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SomeoneloveJA

@SomeoneloveJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Amazing OS ...👏
Thanks for writing..dear...

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

This one is superb with bit different and lighting on serious issue.like jo's facade to herself rude and strong to keep away people and hide the truth but jalal was jalal he try to understand,care,help no matter how she behaved and finally successful to find thruth and deal with it in his own way there he got his loving girl throwing all mask .beautifully written and Ana dear if I have one more vote it would definitely go for this one👏

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Yours stories are always so heartwarming. Poor Jodha had to a put up a facade of rudeness and indifference to avoid getting close to anyone as this would hurt everyone concerned.

But she didn't expect love to come into play but it did and she fell hard for Jalal. Thankfully, Jalal read her diary and uncovered the truth. What a genius idea of his ( but his poor handphone had to be sacrificed ) to get hold Jodha's stepfather's mobile and destroy the only evidence he had to blackmail Jodha.

Jalal's quip that he and Jodha were living together ( which was preceded by the sweet cheek smooch) was a jaw-dropping shocker that was intended to be a slap on her stepfather's face. A cute ending as well. Enjoyed it a lot.