Odh li chunariya mere naam ki! ShivIka 1/12

She stood alone in the room staring at herself in the mirror. She never felt so angry looking at her. She has become his bride not by choice but by the order. Her face had turned beet-root coloured. Not because she was blushing thinking about her husband who was expected to come in any time.

She averted her gaze but like a moth on a flame as he entered the room. Her gaze was drawn to him. She remembered all the times of being tortured. She even accused him fir being a thief who stole her happiness.

He was unable to say anything as he was still in a state of shock seeing her without the veil. He wanted her to continue with her purity. He never wished anyone seeing her.

He wanted to lift that veil. He wanted to live that moment. He wanted to steal a glance of her. All he wanted was to experience those feelings , witness her beauty over looking everything else. He wished she waited for her. How dare she snatch those happiness from him, a little he wished.

She however lifted the veil herself, to show independence. Independence to everything he had caged her with.

(Inspired by today's veil drama) 😳

Beautifully expressed and written fizzy..

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Beautifully expressed and written fizzy..

Awesome wrk!

Anika's rage and pain.. both were superbly portrayed..

Nd Shivaay's feelings were also equally well portrayed.

Nd the ending was jhakass!

Ir writing is awesome fizzy...keep writing!👏👏

Love Sharmi

Thanks for complimenting my boring writing 😆

I just love todays episode. Om per pait pher k pyar aa raha hai 😆

And a little bit for Shivaay too for stopping Pinky from slapping anika. As he knows "Anika ko dard deina ka haq sirf mujhe hai"

Like mother like son. Same to same thinking about Anika

Originally posted by: fizywizy-woo

Thanks for complimenting my boring writing 😆

I just love todays episode. Om per pait pher k pyar aa raha hai 😆

And a little bit for Shivaay too for stopping Pinky from slapping anika. As he knows "Anika ko dard deina ka haq sirf mujhe hai"

Like mother like son. Same to same thinking about Anika

Exactly...even i too thought the same..
Like mother like son.
But for a sec his expressions dis change when she accused Anika of being money headed. He looked at Anika... nd he felt guilty. Yupp.. he thinks that only he has the right to hurt her.. make her cry.
I didnt expect that he will stop. But thay made me love Shivaay for the moment. Atleast i am happy that he took a stand for Anika.
Nd Surbhi.. she is brilliant.. her eyes... conveyed her pain... beautifully acted out... 👏
I hope they apologize..especailly Pinky Apologizes to Anika.
But Pinky too wasnt wrong at her place fully... she as a mother had many dreams about her son's wedding. Nd when she saw that... she couldnt bear the betray..the pain. Because she always was quite... nd Shivaay overruled. Today Pinky acted so welll... hats off to her.
And Om toh byomkesh pakshi nikle. What an observation... he knew that it was Anika but just wanted to confirm it... nd some what even i too felt that the bracelet would do it all... someone would surely notice the bracelet... nd Om did it. Lets see what happens aage...
Well thats a lott i guess..srry for pakhaofying... 😆
And yes... it wasnt boaring... there was a spark in this piece.

Love Sharmi

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Exactly...even i too thought the same..
Like mother like son.
But for a sec his expressions dis change when she accused Anika of being money headed. He looked at Anika... nd he felt guilty. Yupp.. he thinks that only he has the right to hurt her.. make her cry.
I didnt expect that he will stop. But thay made me love Shivaay for the moment. Atleast i am happy that he took a stand for Anika.
Nd Surbhi.. she is brilliant.. her eyes... conveyed her pain... beautifully acted out... 👏
I hope they apologize..especailly Pinky Apologizes to Anika.
But Pinky too wasnt wrong at her place fully... she as a mother had many dreams about her son's wedding. Nd when she saw that... she couldnt bear the betray..the pain. Because she always was quite... nd Shivaay overruled. Today Pinky acted so welll... hats off to her.
And Om toh byomkesh pakshi nikle. What an observation... he knew that it was Anika but just wanted to confirm it... nd some what even i too felt that the bracelet would do it all... someone would surely notice the bracelet... nd Om did it. Lets see what happens aage...
Well thats a lott i guess..srry for pakhaofying... 😆
And yes... it wasnt boaring... there was a spark in this piece.

Love Sharmi

Eveybody's reaction was justified. I just loved how dadi said that it neans what she was feeling has turned out to be truth.

Pinky had to say all those things but didnmt like her saying that middle class & money thing. Yes, Shivaay fust have felt bad because it cane from someone else's mouth as he said Mein kuch bhi kahin usay lekin jab koi doosra kahey tou mera khoon kholney lagta hai 😆(Not exactly the same words by him)

I just cant wait for the day when Pinky throws Tia out of Shivaay's life. I bet she will share epically insane bonding with Anika.

As for Om i have said it in my other post. 😳