship in well known company. He is very kind person but worst than an animal when he is in anger. Everyone in the family avoid him when he is in bad mood. When he wants something he makes sure he have it at ANY COST
Samrat sharma ( played by mohit Sehgal) - youngest son of sharma family party animal. Loves being around girls. Ladla of sharma family. Loves his family a lot. Very close to mayank. Shares almost everything to him. Both are more like friends. Big prankster.
Adhiraj sharma ( played by nishant)- the wrong sharma. Engaged to nupur. You guys get to know more about him as the story will proceed.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u sooo much dear 4 this ff ... Superbbb start luv it thank once again ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very interesting CS. really promising yaar. too many shade in each char. mayank is just like mjht char as he is cool,angry and very much focused and dedicated towards his life and family.

but nupur is really different here. shy, soft spoken.

btw nupur and adhiraj are engaged? how and why????? nehiii. i want only mayur together. btw nupsi is drivers daughter na. pher adhi ki saath uski shaadi kaise fix huye

plz do cont soon and pm me.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruhana05

Thank u sooo much dear 4 this ff ... Superbbb start luv it thank once again ❤️

anytime 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faria.

Very interesting CS. really promising yaar. too many shade in each char. mayank is just like mjht char as he is cool,angry and very much focused and dedicated towards his life and family.

but nupur is really different here. shy, soft spoken.

btw nupur and adhiraj are engaged? how and why????? nehiii. i want only mayur together. btw nupsi is drivers daughter na. pher adhi ki saath uski shaadi kaise fix huye

plz do cont soon and pm me.

relax faria relax sabar ka phal meetha hota hai. 😆. maybe yaha thoda kadwa ho 😉. and nupur ki engagement adhiraj se hui because who wrong sharma hai bas ab aur kuch nhi reveal karugi 😃
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Chapter-1

Sharma mansion

A man nearly in his late 60's was sitting in his room thinking something. A lady comes there and ask him

Lady- kya baat hai kya soch rahe hai.

Man- humare beto aur party k bare mai soch raha hu sangita.

Sangita- ab kya hua?

Man- kya hua? Tum mujhse puch rahi ho kya hua? Humare teeno bete nalayak nikle. Samrat jisse aayashi k alwa kuch aata nhi. Bas sara din party aur ladkiyon k chakkar mai ghummta rehta hai. Armaan jo party ka member hai lekin responsibility naam ki koi cheez nhi bas sara din shaarab peeta hai aur usse phursat mile toh hospital jata hai. Socha tha mere baad armaan party sambhalega. Ab meri akhiri umid sirf mayank se hai par who hai ki party k bare mai sochta tak nhi hai. Na jane dusaro k liye kaam kar k kya milta hai usse.

Sangita- aap chinta kyun karte hai madhav humare bete apni zindagi k saath zarur kuch aacha karege.

Madhav- nhi maine soch liya hai ab mujhe kya karna hai. ( smiled evilly)

Sangita knew this smile.

Sangita- jo kariyega soch samaj ki kariyega. Pooja ka time ho gaya hai aaye.

After Pooja

Sangita- ab chaliye mai abhi nashta lagwati hu.

(madhav nodded and leaves from there)

Sangita- aare champa mere teeno sahabzade uthe ya nhi

Champa- nhi memsahab aap kahe toh utha du?

Sangita- nhi tu apna kaam kar mai khud jaa k unhe utha deti hu.

A young man was sleeping peacefully in his bedroom with soft smile on his lips. His room was painted in white colour. There were big shelves of books and many photo of his and his brother.

Sangita entered his room and sits beside him. She rubs his head lovingly

Sangita- good morning mayu (kissing his forehead)

Mayank- good morning mom (hugging her by her waist)

Sangita- chal jaldi se tayar ho k neeche aa jaa tere papa tera intezaar kar rahe hai (getting up from bed)

Mayank- ok maa (he said like an obedient child)

Sangita- mai armaan aur smarat ko bhi utha deti

She was about to leave when mayank stops her

Mayank- maa tum chalo na sam ko uthao mai armaan bhai ko le k aata hu.

