Rumya SS ||Agar tum Saath ho|| Promo Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys! Am new to writing and I am a very big fan of rumya. So wanted to write an Os. So here it is just a teaser. If u all like it then I shall continue. :)

'Don't go, sumo. Please don't go. I want you to be with me today' said rudra with pain visible in his eyes.
'Rudra, mujhe jaane do'.
'Nahi sumo. Mere liye, please'.

With tears in her eyes, she gave up and came close to rudra.

Please do comment guys. My very first attempt at writing.:)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Laviii.
Loved the teaser.
Please please continue soon.
Will be waiting, okay?
And do pm me. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yes yes want to read more
plss continue !! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkle2015

Laviii.

Loved the teaser.
Please please continue soon.
Will be waiting, okay?
And do pm me. 😳


Thankyou soo much. Will continue as soon as I can. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LiveLoveLaugh96

yes yes want to read more

plss continue !! 😳

Thanks a lot. Will continue:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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please continue sooonish.. this is amazing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

please continue sooonish.. this is amazing.


Thanks a lot. Will continue soon. :)
Idk how am I going to write the entire plot. Fingers crossed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Guys! Thanks for the response! :)

I thought of making this an OS initially but now i think this can be made into a 2 shot may be? depends on the response i guess ;) 😉

Chapter 1:

Soumya was shocked to see rudra in such a terrible state at romi's house. She was really upset and had tears in her eyes. She knew she really cared for him and she cannot see him in pain, but she couldn't accept their marriage. She doesn't know why, but one thing she knows is that if anything happens to Rudra, she will not forgive herself.

Rudra was sleeping in his (Soumya's) room peacefully without any worries when soumya walked in. she still was upset about the fact that romi, her childhood friend, kidnapped rudra and tortured him. She went and sat next to him on the bed, crying. Tears fell on Rudra's face that woke him up from his sleep. Rudra couldn't believe that sumo, his love angel crying.

'tum ro kyun rahi ho, sumo' asked a shocked Rudra.

Sumo didn't answer but kept on crying hugging Rudra.

Rudra, by now, understood that Soumya was crying for him, for his state.

He couldn't help but smile seeing sumo's care towards him.

Rudra freed himself from the hug and caressed soumya's cheeks and said that hes fine and no need to worry about him. Soumya looked straight into rudra's eyes and both got lost into each other. Rudra could not control his emotions and slowly came forward and looked at soumya's tiny pink lips. Soumya knew what he wanted. She didn't deny him nor she came forward for him to kiss her. Rudra slowly came forward to kiss Soumya when sumo's phone rang.

It was Reyhaan. Yes, His sumo's Boy friend. He cursed him, for ruining the moment. Soumya stood up and turned to leave when Rudra caught hold of her hand.

'Don't go, sumo. Please don't go. I want you to be with me today' said rudra with pain visible in his eyes.

'Rudra, mujhe jaane do'.

'Nahi sumo. Mere liye, please'.

She didn't know what was happening to her. Whenever Rudra is close to her, she feels something that cannot be explained by words. She knew that She is going to get married to Reyaan soon but her heart still hasn't come to the fact that she is ready to start a new journey with Reyaan.

She knows if she stays with Rudra for some more time, then her heart will explode. She cannot control herself and her feelings for Rudra. But seeing Rudra with pain in his eyes, she decided to stay with him.

With tears in her eyes, she gave up and came close to rudra.

Mujhe nahi pata main sahi kar rahi hoon ya galat, par mujhe yeh pata hai ki jo kuch Rudra ke saath hua un sab me meri galti zaroor hai, thought soumya when Rudra kissed her forehead. She knew what is coming and shes ready for it.

Precap:

Bhaiya, O, have u seen soumya ? asked rudra searching her all over the mansion.

Obros were blank and looked at each other not knowing what to answer.

Bhaiya, O, why are you both silent? He asked losing his calm.


oh, I just now realised ki this is a small part. I will make the next one longer. ;) Please do comment guys even if it is negative. please. :)

Edited by ..Lavi.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This Reyhaan, he ruins the moment everytime. 😡
Loved, loved , loved it.
Can't wait for the next part.
Update soon Lavi. ❤️

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