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Posted: 8 years ago
caught up with all the three parts...its nice. can u pm me when u update?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice update...Like RaIna first interaction after marriage... hating Mehra family already.Hope naina get to know about raghav's position in that house soon..Loved last part of the update but I felt it was little short update may be bcs I enjoyed it very much so felt it ended very soon..sorry for late reply..waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update
The satiation raghav & naina got married excepted
Enjoy reading it
Thanks sweety
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Posted: 8 years ago
today I am going to present u the 4th chapter...thanks a lot for appreciating my work...I never expected such good response...hope u guys will keep encouraging me like this...


Chapter 4

raghav wakes and sits up on the floor...it takes him a few moments to realize why he was sleeping on the floors...he sighs remembering about the last night...about his marriage...one night that has changed his life...

suddenly he sees the blanket on him which he hasn't noticed till now...

"yeh naina bhi na...blanket toh mujhe dedi...par usse toh bahut thand lagi hogi raat ko.."he worries about her..

he finds naina is not in her bed...hearing the sound of water in the washroom...he understands she is in there...showering...

he waits for her to come out...and after sometime she comes out weeping her wet hair with a towel...she is in a very simple kurti and looking simply beautiful...

raghav cannot but stare at her as she is looking very beautiful after the shower...

she looks at raghav and he removes his eyes from her...

"woh...mujhe subhe subhe nahaney ki adaat hai...tumhe washroom use karni thi kya?"naina asks him.

"nahi koi baat nahi...waise bhi mai itne subhe nahi nahata..."

then something happens...

as naina is busy in weeping her hair...she does not see her bag which raghav kept on the floors last night...and she trips on it and is about to fall...but...

raghav gets a hold of her by her waist...and they look at each other...they keep looking at each other for the time they don't even know...


Background music

Hua hai aaj pehli baarJo aise muskuraya hoon
Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye
Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon (x2)Ye jaan lekar ke jaa meri
Tumhe jeene main aaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon
Zameen se aasmaan tak hum
Dhoondh aaye jahaan saaraBanaa paaya nahi ab takKhuda tumse koi pyaara (x2)
Baaton mein teri hain badmashiyan
Sab bewajah ki hain taarifiyaan
Main likh doon aasmaan par ye
Ke padh lega jahaan saara
Huaa na hoga ab koi
Yahan hum do sa dobara
Main duniya bhar ki taarifein
Tere sajde mein laaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon(Rab se laaya hoon.. Rab se laaya hoon..)
Tu hai jo rubaru mere
Bada mehfooz rehta hoonTere milne ka shukrana
Khuda se roz karta hoon (x2)
Humko pata hai yeh nadaniyaan hain
Aawara dil ki hai aawariyan
Yeh dil pagal bana baithaIsey ab tu hi samjha de
Dikhe tujhme meri duniya
Meri duniya tu banja re
Hoon khushkismat jo kismat se
Tumhe aise main paaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon




suddenly Pam chachi's sound brings bring them back to the reality...pam knocks at the door...

"raghav time dekha tumne...sab table pe agaye... what are u waiting for? 5 minutes mein dining room me ajao..."

normally everyone in the house talk to raghav like this...he never felt bad for this...but today he is feeling a bit embarrassed...maybe it's because of naina...

"ha chachi...mai abhi aya..."

he looks at naina who is still feeling shy about what just happened...

"sorry...maine bag wahi par rakh diya tha..."raghav tries to make the situation a bit normal.

"tum kyu sorry bol rahe ho?mujhe hi dekh ke chalni chahiye thi...and tganks mujhe girne se bachane keliye..."

"mention not...woh mujhe bhi tumhe thanks bolna tha..."raghav says with a smile.

"thanks kyu?tumhare upar girne ke liye?"

"arrey nahi...woh raat ko tumne blanket..."

"tum thand se kaph rahe the...issiliye..."

at that moment raghav sneezes...

"God bless you...dekha blanket se bhi fyda nahi hua...tumhe toh thand lag gayi..."naina says...

"blanket na hoti toh shayad bukhar bhi ajati..."

they both smiles looking at each other but not before raghav sneezes again...

raghav freshens up and is about to go to the dining table...

"tum khadi kyu ho?chalo...breakfast nahi karni kya?"raghav invites naina...

naina nods and walks with raghav to the breakfast table...

everyone is sitting at the table...everyone sees raghav coming...

"shadi hotey hi tumne late uthna start kardiya raghav",sudha says annoyed...

"cmon mom...ap bhi na...kal raghav ka first night tha...woh subha jaldi kaise uthega",veer starts laughing loudly...later joins by ira...

naina becomes red...not only with embarrassment but also with anger upon veer...

"bas bahut hogaya hansi mazak...",dadi speaks who was silent all the time,"naina beta tumhe koi problem toh nahi horahi hai na?"

"nahi dadi mai thik hu..."naina answers...

"toh chalo..nasta karlo..."

naina looks at raghav who does not sit at the table...instead he begins serving food...

"raghav mujhe toast pass karo"

"raghav aj khana itna oily kyu hai...tumne cook ko thik se samjhaya nahi kya?"

"raghav mera shirt ironed hogaya kya?"

"raghav tumne parlour me mere
appointment fix kiya na?"

naina is shocked to hear a lot of orders for raghav...and raghav is obliging thereby...

naina is about to sit on a chair...when pam stops her...

"raghav humarey sath nahi kahata hai...baad mein khana kahata hai...toh tumhe bhi uske sath hi..."pam stops seeing dadi looking at her angrily...

"thik hai...mai bhi baad me khalungi..."naina says...

naina can now understand everything...what position raghav holds in the mehra house...


I know the chapter was quite boring...but don't worry the next chapter will be very interesting...



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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...raina scene was amazing now slowly nainaa will see how mehras treat raghav and this pam 😡
Edited by Pista - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update. ..
naina see how Mehran treat raghav. .
Raghav and naina convo is cute. ..
early waiting for next part. ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
raina moments lovely
naina shocked seeing mehras behaviour toward raghav
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

Lovely update...both are not happy atleast not sad or no blame game thnx 4 pm

sorry 4 late reply and thanks 4 liking the update 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

caught up with all the three parts...its nice. can u pm me when u update?

thank u...it is really awesome to have a new reader...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Snow_Angel

Very nice update...Like RaIna first interaction after marriage... hating Mehra family already.Hope naina get to know about raghav's position in that house soon..Loved last part of the update but I felt it was little short update may be bcs I enjoyed it very much so felt it ended very soon..sorry for late reply..waiting for next

thannnk...uuu... 😆

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