IshRa Short Story - Muskhuraane Ki Wajah Tum Ho

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Divanru

@Divanru

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Lovely update .

I was excited to imagine raman dancing and jumping in rain .

He took flat next to her .

Update soon

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

A great update!!!
Ishra ki takraar!!
Ishita ne Raman ka "hisaab barabar kardiya"!!!
Dono ne smile kiya - wah!!!
He asks her name - Ishita Vishwanathan Iyer!!!
They say bye to each other!!

Raman goes to the the building secretary to ask about a flat!!
He tells Raman that there is a flat available opposite his!!!
Raman asks him what his name is - he says Vishwanathan Iyer!!!
Raman punches the air in happiness!!

Please update soon and also thank you so much for the pm!!

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Nice prologue
But whose monologue is it??? Raman or Ishita?

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Synopsis
Cleared that monologue was Raman's.. Hain naa ?

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Very nice
Now getting a bit
Liking this narrative style too
But Don't change name of the story frequently... Either gave that name to chap... But not in pm... Also update the subject name with chap number every time.. Will be easy for new readers