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Naya

@Thahaanfan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Guys I need comments for this ff here are some points , please let me know your thoughts.

In this ff Chakor is adopted and doesn't know who her real parents are and she does know that she is adopted but doesn't know who her real parents are.

Her parents ( Kiran and lalit) who she is living with don't interact with her much and are always favouring imli more than Chakor.

She was adopted when she was little and was sent to the haveli because her non real parents didn't want imli to go and work as a slave, but imli is with Suraj and his gang now.

Suraj will tell imli to get chakor to him as she has come back after 10years and for our handsome guy it will be love at first sight but he won't realise just yet.

Chakors real parents are kasturi and buvan who live in azadgunj but chakor doesn't know.

And yes vivaan will be in this ff aswell but imli will claim to love him and they will spend a night together, then imli will put the baby blame on Suraj.

And last thing there will be a whole load of drama...

So thank you guys and please comment so I know that I'm going the right way with this

Love you all

NAYA

Edited by Thahaanfan - 9 years ago

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Sumaiya_Scrible

@Sumaiya_Scrible

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Posted: 9 years ago

Its a really interesting thought please continue soon waiting for more eagerly

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vinlora

@vinlora

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hmm...sounds interesting. ..ab dheri kis baath ki ...plz update as soon as possible. ..jahan sukor ke FF ho aur hum na pade eaisa ho sakta hai kya?😉 go ahed yaar. ..