FF - Sagar’s Pari - 19thNOV - pg.65

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Hello all BmtDians...
well i decided to start my own FF ..... first of all I want to say sorry, I know it's no excuse, but my mother tongue is german - so sorry if I make stupid mistakes😳. I love to let the characters speak in hindi, but unfortunately I didn't learn the language, only the forum and BMTD helped me. So I will definitely try my best.
The story begins with Sagar's recovery and I have changed Vidya's character, I want her naughty n childish😆...
hope you spend your time and have a look......
love you all,
Mandy🤗

Part One

Sagar opens his eyes and feels very restless.

"Where am I? And why am I lying in this bed?", is he thinking.

Suddenly he hears a noise and someone is looking at him standing at the door.

Sindoora:"Aare Saagar! Tum to hosch aageya! Kaise hoon tum?"

Sagar:"Sindoora Di. Jab aab mera saath hai, main to humesha theek hoon."

Sindoora shows her false smile and sits down on the edge of Sagar's bed in hospital.

Sagar:"Par Di, main is hospital kyun hai? Mujhse kuch yaad nahin."

After telling him that he was mentally challenged for two years and just recovered because of a special operation in Singapoore, Sagar feels very confused and sad.

Sagar:"Yeh sab mere saath kyun hoga? I've lost two years of my life and even don't remember this time. I'm so sorry Di, maine app ko aur is parivaar ko kitna dukh deshuka hoon, na?"

Sindoora:"Aare nahin nahin Sagar! Kaisi baat karte hoon. Hum sab to bohot kush hai ke tum finally theek hoga. Par ab ziada sochna mat aur jaldi karo. The Docotr said we can take you home today. Tumhara zaman fast pack karo aur bahar aao"

In the plane back to Delhi is Sagar very excited. Things are coming up ins his mind - "how do they all behave after seeing me alright? Are they like always or did these two years change theam a lot?"

As they are flying above the clouds he can see the sun out of his small window. Everything looks so friendly and shanti. But one thing is really bothering him a lot. Sindoora already told him that his faher past away. Tears are coming up in his eyes, running down his cheeks and he feels sorry for his mother.

At the same time Vidya is sitting a few seats behind Sagar in the plane. She and Sindoora took Sagar together to Singapoore for the operation. But after Sindoora got to know that Sagar doesn't even remember anything, she came to the point that Vidya shouldn't tell Sagar that they are married. Vidya actually didn't agree and still doesn't agree with Sindoora's opinion, but she also couldn't do anything against Sindoora's "wish" !
While sitting there alone she is praying to her Shambunath, what she isn't doing so often. Sometimes she also catchs sight of Sagar's head and just wishes to go with her hand through his black hair - but she knows that it will remain as a dream.

At the airport in Delhi, waiting for the lugguage to arrive, Sagar catchs the indian air and feels much better. He is finally back home and can't wait any longer to see all his loved ones.

Sindoora calls a taxi and Sagar makes himself comfortable. One time he has a look into the rear-view mirror and feels like being followed by another taxi. But he talks himself into believing that it might be just an imagination and by the way he is very tired. (Infact his first thought was right, because Vidya is following Sagar and Sindoora in that taxi.)

At the Thakur's house Sagar formally runs into the livingroom.

Sagar:"Ma, Jiju, Chinu, Mahua, Chandra, Bharat. Jaldi aao na! Main wapas ageya!"

Just a few seconds later the room is full of people. Sagar recognizes some and some not. While he is hugging mostly everyone friendly, Vidya enters slowly and silently the house. After he was welcomed by everyone Sagar looks for the first time at Vidya.

Sagar:"Aare Chinu. To woh hai Shalu, teri patni! Nice to meet you bhabi."

Vidya first didn't understand what Sagar was talking. But then she realized That Sagar is mistaken and thinks she is Shalu.

Vidya:"Nahin, main to - "

But Sindoora interrupts her.

Sindoora:"Sagar, Chinu ki patni to wahan hai. Yeh to Vidya hai!"

Sagar:"Accha...par Vidya? Vidya khon hai?"

"Who to - ",Sindoora begins her sentence, but Aniket ends, "...teri patni hai!"