As she leaves mayank rush to armaan's room

Armaan room was painted in green in colour. It was very neat and tidy it looked like that room was not used much

Mayank enters his room

Mayank- bhai bhai utho (shaking him)

Armaan- kon hai sone do mujhe ( in tali tone)

Mayank- bhai mai mayank hu please utho bahar sab aapka wait kar rahe hai jaldi aa jao mai champa koo bol k aapke liye nibupani bhejwata hu.

(he leaves from there)

Sangita enters samrat room his room was painted in pale bule colour and his room was in mess

Sangita pull his ears

Sangita- nalayak yeh kya halat bana rahio hai room ki kal hi saaf karaya tha maine

Sam- kya mom aap bhi na mayu bhai ko kiss kar k uthati hai aur mujhe kaan khech k not fair.

Sangita- tu hai hi us layank aur mera mayu jaa k dekh apna room kitna saaf rakhta hai ek ek cheez apni jagah pe rehti hai.

Sam- kabhi kabhi muje lagata hai mayank bhai se zada pyaar karti ho

Sangita- koi shak ( she said teasing him) chal ab jaldi tayar ho k neeche jaa.

Sam- ok mom.

At dinning table

Mayank - good morning dad good morning dadi (kissing shanti devi's check)

Shanti- good morning beta

Madhav- good morning mayu. Aur kya socha hai tumne party k bare mai

Mayank- honestly dad abhi tak toh kuch bhi nhi aap mujhe thoda waqt dijiye. Sochne k liye.

Samrat comes there

Samrat- good morning everyone (taking his seat ignoring everyone's look)

Madhav- aur tumne samrat tumne kya socha apni life k bare mai

Sam- huh? Yeh subha subha aapko kya ho gaya dad.

Mayank in order to change the topic

Mayank- armaan abhi taka aye nhi

Armaan- mai yaha hu

He comes there and takes his seat beside mayank

Madhav- mujhe samaj main hi aata mai apne teeno beto ka kya karu

Armaan- hum teen nhi char hai dad

Madhav- who mera beta nhi hai

Armaan- aapke bolne se kya hota hai yaha sabko sach pata hai.

Madhav- armaannn!!!!!

Mayank- ENOUGH !!! yaha koi ek din bhi chain se nashta nhi kar sakta kya ( he turns to leave)

Madhav- jane se pehle ek baar meri baat sun lo tumhare pass aur samrat k pass ek hafta hai sochne k liye uske baad mai faisla luga.

Maynk leaves from here

Gupta house

A man in his late 60's was in kitchen making breakfast. A beautiful in her early 20's comes there

Girls- wah khusboo toh aachi aa rahi hai kya bana rahe ho dad

Man- chief gupta aaj apni betiyon k liye pasta bana rahe hai

Girl- aare wah

Man- waise gunjan riddhima kaha hai?

Gunjan-mandir gayi hai aacha ab jaldi se mera nashta do

Both mr gupta and gunjan sat together to have breakfast

Mr gupta- toh aap ka kya plan hai madam

Gunjan- aaj nupur k saath school jana hai bacho k function k liye kuch tayari karni haiaacha mai chalti hu mai late ho rahi hu

(she leave)

Gunjan stops her car near a small house and press the horn two times

A girl of gunjan same age comes out of the house wearing black kurti and red churidar along with red dupatta. She had a small black bindi on her forehead and her hair was tied in clutch.

Gunjan allowed her in her car.

Gunjan- aacha hua tu jaldi aa gayi nupur

Nupur- haan aaj tune kafi der kar diya.

Gunjan- sorry jaan der se uthi. (driving her car)

Nupur- aacha sun mujhe aaj ghar jaldi jana hai who baba ki tabyat aaj kharab hai

Gunjan- theek hai baba par abhi toh chal
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Edited by pihu2june - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice dear waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow, nice update. tino bhai bilkul alag hai. lekin i think tino bhai main bahut pyaar hai. i don't wanna see brothers fight. nupur ki entry was lovely. update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruhana05

Nice dear waiting 4 next part

thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faria.

Wow, nice update. tino bhai bilkul alag hai. lekin i think tino bhai main bahut pyaar hai. i don't wanna see brothers fight. nupur ki entry was lovely. update soon.

thanks 😊

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