Two Parallel Lines_A ShivIka FF_Chapter 8 (18.11.16) Page 31 - Page 23

Originally posted by: SRKian

kya twist hain Pre ishz look alike sis😲😆 nd shivika❤️

jaldi update karo😃

Thanks Ani 😳 Updating in few minutes 😳

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting update

Thanks a lot ! 😳

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

woww om ki lead ki entry ho gayi bada achha laga mujhe 😛 😆 ab pakka shivika milenge lekin bechara om wo lead revenge lene aayi hain yar par koi nahi usko bhi om se pyar ho jayega 😳 n shivika oh my kya kahu unke liye... shivaayne confess kiya lekin apne maa ke samne i liked that scene a lot oh shivaay 😭 n waha anika wo bhi om ke sath comfortable nahi hain last shivika scene ❤️ shivaay's care towards anika n that hug ❤️

Ketu baby where are you now a days? I am missing your and Bu's random chitchat here 😉 😳

Originally posted by: ...Angels...

RES...Unres!

Preity, this update was fabulous! Shivaay's feelings just bounced off the page making the reader feel so much sympathy for him. Clearly he has feelings for Anika but he can't bring himself to tell anyone. Your words acted like a voice to Shivaay's thoughts and feelings depicting the true character of Shivaay Singh Oberoi's. Dear, you have made Om even more deep and charismatic than he is- I just love him! I know that I have already said this but it's true...I REALLY REALLY LOVED IT!!!!!!! Thank you so much for the pm dear🤗🤗

Love Angel❤️

Your comments Angel are the fuel that's inspire me to write more... Thank you 😳
I am happy that you thought I am doing good with Om's character too as here both are equally important. 😳 I hope, I can justify every character here ! Thanks 🤗

LOVELY UPDATE.

It was an awsm update...
Do continue soon...

Brilliant update! Anika waking up in Shivay's arms was described so wonderfully with just that right touch of realism which I love about your writing. Then the money part! Haha! You sure have a way of weaving in current issues into your stories. Loved Anika's excitement over the new note.

Nice update dear