Sagar:"Kya? Hahaha, Jiju aaj mazak to mat karo!

Aniket:"Sagar, main serious hoon. Vidya tumhari patni hai. Usne tumse 2 saal pehle shaadi ki. Tumhare papa Vidya ko tumhari liye dhoond dete."

Precap: Sagar is angry and get's a flashback^^

okie dokie......well i tried something......post ur comments if i should stop😆...or continue.....
and plsss ... really send your comments, because else i won't come to know if i really should continue...tankuuuuuu :)

tata

Mandy

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Posted: 17 years ago
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WICKED I LVOE UR FF!!! plzz continue soon its awesome.....
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Why would you stop...any story bringing Sagar and Vidya together is always welcomed. Especially in this time of the real show being so boring and repetitive.
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awwww Ramsha, Shreyasee, Uzma and Fariya ... thanks a ton....will def continue asap....
love you guys 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ohhhhhh, niceee story yaar. I love it how you didn't drag Vidya-Sagar's relationship truth. It's out in the first update 👏 👏 👏 . Someone (read Zee Creatives) should learn from this 😛 .

Please update soon 😳
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No stretching... That's great! Sagar already knows, me loving this!

Please continue, Mandy... Your Hindi is perfectly fine please go on and update soon.
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That was great and there is no drag in the story 😆 ... who said your hindi not good il tel you one thing it's better than mine 😆 ... please continue soon it lovely 😃
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....awwww....thanks girls....so now i finally got time to continue...hehe



Recap:Sagar, Sindoora n Vidya went back to Delhi after Sagar's recovery. He was told that Vidya is his wife.

Sagar couldn't believe what he just got to hear! He and married? To this woman standing in front of him? To this woman he even doens't know!? How could his father got him married while he was a "pagal"? Questions after questions are coming up in his mind - with every question his anger is growing even more and he can't control himself anymore. Unaware of what he is doing he just starts to run anywhere. Finally he lands up in his room.

Sagar:"Vidya meri patni hai? Main uksa pati? Nahin!!! Yeh ho nahin sakta."

He shuts his door noisy and sits down on his bed. Taking a deep breath after another he is slowly calming down. But he still doesn't wanna face the truth. After three hours still sitting there, he has to admit that like that nothing is gonna change. He has to do something. But what?
A quiet knocking at the door brings him back to reality. Sagar hesitates and slowly moves towards the door.
After opening he feels like closing it immediately again - but he keeps the door open - Vidya is standing in front of him.

Sagar:"Kya hai?", he asks rudely.

Vidya:"Ji, woh...main...aap baat karni a gaye."

Sagar:"Mujhse? Kaho, kya baat hai?"

Vidya:"Woh main janti ke aap is waqt bohot naraz hoon - "

Sagar:"To kya main kush hone chahiye?!"

Vidya steps back, because of Sagar's voice which is full of anger.

Sagar:"Dekho Vidya, main tumhare baare mein kuch nahin janta. Tho meri liye yeh bohot mushkil hai tum humari patni ko maana! Tum samaj sakti hoon na? Main sach mujh nahin janta ki main is waqt kya karo. So please leave me alone now!"

With these words he again locked the door and lets Vidya standing alone outside.
Her eyes got filled up with tears and she runs to the guest room to be alone so that nobody could see her pain.
But Sindoora watched the whole scene and got a bit happier. If Sagar keeps on hating Vidya this much it won't be a problem for her to kick Vidya finally out of the house.

The family decided to leave Sagar alone, because they know it wouldn't make a difference if they talk to him today. Vidya pretends to be asleep in the guest room. Infact she cries the night away and couldn't believe not to have her Sagar next to her on the bed.
Sagar is already asleep.

The next morning Vidya notices that her pillow got wet from all her tears over night. While remembering the last day, again tears fill up her beautiful eyes.

Sagar gets up and watchs for the first time his room carefully. If you can call it his room.

Sagar:"How did I live with all those toys the whole time? I still can't believe that something like that happened to me."

After taking a shower he is about to go downstairs to have atleast something for breakfast. He had to admit that being angry all the time wouldn't help him a lot right now. While going to the stairs he suddenly stops, because he hears something which sounds like someone is crying.
Following the noise he finally lands up at the guest room's door.

