Maaneet New ss HOPE- part 12- page 146-24-feb-17 - Page 18

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Wonderful update yet painful first part. Maan is in pain and hurting himself both physically and mentally for hurting the angel of his life. Even dadi is very angry with maan and will forgive him only when he will bring geet back and she will forgive him.Geet is back in Delhi and they have a son named manu and I am already in love with this cutie pie. Eagerly waiting to see geet and maan come face to face and what will happen next? Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update...
loved it a lot...
wonder what sin did maan do???
waiting to know more details...
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Part 2

Geet wake up in sleep and saw manu sleep in above her.geet kiss his forehead lovingly and placed in bed without disturb his sleep.she went to kitchen

After some time Manu baby wake up in his sleep.manu smatched eyes with his cute hands and see other side of bed but his mummaa is not her.his cute put down in bed straightly went to kitchen .manu know very well this time his mummaa only in kitchen.

Geet prepare Manu breakfast and Manu come to kitchen and hug Geet feet said mummaa

Geet pickup in her arms and kiss his forehead: Good morning manu

Manu also try Geet forehead to kiss but his height not allow in his antics .geet giggled for her baby antics.Manu pout

Geet raised above Manu to her head and Manu kiss her forehead and then Said gud mornig mummaa and clapped his hand with excitement face

Manu: Juno horliks ( junior Horlicks)

Geet : First brush ur teeth and then ur favourite choco junior Horlicks and lets go baby I will help u brush ur teeth.

Geet help Manu's brush to his teeth and also help to bath.when Manu very happy na if he play with water but Geet not allowed to Manu in water mainly cold water because his some health problem to him

Geet changed fresh clothes and now geet difficult task start .yeh Manu ka food it is very difficult task to geet

Geet: Manu baby where are u, I know where will u hide.baby come outside.i prepare ur favourite breakfast

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Manu hide behind to sofa and nods his head gestured iam not coming

Geet: If u not coming iam not allow u go to park with Yash today.

Manu face fell down and he is sturborn how he can come out

Geet sit down with smirked face thought now u come out my baby: Ouch oh Manu my foot hurts with fake crying voice

Manu come out quickly and touch her foot and wauaaa...wauaaa with crying voice

Manu: Mummaa ...with choked voice


Geet really feel bad for did prank with her baby

Geet comfortable sit with him in her lap and wipes his tears and baby iam play with u nothing happened ur mummaa.manu smiled his mummaa is fine next sec his smile to anger face

Manu stand up into her lap and thud sound.yeh Manu slap to her cheek.

Geet touch her cheek: Manu iam sry talk to me

Manu nods her head negatively

Geet hold ears with her hand: Manu plz baby...mummaa said sry to u plz forgive me ..

Sasha and meeti come to Geet house

Sasha laughed: Baby only asking sry to mother but u both r different yaar

Meeti come with manu and hold with his hand ( yeh yesterday meeti and manu patchup to friends)

Sasha: Meeti beta go play Manu with our house

Manu look at Geet: Jeet I go meet( Geet will i go with meeti)

Geet: Ha baby u go with meeti house but dont go another place.

Manu and meeti went out to Sasha house

Sasha: Manu what he said to u.iam not understand anything

Geet: Oh he said Geet will I go with meeti

Sasha: Geet u not angry with manu with shocking face

Geet: Why iam angry with manu with smiling face

Sasha: He call ur name na

Geet : Sasha , he sometime call Geet only.if he happy mood call me mummaa and if he anger he not talk to me.he such a sturborn like his father.I want my baby happy only.iam not consider whatever he call me, idont mind it.

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Sasha: U both different antique piece.

Geet: Manu and meeti alone in ur house

Sasha: No yaar today Sunday na, my husband Karan stay in our house , dont worry about manu

Geet: I will make coffee for u.this time iam not leave u

Sasha: As u wish Geet.iam also help u.where r u working

Geet: Iam working in Mumbai.in my company project going in delhi. Our delhi project some problem. My owner request me go to Delhi and work our delhi project.iam not denied his word.so I accepted.if project finished iwill go back to mumbai.

Sasha: If project finish u go back to mumbai

Geet: Geet: Ha Sasha .i will go back to my life style with sad tone.

Sasha: Iam not see any single picture ur husband in ur home. only u and Manu photo only there.

Geet: Oh ..sasha ( Manu crying voice hears)

Geet run out quickly and saw one man lift Manu in his arms and Manu is crying

Geet pickup Manu and wipes his tears : Dont cry baby why my baby crying

Manu chocked voice and show his arm to geet

Geet saw manu arm have little crash

Sasha: Karan why manu is crying

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Karan: Nothing yaar, meeti and Manu both are playing.manu slipped to ground.rock stone hurt Manu arm.

