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Posted: 8 years ago
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SUKOR Nok-Jhok : SUKOR OS Udaan

Hi friends!😊

I'm Maithili from France, you can call me Maithu or Maithili.
As a SUKOR fan I'm used to read all OS/FF/SS... (as a silent reader)
For the first time I'm attempting to write an OS and it's on my favourite couple SUKOR.
Sorry if there is any mistakes or if it is not up to your expectations.

Writing this small OS after the sploiers that Yogesh Bhai's sister is going to kidnap SUKOR!


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SUKOR are tied to two pillars facing each other with a distance of 4 or 5 steps between them

Tension, stress and questions can be seen and felt through their sights

Chakor started to speak as if she has realised something : "Wait!"
"What?" Suraj with a confused look wanted to know what is going on in his Jagat Maata's mind
"Who is that girl?" with a stiff face
"Yogesh bhai's sister!" replied as if it's the easiest question his biwi can ask him
"Why has she kidnapped us?" still with same reaction
"How do I know?" with a small hesitation
"I know very well that you are hiding something! Tell me the reason!" (what does Mrs. CSR wants to know now?)
"Can't you see that we are both on the same state!" in an angry tone
"Nope! I saw the angry look on her face seeing us both!"
"Chakor! Just stop your flying imaginations! I can see that you are up to some stories!" in no mood to continue this discussion "Let's think about a way to escape from here" trying to divert the topic
"So there is something" retorted Suraj Rajvanshi's dharam patni
"Nothing like that" seeing here and there, avoiding eye contacts with Chakor
...

As you all know Chakor, she will let no stone unturned, she continued to insist in order to have a proper answer.

So after few minutes of refusal, Suraj with his angry look felt obliged to tell Chakor : "She wanted to marry me when!"

"How can she?" Chakor burst in anger without letting him finish

Suraj in a confused look didn't want to utter a single word to avoid Teekhi mirchi's taste

After few seconds of silence, Mrs. CSR realising what she has said to her dharam pati. started to reformulate what she said with hesitations "I mean... mean to say, is she stupid to want a man like you in her life?"

"What is wrong in marring me?
Just a sec! You mean to say, you are stupid!" with a smirk
"How dare you Suraj?"
"You are at fault!"
"No! It's you"
"You can't always blame me! By the way, why were you shocked?"
"Shocked & me? Never!"
"Don't lie!"
"Why should I?"
"Are you feeling insecure patni ji?" in his flirty tone "Say that you can't see me with any other girl!
And for the rest of my life I will be only yours"

"Ho dreamy man, come out of you dreams." enjoying his flirting lines but making angry expression. "You are not Mr. Perfect to be in the dream of all other girls!"
"And what about you, Mrs CSR?" still in flirting mood

Hearing doors opening sound, SUKOR turned to see Yogesh bhai's sister coming in with few goons!


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So that's it guys.
Thanks for reading!
Hope you liked it!
Please comment and let me know what you thought about my first ever post on a forum!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Maithili...(beautiful name u hav 😃 )
Cute OS though!
Do write more 😊

-Pari-
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one! 😊
I seriously felt his sister had some ulterior motives in the show as well! 😆 Chakor, apne pati ko bachalo! 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: paridhi9797

Hi Maithili...(beautiful name u hav 😃 )
Cute OS though!
Do write more 😊

-Pari-


Hi Pari!

Thank you for the encouragement!
Happy that you liked it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: BreakingBlue

Nice one! 😊

I seriously felt his sister had some ulterior motives in the show as well! 😆 Chakor, apne pati ko bachalo! 🤣


Thank you!
After watching yesterday's ep, I think that she had or still has a crush on Chakor's Suraj babu!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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liked the OS!!! good one👏
waiting for more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Maithili, this is something they would most definitely do. Well done.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhika_r

liked the OS!!! good one👏

waiting for more


Thank u Radhika! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Namita_

Maithili, this is something they would most definitely do. Well done.


Thank you Namita!
Love their nok-jhoks!
So will be happy to see it on screen!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was a cute OS. Welcome to the forum Maithili. 🤗
Do write more. 😊

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