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Hi friends here is a ss on Arshi. It's my first ss hope you like. Do comment and please don't forget to press the like button. 😉




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Chapter 1:


She was sitting on the recliner. It was 1pm still she waited for him. It has been 4 years, 4 long years since they got married. From that day, the days were alike. She'll get up, take a bath, make his breakfast, give his clothes for laundry, get his 3 pieces suit ready. She always did her best to make him save as much time as possible. (the same time he never had for her nor for their relationship). After getting ready and taking his breakfast, he'll bid her goodbye and leave without looking back, without a kiss a reassuring kiss, a kiss to say "I may be busy but I'll always love you and think about you where ever I'm". That only what she needed for. She'll make his dinner, a dinner which will be cold before his arrival. Then, she'll wait for him until she falls asleep. That was the routine in which she was locked up since 4 years, 4 years of longing and despair. The last time he ever had time for her was during their honeymoon. That time he was not Arnav Singh Raizada, he was only Arnav, her Arnav. But after that he came back to his ASR avatar. She knew, he had a lot of work but does it justify his coldness, his distance and lack of attention towards her? Was it the price for being Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada, the wife of the business tycoon Arnav Singh Raizada? If that's the case, she would have preferred to be Khushi Kumari Gupta only.
It was already 2pm when he returned. He opened the door room to see a still-awake Khushi.
A: Khushi? Didn't you sleep yet?
K: I was waiting for you Arnav. We need to talk.
A: I'm tired. We'll talk some other day.
K: It can't wait please.
A: I said I'm tired. Why can't you understand?
He said getting angry.
K: Everytime I try to talk with you, you always say that and I'm the one who should understand why?
A: Please Khushi don't start this drama again. I'm not in the mood.
K: yes it's a drama! It's a drama to ask for my husband care, it's a drama to ask for his love. Anyway, I'm always the one at fault. Yes I'm a drama queen what can I expect from you?
He rolled his eyes.
A: Khushi please stop it.
K: I WON'T! I'm tired Arnav. I'm tired of bearing all silently, tired of not being able to speak my heart out. I feel like suffocating.
She said with a shaking voice.
A: Then take some break, make a little trip to get some fresh air,do some shopping, spend money as much as you can. Whatever make you happy, but please stop being after me every time.
K: Everything doesn't revolves around money why can't you understand?
A: without money you're nothing. So stop talking rubbish and leave me sleep.
K: I WON'T! you'll have to hear me today. You have to hear the bitter truth,the same truth which is killing me from inside.
She was crying badly.
A: That's your truth not mine!
He said and took his jacket from the bed.
K : where are you going Arnav?
A: It's none of your business! Plus you're in full mood to make me angry. I won't leave you succeed.
He reached the door and slammed it behind him.
K: ARNAV!
She screamed before breaking down and crying.
That night she cried a lot. Her eyes were red like blood. Then she took a resolve. She'll never shed tears for him in the future. She cried, not because she was broken and hurt. She cried to kill the last ounce of the caring Khushi inside her. There will be no more Khushi. There will be only Khushi kumari Gupta Singh Raizada, the wife the great ASR deserved, a cold and distanced woman. Someone He had never met but was about to know. For better, for WORSE!
~~~~To be continued ~~~~



Sorry guys for the grammar and others mistakes . I'm not that good in English. If you have some ideas or advice don't hesitate it may help me. Hope you enjoyed! 😳

I DECIDED TO POST TOGETHER ALL MY UPDATES TO MAKE IT EASIER AND SORRY FOR THE TIME IT TOOK ME TO REALIZE IT GUYS 😭

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This sounds damn good waiting for the next part. fantastic start. If that was me I would've left his ass a long time ago...
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Interesting ... waiting for the next part to see a different khushi .
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waiting to see how the story moves forward
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Hey!! your English is good, in fact better than many. so is the plot. do continue. I would love to read more of the story.
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A very interesting start to this story of yours
Waiting for the next part
Pls do continue soon
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scary but interesting...will read a few before deciding to go ahead or not... as long as they dont sleep with other people, I am up for all type of cold revenge.
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Interesting plot...and i loved the way you narrate the story... please add me to your PM list.😊
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Arnav ka affair n all toh nahi for the way he is treating Khushi
Waiting him to get taste of his own medicine
Plz add me to ur PM list
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Seems nice one.. please continue

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