Sasha: Karan he is baby but ur not.u should be careful with them

Geet: Sasha why u scold ur husband its not his mistake.

Geet: Manu darling.that rocks hurts my baby arms,i will beat it by big scale.ok dont cry baby.with babyish voice.

Manu nods his head: Mummaa beat him

Karan: I will beat him Manu and pick up the stone and throw out away

Manu placed his head in geet neck with sobbed voice: Mummaa it pain.( it is paining) with babish tone

Geet : I will apply creams in ur wound , ur pain will gone.i know my Manu baby is superhero.

Manu smiled , Geet and Manu went inside

Khurana mansion

Maan went to Vicky room

Maan: Vicky when will u come

Vicky: Few minutes back only

Maan: U got any information about her

Vicky: No

Maan: U only help me to find her

Vicky: I am not helping u because i am helping her

Maan: Vicky what r u saying

Vicky: I know her happiness only with u.noone understood her except me .i know my best friend very well.ur not deserves happiness but she deserves happiness.her happiness only around u.she love u insanely but u ..

Maan: Iam not deserve happiness Vicky.but I want my angel back my life

Vicky: Angel yes she is angel.my angel fate tie up with devil.

Maan: Give punishment ur bro but talk with me normally Vicky.i miss my old Vicky.my Vicky always talkative, jolly type person.

Vicky: Who I am give u punishment and first I need also punishment .my buddy suffered that time iam not with her.iam enjoy with my life in some other place.if iam

Maan hugs Vicky tightly and vicky not reciprocate his hug

Maan: Sry Vicky.iam one gave anyone pain in our home.dad not talk with me, dadi also angry with me.arjun not come to our house.annie and u talk with me formally with crying voice

Vicky also hug maan and cried : Sry bro iam sry. But iam not control my anger.u know very well.she is my best buddy.i share everything to her only.

Maan: I know ur friendship.sometime i am also angry with ur friendship but I realized that not angry , jealous with u with little smiled face

Vicky: She scared ur anger but always roaming behind u

Maan: She always behind me and iam irriate with every her action.now i miss her every naughtiness

Miyra:badi mamu u said we go out today

Maan: Ha dear we go out today lets go , Vicky u also join with us

Vicky: No bro u go with miyra baby.iam not coming.

Maan: Ok Vicky, miyra dear come we will go ice parlour first and then we decide later

Miyra shows whole teeth and maan and miyra went out to outing

Geet house

Geet:baby u have pain in urs arms,Manu nods his head with puppy face

Geet kiss to arms several times and ticking to his stomach.

Manu giggled and laughed forgot his pain

Man voice where is my champ

Manu: Yasu ..came yasu came with. Jumping & excited voice

Manu runout quickly and Yash pickup Manu in air and rotate him and Manu laughing

Geet: Yash

Manu show tongue to Geet with teasing face

Geet: Both r one team now.noone care about me

Yash: How can I forgot my darling and ur one give me wonderful gift , my champ and side hug to geet

Geet show tongue to Manu: He is my yash

Manu pulled her hairs: No no he is mine

Yash: Both stop ur fighting and my champ is right.iam only to him.noone separated me to my champ and hugs Manu in possessively way

Geet: Yash come inside

Yash: Wait I bought special gift for my champ

Manu hears gift and face bright like 1000 watt bulb and kiss to his cheeks and Yash cheeks become wet

Yash bring cage full of birds and give to manu

Yash: Champ u like my gift

Manu round to cage and talk to birds

Manu enjoy birds chirping voice.

Manu: Yasu he said keee..kee

Yash: Ha champ.

Geet: How is ur trip

Yash: This day I miss my champ and u.geet and yash talked about his trip but

My little champ open the cage gate and every birds fly to sky

Yash: Champ what u did it.see every birds flew to sky

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Manu not hears Yash complaint and enjoyed birds flew in sky and clapped his hand with excitement

Geet: Two minutes before only u said my champ is right and now iam also said my Manu is right

Yash: GS with pout face

Geet: What GS.every living beings have full right to live freedom life why not that birds .so my baby did it correct.

Geet: Manu u enjoy baby

Manu clapped his hands and gestured pickup to her arms and Geet lift Manu in her arms

Manu tapped Yash shoulder and pointed finger to sky

Yash:ha champ u happy iam happy

Geet: Come inside and later we go to park also.