Sagar:"Oh yeh toh Vidya ka kamra hai."

Slowly he opens the door until he has a view into the room. He sees Vidya crying. For the first time he watchs her carefully. He doesn't catchs sight of her whole body, but could say that she is really beautiful.
Suddenly he feels a pain in his stomach.

Sagar:"Uhh...is this because of Vidya's sadness or because of my hunger? Main bhi na ... ofcourse it's because i'm hungry.

Sagar decides to go downstairs.

Sindoora:"Sagar, tumhari tabjet kaisi hai?"

Sagar:"Ermh...main theek hoon Di!"

CM:"Sagar beta, Vidya kahan hai?"

Hearing Vidya's name he suddenly gets another pain in his stomach.

Sagar:"Ma, mujhe kya patha Vidya kahan hai!"

Vidya is still in her room. She remembers the time when Sagar had been mentally challenged. They both used to be very naughty. At first sight someone might think that Vidya is a shy and nice girl. Par nahin ... she used to do with Sagar lots of mischief.

Vidya:"But what will happen now? Sagar behaves so strange. He is such a serious and arrogant guy and doesn't want to spend time with me!
Oh Shambunath, main janti ke main Aap se ziade baat nahin karti, isi liye yeh sab mere saath ho rahe hai na? Sorry ... mujhe marf karo ji ... please ... ! Sagar ko mere pas wapas aane do!"


Sagar finished his breakfast and was about to go to his room again. But he automatic stops at Vidya's room and catchs again sight of her. Standing at the door he was just lost in it.

Sagar:"She is very beautiful!", whispers Sagar.

Vidya just came out of the bathroom and is combing her hair while having trouble with her saree, because it got stucked with a thron of a rose. Sagar noticed it and was about to get to Vidya to help her. But suddenly he gets back to reality and couldn't believe what he just wanted to do. Forced against his feelings he finally goes back to his room.
Vidya and Sagar spend the whole day alone in their rooms.
Vidya is already asleep, she went early to bed because she felt very bored. Sagar comes out of the bathroom, turns the tv on and lies down on his bed.

Sagar:"Oh man...Today kuch nahin intersting tv mein hai!"

After turning the tv off, he just keeps lying on the bed. Pictures of Vidya are coming up in his mind and he wonders why. Sagar doens't want to think about her, but also couldn't stop himself.
All of a sudden his head begins to pain a lot. He feels like screaming, but keeps quiet.

Sagar:"Yeh mujhe kya ho rahe hai?...Vidya really makes me mad", he smiles to himself, "No, no... it's not that ladki Vidya...I'm just still tired."

But he worries if that's really the reason of his headache. The pain comes again and he couldn't move for a while. His eyes are closed and he sees a scene coming up in his mind.

Sagar:"What the heck is happening to me?"...

He watchs a guys holding a girls hand and taking the saath phere around a fire. The boy puts ek shutki sindoor on the girls mang and puts a mangalsutra around her neck.
Sagar suddenly realizes that he is that guy. Still having this flashback he also could see that the lovely bride is no one else than Vidya. As fast as he got the pain in his head it also left him again alone in his dark room. At this moment Sagar feels too happy...
...is it because he remembered atleast something or because of remembering especially his shaadi with Vidya?

Sagar:"Uff...Sagar...tum bhi na. Chodo yeh sab batey!"

He spends all the night awake and finally falls asleep at 8.00 am in the morning.


Precap: Sagar surprises Vidya...

okkk...that's for today....hope u liked it. will continue soon.
love you all.
tata....
Mandy
🤗

Edited by LoveSharad - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shalu - thanks a ton...and is your name really Shalu ? awww thats sooo sweet.. 😳

Princess - hey thanks...will def try to keep it interesting...hehe 😉

Mahi - thankuuu thankuuu thankuuu ... i hope i have enough time to reply...my dad always interrupts me 😆 😆 😆

Heena - 😆 ...well a time ago i also couldn't even speak one sentence in hindi. thanks to zeetv and the forum that they taught me...
Edited by LoveSharad - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 update...percap sounds interesting 😃 😳

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