ArHi Fan Fic | Saving Grace [COMPLETED] - Page 42

Wow! That was so beautifully written and a different storyline altogether. Loved reading every bit of it.

-V

I love your story no doubt brilliant one but you haven't clear Anjali position as you did garima's... To me Anjali was right in her position and atleast arnav should knoe anjali POV even they don't meet or some thing but still sorry but i guess you did injustice in Anjali part :-) well awesome one :-)

Finally I give up procrastination and sit down to actually pen down all the wonderful parts of your stories and what I absolutely love about them (forgive me if this comment is shorter than you deserve!)

Originally posted by: asrkkgsrlover

I love your story no doubt brilliant one but you haven't clear Anjali position as you did garima's... To me Anjali was right in her position and atleast arnav should knoe anjali POV even they don't meet or some thing but still sorry but i guess you did injustice in Anjali part :-) well awesome one :-)

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

Finally I give up procrastination and sit down to actually pen down all the wonderful parts of your stories and what I absolutely love about them (forgive me if this comment is shorter than you deserve!)

It was so wonderful to see your Arnav and Khushi so much more humanistic you know - he has a bit more morals, she has a bit more spine... and above all I loved the way you explored the toxic sibling relationship Arnav Anjali had. No relationship, not even the ones of blood, should be so immersed in grey that the whites disappear all along. Whenever Anjali did something for Arnav - she counted it as a sacrifice. Arnav never touched into his sister's depths and simply expected her to understand him - like she expected him to understand her.

And that's where unhealthiness starts.

They both were fiercely dependent and independent of each other. No relationship stays great just like that - there needs to be a continuous phase of nurture, care, honesty and adaptability. And I'm glad you didn't succumb to the show's always happy Arnav/Anjali (though that was the only relationship that was so super awesome at times - along with a few rare ones with Akash). You know I thought about this dark matter first when Anjali blackmailed Khushi into working for them - thinking how far can Anjali actually go?

And you gave a delightful answer to that. Nothing turns out good with obsession - even if its blood.

Sheetal... god, I hated that woman and I'm glad you gave her a deeper character than just a hollow gold digger - a millionaire would have figured that out at the first shot. Sheetal's manipulation, subtle yet crafty - was the perfect execution!

And of course your Khushi - I love her, sweet, strong and loveable. Not with a saint's heart but one that can hold great amounts of love. Garima's letter was apt - considering that woman isn't exactly the one to ever word her feelings on the face.

You have done so much of justice to the protagonists that I don't have anything to say - they were perfect!

And Anjali oh Anjali... I completely respect the bittersweet note between Anjali and Arnav - but can I be selfish enough to say I wanted more of her (AM I NOT GLAD THAT SHE'S ALIVE!). I feel Arnav and Anjali could only come at a reconciliation when they're in their forties and probably pushed by Khushi (for she isn't that naive anymore). A point when either's too old to hold on to grudges and time would reveal each's actions for the other <3

But of course - I love where this story ended! Maybe once when you're in your free time - do pen out a single shot for dear Anjali. That woman has never received the affection she deserves :)

Love,

Shree

Hi

Wow!!!