Manu, Geet and Yash full masti in park and come back to home.manu sleep in Yash arm

Yash placed Manu in bed and kiss his forehead

Geet: Yash u r going

Yash: I need to go now .plz u come with me yaar with pleasing voice

Geet: No Yash iam happy with manu.manu & me not stay with u

Yash selfthought: in few days only U both are stay with me and my house.noone separated my champ to me.

Yash went out to his house and Geet sleep next to Manu.

Next morning

Yash and Manu play in hall .geet come out her room with office attire.

Yash whistled to geet and Manu did it same whistled to geet

Geet: When u came Yash.u spoiled my baby.u whistled Me and he also did same

Yash:noone trust u have baby yaar.

Geet: Dont flirting me Mr

Yash: Iam not flirt and I Said only truth , iam right champ

Manu smiled

Geet : u not go office

Yash: I need to go office but champ stay alone in home.

Geet:I already told sasha , she take care of manu today,tomorrow onward I will nani for manu

Yash: no I will arrange play school for my champ

Geet: play school but he is kid

Yash: no yaar, I enquired about school clearly and some few hours not full days. U also not stay with office full day.u come only supervising for ur project.

Geet: ok , iam going , if u go to office ,handover manu to sasha

Geet kiss manu forehead and said bye baby

Manu: bye mummaa

Geet: manu ,yash with u , u don't need ur mummaa also

Yash: oyie don't jealous with us

KC

Adi enter maan cabin and maan slep in sitting position in his chair

Adi: maan sir...maan sir

Maan open his eyes and his face so pale.

Adi: maan sir r u alright,sir client come to meeting after one hours and I arranged everything in conference

Maan: ok I freshup and come to conference hall, u go receive our client.

Maan went to private room ,freshup and then come with office attire.

Maan sitting in conference room and checked every files

Adi enter conference room with client

Maan standing in chairs and adi introduced client

Adi: mam this is our boss MR maan singh khurana

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Mam: hello Mr Khurana handed shake to maan

Maan: welcome to KC

A girl come to conference room and sry maan I am late today

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Maan: naintara, today also ur late

Naintara: oh sry mam and come infront of her : u

Client PA: Ms GS,my mam name is Ms GS

Naintara: GS

GS: Mr.khurana start ur presentation, I have no time to starring section.

Maan: yeah, adi start ur presentation

After adi completed presentation and geet asked adi to related question.adi politely told her to answer.

Geet: Mr.khurana,I know ur best in construction field that only our company gave this project to u.but in our delhi project some issues going, tell me u have any soln about that issues.

Maan: give me some time I will rectify soon and trust us

Geet: I trust ur company that I came to delhi otherwise I cancel our deal

Naitara: ur just employ ur company, how can u cancel that project with taunting tone

Geet PA: Ms naintara, mind ur word, mam one call to our boss, next few seconds ur deal will be cancel.

Geet: pinky

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Pinky: sry mam, anyone taunting u iam not tolerate and u think she just employee in our company. She have full rights to take any decision in our company.

Geet: pinky, don't waste ur energy to unwanted people.

Naintara: u maan interpet

Maan: naintara just shut up and get out conference room now

Naintara: but maan

Maan angry glared to tara and naintara went out with fuming face.

Maan: naintara behalf I am asking sry for u

Geet: Mr.Khurana I don't need ur sry,I need my project soln.i give one week time.in this week time project will be continue otherwise I cancel our deal and tomorrow I will go to construction field.

Maan: adi will help u

Geet: good, pinky collect every information from Mr adithya

Pinky: ok mam

Geet: ok Mr khurana iam leaving now , meet u tomorrow

Maan nods his head

Part end

next part - PART 3

Precap: some flashback , manu see khurana member and kushi entry

Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm the first😆
Why Maan & Geet behaving like they
don't know each other,,,,Manu is so so cute
He is crying,,,uaaa uaaa😭😆
Maan & Vicky what they are talking about
Some Angel,,,is it Geet ? I hope so...🥳
Edited by MGMahika - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for all ur comments and likes .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely cute update lovely manu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
maaneet don't no each other its confusing
geet yash n maanu bounding is nice
maanu is maan child????

waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the update 👏
Thank you for the pm 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
NYC update
Loved it!!
Loved geet and manu moments
Loved the rapport between yash and manu
Maan was repenting for his conduct towards his Angel in past
Khurana's were showering their cold shoulders towards maan for his deeds with their angel
Maaneet met each other
Who is maan's angel!!? Wasn't geet!?
Then how cum they behaved strangely towards each other!?
NW who is this Khushi!?

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